This comic is very well written, and the jokes are all well executed, but it would have been better if each verse had it's own panel. It gets tiring to have to read multiple verses with nothing else going on visually, especially when those verses describe events and actions that could easily have had an accompanying panel showing what is written. You wouldn't have even needed to add dialog bubbles for the extra panels, only the ones you have now. I'm not suggesting that you alter this comic, especially since, again, it still works well as it is, I'm just explaining how it could have been better so you can hopefully learn from your mistakes and improve your future comics, not that much improvement in the areas I have criticized is necessarily needed, as none of your other comics that i have read as of the writing of this comment have had the problems i have pointed out, due to their lack of narrated poetry.