Pretty good

Very good song considering it is your first one. Flows very nicely.

However, the bass drum gets kinda reptitve smoetimes, like its drilling into my head. YOu might want to syncopate it or something.

tip: if you want your song to have more listens, rate it a 4 right when you post it. Or else, no one will no it exists. NEVER rate it a 5 because.... you find out if you do.