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Even as a non-Halo person, I can say that this is pretty badass. Obviously, a lot of effort went into making this. The weapon is meticulously drawn, and Pinkie is looking fittingly rough. Her face alone shows grit and concentration. The lighting is flawless.However, there is room for improvement, especially with the style. First of all, there is a notable contrast between the styles of the weapon and Pinkie. It may just be that cartoon ponies and gritty sci-fi weapons have incompatible styles, but they look almost as if two different people drew them. Although each component is very well-drawn, the contrast between the rigid, detailed weapon and the rounded-out pony (even with added grunge) is obvious. In this case, the weapon may actually look a bit better if it were less detailed.I can't say anything about the weapon, but the style that you drew Pinkie is very standard. Again, it looks good, but there are a handful of artists now that use this style, so it just doesn't stand out. I'm sure you've heard this before.Next, to me, the dark background and reflective floor seem too uniform. I'm not sure if this is reminiscent of how it looks in Halo, but if not, it makes it feel like Pinkie is "boxed in" and not actually shooting at anything. I'd suggest lightening the background and giving it some color (maybe a muted brown or red).A couple other nitpicks: Pinkie's cutie mark looks smaller than it should be, and the writing on the weapon is flipped.All in all, I'm impressed, and you should be too. However, there are little adjustments that can be made to make it more polished.