Hi! I found your piece throughI saw this picture and thought it would get a constructive comment sooner, but I'm surprised to find it hasn't yet. I really like the character design. She has just enough of both beauty and creepiness to draw curiosity.I have a few constructive notes meant only for continuous improvement, as I feel you did a really good job capturing an interesting character and using your own style.The first note has to do with her hair. It's fairly simple, and there's nothing wrong with that. What I notice, though, is that you have the front bangs line up with the curves of the rest of her hair. Hair, especially long hair, is a crazy mess of shapes and curves, and usually one has to try really hard to get them to line up in reality. Having these curves line up so closely in your picture detracts from the natural look of the hair. You have layers, which is good, but making the back slightly higher than the bangs, or the bangs have a little more oddness to their top curve can help set better dimension on the hair itself. With this dimension, comes a more natural look, and thus, more realism. Also, adding as much of a natural look to as many things as possible in the image can help immerse the viewer, and prevent them from becoming distracted from the real intent of the image. Obviously, she has the pale skin and ghostly black eyes, which by definition are unnatural for a person, but it's directly part of her character, and so, is a natural part of what the viewer is intended to see.I hope that makes sense. Lol.Other things to be careful of that help put your dimensions straight are where everything sits at rest. You have her front bangs, which are presumably flush or close to flush with her face, but on the viewer's right side, they extend behind the raised collar of her dress. This creates a bit of a paradox that disrupts the depth of the image. Adding lines to help keep the bangs in front, and separate them as a layer from the lock of hair that passes down behind the collar can help bring more depth to her hair.Next is her neck, which appears to extend down well past the top of her actual collarbone. This goes back to the natural aspect, distracting the viewer with minor details that don't look quite right. Ending the lines of the neck somewhere above the neck of her dress would help make this look more natural.There's not much to say about her dress except that it's quite beautiful, and I like the color combinations. Symmetry could be mentioned, but it could very well be an intentional aspect of the dress and is minor. This is specifically apparent in the raised collar and the bottom of the mesh just below the medallion.All in all, though, you did a really good job. I really like the details of the dress and medallion; especially the tiny eyeball at her navel. Many of the details of the character leave her open to speculation; what does the medallion do? Does the eyeball serve a purpose? And, naturally, what caused her to have ashen skin and soulless black eyes? Inspiring these kinds of speculations means you've created a lot of interesting details (in my opinion, of course).Excellent work!