This looks great, a cool out of the norm contrast of scale, dig itJust some ideas:There is a large rectangular shape at right (the metal beam), a cropping of this, halfish way through the beam might be something to play with, it would shift your focal point into the right third.The 2 beams above and slanting down to the right, pushing that back beam back as much as you did with the right (near) beam with the orang-ish atmosphere i think can also help with your space.