Ahhh man, if there wasn't already a story I could have had so much fun writing it. But, Vhalstien already beat me to it. On,y he had Judy in the story. I would have made it so that onlye Nick was in the story. Then towards the end, he would find traces of her on the far side of the island. The last few sentences would have been something like:As he closed nearer to the grey and white colum of smoke bellowing, the smell of smoke filled his nose. As he came to the brush surrounding the clearing, he noticed saplings that had been cut, leaving only a small stump. He came across a grove of large ferns and vines separating him and the clearing. He could hear the crackling of the fire just on the other side. He grasped his spear from the straw satchel that hung from his shoulder. He pushed the spear in front of him as he spread the ferns apart. As he peered into his destination he could see a small bamboo shack that leaned against a rock pertruding from the tree line. He continued his investigation as he stood and observed the small camp. The occasional rustle of the trees from the wind broke the silence. He walked further into the clearing to see a pile of pear cores and cracked open coconuts. The steady beat of the waves as they crashed along the shore. His heart beat from his chest as he froze. A small rabbit appeared from the brush holding a pile of dried branches and twigs."Judy?"***********************************************************************Oh well, better luck next time.