More evidence of how far you've come with your drawings =3 Definetly shows an improvement over the original which while good doesn't compare to this one. Solid work ^_^.

To both Gain and Xerxes are either of you familiar with Queens blade, theres a character in it that kind of reminds me (visually speaking anyway) of Naga.

Remind me..does this make my commission the next one? Just asking.