After getting such a large response on my first posting of this piece, I thought I would go back and give it a more clean and consistent image, smoothing out a lot of the pencil that was visible from the first draft.

The Land Raiders charged ahead firing merciless rays of Lascannon fire into the enemy Chaos lines, destroying metal and flesh alike.

From the air fearsome barrages of Stormhawks rained down on the defensive ramparts, tearing down whole walls in a molten inferno.