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To start this critique off... good style. Even though it is a common art style for me and there's really nothing unique about this kind of style, there are few people who I've seen who can make it look good! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/> And you qualified.VISION: Color scheme is accurate, shading is crucial especially for this sort of art style, and the drawing overall is beautiful as well. The shading in some places (particularly the legs) feels to be somewhat off. The light, for example, is just not constant, for the shadow is everywhere. According to the front legs the shadow is presented on the backside. However the shadows on the back legs are presented on the front... which makes no sense unless there are multiple lights surrounding her. Which brings me to my next problem... Rainbow Dash is female. Even though her flowing mane and eyelashes make the cut, her head shape is off. She has the head shape of a male... unless you intended a male version of RD. And before I move on I would like to ask you a question... Can you make her smile in your next drawing? And if she is smiling, then can it be more noticeable? Thank you.ORIGINALITY: As I stated before, not original, but you're one of the few who make it look good. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>TECHNIQUE: Everything appears to be in order, with the exception of her torso which you can see the strokes on the shading portion. If you cleaning it up better and then smoothed it together next time, it would help.IMPACT: This piece of art is, in my opinion, is the kind that I want in my room. Like blow it up into a really big poster and staple it to my wall above my bed. It presents a picture of Rainbow Dash very good.Overall great picture, I want to buy a print, but I has no money... so. Just call me up when you have a print available... or if it's already released then give me a discount or something. Anyways, I hope you can produce more drawings and art works with the style of painting.