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This is certainly a very beautiful piece of show style art in my opinion. I love the composition and setting of showing Rainbow Dash flying as somepony would see her from below, and this art really captures that fascination an earth bound creature has with the majestic soaring pegasi.I do want to point out a few things that I do think you could do to improve on the next piece. The lines on the cast shadow marks from the sun here seem a little misaligned to me, a suggestion I might have is to draw a second copy of the artwork when your doing the lines for the sun, and then define the sun as a single point and draw the lines out from there with a straight edge.Also one effect that I think would help this scene is to increase the contrast between the sun lit background and Rainbow Dash. The two both appear fairly dark in this image. However, somepony's eyes looking right at Rainbow Dash would have their eyes adjust to the contrast and see Rainbow's underbelly as bright and the background sky really bright, or if they were looking at the sky before Rainbow came by, the sky would look somewhat bright and Rainbow would seem very dark.It is a lovely piece and I really appreciate the time you put into it. I hope my suggestions help you on your future art.