Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Children can be so cruel. Now for critique... Babs walking through a puddle in the darkness, good vision and originality, although I do need to ask, where is the location if any? Manehattan? Ponyville? Some clarification would be nice. The technique is... Sketchy. You have good colouring and reflection, but you may want to work on the shading and lighting. The whole aspect of her character is being the misunderstood bully, which does wonders for this piece in means of emotion, it makes you feel and relate to the character that is, as you show, fighting her own battle, something I can think many of us relate to. Overall, great piece <img class="avatar" src=" a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/e/d… " alt=" " title="derpylaplz" />