This is not my oc, but is pretty, pretty bad…Saying that, prepare yourselves…

I was thinking of leaving this one alone, but the picture was just so damn hilarious.

Warning for pedophilia mentions under the cut.

Why is her name only one damn word? I don’t even understand. That’s not even a name. Even Sonia had a surname.

Name:FantineAquane

Gender:

DOB:13 October

Blood typeO+

Height:1.78 meter

Weight:55 kg

Ok, where is her gender? I know, she could be nonbinary, but 1. Right below this she is referred to as a ‘girl’, and 2. If she’s nonbinary then WRITE NONBINARY. Don’t leave the gender space blank.

Also, assuming she has a smallish frame, this girl is 5 pounds underweight. Was this on purpose?

FantineAquane is tall-slim girl.She has long straight-wavy purple-black acid type haired.She weared purple short jacket with a long sleeves,old white worned brassier and worn daisy dukes.She has big blue-bright cerulean eyes with long eyelashes.She has a faded scars inside her jacket.

This hits pretty much all of the mary sue design cliches. Who describes their hair as ‘acid’? And of course she has scars. Lemme get my angst shield.

FantineAquane is a kind,curious,sociable,clueless,funny,sensitive girl.But instead she’s the revengeable and up raged girl as someone who insulted her as a prostitude and insulting her friends.She kinda bitchy as she loves the lust and sexual things.But it doesn’t mean she’s an idiot and prideless person.She wants to be a hopeful person who saves the suvivors from death.She can knows someone secret only a sight.

What the magical shiny fuck did I just read.

I have no clue what the fuck this means. This is fucking gibberish.

Super High School Level Secret Super High School Level Hope (Her dream to protect the innocents) Super High School Level Tackler Super High School Level Fate

Why’s she gotta have four titles? Really? None of these are even fucking talents, for god’s sakes. Plus, your dream to protect the innocents is not a title. Peko’s title isn’t ‘SHSL bocchan’, so this can’t make you ‘SHSL hope’.

♢ Possible Execution :: Gangbang Or Reveal Her Secret Until Death(Insane Diary)

G…Gangbang?

EXECUTED BY GANGBANG?!?!?! GNNGFGNB?G?G?A??!?!

I AM SO DONE WITH THIS SHAT

FantineAquane was an orphan since she was a baby.In her surrounding,she become one of the insulted person in the homeless city.She been pedofilia with some citizens as her attraction makes all the men want to sex with her.All the fate has been changed as one city was ruined and rule by Super High School Level Despair.As she know the person who ruined all people lives,she attend the Hope Peak’s Private Academy as she wanna to prove that insulted person can help this city and ruined or realise all the Super High School Level Despair’s members.Without any letter that she needs to be that school student,she makes a bargain with Monokuma as she need to save the world with HOPE or die in DESPAIR.

What

Okay, first of all, this grammar is fucking atrocious. You cannot be ‘in pedophilia’ with people. Pedophilia is a fetish, not an action. Sex is a noun. I…I what???

It’s obvious the pedophilia dealie was thrown in to give this chick an ~ANGSTY BACKSTORY~, but why pedophilia? God, you could have done ANYTHING. ANYTHING LESS OFFENSIVE.

♢ Likes : Sex,electronic items,helping people,socials,solving clues,willing to friends someone,Yaoi

I think it’s easy to say that anytime a character has yaoi in their likes despite not even hinting at being a hardcore fujoshi, it’s already a bad character.

It makes the OC seem more like a self-insert than a character. If you’re at the age where you’re making these shit OCs, you’re probably also constantly squealing about “ZOMG HOT YAOIZ!!!!! XDXD”.

Nothing even made Fantine seem like a fujoshi. Also, if she was forced to work in prostitution, I don’t think she’d like sex enough to put it here.

♢ Dislikes :: Being insulted,Having sex without taking permission to her,Being advice about her clothes,up of rage,her secret has been revealled

I feel like there’s something wrong with basically putting noncon on her dislikes despite being a prostitute for tons of older men, but I’m not sure. Why is this OC so sex-oriented anyway?

♢ Friends :: Best friend:Nagito Komaeda,Aoi Asahina,Alter Ego,Leon Kuwata,Makoto Naegi,Sakura Oogami,

OH GOD, A SEVENTEENTH STUDENT

KILL IT BEFORE IT MULTIPLIES

Friends:Souda Kazuichi,Gundam Tanaka,Hagakure Yasuhiro,Hifumi Yamada

In all honesty, I doubt Tanaka(or Komaeda, for that matter) would want to waste his time with some sex-crazed lunatic.

Crush On:Chihiro Fujisaki,Alter Ego,

STAY AWAY FROM MY FUJI STAY FAR FAR AWAY

Enemies:Monokuma,Junko Enoshima

And of course, she has to be the “good guy” and hate Junko.

♢ Quotes :: “Don’t judge the book by it’s cover” “You have to kidding me?” “Although all of you loves to insulting me,it doesn’t mean I been insulted.But you all gimme a great support” “Don’t kill all these innocence suvivors except me!” “You’re got it wrong” “Monokuma,I challenge you for a fight between HOPE & DESPAIR” “Although they’re diffent in executions or death,their hope is to kill and put you all in the hell!” “Although I’m atheast,it doesn’t means I disrespect all others religions,especially Islam”

I sure hope her grammar isn’t normally this bad.

This OC is terrible, and I’m gonna give her a good Junji Ito-style kick in the ass goodbye.

My final verdict?

A Junji Ito style kick-in-the-ass goodbye out of ten.

I sure hope FantineAquane never gets an invite to Hope’s Peak.