I do think this is funny and cool. However I do think that you could do more with g rating. For example one of my favorite movies Disney's Hunchback of Notre Dame had a g-rating. But it has a lot of stuff that one normally wouldn't associate with a g-rated film such as sexual imagery and mentions of genocide. There other examples of this as well. To paraphrase Don Bluth you can put anything in kid's film as a long as it has a happy ending. More on that here: www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tst_x… So I do think that if Disney, Cartoon Network or some other company were to produce a g rated Watchmen I think the most major changes would be Comedian character and the ending along with some minor changes(only implying that some of the women that Rorschach encounters are whores, make Rorschach a little bit more heroic and adding more lighter scenes than there was in the original etc.) They either make Comedian more noble and kind or they would make him more like Judge Frollo or like the Joker from Batman the animated series with him acting creepy with Silk Spectre rather than outright trying to rape her. Also they would probably make the ending with Dan and Rorschach successfully stopping Adrian's plan and being accepted back into the world as superheroes. But I like your version just the way it is, with it being silly and bright