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I love it when your comics are MLP meets Mighty Python. It was quite confusing with the dialogue and it seemed as though one point they were dressed in all armour and the next they suddenly were rid of their helmets. It was quite confusing to me. Punctuation and grammar could definitely use some work, and maybe making more pannels so we can understand what order the dialogue is going in with so many characters. I do like the detail in the background, though, but Trixie's relevance was minimal. I think more people would have been able to see past that if Pinkie were freaked out and maybe Fluttershy objected to the thought that a bunny was such an evil creature.