I know you were going for the dramatic lighting, but one thing that I have to say as constructive criticism is the lighting on Trixie. Especially on her face, there isn't enough lighting or the shading is so dark that she's difficult to look at. I know it's a matter of the light source, but even if you lightened the shadows on her face a little bit, I think this could have make this look better. On that note, the lighting on Starlight is great. Her whole face is visible while the rest of her head is darkened in the right ways. We can see it, but it's not important to the mood of the picture, so it can be afforded to be darkened, and on that, you did a good job there of darkening it but not too much.