Thks very much Bludflag, I had made the changes and some of my repliesI changed it to 'right before our eyes'. I just literary translated it, forgot that in English it's right beforeYes, I also felt the magical weapons need to be reworded but I really cant think of another appropriate wordI had edited but I left the comma before the magical weapons as it was another phrase.this is the phrase:一股股煞气恍如一股股凶灵. It means waves of 煞气 (aura of death/murderous air) was like waves of 凶灵(fierce/vicious spirit). I have a hard time with this but not sure if you can make sense of my explanation tho lolI still retain 'who had lost their lives' as they were wondering who were the people who had been killed.should it be 'became'? And yes, there were multiple branches, like Small Bamboo Valley, Big Bamboo Valley, Long Shan Valley etcI will stick to gritted since dictionary also included thisYes, I should change it to black-attired (I forgot about the -) but it's a major change so I will need to check and make the changes from the beginning.