not bad this could have more or less been an interactive movie though

some things i took issue with

if this is POV(guys point a view) then some variance in skin color would have been nice or maybe even more than 2 guys. i get its a story but generic white guy#8billion and 1 gets dull

we already got the Main character

an Orc guy would have been awesome or even Black guy, something different than the general go too

but thats more a nicpick than anything

Next, the dialogue was a tad bit too on the nose especially for crow who is in fact new to that sort of thing id have expected a "you arent like all the other whores here where are you from?" as im pretty sure there arent many tiny orc women in there. maybe she is much more shy about actually losing her clothing

it'd just help for world building

i know she was encouraged but it's different when you are on the spot

id have liked to see a bit more of that

but other than that great job

3 stars only because it's just a piece of the game

not gonna comment on the art as it excellent already