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First of lets start with the general feel of this piece. It feels like you wanted the animal here in front to be the vocal point, Looking out over the great landscape. What i noticed was that your painting style in unrefined and blurry, plus your brush strokes are random like you are rushing to complete the image.



You have an overall idea of depth of field. "Note: i am no expert myself" But there are places that need to be softened with a blur effect like the top edge of the first floating island and there are some places with blur that needs to be removed like the foreground, First of lets start with the general feel of this piece. It feels like you wanted the animal here in front to be the vocal point, Looking out over the great landscape. What i noticed was that your painting style in unrefined and blurry, plus your brush strokes are random like you are rushing to complete the image.You have an overall idea of depth of field. "Note: i am no expert myself" But there are places that need to be softened with a blur effect like the top edge of the first floating island and there are some places with blur that needs to be removed like the foreground,

like the animal.

(i am not talking about the grass here on the left of the picture)



Ok next is the pool of water. I feel like the top part of the pool should be moved back in order to match the floating island's waterfall or the shadow under the first island should be darker in order to push the bright water forward. If you are indeed rushing your paintings, know that everybody has to start slow in order to be fast. Ever hear that saying?"You can't run before you have not learned walk" same thing for artists including me. Take it slow and watch loads of tutorial vidz and try to understand every move they make.



Note: Do you know how to use layers. If you don't i would recommend learning about layers before watching those vidz.

Another thing- Getting a strong base for your image can do wonders. (base=black line art)

You also should take in consideration that there is atmosphere in between objects as distant as those islands. So fading each island with varying strength with the color of the atmosphere should push them back giving more depth to each island.



I know i am probably sounding a bit harsh and i ask you to forgive me. You are on what i call the artist break borderline." i was there quite some time ago" It is the most sensitive part where you can raise your skill quite fast or you can waste your skill and talent really fast.



I really Hope my comment helps you. This artwork is a Great artwork and i hope my comment inspires you to do even better.^^



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