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Hello! Now I am going to say first this is a very lovely picture,you have pictured asuna's innocence at the same her cuteness.Now going to my critique.First Is the lighting you've got some of them right, but of course there are some places that are missing like the missing light that should have been shining from her jewelry. Also a little suggestion, please don't use too much light, because it might distract some people. Like the lamp seat?I am not too sure, at first I though it was a sunset setting but when I look really into the background that I realize that it was a night setting.So try to change that.Going to your background, it is beautiful to look at but, it is also quite distraction, and I have seen some of your arts and what I have notice is that you make the background too bright. You might change that since the subject of the picture is asuna not the background so you should make it more moderate.Your body posture is quite alright,so two thumbs up to that!But also I notice something, it seems you are still having a hard time on fingers. (Don't worry I'm also not good at fingers. ^^")But other than that all is well, the clothes,the flow of the dress, the shoes and hair is good!Now shading has just a bit of a problem but since this is only a one layer shading, you have no problem with that kind.Moving on, may I ask what that is on the foreground? Sorry i was really confused by that. But I may suggest you may want to add more things on to the foreground or just make the foreground a bit blurry so that it will emphasize the character i the mid ground more.Sorry for the long critique I made. ^^:But really I love the drawing and the atmosphere it gave, so a double thumbs up to you. Also I am also a SAO fan. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title="(Wink)"/>Hope this will be helpful to you! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>