Looks like page 1 is done with all fine-line marker, and page 2 is done with a lot more brush. So it seems inconsistent for that reason. The fine-line marker gives a somewhat unreliable line, because of these fuzzy bulges in the extremities and fading in the longer strokes and lines. The panel borders are inconsistent and often transgressed, but I guess that's okay because you can fix it digitally, or with white paint. In page 2 panel 2, they look like stick figures, and page 2 panel 4, the shadow on the neck falls short of the jaw line, and mohawk suddenly grew sideburns, page 3 panel 3, perspective slightly off, page 3 panel 4, the hands need his body behind them, and page 4 panel 3, the nose looks misshapen, and those are signs you aren't giving it 100 percent effort. Tons of potential here, though you need a better pen and maybe better paper.



I like your drawings and characters. Good grasp of anatomy, and posing. Maybe need to mix it up with more body shapes and heights.



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