Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

vision: this is going to sound harsh, but the realism in drawing out every hair, does not combine well with the colored sectioning technique used by the show and inherently you in this drawing. its very well done. I think it just doesn't fit, unless the entire drawing is done more realistically. now that I've said that, I have to mention I've always loved how your style of drawing both Octavia and vinyl differed from the show, its unique,originality: its a profile picture of a character you didn't invent. that's why it gets a four. Your comics original, its is own story with a complex plot line and well developed characters, (I'm beginning to sound like a dauch) I'm I supposed to be critiquing just this artwork or you as an artist? you know you have talent, right? I don't have to tell you that, you want to know what we think you could do better, right? So here's my opinion, besides my usual bit on shipping everyone, lol, sorry, I think the eyes are beautiful on this one, plus there red, you didn't change them, that's good. the blur in them is perfect and stunning. your shading is also nice, I noticed that in the comic too, your choice of lighting is almost always perfect. I'm ganna move ontechnique: did you use a tablet for this one? normally it looks like tool parmesan in gimp were used, but this looks like more hand drawn which is nice, more realistic and artistic, and less perfect, but that's a good thing in my opinion shading is well done, even on the hair, which could have been tricky, but you did it nicely. Little subtle details like the shadow in the back of her mouth really help to sell this picture. the backgrounds kinda boreing though.impact: not sure what that means........impact? ........I love vinyl, and your comic, you should keep it up. anyways hope this was use full without being too rude.