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Okay, this took me a bit to find what I wanted to say, but I finally figured out how to put it in words. I don't intend to offend you with my words, so please keep that in mind as you read what I have to say!I'll start off with what I think needs improved on, and then end on a positive note with what I like.First, the neck looks too long because it's so thick. If you'd curve the neck slightly inward, it would make the proportions on the neck and the head look much better.The head looks off because of it, and the face looks like it's pushed too far in front because of it. I would also say her nostril is a tiny bit too big as well.The next thing I'm going to say will be a bit more difficult to describe, so please bear with me. The line above the eye to represent a concerned, or slightly sorrowful expression with the brow is too long in the back at the eyelashes, and the points that are in between the eyes, the curved point in it, doesn't stick out enough into the middle of the face.It's curve is also too gentle, it needs to be more angled. Otherwise is looks like more eyelashes, as well as takes away from the expression a bit.I also believe that the pupils should be a little bit darker. It will make the light blue pop more, the eyes generally pop more, and it'll balance out the colors in the picture more. I also think the little thought bubble's background, the inside, should be a lighter blue so it will stand out a bit more.Another thing is I think that her ears should be slightly more pointed, maybe a tiny bit thinner, and making her left (Our right) ear just a tiny bit thicker, hiding a bit more behind her bandana.Actually, you should also push the ear back a bit as well as it's too far in front of her head.. but only very slightly. Just enough to move away from the very edge of her bandana.You should also make a little bit of hair sticking out a bit from underneath her bandana, on her forehead a bit. Onto the bandana itself, the back of it where the line comes from the bottom of the front to going around to the back, that line is too long and makes it look like it's just hanging there. Make the line shorter, so that it looks more like it really is wrapped around her head.Another thing is that, the neckpiece, at the side of it, is too thick. It needs to be a tiny amount slimmer at the side. You should also make the middle of it curve down a bit more in the middle. Only at the top, though. You should also make the white neckpiece underneath it show just a bit more, make it thicker. Another thing I would say is, make your eyelashes a tad thinner as well.Lastly, You put too many details in her in some places, with almost none in other places on her. Balance is key. So to fix this, make a few less details on her bandana, and a a few less on her hair, that way while it still has texture, her body doesn't seem as simplistic and bare in comparison.One thing I would add is, the line at the top of her skirt, where it meets her coat, that little green line needs to be a little thicker. Also, I wouldn't make her elbows so rounded. Try to make them a bit more pointed. Not too much, though. I also believe her bracelet and necklace are a little too light in color.Onto what I like!This piece is absolutely beautiful. I love the detail you did with the floor and the table! The walls are well-done, too. The lighting and the shading is beautiful, and I love the small specks of light here and there, especially in the crystal table!The colors are really well done, minus a few nitpicks here and there, and the detail in the chair is nice too. Fluttershy's cutie mark was really well-done. Wonderful work!