I'm very mixed on this picture



I'll give some quick thoughts;



Things I see going well in this picture:

The coloring and shading are spot on with the style I see, it's very vibrant and I love it.

The concept is cute and I love the idea

Several body parts like the hair and the abdomen

The seductive eyes are amazing





The things I see could use work in this picture:

The cloths look painted on, it's a very common issue I see in pictures like this. And that leads me to my next issue

I'm not sure if the cape is attached to her bottom or her neck. If it's her neck, see my last issue, if it's her bottom....

Her neck looks attached to her shoulder

The Crescent Rose's blade has a gap where it is bulging in the middle

The Crescent Rose makes her arm look broken, in the sense it doesn't look like she's holding it, it looks like she is trying to scratch her back in an awkward position.

Her shoulders look short in perpetration to the her.

Her hips are unnaturally disproportionate to the rest of her body

I can't tell how her body is positioned well by the line art

And because of that, her left hip looks bulbous compared to her right

(Granted, perspective might just be fucking with me)

The Crescent Rose doesn't look like it's attached to her at all or like she is holding it. (I would say, maybe next time make the lines similar so they can seem like they are in the same plane. Also, if it was laying on her right shoulder, I can see it being there, but then her left shoulder should doing something else. At that point, it would DEFINITELY be broken.)



Sorry for the long list. I do like the picture, but me and my friend were looking at it and started going...



Nothing on you at that end, we're just that weird.