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This is my first critique, so there will be mistakes and... perhaps somewhat might be unfair to you, as i don't know how to draw smoothly, so i cannot really give an in-depth one.Okay, let's begin.I'm always amazed by your amazing art style and this one is not an exception. In fact, i've always wanted to see new arts from you ever since i watched you here.I love the way how the plot goes, you did an amazing job in giving an "answer" to the fact that fluttershy can move her tail in the show. I can say, it's very creative. That's my first impression after reading the comic.The details on ponies as well as the in-depth background were no doubt: Superb, the shading, the background colors blend in together perfectly. However, the lines in the first 3 panels somewhat made me thing that this is quite-like a colored sketch, and in my opinion, this is quite dull, unlike the last 4 panels, they were drawn perfectly. So i think you might wanna look into that, but it isn't a major problem though. (Also, i guess that the outline of the mane that visible through the eyes are from JP manga, i've read a few of them so i can see the similarity, well, i think that's quite a creative move, looks pretty neat).In general, this comic is quite fun to read with a funny plot and appealing in-depth details. And i'm quite looking forward to see more of what's inside your creative mind!