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I decided to look through the "critique me" folder and see if there is anything from forever ago that still needs critiquing.This piece does a very good job of defining the shapes without solid dark outlines, I can't immediately see anything off with that.Generally the shading is good, one of AJ's legs looks a little bit too bright where it meets her body, it should be a little more shaded at that spot.The outline for her left eye (our right) should be behind the snout, but it appears to go over it a little bit, but it is not very noticeable.Overall very good job.