Thanks for your appreciation and especially for observing my mistakes!

I agree with all that you have written.



There was only one thing - "bent horn"... It's not bent. It has a little tongue of flame at the bottom which overlapping a horn. I think I should have replace it and/or make it visible better. So sure it was my mistake here, but different kind.



About clay body and muscles... You are right here again. But I don't have any idea about texture on her body in that situation. And the only thing I tried to do is to not make it like glaze. Also I don't have enough knowledge about anatomy and muscles, so I need much more practice on that field.





And finally about tail and mane. I've already tried to make some fixes after your critique, and it surely looks better with separated mane and tail) I should think more about such things next time)