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Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

This model of fun time foxy is amazing! It really portrays the personality and show stage of the character. The texture on the white that shows a bit of pink stains shows reality-- it gives you thefeel of aging and metal being rusted! The way the character's metal parts bend appropriately according to the joints is amazing- all though there is a little bit trouble with the brow, as that I don't believe is supposed to move. But that is alright, it is your creativity to decide whether or not that brow is supposed to be up there. It gives the character quite a quirky look e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title="(Wink)"/> I have not seen any other model with realistic joint parts, and metal rusting/aging, it really gives off the look that you worked hard on this. And the light way you model'd the claws really looks cute-- the tiny claws on the hand look cute and not dangerous. Moving on to the chest region, I love the way you did the screws on the chest plate. It shows that the heart is not merely melded/ painted on the fox here, but is a separate piece to keep the chest together. The way you added plates and the joints like wheels are amazing, and it shows how much you really care for technique. It shows your originality while still being realistic- which is a tactic many artists have yet to achieve e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title="(Wink)"/> And the way you added open-able panels where you can work on the dialog, steps and control the robot generally shows that it's a robot and it gives off the well crafted look which is fairly deserved! The microphone on the chest is really nicely done, it looks like a real thing. Not to mention you pulled off the whole realistic 3D model which is very rare to find, as MMD isn't all that great of a program. The way you added plates to the knees, elbows and shoulder plates are amazing, it reminds me of when i used to ride a bike and had to wear those when I were little, It really gives off a warm feeling to those who remember their childhood looking at this friendly fox here e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/> The way you did the bow was simply stunning- It looks amazing. The way you model'd and shaped the head was simply incredible. The teeth clearly look like a real fox canine, which is something people won't pay attention to, but it clearly makes a difference and looks absolutely gorgeous with the rest of the piece. The little freckles and muzzle on the snout look realistic, so if you were to compare them to a live fox you couldn't tell the difference. The lipstick looks absolutely gorgeous and stunning and just blends in really well with the rest of the snout. I wonder why they gave her lipstick-- Isn't her snout pink enough? Well I say you can never have enough pink! Also when you take a look at her round cheeks- you can tell they look just like pink little balls and are so huggable e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="21" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="574" title="I am a dummy!"/> It is really nice bait to little kids, and over all the screws and bolts around the eyes are so real, it's just everything you could want in a robot for kids. Also the yellow eyes look really shiny, and the eye lashes don't look over done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/> The little hair on the head reminds me of Chica!-- It really gives a warmth to your heart of the past. All the shading in the picture is just--The shading affect it gives off is brilliant! The shiny look on the metal yet the shading where it's a shadow and the rust really shows the properties of metal- It's stunning! I haven't seen brilliant shading in a while. Cheers! And one more thing- The soft look of the padding on the feet and paws is really hard to get, and it shows how hard you worked to get it, bravo sir/ma'am, bravo e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="60" title="Clap"/>Now for the only bad part of this critique-There isn't much errors beside the way that the paws bend unnaturally to the thigh, as there isn't any joints in them whatsoever. And the right ear is kind of melting into the head, as it looks. But maybe that's just how it looks. The piece is great, but the back ground is kind of dull-- I understand you don't have time to implement sister location back grounds in, but next time pick like an office or a stage that might fit better than a blue background e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/> But anyways, over all, amazing piece and work and I hope to be seeing more of this amazing talent in your gallery! +1 watcher e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="60" title="Clap"/>