Awesome story, awesome horror, awesome concept, poor execution.

It seemed like you spent a little more time on the guy in the silent room and the bad guys than the girl in a room. The one girl with the insect wasn't bad but the other girls backside was really rough. I don't know how long it took you to do this project but it seemed, not like you cut it short or too abruptly, it seems as if you guys might have started late on it causing you to have to dumb down the art. As for the room, less is best. A white room with nothing in it couldn't get much creepier by adding detail but the characters, especially the first girl, was really poorly done. From her hands to her legs to her back to her facial expressions, it seemed as though you didn't poor any of your obvious talent into it.

I'd like to see just as much effort on the art as you put into the plot and fright factor.

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