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[2a00:1450:400c:c05::22a]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id j1si2091138wia.88.2015.06.06.11.58.20 for <john.podesta@gmail.com> (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Sat, 06 Jun 2015 11:58:20 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of jpalmieri@hillaryclinton.com designates 2a00:1450:400c:c05::22a as permitted sender) client-ip=2a00:1450:400c:c05::22a; Authentication-Results: mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of jpalmieri@hillaryclinton.com designates 2a00:1450:400c:c05::22a as permitted sender) smtp.mail=jpalmieri@hillaryclinton.com; dkim=pass header.i=@hillaryclinton.com; dmarc=pass (p=NONE dis=NONE) header.from=hillaryclinton.com Received: by mail-wi0-x22a.google.com with SMTP id dq8so40688954wib.1 for <john.podesta@gmail.com>; Sat, 06 Jun 2015 11:58:20 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=hillaryclinton.com; s=google; h=mime-version:date:message-id:subject:from:to:content-type; bh=nEsTjGmUAtShShA9z0Ajy3GouTRDBANZSGM64c7zVrg=; b=W5VsfMY5UUillWyH3Cvrbbsw7DeO+h4AvI5VqBbfY6jxeRYbOpf96fWeNR16v7EWKv mmr76SKWHG8/ROqZHL8dS2C7Q5k8yof25tqS8hDNQnux2JoROnRvkL0ePT6IDLa9qK8W nIQrwf0L+C7JSsU/3U653xY0J0DndVfGzJGoI= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20130820; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:date:message-id:subject:from:to :content-type; bh=nEsTjGmUAtShShA9z0Ajy3GouTRDBANZSGM64c7zVrg=; b=ivs+eEwAcaE9vOsa3nbM7X6tv/t9pdX2SkUXzYvP1UIajC9LjPSTXjmG6cslfmGsxA luCWyOAE7kgdd/Eej8TJfoTelGA4bI6gK5eGz9WvYxuOBnZnWZZu4AGUhJLd/r4GIVpJ hUHnybVdv+C4237yRaMt+vg2TflLBqgRN88Y4Oky/zxv9Ga1Gve28Tff0Yi53yL7keCz /K4bFLYCd7waOWDP3ZgDzv9xrT5pLAdVlIB/ss0ih1nQR0jR+mzfaAyT5MThShS18aLv HN5bVS/CyGMoQiLFuBvi99yZV+sSehMzFXorkbogrkMQoNS23FiMiAEtXAoJ4virV97Q HsNQ== X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQki8rbQ5oMkL1XFZNeZ6sTf6tcyZDE1Mgc2Yo3J76IkyXV4vFe1h8sNmACSR80HIKCfe6iC MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Received: by 10.194.178.102 with SMTP id cx6mr16899103wjc.62.1433617099886; Sat, 06 Jun 2015 11:58:19 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.28.184.136 with HTTP; Sat, 6 Jun 2015 11:58:19 -0700 (PDT) Date: Sat, 6 Jun 2015 14:58:19 -0400 Message-ID: <CAH2oiqKmK0kMYQTDqTjY-fyZzKCOGAjLjsNEMxOsGcywLvQM5A@mail.gmail.com> Subject: guidance for Dan From: Jennifer Palmieri <jpalmieri@hillaryclinton.com> To: Jim Margolis <jim.margolis@gmmb.com>, John Podesta <john.podesta@gmail.com> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=089e013d1c7afbabf40517ddfda1 --089e013d1c7afbabf40517ddfda1 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 I am taking the reins. You two seem the closest in coming to consensus - so wanted to run by you what I think the definitive guidance to Dan should be for next round of edits because right now he is getting a lot of conflicting advice. And get your reax. I will go to others before giving this to Dan - but wanted to get your early reax. GUIDANCE 1) reference to Beau Biden- maybe at beginning with discussion of POTUS, FDR, WJC etc. 2) more Dorothy 3) Embrace her belief that everyone has a role to play to contribute to the health of the economy and strength of the country. But make clear that the middle class has borne both the brunt of the Great Recession and bulk of the work to bring us back from the Great Recession and now wealthy and corporations need to step it and do their part. 4) Use John's formulation of unlocking each American's potential unlocks America's potential to build lasting, shared prosperity. (John - I know I dont have this right, please correct me). Make clear that lasting prosperity means that she is going to tackle the problems that has been holding middle class back. 5) Embrace "it's your time" as manifestation of that belief and while it does not need to be a call and response, it needs to be in the draft more. 6) Change the nurse story so it is not so self-congratulatory. In Dan's defense I would note that the nurse was added by Lissa and Jon and they used her as a way to tell the story that progress is hard and takes a long time. I think that is an Obama story, not a HRC story. So Dan was trying to HRC-ize the anecdote but agree it does not work as revised. I dont like the nurse story at all, but others do. So I guess we go back to the way Jon and Lissa had it. 7) Take out the reference to 2008 and renewing America's promise. 