Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

I have to say that this certainly is an interesting piece. It really hit me seeing Derpy, or Ditzy which ever name you call her by, about ready to cry. How could you do such a thing Twilight? Anyway, it hits me hard, looking at this, almost like it could be an actual scene in the show, and that's nice.This is my first time seeing this kind of style, and I have to say, it's visually pleasing. Though if anything, I would say Derpy's (Ditzy's) mane is a little too bright, and distracting for me. My eyes keeps wanting to focus on her forelocks more than any other part of the image. It's a little unsettling for me.The style itself is completely new to me, and actually works quite nicely. The scene, as I mentioned earlier, does feel like it would fit in an episode of "My Little Pony" some where, though where that is exactly I'm not sure.I deducted points in originality for two reasons, and then gave a point back for another reason. The first reason for deducting points is common for me, and that is the fact it is based off an already existing piece of work. Serious question; if "My Little Pony Friendship is Magic" didn't exist, would you have still drawn this? The second reason, is the canon characters. Even though for a scene like this I can not picture any other ponies involved, it still doesn't change the fact that I see the canon characters everywhere. However, the reason I gave points back, is because of the scene being non-existent in the show, or else where that I have seen.