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The emotion present in this piece is fantastic. I feel that with this picture you have married together the perfect model with her perfect shot, I see here a picture of high artistic quality. The gas mask narrows her face into her neck and shoulders, and that same line narrows her chest down through her waist to her hips. The skirt and hair compliment each other perfectly, and I must say the lighting choices made here are also highly complimentary both to the form of the model and to the subject of the image.The only thing I think I would have altered with this picture is the glove on her hand. Her entire outfit is black, not counting those sparkles on her corset, so the grey seems a bit out of place. Perhaps bandages would have worked better, or maybe some sort of black leather arm glove? Even leaving her arm bare and showing her tattoos might have yielded a better result. This is of course a matter of personal opinion, as is most of art. At any rate it is a minor quip I thought I would mention seeing as I am here writing this critique.All in all the content of this piece is very satisfactory. I find that usually photography seems to miss the artistic point, creating pretty images with no meaning or depth to them. What you have here is an image that is simply yearning for the opportunity to tell a story, if only of the personality of the model herself.Fantastic work, both you and the model. I truly enjoy seeing images of this quality.-Seethe