Mario69 said:

Well point was there's nothing wrong with animation itself, but the artstyle as now is inconsistant and cheap. It would've been easy to make it match by simply vectorising the penis, increasing outline thickness, using something else as outline color as you see black isn't used at all and making whole thing 2-4 solid colors instead of an gradient. Also looking at original picture there's that sparkling effect over both lollipop and horn so I assume they are connected. With that adding that effect over the penis would've maybe been finishing touch but this is simply guesswork at my part.

Mario69 said:

Well point was there's nothing wrong with animation itself, but the artstyle as now is inconsistant and cheap. It would've been easy to make it match by simply vectorising the penis, increasing outline thickness, using something else as outline color as you see black isn't used at all and making whole thing 2-4 solid colors instead of an gradient. Also looking at original picture there's that sparkling effect over both lollipop and horn so I assume they are connected. With that adding that effect over the penis would've maybe been finishing touch but this is simply guesswork at my part.

Thanks, that is the kind of feedback I need. I will work more on my next animations, I'm working on my own now that I got the hang of it