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I mean. It's a simple piece I think it's cute. I don't think it's amazing, but I don't think it's terrible. I'd say that the scratch marks and the doodles and the leftover sketch marks distract a bit from the content. Granted, hard to tell that the cookie is a cookie mainly because of the inconsistent shading. I can't exactly tell what you were going for there.Try varying your stroke marks more to get more depth? Also make sure to erase your early sketch lines.There's a random line on her scarf's neck portion: don't exactly know what that's for.Overall, cute picture. Somewhat lacking in the organized appearance, but hey: that's what a sketch is lol.