I finally let myself finish reading this. Excellently written! Even though it could have used an edit by (an editor) someone other than you MrGreyMan, as there were several places of just bad English.The greatest psychological effect I noticed was the way Lisa is presented. As in such a manner that you continue to root for her till the very end, despite how powerful she gets or what terrible things she does.I just could not switch to Sarah, as no matter how much it was stated that she cares, I can still not see it as genuine. It is even true what Lisa says, that Sarah is very very arrogant!It simply follows that old proverb "The road to Hell is paved with good intentions"...