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What I like about this picture is how it captures how tranquil twilight is while reading a book at night. The scene is so comforting and relaxing, that it makes me feel bad for using my phone every night while I'm in bed! I also like how the ripples of the sheets indicate where Twilight's body is under the covers. It adds a sense of realism to the scene. Now I do have some criticisms to make. Firstly, make sure that Twilight's back is actually right under the sheets. The sheets are raised in the way that it looks like it's just floating in midair. Also, make sure that the book is more three-dimensional. It appears as if it's curving and not at an angle. My biggest criticism would have to be that there is no background. Not only does the black background make the image unintentionally unnerving, but it also takes away from the atmosphere. We need to get a sense of where exactly Twilight is. Of course, this drawing isn't terrible. The line work is mostly good and it have a decent sense of atmosphere, which is partially thanks to the lighting from the window. I just feel that the critiques mentioned earlier should be taken into consideration. Still, I advise you to keep up the amazing work, SentireAeris!