Minhtam wrote:

I literally don't understand this. Maybe it's because I never used かかわる before, but I have no clue what you're trying to say after even looking that up. You're being concerned with something to someone?

What is this? Are you trying to apologise for having bad Japanese grammar? This sentence is terrible if you want to do that because first of all you're ending it as 詫び and not 詫びる, and secondly, you should read it again because 詫びる is an intransitive verb. You cannot use WO with an intransitive verb because those verbs by definition do not take direct objects. Even if it did, you're literally saying that something "Apologises my Japanese (language)". A better way for this is 私の分かりにくい日本語申し訳ございません

This sentence seems to me like you're saying you cannot very well speak japanese. But again, you just said that. This is redundant. I would say また、日本語でペラペラできない.

I would remove 私は here since we know you're talking about you since you literally just introduced yourself but I'll let it slide because it's the beginning of something new and it makes sense with 受け取ったことの通知を受けています。I don't feel it's very wrong but I would move 私は to after 受け取ったことの通知 because after such a long phrase it's kind of hard imo to tell who did what now.

I know you're trying to say "The problem video" but please change it to something like you said earler: 著作権ストライクを受け取ったビデオ. Saying 問題のビデオ sounds like something I would say in my second month of learning Japanese.

I have a bad feeling about this. I'd rather say that <Title of video>があった or が存在した or something I can't think of a proper word to indicate it was there rather than playing the video.

Remove saying this from your speech entirely. The 私は is completely redundant and saying 考えると alone also makes me feel bad. I'd probably add something behind it like 動画が消されたのを考えたら or something. Also I'd use -たら instead of と here because it's a feeling. I know they'd both mean when here, but と feels to me like the kind of when you use when you say "When I drop this ball, it will fall" etc.

I don't like がきた here. I looked it up and it's not a suru verb so maybe you can say がした instead.

Just say copyrighted song and not 問題の曲

私は

WILL YOU FUCKING STOP SAYING THIS

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i don't know what this means but I have never used 一部 before so who knows

I think you should indicate that it's this copyright strike that is giving you a an 影響 here with blah blah blah ga after キャリアに

I think you're using a dictionary for this exact word apparently meaning "very"

I don't think the ideas come together here. The copyright strike that very much put your channel in disorder just終わる? What's going on? It's ending? You want them to end it? You're going to end such things in the future? I have no clue.

FINALLY YOU SAID SOMETHING THAT SOUNDED REALLY GOOD. USE をお願いします LIKE THIS MORE

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So wait, why do you need them to delete the strike for you to delete the video?

What does this mean? I'm only used to 移動 being used like going to another country

作業 isn't "Work with me here." type of work. It's literally 仕事すること

より is better than から