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I like the contrast in colors in this piece, as well as the use of cooler toned shades to convey a sense of melancholy/sadness. My mind first went towards Ruby when I saw the piece of fabric in Jaune's hands, but after further investigation, I was able to conclude that it is actually a piece of Pyrra's ensemble. Maybe could have included her crown to make it stand out more that he is mourning Pyrra's passing. There is a lot of empty space in the right side of the painting, so maybe you could have compressed that side in a little more to make sure that everything was nicely balanced, plus adding just a tiny bit more detail to the mountains in the distance. Not a whole lot more though. Overall, I love RWBY and this is an amazing concept for the relationship that was between Jaune and Pyrra.