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this comic.... where do I start?the style of your art is amazing! its still ponies, but you've edited them in a way that makes them... special. after reviewing your comics up to this point, I see that you have edited your style a bit.the story, in one word? unique. never had I thought of something this... complex. the plot line is envisioning, and the connection between Lyra and the doctor is a sensible one, yet surprising. I would have never have thought of their HUMAN connection, but I love it!the rain seemed a bit... overdone? in some places it was perfect (such as close-ups), but others it appeared to be a bit rushed. otherwise, this is a perfect story with a developing idea and amazing art work. thank you for creating this.