Pt. 1 is here. I cherry picked the lines that would most likely get flagged tbh. It’s such a half-assed translation job I don’t want to honor it with anything even approaching scientific rigor.

303: One could argue intimately. Можно даже сказать близко. One could even say closely.

304: With these two, that’s tantamount to flirtation. Я бы охарактеризовал отношения между ними иначе. I would characterize their relationship differently.

305: If I saw you every day forever, etc - Strange seeing you here in front of me, etc. Ты не поверишь, но сегодня я тебе особенно рад. - Не поверишь, но я тоже тебе рад. You won’t believe me but I am especially glad to see you today. - You won’t believe me either but so am I.

309: You called us murder husbands. Ты назвала нас убийцами. You called us murderers.

310: We’ve both been his bride. Да и Вы ничуть не лучше. You are no better.

311: Is Hannibal in love with me? - Could he daily feel a stab of hunger for you, etc. Быть может я Ганнибалу нравлюсь? - Вы хотите знать испытывает ли он чувство голода каждый раз, когда Вас видит? Текут ли у него слюнки? Да. Ну а Вы что испытываете? Perhaps, Hannibal likes me? - You want to know if he feels hunger every time he sees you? If he salivates? He does. But what do you feel?

312: [This isn’t relevant, just mistranslated so badly I lol’d] It’s beautiful. Как здесь красиво. It’s so beautiful out here.



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