Hey there! I am a bit unfamiliar with Equestria Girls so I apologize in advance for any mistakes XD First off, I'll list the things I really like about this piece.-Your coloring and the overall lighting of this picture is really good! The way you colored their hair as well as all the various scattered sparkles really stand out ^^-Their wings(?) and outfit designs are covered very well. I like the one in the middle the most. Here boots are so cuuute! Also, you did really good on their jewelry.-Fold in their clothes are drawn in very well. As this is something I really struggle on, I commend you on your efforts!-I like the red glow they have. It's not to potent but visible enough to make a great and mysterious effect!-You shaped their hands and feet really well and that's so hard to do. Kudos to you XDAnd now for the things which could use improvement:-While their postures and anatomy are mostly well done, I think that the could look a bit more enthusiastic(especially the leftmost one looks a bit bored and the rightmost one looks like she's about to lose her balance. XD)-The background and especially the floor looks plain. This is okay but backgrounds add a lot so I think you should try to focus on them a bit more.-Their faces are very cute but the middle one's right eyebrow is too small in comparison to her other one. The rightmost girl's eyes are shaped a bit differently from the other's. This is mostly just a nitpick but I thought I might as well point it out since I think they should match a bit more.-In little areas there's a tiny lack of shading.Anyway, this is a very lovely picture overall! Hope my critique came in handyKeep up the amazing work