ok I know I should be starting to work on commissions now orz

MORE MY LITTLE PONY HUMAN PAPERCHILDREN ..yes background characters ;v; ..becauseee ..THESE PAPERCHILDREN ARE JUST SO FUN TO DRAW TvTAnyway~ I hope you recognize them :'D ..because I am sure that these two are like the most inaccurate human ponies .3. ..ohwell I will spoil the characters for you anyway~ From your perspective the one on the left is Octavia, The famous background pony who plays the cello. The one on the right is DJ Pon 3/ Vinyl scratch the famous background pony who is a dj xDI designed those human versions myself, but they are based a lot on other human versions of those characters ;v;'I might also be one of the few who didn't drew these characters in sexy clothes ~(@3@)~oh and believe it or not, I used some refs from kuroshitsuji for Octavia xD ..(don't ask me for what parts .3.)well ..about the stuff I screwed up here, too lazy to mention all of this stuff because it's a lot of stuff I messed up here ..I want to mention Vinyl's earphones though, yes she's wearing headphones ..somehwhat :'D. I completely screwed them up while making the linart, I also realized I did some parts wrong ..oh orz ...AND ALSO ...asjdfkdfs Octavia's cutie mark ..it died r.i.p.The background is just some random music sheet ~(@3@~)The picture is not taken by me (~@3@)~* thank you random person who took this picture *~(@3@~)used material:-marker paper-some kind of thicker paper dunno what kind >w>-fineliner 0,05-gray pencil :'D-copic markers--white paint marker-normal scissor-small scissor-pastel pencil (for vinyl scratch eyes)I hope you like it and think they are still somewhat accurate.. I tried my bestalso sorry for the quite long description :'D~.....Alsoo~~ check out the mane six :3and requesting critique TvT ..why?..well just because I get better because of them. Yup I am realizing it will hurt because the negative points here ..ohgawd so much, so much. rip myself.. anyway any honest critique will be appreciated ;v;