Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

The showiness of her skin is rather looking appealing. The way of the blur on her clothes does look necessary. The neck that connects to the rest of her shoulder looks rather a bit odd. Maybe rotate it the right wear the that small dark area is towards not right on to her chin would make it look just right. The blue and the ribbon makes the composition look rather pleasing than disturbing. The boob can be worked on a little more. Since the focus is more on her face it looks ok i guess depending how you look at the art piece.