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Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Ok, this is my first time doing this, so I dont really know what to do, but here i go. the vision of the whole peice I think is a bit to dark for the runabout of the Picture. but the way it really pops to the viwer is fantastic! <33 Luna's front hair peice is normally layered a bit over the other eye so it should normally be a little in the back. I think the impact of the picture is caused by the wonderful shading in the picture to really make it look like the Night is overcasting on the moon and how the layering is a bit off, but otherwise perfect. the wings need to be fixed a little more to layer bewteen the hair and the tail needs to be a bit longer. We might also need to see the hair of Luna going forward-wise in front of the moon.otherwise a great pic!!