Honestly, I, I am frickn speechless about how good this female team is as my post high school vocabulary simply doesn't have any words that truly describe this work of, dare I say it, art, if this could even be considered art if it were to be downgraded in quality! 9 pages worth of almost purely positive comments that I have read through just doesn't do this immensely underrated near-masterpiece an ounce of justice! As much as I see that there indeed are quite a few problems getting this into TF2, this might also be as close as TF3 would be in the making as far as the public will know unless Valve makes a statement stating that they indeed are making TF3! This may be my 1st day on this website, and my 2nd year playing TF2, but this should make an big impression to Valve, or a huge one if a bit more work goes into it.



If you were going to send it to Valve and ask them to do something sweet with it, the I would suggest the following things occur: A) secure a backstory for each character that goes along with some/most lines of what the commenters have already posted and makes sense (most likely scenario in which the TF2 mercs are training others is that they are "getting too old and giant for this" if I were to quote the HWG). B) Alter some of the bodily proportions/placements to be a bit more realistic. (e.i. the nurse's right foot seems to be the same distance from the wall as demopunk girl's feet, yet the nurse's left foot is noticeably closer to the wall and making her look like she would be doing a sideways sumo squat of sorts and thus making her seem much smaller unless you see that she is doing such squat and is in fact much taller than her stance has her look and the fact that the demopunk girl's arms are even smaller than the femgi's arms which are mere twigs themselves!) C) Reduce (don't have to eliminate it completely) the "Bewb" factor on the fem-sniper and fem-spy, unless you want to get TF2 a stricter ESRB rating for TF2 (or TF3) than whatever it's at now.



I might have more minor issues as they come to me.