Hey, it’s me, J! Y’know, when H2O Just Add Water first dropped on Nickelodeon, I was intrigued, and puberty have not yet fully eclipsed me yet. I remember really liking it. Recently, I saw a video by Story Surgery on youtube. It has inspired me to start this small project. This is my interpretation of H20. Feel free to use this in fanfictions, just be sure to credit me.I present: H2O Downpour. If you think you can, please, do better!



Pilot



In the not-so-distant future, a mysterious comet flies toward the earth, eventually crashing into the infamous Mako Island, more specifically, the moon pool. The resulting radiation would cause a ripple across all 7 seas. One years later, a young woman has come all the way to Australia, to scope out a university she’s looking into , as well as investigate Mako, collecting samples from the flora and fauna. Enter: Kira Cruz, who for the sake of this project, will either be represented by…

Kate Upton…

Emily Scott…

or Hailey Clauson

Pick your poison.

Kira is the quintessential ‘Mary Sue’. She is perfect in almost every way. She is beautiful, smart, rich, and she has a black belt in muay-tai. The thing is, she knows how perfect she is, but for the sake of keeping the peace, she supresses her arrogance. Eventually, she decides to focus on the volcano, as she heard rumors of a mysterious pool inside. Luckily, she brought her hiking gear. She scales the mountain, unaware of the coming storm, forming in the sky. This is where shit hits the fan. As Kira makes her way up the crag, she noticed a tunnel, almost like an entrance. As she peers in, a lightning bolt shoots down from the sky, like that of a blinding dagger, and striking Kira on the hip, destroying the climbing apparatus, causing her to tumble into the cave, and flat on her back. As she gets up, she winces, noticing a nasty burn on her hip. Looking up, she realizes that there is a glowing body of water: it’s the legendary moon pool. Taking her injury into account, she decides to submerge herself into the pool. As she does so, the storm clears, revealing the full moon. Suddenly, vaper begins to amit from the water, like smoke from a fire. The vaper soon envelops Kira.



Kira awakens from her daze. She is now on the plane back to her home, Seattle, Washington. After the long plane ride, she is greeted by her mother, father, and younger sibling. Back at home, Kira went to the bathroom. Making sure the door is locked. She gets in the bathtub, and with a deep breath, after a few moments, her legs fuse into a copper fishtail, and she gains a bra of the same material as the tail. After another few moments, the tail and bra decked out in unique patterns.



Turns out, the comet has caused something of an evolution to mermaids, and now, Kira has become one.



In a flashback, Kira actually discovered this when she took a shower back at the Gold Coast. Going back to the moon pool, Kira collected a large sample of the water in a large thermos, which she keeps in her backpack. It is also here that she discovered something new about mermaids- the transformation is no longer water-touch activated, but can be triggered at will.



Kira- “Where did this come from? The power. Feels good!”



Kira then notices something out of the corner of her eye. It is a newspaper! Reaching for it, she read it’s contents. Turns out, while she was gone, there was…A SCHOOL SHOOTING! Angered by this, Kira inadvertently heats up the water. Kira is stunned, and she ends her bath session. The next day, Kira decides to run some experiments, discovering her heat, ice, and water manipulation powers. After thinking about the shooting, there she began thinking that the world needs a competent leader. Someone like her! Somebody has to do this, so why not her? And so, she makes it her mission to use this newfound power to take over the world, no matter who she has hurt, No matter who she has to KILL. This is her world!

Cast



Kira Cruz- The self aware Mary Sue. She puts on a facade of a nice woman, just trying to do the right thing. In reality she is arrogant and delusional, to the point where she wants to take over the world, even taking the name, Numyne. Similar to, but not a carbon copy of Light Yagami.



Dr. Cleo Satori- Ah, yes. Cleo Lamar Alowisious Satori. Now a successful marine-biologist, Cleo eventually catches wind of a succession of water based murder, thus, she is recruited by a taskforce from the FBI to help out. She in quite inexperienced, but her underwater intelligence will compensate. With the help of Emma, Rikki, Bella, and Lewis. her challenge is to find out Numyne’s identity without getting herself killed.



Charlotte Watsford- Vengeful and angry, Charlotte somehow regains her tail, and is dead-set on revenge against Cleo, something that Kira can exploit.



Evie Mclaren- It’s been a while since she lost her tail. Recently, she’s been feeling off. She is unable to maintain an equilibrium.There is something about her that’s changing within her.

