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Those shoulders... It's a nitpick on a technically well done piece but my eyes keep being brought to Cheerilee's shoulders and collarbone. I can understand why you did it this way though, conveying a dominate position is easier to do using a more humanoid body type, at least in some features is easier to do because of what we recognize.I checked out some references and you have the ear positions right but Cheerilee should be on all fours with head and neck either up to make herself look taller with nose pointing down or with neck straight forward like she is going to charge and headbut him? It's tough because horses are not predators so they don't quite have the same body language. The rope you can have hanging out her mouth like Apple Jack does or maybe hanging from something on her side.The body and body language is way better on mac. The neck arches back and tend to move their faces away when scared so that is good. They also tend to rear, but that would make mac look bigger and being Cheerilee is the aggressor in this pic, that would be appropriate. The other one is they scrunch up from the references I looked at which has the rear end lowering way down, feet flat on the ground, and knees almost to the side. As if they are about ready to spring and run for it with all that scrunch upness. Which would probably be more like what Mac is ready to do. You did a great job on him so I am just looking for stuff to Critique.Those shoulders on Cheerilee though. It's mostly just me OCDing over things but my eyes keep getting drawn to them.Hope this is helpful for future stuff!