I sure would! I'd love to give you feedback, it would be an honor, though I must warn you I'm quite the critique hahaI'm not a flamer, though. I have been working on a fantasy book project for over 2 years now, so I know what it feels like to work very hard on something, editing and re-editing it countless times and still feel insecure about it.Anyhow, I wish you the best of luck with your novel!Traditionnal publishing is a huge step and quite a challenge, I gather. Don't give up if it gets rejected the first few dozen times - at least, that's what everyone says. If all else fails, you should seriously consider self-publishing. Self-publishing via kindle/amazon books is a very pragmatic option these days, look it up.Hope you make it!