You definitely captured the Rarity from the Nightmare Moon timeline: she may not be the Rarity we know and love, but she's still Rarity. Organized, tidy, perfectionist, and dedicated to her duties.

You even captured the parts that make her less like Rarity: cold, brusque, and out of touch with her ambitions.



We know her destiny is to be a fashion designer and the Element of Generosity. But your art just goes to show that destiny is relative (when it comes to time travel). And in Nightmare Moon's timeline, Rarity would've been destined to be a butler, palace curator and secretary rolled into one.