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Ah--first off, let's not concern ourselves with the rating now--I never feel that dA's star system is very in-depth when it comes to critiques because there's honestly more than four categories people should look at.I wanted to start out by first saying how lovely this overall picture is, because the image itself is quite ethereal and gives off a pleasant feeling whenever I look at it.You definitely did an amazing job with the meaning behind the picture--there's no question to be had there.One thing I definitely noticed was the attention to detail you've done on it--every fabric mark, the way you did the shading on their bodies, heck--even the subtle specks of light in the background--all of it comes together nicely!You've also managed to give such space and depth to their forms as well--that can mainly be seen from the flower on Asriel's head and how its shadow falls across his fur (it can also been seen with how Asriel's arm falls across Asgore's shoulder, and where Asgore's hair falls over his cheek).When it comes to anything that I think would need adjusting to make it stronger--the only think I'd nit-pick at is how concentrated the details are in the center but not on Asgore's sleeve, arm, and horns. I feel if those had a bit darker shades on them and were slightly sharper--they would fit with the look you had set for the image overall.But if it wasn't obvious--I freaking love this piece and can't wait to see more!