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I'll be honest, I love artwork like this! Here are some things you may want to consider...1) I would recommend trying to pull off a continuity distance fog for each side, and instead of it travelling through the ends of the picture (which is what kind of ruined it for me), I would recommend having it continue within one picture but have it look a bit more like it is disappearing into the distance, aka pixellation via distance fog. This is mostly seen on cubemaps, and is also used a lot of times in videogames to give the impression of an infinite fall by having the view be within a giant, spinning torus wheel. Since this isn't an animation, but a 2D art, you can pretty much make a "cubemap still." If you have more questions about this, send me a note or reply to this critique. You could also try looping it with a GIF that loops together with the ends of the picture, in a sort of spiral fashion, which would make this EVEN cooler! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>2) I recommend making the light stronger rather than closer to the model. It was a part that bugs me about a lot of Blinn method users, but at the very least, this isn't blinn method utilized here (or if it is, point it out). A lot of times, it makes models reflect a bit too much, destroying and blinding details, becoming like an unlit box with a shadow so strong the details cannot be made out.3) You may want to put some more stuff in the background. For example, more of these sort of kind of models from different angles to save on stress for making this, or maybe just loose cubes similar to the one hanging off bottom left corner. Maybe add a little motion to those floating cubes (unless the intention was for them to be entirely motionless).4) Should there be a particular focus to guide us through this or not? Depending on this, there may be a problemOtherwise, this piece is great!