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I really like this one, Cherry. The colouring makes it really stand out among some of your other works. I love the use of muted, tertiary colours in the foreground; and the use of bright, neon colours in the background. I especially like the use of contrasting warms and cools. The way that Bill Cipher is made entirely of cools and then surround by a black aura, contrasted by the very warm colours of corners really makes him feel like a cold presence. The ink with the matching neon teal is a nice way to make some of the desk items really pop. The loose strands of hair are a great way to make Dipper look like he's been stressed and working hard. There's really not much to change in this picture, because it's very good as is. The coffee is a nice touch and it's what I noticed first about the piece, but it could be made to look a little more like a liquid. The arms are a little too straight and long. Overall, definitely my favorite piece by you.