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Okay, I haven't written a critique in forever, but here I go...Well, this looks great! I love the way she looks. A few things though. One, there are some points where the lines either overlap where they're not supposed to or they just don't quite connect completely. Another thing is that there isn't a 100% consistent line thickness, although I suppose getting it "perfect" isn't easy. Some of the lines also look a bit wavy or crooked, but I suppose a little of that can't be helped. I also noticed a little spot in the mouth that isn't colored, but that can probably be fixed. One last thing, the majority of the hair looks fine, but the part in front of her face seems to be a little... I don't know if off would be the right word, but it sort of looks like there could be a bald spot.It mostly looks great though!