Hello! I am from ProjectComment, and I hope you appreciate my critique on your work!



First off, I want to first appreciate the simplicity of this artwork.

It is simple, and it is not overly detailed (which can be a good thing~!) and so you can focus on the main point.



I really want to emphasize how you managed to pull off a stiff position. Normally, stiff-looking works of art are not the best. Anatomy can be off, or the position looks or feels weird. Here, it feels like the stiffness is needed. It feels right.

It also really emphasizes your line of action-starting from the smoke from the cigarette to the long cord coming from the person.



The only thing that bothers me is I cannot correctly pinpoint a lightsource and your shading is inconstant.

Examples; on the person, the lightsource appears to be coming from the upper right, due to the shadow placements on the hood. However, on the sleeve and pants, it appears the lightsource is coming from upperleft corner. On the ladder and upper cord, it appears the lightsource is coming directly from the left, due to the shadow placements.



Overall, I really do love this piece. It is simple, and pleasing to look at.

Keep up the amazing work~!