This actually stemmed from a conversation I was having with about having a pony in real life. The box itself is meant to be a sending package...The whole to a loving home just came from those kitty boxes, sorta similar to the dashie stuff I guess.Anyway, I don't really read fanfics, so I can't really give an opinion on yours. (Especially since it's a sequel to something I've never read) Sorrehs.