Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

The pros of this pic have been pointed out again and again, but I'd be remiss if I didn't go over what I liked.I love the rendering on the feathers, the texture and hues you've got going on are beautifulLikewise with the water, it's gorgeous, forget about it! Ace work!I like the concept of a mutated angel, the three wings works well and are, again, rendered lovely~(Also the details on the jeans are fantastic~)I keep seeing this pic around and the one thing that keeps distracting me is there's no color focal point to the image. All of your colors are so saturated and all over the spectrum that the green glow, which I assume was intended to be the highlight color, fights for dominance over the rest of the colors, but it never really wins out. Instead it just appears out of step with the beautiful plays of the blues, purples and aquas you've got going on.That said I think either bringing down the saturation on the rest of the image (which would really take away from the lovely colors you've got going on, I know) OR delegating the neon green glow to just the halo around the figure (and not interspursing it with the tattoos and foil print on the shirt) would give it a little more impact and focus that I think it would benefit from.Also I think the rendering on the figure feels a little flat compared to the rest of the image. You have such detail in each feather and each ripple of water that the fact that the tattoo doesn't curve with his collarbone or follow the muscles in his chest makes me e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Sad)" /> because everything else is so three dimentional that I'm sad the figure isn't rendered to the same level of detail.I don't like to rate people's vision and stuff, that seems...rude. Technique can be critique'd, vision no way, so just all stars all the way!