8) Jim did not like the "I am not going to quit now. I am going to run for POTUS" formulation bc it will be the line that gets quoted and is too much about her. This is Favreau's formulation and I LOVE it because it ties the Methodist creed to her ambitions. If her true creed is you have to do good all the time, etc....of course she has to keep going and run for POTUS. So perhaps we can edit this to address Jim's concern, but I would not want to lose the concept all together because I think it is the best, most altruistic explanation I have heard for her running. 9) More humor, first woman, ass kicker and coloring her hair. HEADLINES Hillary Clinton Promise to Middle Class: It's Your Time Hillary Clinton Promises to Unlock America's Potential Hillary Clinton Promises Lasting Prosperity Built By All --089e013d1c7afbabf40517ddfda1 Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable <div dir=3D"ltr">I am taking the reins.=C2=A0<div><br></div><div>You two se= em the closest in coming to consensus - so wanted to run by you what I thin= k the definitive guidance to Dan should be for next round of edits because = right now he is getting a lot of conflicting advice. And get your reax.=C2= =A0 I will go to others before giving this to Dan - but wanted to get your = early reax.=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div>GUIDANCE=C2=A0</div><div><br></d= iv><div>1) reference to Beau Biden- maybe at beginning with discussion of P= OTUS, FDR, WJC etc. =C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div>2) more Dorothy=C2=A0</= div><div><br></div><div>3) Embrace her belief that everyone has a role to p= lay to contribute to the health of the economy and strength of the country.= =C2=A0 But make clear that the middle class has borne both the brunt of the= Great Recession and bulk of the work to bring us back from the Great Reces= sion and now wealthy and corporations need to step it and do their part. = =C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div>4) Use John's formulation of unlocking = each American's potential unlocks America's potential to build last= ing, shared prosperity. =C2=A0(John - I know I dont have this right, please= correct me).=C2=A0 Make clear that lasting prosperity means that she is go= ing to tackle the problems that has been holding middle class back. =C2=A0<= /div><div><br></div><div>5) Embrace "it's your time" as manif= estation of that belief and while it does not need to be a call and respons= e, it needs to be in the draft more.=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div>6) =C2= =A0Change the nurse story so it is not so self-congratulatory.=C2=A0 In Dan= 's defense I would note that the nurse was added by Lissa and Jon and t= hey used her as a way to tell the story that progress is hard and takes a l= ong time.=C2=A0 I think that is an Obama story, not a HRC story.=C2=A0 So D= an was trying to HRC-ize the anecdote but agree it does not work as revised= .=C2=A0 I dont like the nurse story at all, but others do.=C2=A0 So I guess= we go back to the way Jon and Lissa had it.=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div= >7) Take out the reference to 2008 and renewing America's promise. =C2= =A0</div><div><br></div><div>8) Jim did not like the "I am not going t= o quit now.=C2=A0 I am going to run for POTUS" formulation bc it will = be the line that gets quoted and is too much about her.=C2=A0 This is Favre= au's formulation and I LOVE it because it ties the Methodist creed to h= er ambitions.=C2=A0 If her true creed is you have to do good all the time, = etc....of course she has to keep going and run for POTUS.=C2=A0 So perhaps = we can edit this to address Jim's concern, but I would not want to lose= the concept all together because I think it is the best, most altruistic e= xplanation I have heard for her running. =C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div>9)= More humor, first woman, ass kicker and coloring her hair.=C2=A0</div><div= ><br></div><div>HEADLINES=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div>Hillary Clinton Pr= omise to Middle Class: =C2=A0It's Your Time=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><= div>Hillary Clinton Promises to Unlock America's Potential=C2=A0</div><= div><br></div><div>Hillary Clinton Promises Lasting Prosperity Built By All= =C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div> --089e013d1c7afbabf40517ddfda1--