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Firstly, I would just like to say, I really like the scene that you've captured with this drawing, however the reason I've given it a mediocre originality is because it is a bit of fanart with nothing innovative, you could have done something creative with this seen, there is so much creative potential that you haven't used, a suggestion that you could have used is a more dynamic shot, maybe form the side or from a different angle, do any of these and it would instantly improve this piece.Another thing that I found that you could improve on would be your line art, so many bits of the line art could be improved if you had just cleaned up the line art, also, I noticed that the ladder was done using the line tool, maybe you could try drawing it instead using a normal stroke, since it looks unnatural next to the rest of the piece that looks extremely natural whilst the ladder looks very geometric.Maybe this is your style and I'm just nitpicking but Stevens left hand doesn't have any fingers! It looks a bit like a lego hand, you could have either drawn the hand or copy and pasted Stevens right hand, since it is already clasped around the bouquet, though I wouldn't recommend it.Unfortunately, I think you could have done a better job with the shading, cel shading would have looked really good with this piece, also there are some bits of Stevens outfit that could do with a bit more shading (also maybe try to make the coat separate form the coat, and if somehow, the coat is tucked in, maybe try to show that a bit better)Now, the majority of this is critique has been negative so far, however there are several things I did like, your art style is actually very nice, the stylization really makes it stand out, the accent on the jacket is really nice as well as the roses in the bouquet, I love the design of the roses and that they look like Steven's gem!Anyway, I hope you succeed in your art journey and continue to improve, also I found your art in project critics, By the way, I was reading this over and it sounded like I was attacking you, there was no malicious intent in this critique, I was just trying to give some constructive criticism, I hope that this didn't come across like I was attacking you to you!