Scottie said: ↑ our manual will contain merely a very brief overview of world lore as an introduction to the book (three and a half pages, to be more precise), with the remaining 22 and a half interior pages being a simplified overview of the full Player Guide found on our online site. Click to expand...

Scottie said: ↑ If you could please, list the five errors you spotted so that we can specifically find and fix them if necessary... Click to expand...

first paragraph:

the semicolon should be a colon.

the comma after "here" should be a semicolon or period

should be "help you make sense of where you now find yourself"

third paragraph:



I would also recommend adding a qualifier before or after civilization, like "what little civilization" or "what civilization that"... But that's just me Lose the extraneous quotes after existed.I would also recommend adding a qualifier before or after civilization, like "what little civilization" or "what civilization that"... But that's just me

fifth paragraph:

- lose the errant quotes. Also, this sentence should probably start a new paragraph.