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Impact Impact

Losing someone that you love, specially someone like your daughter or son is really devastating, I know that feeling, i lost a cousing 2 years ago and i had the disgrace of seing his mother destructed by it, last two panels really capture that feeling, i gotta admit that.Also, the surprise factor is really strong in this one, i can see why so much people are having a severe case of feelings, it starts like a really happy documentation of Dinky's life with her mother, then it punches you in the face with the last 3 panels, really amusing, i'm giving you 5 stars for this.However, every good piece has it's flaws, and ironically this comes from those last two panels, you see, Derpy and Twilight's expressions at the end are.. kind of awkward, they look too much human'ish, specially Derpy, it looks like someone copy pasted a Japanese comic man's face and then put it on here, no offense by saying this, but it killed the surprise factor of Dinky being dead, I actually gave a laugh at Derpy's face.All i gotta say is, nice job, please keep getting better at your drawing tecniques!