Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Alright, right off the bat the picture gave the intended impact: rising from the ashes and burning brilliance. In all honesty, I'm at a loss of words simply from how much detail as usual you put into your drawings, but also the complicated lighting from the simple fact that she is standing at the exact center of the flame and the amount of light coming from around it. Improper shading there could completely ruin the piece, yet I find no/little trace of improper shadows. Now, one could argue that because she's surrounded by light there shouldn't be shadows since every inch of her is exposed to light, that's wrong simply from the fact that shadows still indicate the presence of light, but just not as much light, so that's an erroneous critique. The only thing I may be concerned about is the flame effects: the brilliance of the flames work stupendously, but my concern is how there's nothing about the flames themselves that tell me that there are flames. My eyes hurt from looking at the light, just like it was an actual fire, but something about the flames seems rough, which isn't bad at all, considering the desired effect, but the flames just seems rather chalky/smeared when I closely at the flames. Overall, well done! Can't wait for your next work!