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Impact Impact

Wow, okay, holy cow. This is breathtaking! You did such a gorgeous job with this piece, from the murky and gloomy sky to the water lashing onto the rocks below. You did an amazing job putting the rain into effect and having it also effecting the characters, along with wind and the lightning.You did ask for a critique, and so what you ask for you shall receive!Okay, I felt there was a slight clash with the rocks and the sky; you did the rocks and the cliff dark enough to be seen and stand out from the clouds, though it still feels like there's something fighting between the two. Also, farther back where the cliff ends and there is more stormy sky, I could imagine that part being a little darker, but I can see why you might not have done that with how you did it!The waves are gorgeous. The water is pretty eye-catching, and it has a beautiful look to it. I'm not sure if you were going for that, but they are pretty!! Also they really have the look as if they are slamming into the cliff, which is a neat effect to see and quite gorgeous.Next, Twilight Sparkle and Spike.You did a beautiful job with Twilight's mane. The way the wind is causing it to fly back and how you painted the mane and her tail is amazing. How the rain is effecting her fur is really neat, and how you shaded and colored her fur in general is astounding and simply incredible.Spike looks equally impressive behind her,He looks awesome here, and the hardness on his face is so different from the Spike we normally know and love, which makes it so cool to see a shift in his personality like this! Both characters' really stand out from the background.Finally..It's beautiful. All of the beautiful and connected lines give you more to look at and keeps your eye wandering, and you keep seeing new parts of it that you hadn't seen before whenever you glance at it. The rain pattering and running off of it really has an awesome effect, and the water dripping off of the edges too. Along with the highlight on the top, the ship is amazing.It was hard not giving you all five stars, gosh it was so hard. I really love this piece and every part of it is beautiful. Although I gave personal opinion on some of these, you really did an amazing and breathtaking job, and I can't imagine how much more so future works will be if this gorgeous picture is already as awesome as it is. I can't wait to see more from you!! Keep working hard, and keep doing what you love.