Wow!

Just wanted to kill some time until the gym opens by reading the first chapter... now the gym is almost closed and I am trough reading all five ^^"

Have to admit, I skimmed through the near break up, since I have a problem with those scenarios, but your "we had to go through this, it get's better" bits took a lot of the sting out for me, thanks for that! (otherwise I might have quit altogether and then I would have missed this greatness)



Had a bad image-resolution problem in this chapter with some strips which made them nearly unreadable for me. But luckily you uploaded a PDF of it all and there I could read everything! Thank you for that!!!



Loved how Lisa got to recognize, that Ally had been caring their relationship (something I did not see myself while reading but I am sure I could spot it now, if I re-read it ^^")

Also adored the breaks on the retelling of her Online-Storys! All those "and here is a lot of sex I won't go into" -> Just great! And gave the story a bit more of a "yeah, she is writing the story of their live down" feel.

Furthermore, I love, that the other people also have some complications and ups and downs! I makes it all feel so much more realistic. Damn great!



Especially loved the first three panels of this particular strip! The story did make me cry a bit in some spots (mostly with laughter), but this... damn.. this was a punch of the very best sort! Just thinking about that scene tears me up a bit! Just... so damn powerful! They can not hear each other, and those gestures are just a perfect fit at that point! Argh!



Overall I loved, how you depicted them both (and all the other characters). How you made them both unique. How you showed, that even when sharing a space, each needs some alone time as well.

The little brother called it btw. when she moved in! (so much great stuff in hindsight ^^")



Looking forward to more in this universe!





Edit:

Sorry, I completely forgot the bit about the drawing! It blew me away to be frank. It helped make the story so much ... more!

- The speech bubbles already showed in what kind of voice the speech itself was delivered

- The bits with the slowly rebuilding bridges were powerful as well as hopeful

- You showed the emotional state of the characters very well. Happy, chagrined, unsure, sad, hopeful.

- The damn near realistic bits scattered throughout all chapters were masterpieces in themselves and really highlighted those parts of the story in a way, that the written word never could.



What is left to say:

Thank you for sharing your great work with everyone on the internet!