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The hair needs more light and highlights. The skin needs more blending and highlights.Everything needs highlights. The accessory that she wears is making the art piece look awkward that you had cut off one of the sides from the left making it look unpleasant.Make sure the edge of the painting looks cut and cleaned out.Comparing the head to the shoulders, the shoulders look rather flat. perhaps left side could be darker. Just don't change what it is now, i think it's the toning and value problem.Between neck and shoulders, add values there too. it's too little compared around the neck.