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I'd like to start off with saying the first thing I noticed about this piece was Luna's limbs. They seem to be a bit symmetrical to one another, a bit too symmetrical, I believe you've just flipped the limbs and pasted them onto the body, yet even though the coloring and shading is able to make this method look quite nicely. You should always take the time to try and draw the limbs separately, since limbs are not perfectly symmetrical at different angles, I do believe drawing each of them separately will make the image turn out a lot better visual wise.Second, the shading around her shoulders on the bunny suit could do with a bit more detail, you should start with a dab, and then smear it into smaller streaks which will eventually fade out going down her arms, I say this because, since the shading is overlapping her arms, it would turn out better to always start the shade in one large dab, which eventually thins out until it is not longer visible across the object.Speaking of shading, I'm going go out and tell you that it's simply outstanding, the highlights match with the surface perfectly, and you've done quite well with mixing hard highlights into dark shadows. Her mane transparency fits quite nicely, and I think the most proud moment of this shading is around the head and the bunny hat.My advice would be to put some more time and focus on the limbs, try making them less symmetrical to add better perspective, and to also add more effect on shading the smaller parts.