First off, I want to say that I think this piece is excellent. The line work is very crisp and clean, and the simplicity really adds to the piece.

I think the placement and overall size of the drawing really adds to the atmosphere, though I'm not really sure why. I also like the background, as the simple approach really makes the design itself pop- and something that really appeals to me is the shadows, they really make the piece in my eyes.



As for the composition, I really like the placement and positioning. The bike is really cool, especially the strong lines and angular nature. Reminds me of Tron a little bit. As for the character himself, I feel that the use of the blank face really helps with the atmosphere, perhaps even makes him more expressive than he could be with a face.



There are only two things I would improve on.

1) The hair- I feel that the hair looks almost like a wig. Although it would be difficult, I'm sure you could find a way to make it seem more attached. Perhaps parting it on the side could help, though I'm no expert.

2) The legs- I feel as if these are the most glaring flaws in the piece. Though well drawn, the lack of upper leg makes it seem as if his knees attach directly to the front of his hip. I think this could be fixed fairly easily by simply moving the shins downwards and attaching them with an upper leg portion.



Overall, this piece is really well done. It almost reminds me of a comic book cover or something. I saw that you enjoy writing, so if you ever get around to it, I would enjoy reading a story or two about this character. Good work!