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I first want to say that what I admire most is your incorporation of Asian themes into the clothing. I know as your fan that you tend to do that in many of your artwork and original characters and designs, but to be able to put in on Princess Luna and Celestia and make it look very MLP shows a good aesthetic sense and being that much more creative with your fanart than others out there. Also, the way you skillfully displayed the cutie marks look very beautiful and natural. Celestia's huge bold golden sun reflects the burdens of her duties, being ruler of Equestria. In contrast, Luna's mark is smaller, more subtle, but equally regal like night itself. The fact that the size of the moon is much smaller than the sun is a good reflection of their roles in the show.I like how Luna's outfit is much lighter and less ornate than Celestia's, who is weighted down with robes and jewels (again, in reflection of her great responsibilities). The creative take on the necklace is nice too, and pleasantly recognizable yet new. Same with the crowns, although understandably less garnished, but still has a solid, realistic look with the coloring you did. The personalities of both characters is evident in your design, and visually they contrast each other, but in doing so make the other look elegant in her own way. PROPS ON THE HAIR. The beautiful billowing hair of Luna looks much different from Celestia's gently illuminating mane, making Luna playful yet mature and her sister serene and bright. The hair is one of many ways you make this duo seem like sisters yet still they are distinct beings.Now I've been showering you with praise, but here are somethings I think could be improved. Luna's face looks very horsey, eyes true to MLP style and genre, but Celestia shows a slight departure, looking more fairy than pony. This facial structure change is slightly confusing---in a way shows a crack, an inconsistency. The hands, ankles, and wings show a lack of attention, not displaying any detail that was given to the clothes and jewelry(especially the jewelry). They were drawn in a way that can be easily ignored, but to make them more definite and refined will make them as a whole that much better and that much easier to enjoy. The wings don't really have feathers. What are the hands? Hooves or hands or both? The fingers seems so hastily drawn, and stubby looking in an hesitant way. And the ankles look like kankles. Just undefined, unsure, hooves or feet?Celestia's lower sleeve is playing optical illusions on me. Am I looking at the inside of the sleeve ore the side of the dress? It's confusing in an unsettling way. Please somehow try to clarify...I only noticed at the very last second that you drew tails. I first I thought it was hair but it didn't look quite right. It just looks...off. One way you can clarify the existence of the tail is to make it much longer and have it trail around their feet, or swirling on the floor...indeed, their tails do that in the show.Here are some suggestions that are just extra goody goodness, not entirely necessary. One, the white-grey backdrop is perfect for showing off character designs, but as a picture it would be great if they had a background setting, like strolling on the Milky Way? Another is that Celestia look a bit overly melancholy, which is out of character. However I don't know if you watch MLP so whatever.Holy moopoo I wrote so much...and about My Little Pony too!!! lol well hope it helps on other artwork as well...