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The linework is excellently done. Your art style, at least for this comic anyways, seems somewhat simplistic, which only adds to the delivery of the joke in the comic.Now, when it comes to originality, you're using somebody else's characters and putting them in a joke you didn't write. In terms of originality, I'm not entirely impressed. (You could have added in a bit of character dialogue to the beginning or end of the joke, might have added another layer, but sadly the only customization to the dialogue that I see is a replacement for "Snap my fingers" due to the impossibility of that with hooves, and adding names.)The gradient background serves a couple of purposes, it seems. The brighter point of the gradient focuses around the characters, which I suppose is to mimic the idea of a spotlight on the stage, but the purple gradient becomes a little hard to look at over time. In terms of a spotlight effect, the original comic did it better, giving the light a defined barrier between light and dark colors. There is another noticeable gradient on the eyes of each character, adding a sort of depth to their eyes, which is a neat effect that still fits within the cartoon-like style of the comic.All-in-all, this comic is nice, but there doesn't seem to be a reason for it to exist. The joke works just as well without the tie-in to MLP characters, as they don't really add anything to the punchline of the joke without additional dialogue and/or panels. In terms of art style, it's really nice, and easy on the eyes, spare the gradient background. This can be forgiven, with additions of subtle effects like gradients on the eyes to add depth. Overall, it's a neat adaptation.