I kinda pity Principal Abacus Cinch: she may be a cruel, greedy school authority who will do any dirty work to preserve her streak of legacies, but there should be more details of her background.



What do you personally think of her? Was she, to you, a horrendous character, or a tragic villain?



And I believe that "Abysmal Void" or "Abysmal Depth" would be a better choice than "Midnight Sparkle", for it fits her terrifying ambiance of darkness, ruin, and despair -- better for her not to only be a monstrous terror, but a living, incarnate nightmare brought about as a result of immense, excessive magic.