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A very good picture to look at, simply wonderful.It goes without saying every single character is portrayed perfectly according to their personalities, be it sans sleeping in Toriel's back, papyrus always being overjoyed and acting as a kid, Chara and Asriel as real siblings (Chara still portrayed as a mischievous kid and Asriel as a pushover), and Frisk just being Frisk (which may I add is a really good way of portraying them since the game never gives them any sort of personality, allowing you to fill that character with your own) and Undyne almost looking embarrased at Toriel's affection, and even Toriel herself with a calm expression that goes to show she has a lot of experience taking care of children (notice how she can even handle Papyrus without looking at him, and even had a handkerchief for Undyne), or in this case, EVERYTHING.The character design is well put together, none of the characters feel out of place when comparing them to their game counterparts, Alphys looks a little odd however with thouse hands that, in my humble opinion, look too big for her. Also, none of them feel stiff or lazy regarding poses, especially papyrus and Asriel.On another note is also a really nice touch to deviate a little on some of the character's clothes (Frisk and Alphys) because as we all know, we don't always wear the same clothes every day.The colors of the characters are also well researched, they match their game counterparts well, and because they have just the right amount of detail (not too much) we're not driven away from the cartoonish feeling the characters themselves give.The composition of the background is very well made, the colours are not too bright or too dark, and do a fine job at making it look like it's daylight. The soft appearance of the trees and the sky gives off a soothing feeling of peace, a beautiful way to describe the new world the monsters get to live in.However, I have to say I feel like the shadows in the ground lack a little more detail since they act as a bridge between the characters and the background which was made in another style. The shading in the characters is hard to notice and it almost looks like they don't have any, all these however are minor details that don't affect too much my final decision (considering this is all supposed to be in the middle of the day).In conclusion, this is a wonderful and heart-warming piece of work, the theme and the setting is extremely well done and the amount of detail is perfect for what it is about, I simply can't find anything wrong with this picture that could lead me to dislike it or that I should strongly enphasize.In other words I like it.PS: Thank you for reading, this was my first critique and I wanted to do it the best I could......did I do good? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="402" title="(Blank Stare)"/>