the relative lightness or darkness of a colour

Wowie this comment was longer than expected... it's been so long since I sat down to type feedback this long ahhhh)

I love the dialogue in the last frame, it really highlights how complainy and arrogant Tapicoa is in contrast to Mellalu's honesty.I love character development through interaction like this, it helps readers learn more about each character naturally.Also I've been wanting to say this (ho noes constructive feedback-critique pls don't kill meee I feel that the layout of your comic pages a bit too messy for me personally... actually, it's not the layout specifically, but more of the frames "bleeding" into each other me thinksI don't mean bits of the characters peeking outside their frame (e.g. Mellalu's ears in panel 2 - that's okay), I think my issue is that it's hard to distinguish one frame from the other.I think what could help could be having more 'negative space' in the areas separating the frames, AND making sure that the colours of those areas are vastly different from the 'positive space' (the panels). Right now the areas/spaces separating the panels are of similar hue and/or value (y'know the term to describe) to the panel's background hue/values, so visually my eyes get lost and find it hard to distinguish one panel from the other.Mostly value me thinks. But as far as reading-flow goes, it's ok ^v^Keep up the good work Lumdrop!I hope this helps and that I'm not being complainy cos I just wanna give tips on any way to improve yer comic \(>v