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Okay, new critique, yay.So... I love queen Chrysalis, and I enjoy every Chrissie art (if it don't laugh about her).Cause of it, it'll be hard to fairly evaluate, however, I'll try to. Oh, I'm talking too much. Let's start with it:Queen: Okay, she's an MLP character, so I can't say much about her anatomy- it will be unnatural EVERYTIME (alright, not everytime, it can be realistic if you draw MLP in real style, but not many people do it). Alright, let's look what did you draw... Holes, holes, holes, Yay! It's Chrysalis, anyway. But you drawed 3D holes! Just after the "canterlot wedding" most of non-vectors Chryssies had 3D holes, but now... most of good artists drawed her already and there are almost boring, 2-D holes... So it's point for you! What's upper on our queen? Carapace. It's a weak point of this drawing. It looks like a saddle here! Underbelly part of it looks like a shawl! Sorry, you lost this point. What now? Oh, yes, wings. Well, they aren't bad! Hair outline behind them look nice... Half of point. I said about hair... She have soooo long mane!I love manes longer than normal/original! Moreover, its drawed beautiful, and naturaly looks. Good shading and dynamical-drawed tail... two points to technique. Now...eyes. Glowing eyelid, yay. Lightspot is good placed, it's a plus. Too many lights on iris- I normally don't like it, but it's stylized ( I guess) for all these crystals, so it's okay. But eyes have bad colour- I don't support stylizing-colourchanging. However,eyes are very good drawed, plus 1 point. Crown is too narrow(really very,very narrow), but it's just a little detail. Even, my friend said that is not crown but feelers-antenae, so i can regard it as feelers-antenae. Horn is... good. Nothing very special, nothing very bad. I just think that no chitinar articulations on nech and horn is a lack. Moreover, I love her muzzle on this picture! Overall, Queen is wonderful drawed, I wish that i'll can draw like you in future!Background: Crystals, yay. OK, wonderful drawed crystals, crystals and crystals... Original background for Chryssie, typical drawed on background of cave and green slime...gross slime, bleh. I like these glowing crystals (too much of this word in this critique) on down. I can't draw crys... i mean, these quartzes (yay!). What more about background? Little twinkling, green somethings flying everywhere! Twinkling somethings are cool, background shading is cool. Wait... there are CRYSTALS 'cause its CHRYSALIS? It's sounds similiar!Okay, I finished (yaaaaay!). Let's look on stars ---->