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This story incorporates several elements of the MLP world that it can fit right into the narrative of the show.First off, the plot is interesting, and starts off with a single question that pulls me in. It just snowballs from there, gaining more interesting points like actually getting to the future, and seeing how dystopian it has become. It's very believable too, how it's presented even before the explanation comes in. And when the touching moments come in, it's executions are great, especially since I could really feel them. The use of the Doctor Whooves can be questionable but still holds up smoothly and is actually done well. He's used several times in other stories, and some people might not be familiar with him or the TARDIS, but luckily, the Mane 6 can ask the questions for the readers, and it's a quick way to get some explanations out without losing the pace. The twist is absolutely amazing as well. Even if someone doesn't know where it might have originated from, it still holds up on its own. I personally love prophecies and how they work in stories, although I know a few people that do not, but that is expected from any given topic. The action segments are tight and accurate to how the Mane 6 would react in such a situation; it once again shows how believable it all is.Which brings me to the characters, which are near flawlessly done. The use of the characters - how they would think, react, behave, and such - is too accurate to put into words. The use of OC's is expertly done as well. They're not over the top, yet still have a purpose and are unique enough to look important without drawing too much attention to themselves. And though I'm not too familiar with the character of the Doctor, I know enough that you got what I hope is how he really is. I think a great part is that the story revolves around Twilight in the future, and yet she hasn't been seen yet, which leaves me in anticipation to see her at last. How she'll act, how she treats others, how she'll behave upon seeing her friends; it's stuff like that that keeps me hooked.As for the art work, I'll be honest and say I'm can't really judge too much on it. I'm ore of a story reviewer. However, I can say that it is appealing, easy on the eyes, and fits the MLP style nicely. It doesn't look too unique on the surface, but through the story, it's perfect. It doesn't distract me from the story, but still nice enough to look at and get a grip on what's going on. The way Spike looks in the future is strange for me. I can't say if it's just me or not, but it feels sort of off. He does fit the setting though, and I may have to see more of him to get used to it. Plus, he somewhat matches how Spike envisions himself when he saves Rarity from the Diamond Dogs, so that's nice as well.Overall, very nicely done. Everything is smooth, understandable, and makes me excited to see where the story will go. Lots of questions to be answered, and being able to see it come into fruition is great. And it helps that the story updates quite frequently! In the end, this may be my favorite fan-made MLP comic!