Hello!

So, I was reading your comic story for a long time and it's awesome in so many ways. You have such fantastic unique style of drawing, and you're storytelling is composed very well.

I really enjoy reading this, thank you so much for your work!

But I also have something less pleasant to say. A bit of critique. It's mostly about graphics and style...

You know, I got an impression you put more efforts in yours early pages. Forgive me, if I am wrong. But if you, for example, will open first pages of your first part of the story, where is a visible diffrence between before and now. it's seems where was much more details in early pages, which made them look much more cool, much more applauding. I'm not a native English speaker, as you probably figured out from my clumsy speech already, so it's hard for me to find words and explain correctly. But early pages also contained pencil shading. Hope I call it right and you understand what I mean. Well, shading made those pictures, imho, more stylish. I understand, it must consume more time, but the result! In sum with your unique style it gave an astoneshment, amazing effect. You also was gaving faces more details. I don't know what others think on this matter, but my opinion is what shading was VERY important. It made everything look better.

The details are also was good. The table, the pencils, notebook with skecthes - all of it was looking great. Imho, if you'll put more effort in details, you would only win.

The shading start fading away as a part of your style about page 12 of the first night comic. After that, everything is a bit different. It's still cool, and story is great, but if talking about style and graphics, my favorite is the early pages.

I hope I'm not offending you in any way, I only wish you good and want to point out something what in my opinion may help you improve your drawings. Just give it a consideration, please.

And forgive me my grammatics.) If something isn't clear(it may be, cause I'm not good with English) let me know, I'll try to find another words.