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This is very nicely done. I really don't have much negative to say about it. The colors are good, the style is pleasing to the eye, and the punch line was super funny. Especially Spike in his role as straight man (or dragon e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title="(Wink)"/> ). I think the only thing I would recommend fixing is the skeleton of Twilight. The outline itself is pretty good, but the color throws me off a bit. If you were going for the burnt look it may have been a little more obvious if you had darkened the scorch marks. Basically make her look more crispy. This is a small aspect however as it did not hinder my enjoyment of the comic. Great job and keep up the good work!