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Personally, my favourite part of this drawing is the nose, the shape is so cute!

The mouth is decent, although the shape could be improved, maybe find some more references for it, I can't really spot what is wrong with it, but something is just a bit off

The eyes could have a better shape, it looks very awkward, at the sides it goes up too much I think. Also, the tear duct area is very oddly placed.

The hair could be a bit more detailed, I like how it is simple but it looks a little too simple, especially considering the detail of everything else.

The colours look very nice together and look very natural.



I hope this helps! (Sorry it's a bit short)