Hey! I'm here from the forums since I already closed the thread you posted your art into and can't reply you back there anymore.Good job on this drawing, it looks really pretty! The simple background fits well with this style. I also like the perspective you drew the girl in. It makes the piece more interesting. The clothing is drawn just right and I like the little small flower on the ground. Even if it's just a tiny thing on the background it fills the space and balances the drawing. I'd only say to draw the cloud in a way that the lines are all connected. You have no open lines on the character, so just adding that little stroke on the cloud to connect the lines would make it match the drawing more. Also the shoes seem to look a bit flat because how you drew the ankle parts of them. The sharp corner gives it a look like it was made of paper and it was just folded in half, making them look flat. Making that part round would have prevented this. I really like this style of drawing and I hope you continue drawing!