you did a great job on this one, the overall picture is great, their a few things that are wearied about the character like the hand holding the phone is to big, the stance looks unnatural, her feet are not indention in the snow to show the thickness of it, and she also has no shadow, with the light that close to her the shadow should relatively short and fat, and sense the light is sort of behind her the shadow should point towards the direction of are view. i also noticed that 2 of the windows on 1 house are crooked, its the blue one with the dark blue roof next to the character. every thing else is great.