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Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

One of my favorite aspects of this drawing is the lighting. You animated the shadows in the right areas of the body and hair, and it clearly identifies where the light source is coming from. I also, admire the amount of fluff you gave Starlight’s coat, especially towards the bottom of the hooves. It gives her body more of a sense of realism. But more than anything, I like the expression on Starlight’s face. You can tell that she feels remorseful for what she did, but t the same time, she’s thankful that her newly found friends have accepted her apology. My only criticism would be to make her tears more liquid-y. For now, they seem to shimmer too much. On top of that, maybe you could make the background a color that better reflects the idea of forgiveness, like pink. But other than that, this is a fine piece. It has good lighting, great detail, and some high emotion. Keep up the fantastic work, Sintakhra!