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Originality Originality

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Impact Impact

I liked this peice a lot. You don't know why Apple Jack is sad, but you do not need to. Big Brother is trying to comfort her, and it would appear is just starting to have some success. Man that's a lot of story from one image. (Hence the big Impact score) It's pretty original, not many people draw Applejack fanart (compared to other ponies) and even fewer try and expand on her childhood and her relationship with her siblings. (Good Originality Score) Vision. It seems very clear you had a plan when you started drawing this, and you were going to beat us with an emotional sledgehammer as best you could. (Good vision score) Now the most critical part. Technique, your shading is awesome and I like your ponies. The hay and the window/backround bother me. They aren't the same standard as the rest of the drawing. I also think your tears look glassy which is a bit of shame considering how amazing the eyes were on both ponies. (Not going to critique on tears though. I swear I can't draw them to save my life.) Also May I use this image to springboard a fanfic?Very Nice4.5 out of 5!