It looks a little Discworld. There is absolutely nothing wrong with that.I wonder if you're thinking it's just a little too far into the fairytale? To be honest, I think it looks good for the style it embodies: a little cartoon (as a lot of Discworld art is) and a little fairytale.And, of course, the trouble with producing some sort of art is that you can look at it and say 'I could've done that better' even when everyone else likes it.