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I am not good at human anatomy myself, but I still believe my critique is valid.First off, I would like to say that you ave a good grasp on colour theory, whether intentional or not. The colours blend very well with one another, and none of them are hard on the eyes.There are a few things that you could maybe work on a little more.- The structure if the face. I think studying the facial structure of a person, would be a good way to fix some of the flaws in suc a piece. When he is facing the viewers, the eyes are too far apart, and the nose is or seems to be a little too high up, the structure of the jaw, could also use some work. I can also see, that you seem to struggle with the shape of the human cranium, since in many instances, it seems like the head is just sitting on his neck, instead of being connected to it. Here is a very helpful video, which could help you practice the general facial structure aswell as the cranium of the human being: www.youtube.com/watch?v=btgick… I like the idea behind the piece, and I also think with some practice, you could make some very nice looking pieces of art, but you will hve to do some training and some practicing, to reach that góal.Overall I'd give this piece a rating of three stars, since the concept is nice, but the the execution is rather awkward.I am sorry if these criticisms are harsh, but I don't like sugarcoating very much, and I hope you appriate the critique, nonethless.