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First wanted to start by saying that I love this comic. It's just plain fun (which is not hard to understand considering the characters!) I love how that 'fun-ness' was brought into the comic and displayed well. You can feel it from the moment you start reading and it is just, well, fun.Because of that, and other things, like expressions, poses, etc.; the characterization is really good. I feel like this is a real interaction that could happen between these characters (which is a huge thing to consider when making comics). Also, even though it is well characterized; it is not predictable, which is another trap some comics can fall into. Nice job avoiding that! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>I did not see either of the 'punch-lines' coming. I genuinely came into this and was curious to see what exactly Discord had to say to Pinkie (this was a long standing curiosity because I saw each of the previews of this comic). Then, once it was revealed, I enjoyed the rest of the comic and actually laughed out loud upon seeing the last panel. That was just great. Also, I love the originality of the idea. It just felt new and awesome. Also, you din't rely on any memes or pre-existing jokes for the humor. It all came from the dialogue and the characters.Now, onto the artwork. I love your style. Its very original and dynamic. I like the little things you did to really set the comic up; like Discord's face in the first panel (derp!) and Pinkie's hair being blown by the force of his yell. The expressions are all spot on and the fun way the characters are posed and drawn really brings me in. The way the lettering is done in the last panel is also fantastic. It just makes that last panel feel even more ridiculous and fun and discord's color scheme on the letters really does that.Okay, um, now to find something wrong (this is a critique after all, not a "ohmygosh this is an amazing comic, I love it!" gush-fest) So, the only this I would change, and this could be improved on for later works, its really not a big thing; is the backgrounds. I would either put them somewhere (like a physical location) or make the background a constant color. I like the gradients and the variation there too, but the color changing/lack of background in the first panel was the only thing I found to be a little off.I understand that it works better for the characters in each panel and the ascetics of each panel are better with the color chosen, but for the look of the whole piece, and it's impact as a whole, maybe try for one color. But hey, that's just me, and you do what you want. I do like that the color helps break it up into three distinct sections, but maybe if the colors were a little closer to each other it wouldn't be as off-putting. I don't know for sure.Anyway, All in all this is an amazing comic. I love the art style, I love the dialogue, I love the humor. Gah! It's just great. The characters expressions are fantastic and that last panel is a work of art in itself (yes I know you uploaded that separately too (: ) The characters look good, they look right, they look cute! Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Have a nice day e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>