Gorgeous work on the pretty ponies as they enjoy the (unseen) show. Their happiness is as great as their beauty as they bask in the brilliance. I haven't read the story, but you did a great job showing that it's nighttime but lit up by some great event, and the colors on the clouds make it even more magical. Am I right to guess that they got some advance notice so that they'd be out to watch? Whatever it is, the golden light plays very nicely off of them and Carrot Top's wonderful little home. (Well, the finial gives it away, I think.) Great details on the place as well as the ponies, and that landscape in the distance is another happy dream in itself. Thanks for sharing.