Well, it's got some interesting features to it, that's for sure. The pasteled colors (if not so much the black outlines) work well, Apple Bloom's expression is disturbingly implicit, Spike's design is great (I may just have to rip it of borrow from it one day), and both of their poses are great and expression their emotions perfectly.



BUT...



The one the that really, and I mean really compels me to pause with concern is that despite both of them are clearly older now, Apple Bloom's flanks still remain bereft of a cutie mark; thus given serious implication that, even though AB looks like a young mare (confirmed by the title) and Spike looks to be in his teen years, both are still way too young to indulge in cordial copulation.



But that's my perceptiveness for you.