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Originality Originality

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Impact Impact

I've never written a critique, but I have seen what someone has written to you, giving you 5 stars on everything and without criticizing it. I think that's terribly wrong. That's not a critique. So I wanted to help you, because you surely want to get better, that's why you asked for a critique.Vision: I'm not really a fan of this "cromatic aberration", but I understand that this is a style of drawing, so I'm not rating that. Nice focus on Yang's face.Originality: There's nothing really original about this piece of art, but that is absolutely not a bad thing.Technique: And here there is something important I wanted to talk about. There is something wrong with her face. I guess that the perspective is a bit off.Also the shading is an important part. When you're drawing shadows on a face, the shadow lines aren't really straight, they follow the curves of the face. (see this example i.imgur.com/CvBNi9w.jpg ). If you draw lines straight like you did your drawing will look flat. Add some degrees of shadowing and boom. You made your drawing a lot better.Impact: Overall, even if there are some things I'd fix, your art gave me a good impression. Stunning eyes, I'd say! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>Thank you for reading all this. I hope you can get better.