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am only writing this critique in response to what you said about your work needing work. You don't need to work on backgrounds, that is very well done with the lack of color adding a misty sense of atmospheric distortion, and yet maintaining a high level of detail through the drawing it self. The perspective however is, as you commented, of slight concern. But only for the sake of consistency throughout the picture. Can people be drawn very effectively with this level of distortion? Yes. Wide angle lens cameras do this with images all the time... the only reason it seems slightly off is that you do not have the same level of distortion for the rest of the image. To illustrate my point, look at the poll she is holding. It is thinner in the bottom than in the top, which shows that you did some manipulation, but it doesn't get thin enough quickly enough to match the girls. If you look at the poll next to her tiny feet, it looks as if the poll is as thick as her foot, but up higher, you can see that it isn't. That is the only concern really. The girl looks like she is being viewed through a wide angle lens while the city looks like it is being viewed through a normal lens. The girl is seen from a consistent perspective, and the city is seen through a consistent perspective, but the two perspectives are slightly different. Otherwise, the image is wonderful. I commend you for a job well done in spite of the one hiccup. I honestly only noticed this because of your comment about perspectives, and thought I might share my thoughts in hope that it might help you to feel more satisfied with your next image.