the lighting in this is really pretty! I just feel like the poses could look more natural. the fact that Max's other arm isn't visible kind of bothers me. In other words, your colors are spot on, and your lines are their own are good. Just focus on your linework. In my advise, trace over pictures of real people to get proportions memorized. Don't trace artwork and publish it- that's not what i'm saying. Just trace over stuff in a personal setting in conjunction with looking at reference pictures.still though, i really like the piece. It looks really great, and makes me wanna draw life is strange art again.