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To start off, I love the way you capture Fluttershy's character. The blushing, the nervous look, and the way she fiddles with her hair totally fits her personality. I also have to commend you for choosing to leave her hair slightly messy. You're correct in the sense that she would probably leave it natural like that. The line work is well done, too, especially when it comes down to certain details, like the cleavage and the clavicle. Now there are a few criticisms I have. Firstly, Angel could look a bit more grouchy. It would fit his personality better. Second, I would exclude the Sun effect on top of her head. It seems pretty pointless, since it doesn't reflect her persona that much (no pun intended). Outside of that, this drawing is pretty solid. It's well outlined, it's well lit, and it perfectly displays what kind of character Fluttershy is. Overall, i give it two thumbs up. Keep up the amazing work, FluffyXai!