I'd say draw the eye upwards to the topmost panel. Right now my eyes were immediately drawn to the green laser beam on the very left and then to the high-contrast area created by the vehicle. And then only then did I see the "dynamic entry", so it isn't quite as powerful. So perhaps next time arrange the characters and special effects so that the first panel is more visible. Also I feel that the dark people with red eyes, who I assume are the bad guys, could use colored lineart, more light reflections off their bodies or a slight bright outline around themselves. As it is, they sort of blend in with the shadows, dirt and other dark parts of the background.



Overall though, my impression is this is very high quality. I can't find fault with your anatomical or coloring technique, it is superb and this is an action scene you should be proud of. Just a few composition changes that could be made for better flow.