The way you drew the emotion on the last panels was spot on, it really looked real, painful and sad, you nearly could feel the emotions. Its also nice to see this site from Scootaloo, having the ability to fly stolen away from you since birth, and that you are different than all others. Man this is the reason why I found her character so interesting, sometimes you really need a lot of sadness and drama to really touch the viewer/reader. You did a great job on transfering those emotions over the story and the expressions. You earned yourself a loyal follower today ^^ Keep up your good work!