The horizon is really interesting and I like how Celestia's mane is sticking out beautifully with all the details.

However, her legs seem a bit off. Maybe the back right leg's hock (calcaneus bone ? whatever it is called) is not pronounced enough.

Her forward right leg looks a bit too flexible and bends too much, it feels a little unnatural.



I like the clouds very much. It feels like the cloud Celestia is standing on is much bigger and is a part of an even bigger group

of clouds drifting through the skies. For some reason, Celestia seems to be floating slightly above the cloud, though, instead

of really standing. Maybe the shadows under and near the right hooves should be sharper and more towards the left side

of the picture.



Overall the color of the picture is nice in its uniformity, allowing the different colors of Celestia to draw attention to her.

The sun itself looks bright and I suppose the picture tries to capture dawn.



I think that the picture could benefit hugely from more dark values. There is a pure white (the sun) but I didn't notice anything

near pure black and there aren't many dark values, too. "there is no light without dark". Maybe even darkening the parts

of the sky farthest from the sun would make it look brighter, otherwise it feels more like ambient light that is everywhere,

but not very bright.



Also, for whatever reason, the red hue that is literally everywhere, except Celestia, seems to feel a bit eery to me. Maybe adding

some other color to the landscape would help, some cool shadows, perhaps?