Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

To start off, the vision you had of this was very nicely portrayed. You obviously knew what you wanted to do and created a very smooth and effective piece of art.Originality is a bit short-coming, a lot of people often do pictures of Twilight reading with others or in general, but that doesn't mean that this is a bad piece.Technique is also up there, the shading looks natural and the positions don't look forced or "wonky." I could advice trying to make things darker in some places, experiment with different colored lighting and shading. For example red or yellow.Impact. Like I said previously, you did what you were set out to do. It obvious this is a relaxing setting of reading with a couple friends! Everyone seems to be enjoying the book that Twilight has provided.