[I am a hug fan of the graphic novel (own all 5 volumes of Sunstone in fact). I've been meaning to leave a comment for ages. So here it is.]VISION: 5/5Ally: You capture her slight vulnerability quite well. It reminds me of those scenes from the story when they first got into BDSM in their relationship.Lisa: You definitely showcase her coyness in this scene. An underlying confidence that draws the viewer's eyes to her gaze.ORIGINALITY: 4/5I feel as if their eyes should be locked on one another, instead of the camera. However, I understand the artistic choice to have them looking at the viewer. It is almost as if we were invited to witness this scene between them - a small peek into their private life. You both command the room quite well - and I can definitely feel that slight sense of familiarity that develops between romantic lovers.TECHNIQUE: 4/5I feel a bit more detail would give future pieces a feeling of intimacy. perhaps a lusch carpet, or small details that make the room feel lived in. I understand that for pieces like this, where the highlight is on the pose and the models that may seem distracting. It's just something my eye keeps noticing isn't there.I keep noticing how amazing the compliment of colors works to draw the eye toward the girls. Lisa's black shoes, leading to her red torso, to Ally's black suit, to the red couch. It ties together nicely. You definitely picked out the costumes really well.It truly feels like we caught them in the middle of a moment. I absolutely love how active the scene is. Especially Ally's eyes and how the ball gag links their hands together. That small detail is really awesome!IMPACT: 5/5I stumbled upon this quite a long time ago. And have found it is one of my favorite cosplay shots of these characters. I quite enjoy how they are posed similar to the pinup models of the 50s. This would definitely rank among the top few art pieces I wouldn't mind having in my bedroom