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I think that it's a genius idea to make the bed sheets the same pattern as the CMC's cutie marks. Them sleeping in the same bed together could symbolize how they are all united by their cutie marks. The coloring of this drawing is also pretty neat. The neon colors gives the illustration a sense of liveliness and fun. However, I do have a big question about it: as much as I admire the shadowing, why are they sleeping with the lights on? Is someone just walking up in on them? Along with that, there are a few other suggestions I would like to make. Firstly, I would change the base from a stylish purple to a regular wooden floor. Unless their supposed to be in a dream sequence, I think the base needs a redesign to make it look like they're sleeping in an actual room. Secondly, I would change the patterns on Apple Bloom and Scootaloo's hoodies. You notice how Sweetie Belle's attire has an actual pattern on it, including a bell and a music note? The same should be done with the other two fillies' clothes. Perhaps Apple Bloom's clothes could feature a pattern of a heart AND an apple, and Scootaloo can have a wing AND a storm cloud. That's just a small suggestion. Other than that, I think this is a pretty impressive drawing. Watching the CMC sleep in their little hoodies is pretty cute, especially how one of them can't stay warm! As I stated before, the neon colors make the illustration feel peppy, which is how a premise like this should feel. Overall, it's apiece that you should definitely should feel proud of. Keep up the great work, SpellboundCanvas!