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There are several things that can be done to improve the overall quality of this piece. The hand holding the scythe gun should be larger, and the staff itself should also be thicker. If you compare the hands her right hand is clearly larger. although it is closer to the viewer its not so close the different in size should be easily noticed. Another small improvement could be her leg that is upward in a running position. The angle of the lower leg is far to high comparative to where the foot is located. If the angle was changed slightly or the foot raised more it would match up a bit better. lastly I like how the cape has tears near the end but I wished the cape had a bit more texture like the skirt.My word of advice would be to add more texture to the overall quality of the picture most notably in the skirt and cape. (although the skirt has some texture I think it can be improved further.) The lighting on her hand holding the hood is also a bit too intense and should be darkened slightly.I hope to see more of your work and a continued improvement throughout your RWBY character series.