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I would love this scene to happen. I think it would be like this. Very funny and clever.Vision: Again, really beautiful. How you did the reflections on the glass is really well done. Love how you did the details on Gideon's hair. I would love to see how Gideon turn from a bully to one who is quite polite with others. The lighting is also beautiful and brimming with beauty.Originality: This scene would sing itself to glory with the dialogue. It writes itself. This is a well distinctive and makes Nick as if he is a kid at heart. Not childish and immature but has a wondering smiling glee like a kid. I want this scene to be made in a sequel or a TV animated episode and be this well made.Technique: The expressions are very well done; they look like as if they are having a nice relaxing time. Very gracefully stylised and wonderfully simple in a great way. Also how you did the simple details on the desserts are very sublime in a simplistic way.Impact: Although I could see this as a good scene, the impact looks very promising. How these characters would interact could make for a story that could be emotional; funny; charming and full of glee. I think this art piece represents the potential it has.Go see this movie. I love it that much. Disney needs to make this scene happen any way.