Wonderful story -- actually a meta-story -- a story about stories. There are a few spelling and grammar errors, but as an ESL tutor, they appear to be a result of English not being the writer's first language, so that gets a pass (though the text really should be fixed for this to be a truly professional, polished game).

Nice graphics, and even music that doesn't become grating after about a minute! There's also significantly less aimless running hither and yon to get objects in the correct order. I'm going to go play some of your other games! Thanks for a good game.

Edit: Sequel? There's a sequel? I was reading other reviews and saw a reference to it. Is it here on NG? What's the name?