Whoa! Dude! I have no idea what this is about *reads the thing about it being a from a fanfic and understands a little better* but whatever the case, this is fantastic! My favorite part is the pegasus in the lower right corner. The gold parts almost look like honey dripping down the scene, and I love how it starts out so high in the picture and sort of 'drips' down across the scenes. I also like how you wove the rainbow lines throughout the picture to connect to the cutie markes and the story pics below. The freaked-out pony in the dark panel and the sad-looking dragon are very compelling and definitely give the impression that this story involves some sad parts. Great job, Sakuya!