Thank you! i'm glad you like it. I really wanted to experiment with vibrant colors on a black back ground. I see what you mean about the mouth. I probably should've just hidden it behind the hand. I even had erased it several times while I was drawing the picture. But I guess i was too fixated on wanting to have the smile shown. I also see what you mean about the gold and onyx ring, I think the things that's off about it is that its facing the viewer when it should be turned slightly so that the stone itself is parallel to the finger. Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it