Nice work! Good job on the transparency of her dress.I noticed you experimented a little on the Yosafire drawing, by combining colours to create depth and transparency (her hair). Something to try, is using multiple colours to create more depth and colour variation in your drawings. For instance, if you want to draw a blue dress, lay down a light layer of red where you want the darkest shadows and in the folds of the dress. Then put a light layer of yellow, green or orange even, where the highlights and lighter spots are, then fill in the blue like normal. Choose your colours based on the environment and the mood of the scene, that way they don't seem too out of place. By drawing in layers, you can create drawings with more visual depth and more interesting colours - trick a viewer into seeing a blue dress, when there is red in it too!Anyways, nice work, and thanks for the llama