Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Ok, first critique ever so stay warned. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Wink)"/>What can I say? It's amazing; it really is. I gave you a full 5 on "vision", since anyone reading this can tell you put a *really* great effort on the strip: the details, the hints, the incredibly various backgrounds and the overall structure. And everything came out perfectly, marking what is IMO your best comic strip till now; the character design and the BG feels much show-like, which I can appreciate; also, I found the shading very well done, making the entire comic more dynamic. So, that's a 5 on "technique" as well."Originality", I gave you 4.5; I'd never read a Luna comic involving the baby Cakes, so that came as a pleasant surprise (I just didn't give you a round 5 due to the overused gamer Luna thing - but this is not bad in any way, since I love gamer Luna)."Impact" is going to be 4.5: despite the panel structure being quite linear and simple (which is why I didn't give you 5), you manage to keep the reader engaged with time/location/scene changes and the lil' details you add here and there (I'm not even sure this is what "impact" is supposed to mean, but I interpret it this way).In summary, congrats on this one; every hour you spent on this, was worth it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Wink)"/>