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Well First of all might I say that this comic series overall is absolutely wonderful so far, I can't wait for next chapter!The Visuals were pleasing to me, the way you can hold such expression in ponys' eyes makes emotion easy to see in close up shots.The Originality was a decent amount, there are many Doctor Whooves comics out there, but I think this one has an interesting story, as of this spechific moment there is almost ALWAYS a moment when the enemy captures something important (At least in important events)I absolutely love your technique its a very neat and beautiful way to show feelings, and the way you use effects/backgrounds to make the current position known i think is wonderful.Overall I think this is great, and I hope you continue it, and i'm no pro artist but I think this is wonderful.-Me, EmeraldSunPony