Oh... joy.



00:06:479 (4,5) - I'm sorry, but this is excessive. In less than 2/10ths of a second, you make the player go almost entirely across the screen, with AR10 and OD10. No, this is not okay.

00:23:895 (3,4) - I get that this is 178bpm with a relatively low SV, but that still doesn't mean you should you 10+ DS. I can't even remember seeing that outside of VERY slow songs or TAG maps. This is neither, and considering the sound mapped, it makes no sense when compared to the next combo.

00:56:366 (5,6) - So, you made a jump with less than a 1/10th of a second gap that large because...?

00:57:714 (3,1) - This is a jump all the way across the screen with a comfy 84ms to react with. There's no possible musical justification for this.

00:58:220 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is overmapping. WAY overmapping. There is NOTHING warranting this, considering how tame the riffs here are.

01:00:411 (1,2,3,4) - This is many things: Overmapped, ugly, and needless. I'm listening to the same instruments as you, and nothing is there that warrants you doing this with such distance.

01:01:422 (1,2) - Okay, that part of the song is barely of any note whatsoever. Stop putting in these jumps just because you feel like it.

01:17:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is just a mess. There's a big difference making compact streams and basically testing the limits of the stack leniency.

01:23:669 (1,2,3) - This looks absolutely terrible. Clean it up a bit.

01:36:815 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - These are very clearly overmapped. Disgustingly so.

01:39:512 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same deal.

01:42:208 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Just because a computer can flawlessly do it does not mean you should slap it everywhere.

01:46:253 (5,6,1) - I am convinced you did this solely to bump up SR. There is never any reason to do crap like this. Nothing musically, especially.

01:59:399 (1,2) - Same deal.

01:59:905 (1,2) - Same deal.

02:00:411 (1,2) - Same deal.

02:12:208 (3,4,5) - This part is so tame, and yet you act like you're mapping speedcore. Stop doing ridiculous things just to raise SR!

02:14:230 (3,4,5) - Same deal.

02:14:904 (1,2,1,2) - Again, stop taking tame parts and acting like they can justify obscene jumps.

02:15:410 (2,1) - This is the simplest chord, and you put a jump clear across the screen for no reason other than the fact that you could.

02:16:253 (3,4,5) - Stop with EVERYTHING like this.

02:23:668 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Not only are none of these called for, but the whole thing looks like a mess.

02:25:691 (1,2,1,2) - Same deal.

02:26:365 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - You can at least try and make these presentable. This is REALLY bad.

02:30:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Stop doing this. Make actual patterns instead of deliberate raises of SR.

02:39:174 (1,2,1,2) - Same deal.

02:41:028 (2,3,4,5) - This is an awful design. Fix it.

02:55:017 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - You did this for SR. I heard the music. You did this just to increase the SR.

03:22:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Nothing here has any redeeming value. Redo it all.

03:26:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1) - All you did here was put down notes on totally random areas.

03:28:753 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Gut this. I'm not joking. This is the absolute worst pattern you have EVER done. This is the epitome of overmapping, and you know it!

03:44:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - The note progression is not that overly dramatic.

03:52:522 (1,2) - This jump is just atrocious. You're rolling through streams, and then you decide a jump with nearly a DS of 12 is needed. Revolting.

04:00:022 (2,1) - Congrats, you made a jump with 24.16 DS just because you could. Most troll maps I have don't come close to that.

05:07:720 (2,1,2) - This is vile. Stop doing these things.

05:15:810 (2,1,2) - You did the same thing here. What is wrong with you?