Looks good. I like when I look at the gushing water I see a bit of green in there. I think this is smart since material like water absorbs and reflect light from its surroundings.



Your depiction of grass in the foreground is excellent, but in the background your execution looks careless. I know our eyes see less detail the farther an object is but the way you depicted the grass in the background seems inaccurate even if it is that faraway. Also look at your brushwork. In the foreground your grass is still and nonmoving. In the background however your brushwork is very expressionistic suggesting a windy environment. As a viewer it makes me question whether it is a windy day or not.



Hope my critique helps. It's awesome that this came from your imagination. : )