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Portraits with surfers are very common. I'm sure it's already been pointed about the right arm's proportion. Rather it being too long, it's too thin. The beginning of the forearm should be a little more round to present better muscle tone. Also, the right wing is not so much given it's proper spacing. The end of the wing looks like it's extruding from the elbow and not the wing itself. I think, in my opinion, the wing should be spread out to give more exhilaration to Cloudchaser's experience. And if so, her left wing should be shown as well.For the background, the contrast is very complementary to the sparkling of the droplets so it shows off as a glassy, fresh, thrilling surf ride.All in all it's a great piece of work. Nice work, mate! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>