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The overall appearance of the painting is good. I especially like the sensitive color harmony with the pink and red. You have harmonized them well. The overall value mass balance looks good also. Two of the most important factors for a successful painting!I am a little concerned about the brightness of the mane. If it was a tad bit brighter, without compromising the perspective, it would work better. If you lit it up (slightly) the viewer's eye would be better able to attach to the head itself. The teeth is of course a very well done part.Another consideration is the value of some of the skin colour. With the lighting of the scene, some of the skin parts could be darker. Not a lot, just slightly.Final observation, the detail you have put into the eyes themselves is also a magnificent touch to the art.I hope these observations prove useful. Nothing needs complete reworking, just a little gentle tweaking. Your engagement to the subject is evident, and overall handling of the colour is very strong. Wishing you continued painting success!