The artwork and premise are pretty weak in my opinion. But overall this is pretty creepy because of the simplicity of the animation and dialogue. It almost feels like a "Teach Yourself English" tape gone wrong - I don't know if this is what you were going for. I think you should capitalize on that aspect. Something like:

"My mother is dead." [turn to the camera, the words appear on the screen] "My mother is D-E-A-D."