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For starters, I think this piece looks really cool. This is an awesome pose that seems really fitting. There are, however, some points that could be improved. The biggest one in my eyes is the shading and colors. They seem a tad inconsistent in some areas. One example is the shading on the nose, which looks like it should be the same as the shading color on the rest of the head. One other example is the white streaks on the black clothing. I understand that they are meant to show how shiny the clothes are but something about them seems a bit off. They look a little too much like slavic meme sweatsuits. The hair also has some odd variations in color. I'm not saying to avoid that. I'm just saying that it looks rather awkward the way you executed it. The other point that stuck out to me is whatever that is under the right armpit. I could definitely see how it is confusing to make out exactly. Other than that, you did an awesome job. The shading and creasing on the clothes are awesome even if the colors could use some improvement, and while the background does look a tad bland, I feel like the slight variations in color are still nice.