Ah, comics. They whisper sweet promises in your ear about 'how simple they'll be,' 'it's just a bunch of pictures,' 'you know everything you need to make it painless.'



This is some real good work! Love the expressions in panels 3 & 4, and the detailing on the cake really made the inevitable disaster all the more satisfying. And I loved the way the 4th wall break was integrated.



PS Whatever mistakes there are, they're not obvious.)