I like this drawing! I know it's old and you've improved since this but I wanted to give a small bit of advice if that's okay.

You don't have to take this advice if you don't want to. There's a lot that I like about this drawing but what I always end up focusing on is Fluttershy's hairline.

Because her head is the center focus, it's hard for me not to pay attention to this part of the drawing and when I look at it, I notice that her mane is a little misplaced.

Since her head is tilted towards the viewer, the mane's hairline should be visible. There's kind of an invisible line between the eyes and in the center of the face that

is the midway point of both sides of her head. Her mane would probably be on that line but with the perspective given, it looks almost as if her hair comes out of her head at an angle.



I know this is an old art piece and I don't expect you to read this at all. This is still very good and I just wanted to help!