Her death upset me..She still could have gotten up and caught her. I have am own AU two really.



1) Still dies, but Rap does more then, just reaching out. That was so hmm! >_<! You see her jump up, and reach for her, grabbing her wrist. And the cam zooms up. She's all. "..I got you, mother..." Then she slips shes all "NO!!!"



2) (think of this playing like real scene...)SHE DOES get her..and she put in jail, and on trail...but Rap seeks in to jail. Biting on her bottom lip, as she reaches for bars holding them tightly A few mins of dead time, she just holding the bars, and you hear her breathing. She soon breaks silence by saying "...You have controlled me my whole life." pulling away from the bars, herself all pathetically, looking down at the floor. "But..You never actually hurt me.." shrugs, and does her nervous/unsure head sway back and forth, holding herself, recalling everything all event that were tender, and loving from the past. "..But you were all I knew, I was taught to beileve you as my mother, and can't stop believing that." Lifts eyes to a haggy Gothel, casted in shadow, by lightly cast in moonlight from one cell window "..Not even know..after everything..." Zoom up on Gothel, eyes (some more sobby instrumental music box version of Mother knows best) Then jumps back to a a in profile rap, who frees herself from her own tight embrace, slowly and does a quick nod. Where she reviles a key to Gothel, and you see her eyes again starting form tears, as you hear cell clicking open, and you see close up of her head in frame, and long shot of her rap opening the cell. "....I.. Shouldn't " Gothel gets up, before she can finish and cups her mouth all,. "Shhhh...shhh..there comes a time when a mother has to let her daughter go...As a daughter has let her mother go..." Rap tears start to flow, as you see fall down her cheeks, down to gothel hands.



Then with a cute cafty writing its like reprise scene of ending of mother know best. (only add creaking voices, because of their tears and sobs)

"Rapunzel..?"

Pulls her hand away, as she looks up. "..Promise me, you will never come looking for me..."

She weakly nods. "...I will miss you..."

" I will miss you, the most" kisses her head...





When you hear a jail doors rattle main ones, and their fairwell is cut short...as she runs off into the night