I am sad that they couldn't stay on that high of admitting and consummating their love. I hope that this will be an up ending an that their love will help them through these obstacles.

I'm glad you didn't show the actual act. This was about love, not sex. What some people are asking for is imho akin to furry porn. There is a difference between love-making and porn, however, which may surprise some kids who haven't had frank discussions with their parents about it like I did (also my school did a "porn kills love" event and there is a great TED talk by Ran Gavrieli where he shares why he no longer watches porn and how it destroyed his relationships with women when he was watching it and the truth behind the industry and genre ...anyone can click on the link although I think it may be age-restricted)