Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

this is my first critique ever so bear with me!the background is phenomenal, i love that you gave the monster volume unlike in the series, and an evil face to help this painting give a story. the lightning and blending on this painting are beautiful and very pleasant to look at. this painting gives a very powerful vibe!but luna is the issue here, her position is too boring, and needs more emotion. she's fighting a giant evil monster, and you forgot that she was very frustrated and tired because of all the magic she was using, and it was draining her. but to people who haven't watched the show, and for the sake of the painting, she could use more emotion. a little pit of perspective could work, the fact that she's in the corner just standing there takes out a lot of impact in the drawing.the difference in painting techniques between luna and the actual monster is a little bit unnerving. she seems be more sharp than the monster and the background, a mistake that many people seem to do blaming it on the "focus of the drawing" but if luna's mane was a little bit more soft it would be perfect.on the other hand, the actual technique used in this whole painting is magnificent. as i mentioned before, the background is amazing, but all of it; the colours and details, are simply mesmerising!overall, a very well done and breathtaking painting that tells a wonderful story! keep up the great work!