Well I did mean thinning the line of the mouths, but if it's not possible or too difficult (I've never felted anything before...XD I'm curious to try it, though!) the next best thing would definitely be reducing their size. It's really up to you as far as what you choose to do about Jon's hat. I know it seems really big in the Grump logo, but it's pretty hard to take something 2D as reference and make it 3D with any medium, I believe. And I do think it's justtoo big for his head size in your plushie. Maybe if it's possible, you can take it off and alter the size of Jon completely to make it more proportionate? Again, I can't be of much help with that considering I've never needle felted before.We all get like that sometimes over comments. I've had several people try to put me down for my drawings for no real reason (i.e. with no constructive criticism) and I just took it as a way to better myself/drawings. I mean, it's hard when you put all of your effort into something and to have someone just shoot you down, I know. Hell, my brother does it all the time... >_>Reddit to me, seems like a disaster waiting to happen. I've never really used it but I heard that's where a lot of the 'internet famous artists' get their 'fame' from. So, it's understandable that someone would want to post their stuff there. Only with places like that, there's bound to be just as many trolls as there are nice people, so it's a risk. At least you gave it a shot. Again, I still say you send it all to the Grumps, along with the strange N64 game.Which, 'Quest 64' does sound familiar, but I don't think I've played it...As far as wanting to make money goes-- have you tried advertising your felt works in the job forum here on dA? I got a load of commissions from there last Christmas and I ended up finding a long-term webcomic gig via looking at the job advertisements! 8D I'm sure if you advertise yourself as making 'felt plushies' (I saw you make MLP ones which I think will sell in particular seeing as it's so popular) for a reasonable price, you'll make a few extra dollars to store away. ^^Here's a link to the job forum on dA, if you're interested: [link] Only thing you have to be weary of, though is if people are legit. I haven't had a bad experience yet from either party, but it literally pays to be cautious. I like to take payments before I work.