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Beware, I've never done a critique before, but I'll give it a shot. I do enjoy your art, it stands out from the crowd what with its colors and patterns, but there is a few things that I find, well, bad. The boat has very little dimensions, and seems like it's just paper. Despite that, the pattern on it is glorious. You did a fantastic job with the shading on the boat to create a great wood finish. The back drop is nice, but I'm not sure where the lighting is going in this, but that might just be me. Personally, I think your proportions on Rarity and Spike give the piece a very distinctive personality to it, despite Rarity's slight proportion problem. The shading is great, and the pattern on Spikey works well. One thing I feel wrong about Rarity is just the sweater, the pattern isn't as interesting as the others. Beyond that, I find your piece great, and hope to see more for the future!I hope I did this right.