Thanks for the compliments, and yeah, I definitely agree that the last one was too crowded. When I finished I looked at it and thought "I've created a monster." A big problem was that if you check on Page 11, I intended Picky to just sit on the sidelines at first with Pokey. Then it occured to me that Picky actually fights in the Starman Junior battle. I always wondered exactly what kind of spell he's trying to cast, so I ended up putting him into the action without having planned for it.

Unfortunately, this next page isn't a huge change, but I was too stubborn to cut anything out and I thought they may be a bit lackluster if I split them in four. I probably still could've broken up 12, but the flow of 13 seemed strange when I considered spacing it out. Admittedly, I'm in a bit of a rush to finish the prologue. I can't wait to start writing out story for Onett.

And so here it is, Page 13! The battle comes to an end with a tragic tearjerker. Also, Buzz Buzz somehow gets a watch that immediately disappears again.