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This is my first time making a critique. So I'm sorry if it isn't very good.Its a simple yet extremely enjoyable idea. The coloring and shading look really nice as well as your overall style of drawing makes all the characters look really cute. The little details you put on the characters expressions really get to me like Pinkie's eyes darting back and forth before she takes the pouch or how she's mommentarily shocked from what just happened after firing her party cannon.I also enjoyed how you intentionally left ambiguous on wether the other pony was dead or just unconscious.