I'll try to keep it spoiler free. Also, I suck at reviewing and understanding all the finer details of writing. Lastly, I am by no means another writer, and am just a scrub giving his opinion. Also, writing this after finishing 3.6

The story so far has been pretty good. The premise is interesting, but slightly unexplained. The characters personalities are there but I feel that they need to be built up a little better. Maybe something to make them feel more real? Maybe give them more of a motive individually? I don't know. Just, occasionally they feel a little shallow. The worldbuilding is still going on (I think), or at least I hope so. The MC's background, story, and surroundings are rather unexplained. Lastly, some sentences in the first few chapters are very confusing, mostly word choice and sometimes the sentence structure. I don't known if it is because english is the first language, or the chapter isn't read through at least once after they'e written.

Sorry, if I couldn't highlight the positive things more becuase I REALLY like the story so far, I just don't really know how to say it. Just trying my best to give some constructive criticism.