I don't know about the color palette on this one. It's better than the first few renditions, but still not where I want it. No yellow, thats for sure.I wanted it to look like the bullets were causing the fractures, but that didn't work out as well as I'd like either.Meh.This one's a bit closer to what I was aiming for.Written in Circular Gallifreyan , fan made alphabet byAll proceeds will go towards the creation of non-murderous hosts. Eventually.