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Looking nice, been waiting to write a critique on the finished work since I saw the WIP.Color: good use of vibrant blues with Yang’s red Mountie uniform standing out (though why are her eyes lightish red? Do her eyes change color for a different emotion besides anger?)Spacing: the team is definitely packed tightly together but don’t seem squashed.Background: The background is meh, I can see a lot of particles and there’s a checkerboard pattern with it fading out to the right, altogether it looks fine, just plain.Subject: The girls are very detailed, from the wrinkles on the outfits to the different strands of hair, it’s definitely a work well done (although the eyes colors are bit off, but that’s very slight nitpick.)Vision: you know what you were drawing and got it down to a point; you got the uniforms perfectly right (at least from what I can tell) and team RWBY look as they are seen in the show. The whole work was executed very well.Originality: I don’t think I’ve ever seen team RWBY as cops and it’s never come to my mind to draw them as so.Technique: Almost perfectly done as per usual.Impact: this didn’t make a very big splash honestly, and it’s not my favorite of your works. Now don’t get me wrong, it’s very good, just doesn’t have a big impact.Altogether I think the 4.5 is very fitting, this is a well done artwork and is an instant Favorite. The reason you don’t get a 5/5 is because doing so would mean it’s perfect, and if it’s perfect it means you can’t grow anymore as an artist, which I believe you still can (although I can’t imagine how.)Good luck this school year and Don’t forget To Be Awesome. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title="(Lick)"/> e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/> e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>