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I just first want to say I adore your pieces, and you're one of the few artists I stand on tip-hooves waiting for the next piece. You have a great sense of humor and your art style is pathetically cute, and I love it so.This piece was a very great rendition of the art piece done by * Cryssy-miu , and I especially love the facial expressions and poses. The dark atmosphere in both pieces were done great, but I especially feel that your transition from heartless, hopeless, monster attack, to cute, innocent playfulness was pulled off professionally well. I mean, that text along with Discord's face in the second to last panel especially is just nightmarish, and you brought justice to it. I also think your use of sweat, and how vivid it is throughout the panels added to the feel of incoming doom as well.I give you a four for originally solely due to the fact that it's a rendition, but you should know that overall I feel this idea was very unique it's own right. You maintain a modest four, because specific panels in this were all fabulous, and stuck out to me as opposed to the original, for example, the third to last? Discord coiling around the entire scene, and his shadow casting down on them? Brilliance. It looks quite sinister, and I love it.I could quite literally praise you for another paragraph or so about how emotional your expressions are, or talk about how adorable the poses of the cuddling ponies are in panel four, but I think this is quite long enough as it is. I'm glad I finally get the time to critique something of yours, and I most definitely will in the future.Please never stop drawing adorable and funny ponies, * Mickeymonster , your humor and art style bring absolute justice to the show.