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Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

The artwork is amazing and very detailed and the dialog is short,but full of emotion which is shown by the expression of the characters. If I had one critique it would be the slight inconsistency with Chara's hair in the first and second panel. Since she has her hair cut short in the third panel; but the panel before she had only half of her her original hair cut. If that was intentional then I suggest fixing the third panel by making a little bit of hair peek out to show she has one side of her hair cut short. All in all however it's a very well done, and I hope to see more thoughtful and well drawn things like this in the future.