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Few small things. The only technical problems are in Pinkie's jaw (a bit square) and the cupboard (looks fuzzy, like I need new glasses). In terms of actually getting it done, this is a very well-put-together piece.However, the presentation is a bit lacking. If you were to apply this style of artwork to a different story, this piece would be much improved. The concept is good, but delivery is the flaw.A few things that could help: ask yourself exactly why you are creating the piece. It is meant to be funny, serious, sad, happy, etc. Take the answer to that question and draw rough sketches to make sure this goal is achieved. Slight over exaggeration can help. Afterwards, take the sketches and make it pretty.You have potential. Please take my critique positively; I'm not trying to be mean. Try to use it to improve on what you already have.Vision: 3.5Originality: 4Technique: 4.5Impact: 2.5Overall: 14.5 / 20