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Well, you're definitely learning something new with each piece. You have a great brush technique, on a technical level you're very impressive. However, there seems to be a consistent trend throughout a lot of your works, and that is that your composition really needs work. This piece and rain-gear.deviantart.com/art/R… in particular both have that same problem. A lot of your pieces like this one just really lack focus and balance. The viewer's eyes have a hard time focusing because there's simply too much going on with nothing to balance it out. You can have a shot that is dense and rich, but you need to determine a focal point and make sure that you draw the attention to that point. With this, the focal point should be Trixie herself, but you put so much detail to the side of her that it gives the piece a really imbalanced feeling. I can definitely see what you're going for, but I would recommend scaling it back. Detail isn't always needed, and in works like this one and others that you've been doing recently, it's actually too detailed for its own good. There are plenty of places where you can read up on color technique and composition, so I would suggest doing a little homework. Your characters are good, your backgrounds and landscapes are really fucking good, but you need to learn to make them work together. And hey, with as fast as you've been learning, I have no doubt you'll be able to improve.;D