The Mako Mermaids- Lyla,Nixie,Sirena,Mimmi,Odinna, and Weilan have all returned to help out with the Numyne case.

Storyline



1-Kira becomes a mermaid and resolves to take over the world.



2- Kira runs some tests, discovering her powers of heat, ice, and water movement, also, she performs her first murder, when she is hanging out with some friends. A group of young punks are robbing an elderly man. Kira chases them off, but as they run past a gas station, Kira gets the idea to superheat the gas, blowing the assailants up, in a gruesome murder that I like to call, ‘All gassed up’. At this point, Kira, feigning shock and horror, takes on the name, ‘Numyne’. As well, she is dead set on MAKO FALLS ACADEMY.



3- A couple weeks have passed, and Kira has collected some COMPANION CUBES to talk to and exposit to, and she has brought a notebook to record data. She keeps it in hidden in a slit in under her bed.

She has also reasoned that if she could control water with her hands, she could plausibly control water with other parts of her body. After a few tries, she can not control water with her foot. She also applies for Mako Falls.



4- Kira recognizes that she should create a disguise. To keep the cops off her trail, she goes to different stores to get supplies. She creates a costume that resembles that of a mermaid and a pirate hybrid. Basically this… Forgive my horrible photoshop



5- Kira reasons that if she can turn water into gas, she should be able to turn gas into plasma. Her theory is correct, and she later goes to the beach, and uses this power to drown some girls harassing a guy.



6- Kira realizes that if Numyne does not space out her moves, the FBI will eventually catch her. Thus, she makes moves across the city, killing several agents in the process.

7-8-Kira decides to make the move Australia. Before she does, she must first, set up some insurance policies. Meanwhile, in California, The FBI call up Dr. CLEO SATORI to help them capture Numyne. Kira moves to Australia. There, she gets a job as a lifeguard, and befriends a passing through, ISABELLA HARTLEY.

9- As Kira figures out how to use her powers to kill criminals and general assholes, Cleo returns to Australia to recruit her old friends, EMMA and RIKKI. They also recruit the Mako Mermaids. Meanwhile, Kira starts looking into Bella, eventually discovering the secret. She instantly suspects the others, and look into them as well.

10- As Numyne’s actions gain the attention of the INTERPOL, Kira comes across EVIE MCLAREN, who has been a real clutz lately, much to the concern of her boyfriend, ZAC BLAKLEY. it is also here, where Kira meets Cleo.

11- Kira talks to Cleo about the Numyne case. Kira eventually deduces that Cleo is part of the investigation. Kira marks her as a threat to kill. Meanwhile, Zac convinces Evie to get an MRI. The results reveal unusual brain patterns. Perhaps an omen of things to come.

12- Cleo only befriended Kira due to suspicions of her being Numyne. The two hang out, playing volleyball, which Kira wins. Later, she notices NIXIES’s resentment of CAM. Nixie cites Cam’s betrayal at the end of Mako Mermaid season 1.

13-14 LIGHTNING POINT CROSSOVER. The KAMEN RIDER MAKO belt is created, but it does not work yet.

15- As the group tries to activate the Mako belt, Kira discover SUPERSPEED SWIMMING, which she uses to perform kills in other other countries. She also manages to kill off a few Interpol agents.

16- “Cleo’s Gambit” Cleo’s suspicion of Kira grows to the point her she exposes her tail, in hopes getting Kira to show hers, which she does. The gambit has worked and Kira joins the team.

17- “Charlotte’s Revenge” CHARLOTTE WATSFORD has regained her tail, and wants revenge on the girls for their transgressions against her. Kira feeds on her blood lust, making her Numyne II.

18- An overeager Charlotte attacks Cleo, but Cleo quickly subdues her, and humbles her.

19- As Cleo and Kira’s rivalry continues, the Kamen Rider Mako belt is complete, now they need to find a candidate.

20- “Migatti no Evie” Numyne II attacks, and the mermaids go to confront her. Evie needs to help, so she transforms in Kamen Rider Mako! As she goes forthe famous Rider Kick, Kira cuts a powerline, electrocuting Evie. It looks as through Evie has passed on, but then, she transforms in a new state of autonomous movement. But just as quickly as it came, it vanished. The first season ends with more questions than answers.

My challenge to you is to do it better. None of the above images are mine