This story is an incredibly original idea that has really become one of my favorites on this site. I originally began reading your Chimera story, and noted in the synopsis you wrote you would be focusing on this story. Though sad, as I thoroughly enjoy that story as well, I can say this on does not lose out to it one bit.

I have seen little to no grammar mistakes through each chapter. That in itself is far beyond many books I’ve read on this site.

The characters interact well together, neither too formal or too tight lipped, and really seem to come alive with their obsessions.

the story line is following a steady flow, and thought “Bob” doesn’t know it, the first Arc feels closer to be revealed.

As to “style” that is the hardest for me to grade, as every Author has their own style of writing. I enjoy the way you have the characters interact with each other, and the amount of detail you put into both worlds inside this book.

The book is pretty new still, at 15 Chapters, but you can see a budding gem in just this short amount. Keep it up! (: