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First off, I find your drawing to be very appealing!

The character looks extremely vivid, her movement seems natural, light and dynamic. You captured the genuine friendliness of the character very well and she seems very open minded and just in the moment.





I love your choice of daytime ^^ By letting the scene take place in twilight you underlined the magic and mystery that surrounds her character. The colors of the background are gorgeous and very in tune with each other. The colors of the character herself are quite different from the background color sheme, so she stands out. Whether that’s a good or bad thing is up to personal taste. I think, a few more purple tones on the dress or the hair would make the picture appear even more harmonious, but the way you drew it makes it look a little like those old animes where the detailed backgrounds didn’t seem to match the animated moving characters in style either



What I would criticize about the coloring is the glowing halo outside the rims of her dress in front of the lake background or next to her hair in front of the sky, which don't make much sense and look like bad HDR-photo-effects. If you really want to make it glow in these areas, include your linework into the effect. Lightly colored object -> dark outline -> glowyness doesn’t work since the glow would “bloom” over the contours of your objects.





You managed to depict the fluency of her dress and hair very well! ^^ The folds on her dress are correct, so you might as well be a little bolder with them To make the hair actually look like water you could still be guided by those flowy lines of your usual style of drawing hair and only omit any aspects of “sharp pointiness” and instead let the hair strands end in thicker drops.

By adding some transparency to her dress or hair you might underline the feeling of water but this would call for a lot of extra details and coloring work.





Her left hand is the only thing I find fault with anatomically: Her knuckles should protrude upwards but by drawing a notch there instead you made the back of her hand look edematous. Her forth finger ends too far away from the palm and the ulnar side of the hand shouldn’t just be convex but has a slightly more complicated form in reality.





A general piece of advise I’d like to add before wrapping this comment up: By using fewer photoshop brushes of premade objects and by instead drawing every detail you are capable of drawing yourself, your picture would always look more consistent and of “your own style” instead of being a mixture of you and those brushes that are instantly recognizable as such.





Overall it’s a lovely drawing with a great atmosphere that I truly enjoy looking at! Keep up the good work and have a nice day!