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I feel that you should make her seem more tired and depressed with the eyes by making them slightly glossy with sadness and with deep bags under them and havig he hair messy and holding a baby reaching for her nose or pulling on her hair and the shading could be more graduall and the background could use a little more work and all the more "mature" changlings should look less feral and should instead look rowdy instead of murderous with her trying to get them to behave instead of making her look scared at the fact that there about to rip each other's throats out. But otherwise it is great work