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Hello again! I am really obsessed with Oriona's design, it's so simple but complex at the same time, I daresay genius! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>I also like how this background, while also having a red brick wall includes part of the sky as well. To me it shows a difference in character compared to Valora, this piece having a brighter, more hopeful atmosphere to it.But now for some critique! One of the biggest issues for me is how far down her skirt is placed. This is a trait present in the Valora piece as well, but it is much more extreme here. You drew the pelvis bones here in a pretty anatomically sound place, but in order to cover up her genitalia, the top of the skirt would have to be placed between the pointer and middle finger. Speaking of fingers, I find it a little odd how you sectioned them here. I can understand The lines on the inner side of the hand, but it looks out of place here. There is also an extra section on the fingers here, as humans (And Valora!) Only have 3 sections on their fingers.The next biggest issue for me would be the symmetry of the face. The mouth looks great, but the cheeks are different shapes. I would also suggest having some hair visible behind the head from the ears to the cheeks, as the current image makes her look like she has some kind of mohawk.Another issue present is the size of the waist, legs and tail compared the upper torso, arms, and head. The bottom portion is much to large, and should definitely be scaled down.Moving to the background, the clouds being fuzzy feels very out of place for this image. I understand why you chose to do that, but perhaps making the clouds lineless but still smooth would have a better effect on the overall piece. I also think the birds look a little silly and out of place. They're all roughly the same size, and if you want to keep them I would recommend moving them down so they're not so close to the edge of the piece. And perhaps and one or two more in other areas of the skySome issues present in this one as well as the other image is the knees, again I would recommend not having the top line, and I think the whole form, her tail especially would benefit from messier fur.Once again this is a lovely character and piece, and I'm exited to see more of your work!