Re: DRAFT OPED: Baldwin Bill

From:john.podesta@gmail.com To: gruncom@aol.com CC: mrooney@hillaryclinton.com, jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com, re47@hillaryclinton.com, ggensler@hillaryclinton.com, speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com, mshapiro@hillaryclinton.com Date: 2015-08-29 19:54 Subject: Re: DRAFT OPED: Baldwin Bill

Deep sec interior Griles went to jail in abramoff scandal. On Saturday, August 29, 2015, 'Mandy Grunwald' via Speech Drafts < speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com> wrote: > Sorry to be late. > > Can we use any real examples of the problem (maybe Bush era)? > > Can we emphasize some of the environmental examples -- which might be more > credible than Wall Street? People from oil industry, coal etc? > > Is it possible to use more colloquial "foxes guarding the hen house" kind > of language ? > > thanks > > > > *Mandy Grunwald* > *Grunwald Communications* > *202 973-9400* > > > ----- > From: Megan Rooney <mrooney@hillaryclinton.com > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','mrooney@hillaryclinton.com');>> > To: Jake Sullivan <jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com');>> > Cc: Robby Mook <re47@hillaryclinton.com > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','re47@hillaryclinton.com');>>; Gary Gensler < > ggensler@hillaryclinton.com > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','ggensler@hillaryclinton.com');>>; Speech > Drafts <speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com');>>; > Michael Shapiro <mshapiro@hillaryclinton.com > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','mshapiro@hillaryclinton.com');>> > Sent: Sat, Aug 29, 2015 2:25 pm > Subject: Re: DRAFT OPED: Baldwin Bill > > To the whole group -- here's the revised oped. I'm sending to HRC at 4pm > so speak soon if you have additional changes! > > > On Sat, Aug 29, 2015 at 1:54 PM, Jake Sullivan < > jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com');>> wrote: > >> Yeah, I know that I sound like I am protecting the plutocrats, but there >> is a line here – if we go across it we’re just demagoguing. >> >> *From:* Robby Mook [mailto:re47@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','re47@hillaryclinton.com');>] >> *Sent:* Saturday, August 29, 2015 1:50 PM >> *To:* Jake Sullivan <jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com');>> >> *Cc:* Gary Gensler <ggensler@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','ggensler@hillaryclinton.com');>>; Megan >> Rooney <mrooney@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','mrooney@hillaryclinton.com');>>; Speech >> Drafts <speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com');>>; >> Michael Shapiro <mshapiro@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','mshapiro@hillaryclinton.com');>> >> >> *Subject:* Re: DRAFT OPED: Baldwin Bill >> >> My two cents: I don't think the average voter will be sensitive to >> alienating people who go in and out of government. My concern from a >> primary perspective is appearing to protect the status quo, which I think >> people will believe (with a bit of prompting from Warren and others) is >> corrupted. >> >> On Sat, Aug 29, 2015 at 1:41 PM, Jake Sullivan < >> jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com');>> wrote: >> >> I have a number of comments. Megan, I will send to you and Kristina my >> redlines separately. Overall, I am worried that the thrust of this oped >> is >> that if you work in the private sector and come into government, you are >> an >> inherently suspicious character. >> >> Anyway, see what you think of my modifications. >> >> ----- >> From: speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com');> >> [mailto:speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com');>] On >> Behalf Of Gary Gensler >> Sent: Saturday, August 29, 2015 1:38 PM >> To: Megan Rooney <mrooney@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','mrooney@hillaryclinton.com');>> >> Cc: Speech Drafts <speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com');>>; >> Michael Shapiro >> <mshapiro@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','mshapiro@hillaryclinton.com');>> >> Subject: Re: DRAFT OPED: Baldwin Bill >> >> Looks good. Two comments: >> >> 1) in next to last graph how about 'not worrying about former or future >> bosses at expense of American public' rather than 'not enriching >> themselves >> at ....'? I think better as it is more accurately captures what can >> happen >> and lowers tone. >> >> 2) maybe in reference to Elijah Cummings in 2nd half where it says 'work >> with Tammy' on passage of bill. >> >> Gary >> >> Sent from my iPhone >> >> > On Aug 29, 2015, at 11:16 AM, Megan Rooney <mrooney@hillaryclinton.com >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','mrooney@hillaryclinton.com');>> >> > wrote: >> > >> > Hey all. Here's a draft joint oped to be signed by Hillary and Tammy >> > Baldwin, which we're looking to place asap. Please get edits to >> Kristina >> > Costa and me by 4pm today. Thanks! >> > >> > >> > >> > <8-29-15 draft oped baldwin clinton accountability 1115am.docx> >> >> >> > >