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I have to say that this deviation of Rainbow Dash in a onesie differs from others because she doesn't appear to be a filly, nor does she appear to be a fully-grown mare. She seems to be somewhere in between. I don't think we get to see the characters depicted in this age group that often. I also like the way the pattern on the hoodie is designed. I complained in my last review of your drawing that the shapes were too close together, which kind of disjointed the pattern. Here, the clouds and lightning bolts are more spread out, allowing the viewer to enjoy both the sequence and the background. In addition, I should add how clever it was to make the bolts multicolored instead of making them all yellow, seeing how it'sDash. The only criticism I have is that the "Hug" caption should be centered in the middle, so that the illustration would have more symmetry. But aside from that, I think this is a satisfactory piece. I love the cute facial expression RD has, and I especially love how the onesie is far more presentable than the ones I previously critiqued. Keep up the great work SpellboundCanvas!