Hey, I really love your scenes! The posing and expressions are always great. There's a couple things I've noticed about some of your work, and both of them appear in this one, so I thought I'd share :3Sometimes the scenes are very hazy/foggy, to the point that it doesn't really seem fitting. In this case, it looks like Chloe and Max have been smoking all afternoon in their apartment. Unless that's the intent, I would tone it down considerably or maybe even remove it altogether for indoor scenes with low light. Should help with render times, tooThe other thing I see sometimes is that the DOF effect is overly strong. Here, it seems odd for Chloe's face to be out of focus when it's so close to Max's, and it actually looks like there is no point in the shot that is completely in focus. Again, I would tone this down.