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Impact Impact

If I were to write a critique at all, I would say you did a wonderful job to start. Then say that although you did a marvelous job...it just doesn't hit me as something great. It just fails to hit me as something that would stick in my mind...I'm not sure if that was what you were going for but still good work. Your technique is very good, you made Chrysalis look exactly like she did in the episode, that being said it look like it came from the episode. If you want true originality make something like her in a field or something...make it original! That being said very good job!