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As easy it would be to simply to say something like"this comic is 20% cooler then your last!" or(cute RD face) "so awesome!"I believe I should share my input on this one.Vison: Fluttershy's drop she did on RD did seem a little heavy, and originally looked like it hurt bad. This expansion of this story and twist is very well thought out! And of course the insensitive doctor.Originality: While this isn't the first idea, it was first comic to this. However. It is original in the idea of fluttershy using a new rhyme and of course Fluttershy's expressions on her face along with every pony else.Technique: Artwork, is solid, and very well done. All of the details in the last two frames such as Fluttershy holding RD's hand, tissues, balloon, Pinkie's darker appearance, and hair, applejack's hat. to panel 3 and 4's expressions on the two's faces. Writing is done well, everypony being angry at the doctor was a dark humor that was pretty funny! Technique: Fantastic.Impact: Humor, is great, fresh, and a little dark, seeing the mis read on the clip board the doctor had. The severed spinal column was the right doctor terminology, and the broken ribs was fitting for the injury. Impact was great!