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alright, let's get startedthe "lock" on their horns is a smart idea, noone wants a magic-user roam freely in a prisonderpy as guard, oh well... we all know what she will say when they all escape because of a "mistake" e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title="(Wink)"/>the look on rarity's face, I can almost see her jumping onto a couch and crythe overall idea not bad, but here are some things you might change:the way the dress of vinyl looks like: the left leg of her is kinda "blown up", and on the right one I am missing the border between leg and bodythe barbwire could be a bit more periodicmaybe try to make both background and characters with the same artstyle, that would be more "pleasing" for the eyebut this is all just nitpicking, overall its a nice work. and as I am a beginner myself, I'm not sure if I'm even qualified to write a critique, but you requested one, and I rarely see critiques on artwork of people who don't have thousands of watchers. also, friendship is magic, sharing is caring, I hope you are not disappointed with this critique