Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Another great comic, title and description as usual.Although I don't get the comic completely or what Dashie was trying to do, I still find this filled with plenty of humor. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="LOL"/> We all know Fluttershy's face is priceless in panel 3. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/> Her face in panel 4 though could have been better though, possibly similar to the one in panel 3 but with hoof still over mouth.After reading the comic a few times, it made me think that Dashie could have been in a worse condition then what was put in the comic but then again I don't know the story Fluttershy told Dash and Dashie's facial expression could be better but that is the one thing in here I'm not sure how to improve.