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A Dragon Taught Me Fire

In the beginning, it was simply a spark. I watched as it twisted through the air, flickering. It fled, reaching for the sky. More and more sparks joined it, rising up, spinning in the night air. It grew, no longer a spark, ravaging the sky. A torrent of flame rose before me, a roar of fury. As it grew, it took shape. Its molten mouth open, its crimson eyes glowing. It turned to me, a mighty dragon of flame now. A small smile played upon my lips as I stretched out my arms. A dragon taught me fire, but I am the eternal ice.