This particular piece caught my eye when I first browsed your gallery. Though I don't really know the context, it still manages to be alluring. I find it to be very compelling and mysterious. I also think the cave setting was a good choice. It looks like something you would see in a dream. There are some technical flaws here and there, but it is overshadowed by perspective. It is very cool to see her hand out and seeing what appears to be a transparent ribbon coming towards the viewer. I also like the effect where the background is blurred and she's more visible. It achieves a hypnotic effect. Now on the technical aspects of the drawing, I really like how you did the nose and lips. However, I feel like the hair doesn't have enough detail and doesn't look organic enough. Confident strokes, blending, layering and adding highlights should do the trick. I'd also like to see more details on the feathers. I think you should imply a softer texture on them. Once again, since this is a cartoon doing this may not be necessary, but I think its something you should consider. Great work once again and keep it up.