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to me this work is very well done and i like the base colors you used for it, but at the same time i fell like you could have added a bit more details like shadows and the wrinkles in the clothing to give it a better pop out look, but other that that, you did i good job well done you get one of my precious potato's.Also you should spent some time using some highlights for your art so that i gives it a lively color saturation so that people can be attracted to the drawings and art that you do.Don't be afraid of showing what you can do because as far as i have seen your are doing very good in doing art, also i think it would be best if you should add a background to your art to give it a more lively feeling.