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Well, something worth critiquing in the stack today. Most days it's people that probably shouldn't be asking for critiques because they need to let their art improve more. Well. Here we goFirst off I love the styling of everything. Someone in the comments sections said this resembled something of a Tim Burton-esque type work. I'd say he's spot on, it resembles that dark in nature look, but not exactly TOO creepy in nature in a sense. It works very well. I enjoy the style you drew the ponies in. It looks like a rough sketch or a conceptual art piece of what is soon to be a greater work. And the way that the art is stylized to be dark, it compliments the fact that only harsh black lines are used.In terms of cons I feel that while it looks like this work is supposed to be rough, it feel... A little too rough, there's no real work on the trees, there's a lack of cross hatching to create shading in the manes, and frankly anywhere else.(their manes just look overall messy). (this just bugs me personally) Twilights happy look kind of works in very deep contrast to everyone else in the pic she almost seems happy to be there. Lack of ground material makes the gradient in the grey scale pop out, I wish the moon had stronger light qualities, (just my own thought, but what isn't?) And I feel like the ursa minor and hydra don't have enough attention, I think they look really cool, but they don't stand out, and while I can understand why they're not It just feels that even though they shouldn't get as much attention as the mane six, their not even getting the attention that the parasprites of other foremost creatures are getting.Well, I hope at least a part of this made sense. It may look like I don't enjoy the work, but honestly I really do appreciate it. It's original, and it brings something new to the table. I always like pieces like that. You're a great artist, keep on drawing and being awesome. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>