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First off, this is my very first critique, so I may be rather critical lol, so I do apologize if it does feel like it, but fantastic job! All these Pokémons look true to their design and you captured their expressions very well! I also love the effects that you put on to them! I'm especially in love with the looks in their eyes. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="357" title="Heart"/>Before I move along, do note that I'm basing this critique off from my lessons in still-life lol. It's not related to Pokémon, but parts of it really help! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>The MAIN problem is what many artists leave out the most: light source. The shading really doesn't imply the light sources; they're all random. An example would be Swampert; look at his tail and the fins on his head (those are fins, right? lol); the light sources are going left and right. Unless there are multiple light sources such as Blaziken's kick, then this is an issue. Also, what is it that's splashing around near Swampert? It's obviously dirt and stuff, but the white circles looks like snow. If you filled them with a tinge of blue, then they'd definitely look like water! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>I would also like to know what Sceptile is standing on; Blaziken's back? lol XDAlso, the white lines appear to be unnecessary around the Pokémon. NEVER darken lines or put highlights unless the object/characters blend in the background. Blaziken is distinguishable from the water thanks to his red color, so I highly doubt he needs the white highlights. The same applies to Sceptile and Swampert; Sceptile's green stands out from the sky (unless it's a bluish-green) and Swampert... eh I suppose the highlights are alright since there's water behind him.Regardless, this is a fantastic piece for the new Hoeen remakes. I myself have never played it (X/Y was the first Pokémon game for me lol), but this is a solid piece of fanart. So great job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>