Hey, from my queue ;D [M4M]



I will force to the hardest diff, because the other diffs seem extremely well in compare with your Insane! I hope that is okay for you. If not, feel free to complain. I'll mod the others as well.



[General]



You got several unsnapped lines, fix it please.



[Crescent Rose]



First of all, i think AR 9 is too high. Use 8! I think it's better. OD 8 is way too high as well. Normal Insanes uses something like 7. And in my opinion, i really don't like CS 5. But this is up to you.

You should also fix the bookmarks. Or delete them.



00:03:726 - Fix this green Line. Maybe put it where you start mapping.

00:23:226 (4) - NC

00:23:226 (4,5,6,7,1) - I think 1) the bow could be nicer 2) Yellow / Yellow seems a bit.. yeah. maybe change the color!

00:27:512 (1) - I would reverse this slider.

00:30:083 (2) - add a circle

00:27:512 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I think in this part, you should use cirlces and sliders sparingly. Why? Because the song is slow there. I would make some tension, and only use less, and not randomly placed circles.

00:30:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - For example this. It doesn't fit the lyrics!

Same for the next slow part, but you could use some more there. Because it shouldn't get boring.

00:45:512 (4) - NC

00:48:083 (8) - This Reverse slider doesn't fit. listen to the lyrics

00:54:940 (1) - From here on, it gets more exciting. You should use some more circles imo.

01:14:773 (1) - As i see, you like to use circles patterns. I don't recommend them, because for me, they seem old-fashioned. Use some more sliders!

Also, go over the map again, and don't forget NC. Listen to the music, and place them.

Btw. I really love the video o.o

02:45:876 (1) - Now, here's the most exciting part. You should use some colors with more color in it, like RED red, not red which is pretty clear, you know?

02:47:676 (4) - NC

03:03:876 (8) - NC

In the Kiai time, you should keep coinsistent with your patterns, otherwise it gets random very fast.



Well, i think i said enough for it for now. I hope you don't feel offended - the map is great! But you can improve a lot more. Call me for a recheck, if you think you did, and i'll go over it again.

I hope i helped. Good luck!