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Very nice job!The colors are nice, and the background actually looms part of the comic, unlike some other comics ive seen.The use of shading is very well done. It isnt too dark in some places and isnt too bright in others. It really brings out a good depth of field.The part I liked the most was the dramatic entrance of our other "alicorn" friend. The image thats perceived from the silhouette of him brings out an really anti climatic feel when you see the next panel. Also, the smirk on his face is awesome.Anyways, thanks for the really good comic!I apologize for my shitty syntax, im on my phone and it can be... quirky at times.