Fetish tags: Breast Expansion(Fast), Ass Expansion, Clothes burst, Hair growth



It's always a good idea to put the fetish tags somewhere that way people who don't like what you're writing about don't read it and complain.





It was pretty good, butt I couldn't really tell how big she was getting since you did no size comparisons. I used to think that was a good thing and the reader would "fill in the details" but what I've noticed is the author does have some idea how big the person is getting and sometimes they'll throw an event or something in there that would only happen at certain sizes and when I as a reader have a different idea of what size they are compared to the author it leads to confusion. Like when you said she had to use two hands to lift one breast that is MUCH larger than the size I had in my head and was thrown out of the story for a bit.