I love the style and the way you are able to portray the different characters so well through the art and body language. If someone who had no clue any of the characters are saw this they would almost accurately be able to tell the gist of each character from the comic. The only criticism I have at all is that adding a bit more shading would give it a bit more of oomph. I noticed too that Aradia is dead Aradia at this point but Tavros seems to be ahead of that point of the timeline while Terezi seems to be a bit behind. Is there any particular reason for this? It isn't anything major because the humans most definitley aren't on the same time of the comic as the others are and it really is a small thing. I enjoy your art and hope you keep it up!