I must say this IS an improvement from the original. Too bad the wrench hair pin didn't last. I thought it was cute. Both her horn and the tail look better, especially the new design you gave for the tail.As for the body, it looks alright. Maybe you should move the "bumbs" on the back legs lower. They do feel a bit high up. The other thing I noticed is that you gave her a bit of a neck on this. The neck is totally fine and sometimes it's shown on the show [link] , but most of the time is comes right from the body where the chest line and the plot line are almost the same height. Something like this. [link] I can't really see anything wrong with it, and the two I listed above aren't exactly problems. I really do think you did an amazing job on this without the referrence. Great job!