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Well Despite Me Hating Archie Sonic For Reasons I'll Make This Critique Any wayShadings goodAs Well as The Jacket & Hellswhat You Should Have Done is Give her a Shirt or Tank Top to cover up Her left BoobAlso Since it's A GB, You should Give her Pants (or In other Terms ripped up jeans Or Something) So we Won't See Her Vagina (then Again My OC is Naked too 0.o)As For The Jacket, it's Great TooThe Pose Could be A little BetterIn FactThe Pose Needs Alot Of WorkAs Well as The Eye PostitionOverall it's okayi'll give it a decent 6.5/10.0