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You've done a really great job with this illustration. Right off the bat, the concept is immediately clear - mashup of the infamous Star Wars poster with Legend of Korra. It's a very original concept; I never would have thought to put those two together! It's also composed expertly; my eyes don't get stuck in any place for long. They continue to move around the composition and back to the focal point. In terms of rendering, I'm particularly liking the use of gradients and glow effects, as well as the textures. They're used to great effect and the painting really comes alive. There's a few things that I think could make the image better. First, looking at the original Star Wars poster, we can see how well the figures are separated from the background through the use of warm and cool tones. I think this painting would really benefit from having the background recede more with bluish atmospheric perspective. Keeping the two figures on the left warm though will help to unify the composition and eye flow, but a receded background should help the main characters stand out more and enforce their silhouette value. Other than that, there's just a few anatomical issues - I think Korra needs a little more neck and structure under the chin, and I feel that the bottom most figure's outward hand is just a bit too big, even in perspective and with the large glove. Other than that I really love it! Great work.