Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Well I do love the idea of Rainbow Dash hanging out with Spitfire and it does make sense due to this could easily done with the day Rainbow won to hang out with the wonderbolts at the young flyers competition but well explaining in part of what might of happened it has been used by other artiest with some elite group for the many different fandoms and after joining the only big thing they do is relax so Originality does lose some points there it is however the only one done for a mlp:fim I have seen which is why I value it as a 4 and not lowerTechnique is something which you have shown many strong points in and the only thing I find bad with this image is besides Spitfire & Dash there seems to be no real life shown such as other ponies no birds and the first two panels only showed Dash and Spitfire even though it suggested them walking though town to get to the spa there was also a lack of buildings as well when some I believe should have been visible like in the second panel also the background from the first and second panel if you removed the words had no real hints to them making but the slightest of movementsNow Vision is really the same as Technique in what I find missing but again you seemed more focused on the two ponies than anything else which well important for detail seems to have made some of the background to lose it's meaningImpact now nothing else this is the first I have seen of this artwork depicting what could easily have been canon an it did in fact give me a good laugh so over all a 5 for impactAll on all I would rate this panel a high 8 at lowest to a mid 9 so keep up the good work