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You have been visited by a Critmas Fairy! We fairies are trying to show the world we can give critique to others without being downright criticising, as per the spirit of CRITmas ( fav.me/daqfq97 ). Mind if I just hop on to business, then?First things first: Great concept; love how you executed it too - I've never seen a character presented on a floating rock like that, ever! I also love the top light; never seem to get enough from that. Nice job!I also noticed you rendered the different materials so nicely. the leather parts, especially! Very convincing.I do seem to spot some anomalies in the guy's anatomy, or rather, his proportions. I'll go over the bits that I could spot easily:Firstly, his one arm is way bulkier than his other. His one foot seems to be too short, and in his face I think his nose is a tad short, his mouth a bit narrow and even for a very tostesteron-laden character, that chin is rather big. As it is, his features seem to be a bit crammed too close together - I think some slight changes there will make a big difference already.That's all I've got. I hope I'm not coming across as brash or overly stern - I really don't mean to!I hope 2017 will see you make much much more character portraits like these, but let me start by wishing you a very nice evening.Cheers,BATTLEFAIRIES(PS: Please don't mind the stars. I don't think the rating system is all that good so I'm just giving everyone 3.5's. Thank you for understanding)