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Vision Vision

Originality Originality

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Impact Impact

Vision going with a 2 on this one. This whole episode practically screamed Fluttershy as Great and Powerful, which I'm pretty shocked honestly no one really took to the third person speaking.I commend you on going through with it but it showed a lack originality to which I give a 3 because well it's just a different point of view of how a scene could of been.It felt like you just wanted to get this done quickly to give a visual for a joke that would of probably not have had the same impact without the visual backing. A simple comic which in my opinion was good.Sadly the flow felt flat with expressions, and even Fluttershy had the same eyes for 3 panels, yes the exact same minus mouth. Technique I give a 3 since it's a pretty basic comic. It isn't bad but, it could of been better presented.I give this 2.5 impact only because had it not been for the fourth panel, which was done nicely with the Star Wars reference with Trixie, making sense of her third person rampaging, then I would of given this a 1.5 because the delivery for the joke was sadly what ruined what could of been much better.OVERALL: 3, you get a bonus half star because Trixie says so.I really enjoyed the concept, I liked the ending, the first panel wasn't bad, but the repetitiveness in scenery and expressions wore you down as you read the comic. And yes people while not noticeable Rarity's eyes did get readjusted to look straight at Fluttershy when she landed.Sorry if it seemed harsh >< I suppose I could of given vision a 3 since I guess not many new fans would ever notice a Trixie reference... *meep* [link]