Crys

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Story was well written and kept its momentum throughout. The growth scenes could have used with some further variation or specificity on the sensations. We know they're getting bigger, we know they feel good, but some of those details could have been fleshed out. The size references with how the boobs reach milestones on the body are a good start. There is a point at which the detail falls out of a story with breast expansion, but it skipped several places it could have improved earlier on. A personal angle that I would have enjoyed some input on was the amount that the growth was accidental or underhandedly deliberate. The initial wave falls on the former, but midscenes show skepticism and later ones feel rigged though to very enjoyable outcomes. A scene showing Andy's awkward involvement in the group could have made him more than a final sex scene.