I like what you did with this, putting the cliffside altar in the foreground of Beacon. It's also nice how you emphasized the school grounds even in a greyscale scene by using that darker grey.



I'm not a visual artist, so take this with that very large grain of salt. The canon scenes that fade to black, white, and R/W/B/Y all use sharp contrasts. To that end, I think the red haze effect on the left side of the piece detracts from the contrast of Ruby's silhouette on the background (it especially affects the petals). The image might look sharper if you lost that, but, again, don't mind me necessarily.