I honestly an't tell if this is adorable or scary.If I had to give constructive criticism you could have made Starlight a bit more terrified. Like make her eye irises a bit smaller with sweat and tears(kind of like Ripley at the end of Alien) because here she seems less "Sweet Bucking Celestia this lil filly is trying to kill me" and more "Leave me alone I don't want to be involved in your weird arse shenanigans".And you should have added a bit of blood(or strawberry jam) in the butcher knife and made Cozy Glow's eye irises a bit smaller to show her insanity but on the other hand having a cute and sweet little filly like Cozy Glow murdering someone in a calm, happy and nonchalant way would be kind of terrifying. It would make the Punisher himself wet with fear.Although I will say it does have for some fanfic comedy potential.