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A very nice drawing although I feel like I'm a little confused the one walking away is chara right? or is chara the one being left behind? Moving on from that though I like the implications of this picture overall along with the detailed shading and layers although perhaps it could have been a little darker to impact the mood more? You mentioned needing to work on your expressions more but I must disagree because your expressions while maybe simplistic are very alluring in a sense of the word and really capture the mood of the image very well!! I would like to mention that I am very happy with how you kept the light source consistent which can be confusing to do sometimes at least in my experience which is why I love this picture so much because the shading is absolutely brilliant so great job with that my friend!!! Keep up the amazing work!!!