Dear Mr Khan:

I offer to you this friendly advice: Proofread your work much more slowly and carefully than you do now. You are doubtless an intelligent man, but your English (clearly not your mother tongue, as one would expect of a South Asian) needs a lot more polishing than you seem to think.

Cases in point:

“Lines on a map does [sic] not an equivalency make.”

“…in the states of Punjab, West Bengali [sic]…”

“…the fertility in the BIMARU states is in the range as [sic] Pakistan…”

“…Guanyin is pervasive across Chinese the breadth of civilization [sic]…”

“This does not mean that modeling them in [sic] intractable…”

“…it manifests in more conventional class, sect, and ethnic lines [sic]…”

“…and it is disappears [sic] without the foundational support.”

“…even though though [sic] it is embedded in their customs.”

Not to be too cruel, but your writing suffers a bit from the all-too-Indian vice of excessive wordiness: Why use fifteen words where twenty will serve as well? Betake thyself unto a used book store in the Amazon; there seek and find Strunk and White’s Elements of Style (it’s time someone clued you in).

Warmest regards,

Mr Chips