I like this. In particular, I like how you portrayed Lynn. While she appreciates what Leni did for her, she's also a little shy. Being a tomboy, she doesn't often indulge in traditionally girly activities. In doing so, she leaves her comfort zone and most likely becomes a little self conscious. Not only is this an excellent bonding moment for Lynn and Leni, It's also a great character moment for Lynn. On top of that, I feel this is a moment that both sisters can look back on twenty years later. Leni because Lynn doesn't model often, and Lynn since she learns that she doesn't have to restrict herself to only tomboyish activities, which also humanizes her in a way. Very well done. 9/10