I'm FLOORED by the way this turned out."Deep down, I no longer believed in Zootopia either."This alone is what I truly think of John from the original storyline. He just... couldn't catch a break no matter how hard he tried. He loved his family as was clearly shown and wanted Nick to be there the whole way to show him that 'Anyone can be anything'. But I also allude that to what happened to him in both plots. Seeing John fail and being bullied himself, he figured that fox's couldn't.And the next panel was just as emotive. He wanted to have his son believe in something that was supposed to work, but the end result showed him the opposite, he no longer had faith in the city like his dad.But the end was AMAZING! I've seen very few people do jittery text (literally only one) to such a degree in a comic or other media that makes it look like they're stammering and becoming very emotional. You portrayed this perfectly!And that hug. so beautiful!!!