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Let me start off by saying that I absolutelythe idea of this comic! It's so hilarious! When Sunburst first revealed his phoniness on the show, it was played up as this huge dramatic moment, and it still is a little heartbreaking to watch. But this comic successfully takes a more comedic look at him coming clean. I like how it's suggesting that Sunburst was so desperate to feel important and special, that he even wanted to change his physical appearance. It's one of the most clever ideas I've seen done with the character. Plus, Starlight's reaction is just priceless! The way that her pupils shrink upon discovering this is pure genius!Now there are a few criticisms I would like to add, but they're only minor. Firstly, I would add less aura around Sunburst's horn. The aura around the sock is fine, but the aura around his horn stretches out a bit too far. Maybe you should make it so that the outline of the aura is about one or two millimeters away from the horn. Second, I wouldn't have Starlight's mouth closed. Honestly speaking, it looks like she's channeling the hamster from the "Dramatic Look" video. I would have her mouth wide open. Having the jaw drop would enhance the comedic effect.But other than that, I think this drawing is funny as heck! It's a great parody, and it'll put anyone in a great mood! I love reading your comics, Dori-to, and I can't wait to see more in the future! Keep up the tremendous work!