Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Okay, first thing first. Drawing sometimes too simple or rough and slightly out of proportions on first two frames. But overall it's very appealing and nicely drawn comic. But big-headed Trixie on first frames just... SO big-headed. I mean, literally.Originality: not many comics use "Trixie student of Celestia", even less - with that kind of humor. Simple, yet very funny. I laughed, and I don't laugh at comics often, mainly just chuckle or smile.Now, for impact... OH MY GOD THAT LAST PANEL. THAT CUTE TRIXIE LITERALLY MADE ME DIE FROM DIABETUS. For her you're getting 20% more points, and 5 more for second last panel. This is hilarious!