Re: FOR THE BOOK: Manufacturing TPs for Tuesday in NH

Hi all - Updated here with approved language from the Trump Medium post that's going out right now, and to include a reference to her W.H. Bagshaw tour in Nashua at HRC's request (thanks, Mike Ollen!). These should be good to go barring any last-minute flags. Thank you! Lauren On Mon, Dec 7, 2015 at 9:33 PM, Lauren Peterson < lpeterson@hillaryclinton.com> wrote: > Updated and attached here for the book. I'll look for additional edits > overnight. > > Thank you! > > Lauren > > On Mon, Dec 7, 2015 at 8:48 PM, Brian Fallon <bfallon@hillaryclinton.com> > wrote: > >> Sorry to send this after David has already looked at this, but I made >> edits in the attached to address the following concerns: >> >> 1. To the extent she is at all likely to internalize it and remember it, >> we would like her to name the tax credit for communities with factory >> closures as the "Manufacturing Renaissance Tax Credit". It's how we branded >> it in the stories popping overnight, and it's the best toehold we have to >> try to make some aspect of this set of manufacturing principles "stick." >> >> 2. We would like to reserve the in-depth discussion of Pfizer and the >> problem of inversions until Wednesday in Iowa. We have primed the press to >> expect that Tuesday is "manufacturing day" and Wednesday is "Pfizer day." >> Accordingly, I proposed a shift in LP's language so as to still refer >> generally to the need to close tax loopholes, but to do so in a >> foreshadowing type of way, saying the details are coming "tomorrow." >> >> On Mon, Dec 7, 2015 at 8:13 PM, David Kamin <davidckamin@gmail.com> >> wrote: >> >>> Small edit in the attached. Changed this line: “First, it’s time we >>> started cracking down on powerful corporations that shift earnings and jobs >>> overseas…” to “First, it’s time we started cracking down on powerful >>> corporations that shift earnings made here to tax havens overseas, and >>> rewarding companies that bring jobs back to America.” >>> >>> We won’t be able to back up a jobs claim (cracking down on corporations >>> that move jobs overseas) when it comes to inversions because they really >>> just do this on paper! We’ll be able to do that when we go hard on >>> territorial taxation but that’s for another day. And thought we could >>> emphasize that the profits are made here and then moved overseas to tax >>> havens. >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> On Dec 7, 2015, at 7:26 PM, Emily Aden <eaden@hillaryclinton.com> wrote: >>> >>> good for research >>> >>> On Mon, Dec 7, 2015 at 7:13 PM, Lauren Peterson < >>> lpeterson@hillaryclinton.com> wrote: >>> >>>> Hi all - >>>> >>>> Sending around these talking points for tomorrow, which now include a >>>> line about Trump's comments (borrowing heavily from the Saban forum), >>>> pasted below. >>>> >>>> These reflect edits from the Mikes (thanks, Mikes!) and speechwriters. >>>> >>>> Let me know how these look. With apologies for the short turnaround, >>>> please send any edits by 8:30 p.m. >>>> >>>> Thank you! >>>> >>>> LP >>>> >>>> ### >>>> >>>> · It’s no secret that the Republican frontrunner in this election >>>> has made a name for himself by trafficking in prejudice and paranoia. But >>>> Donald Trump’s divisive, disturbing suggestion that we stop all Muslims >>>> from entering the United States is a new low. Declaring war on Islam or >>>> demonizing the Muslim American community is not only counter to our values; >>>> it plays right into the hands of terrorists. Muslim Americans are our >>>> neighbors, our co-workers, our loved ones, and our friends. Many are >>>> working every day all over our country to prevent radicalization. We >>>> should be supporting them, not scapegoating them. Radical jihadists, like >>>> so many adversaries in our history, underestimate the strength of our >>>> national character. America will not cower or cave, and we will not turn >>>> on each other or turn on our principles. >>>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >> >