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This is a pretty simple piece, very straight forward so there is not much to say about it. However, simple things such as the color, seems very cohesive throughout the character. A very adorable position, maybe positioning could be adjusted slightly, but it is hardly noticeable at all. The shading is very crisp and clean, I like how you took the time to make sure of that and clearly make all the lines smooth. The only issue, and this could just be a personal preference, is too many eye sparkles? But then again, that could just be a preference, I personally think a more crisp simple eye could be more coherent, as well as the eye showing through the hair is just something I personally am not a fan of either. Continuing, the mix between soft and cell shading works really well in your composition and how you worked on making them work together. The whole character really does pop, especially because of the outline. Overall, this piece is pretty simple and nice, with minor adjustments, but there is also not much to really say about it. Other than the fact it is pretty cute, the pose, the expression, it is well done and i am pretty sure the commissioner was very satisfied and happy, e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="390" title="(Smile)"/>