Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Uff, I guess it's time to draw some critique again? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>I will try don't do "all 5 stars" and take it really like constractive critique-thing. Cause I see you are developing and pretty fast, so it's a good for you to have really big and certain tips and advices e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="577" title="La la la la"/>So, let's start!1. Vision.The all look of the picture ( the composition and colors) is really nice and good-thought. I checked your video and I see you followed many composition tips, which is great! Orange and blues are definetelly good color combination, as well as all composition is balanced : head in the center, right part of BG is bigger than left. Cause of our eye-reading from left to the right, we see the dragon first, then concentrating on head and finally seeing fishes and such e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="577" title="La la la la"/>Also you did lower part of drawing darker than top and everything. Great job here!BUT, I must say - even if everying is that good, I kinda don;t like how we can't see dragon shape clearly. Because of water is much thicker than air, we have stronger "space" perspective, so his front legs should be a little darker and more contasted than background behind them. So we should clearly see all silhouete of the dragon, not only wings and tail on blue BG. Also, shades on tail and back legs should be less contrast and dark.SO that's why I give 4 - It's good composed, but still, I need to take a moment to understand everything. Good compostion is that one, when you can guess everything from fast look and then explore small details ^_^2. Originality.Ah, here I give all 5 cause I must say - i rarely see dragons under water and in such shiny and positive look. That's all for this one X'D3. technique.Your painting skills are growing and I enjoy your progress! Specially it's visible while comparing with old one - details look less sketchy and more realistic, also you did better with shapes and feeling space :3But still, there are few things you should keep improving!Firstly, anatomy. I think you've already checked and read about dragon anatomy and how you should draw wings and muscles :3I think you should do more anatomy sketches and go deeper into it! Everyone can draw extra detailed creature, which will look good, but, not everybody can do anatomy-right creature! Thats the goods of antasy animals, you can be absolutely unprofessional with anatomy in them and they still look nice XD sta.sh/0468izj5msb here are some redlines for wings. Everything else looks actually fine, I think for that pose I wouldn't do better place for legs etc. But, wings, I think they look a bit cartonish and less right. Cause of wings are half closed, the claw would look more realistic rotared outside of body. And, also, comparing with how you did legs, anatomy on wings looks not detailed! Check the reference I sent and how I did redlines. Wings should be a little bigger :3and as a second - you need to keep practising shading and lighting things. There should be lots of different reflections, lights and such - black shading underwater doesn't give you really much of water feeling. udivitelno.com/images/8/bolsho… ( I hope it opens ) here is a photo of water turtle. You can see how fast colors go blue on BG and how green are shadings :34. And the last, uh, hardly to say anything constractive, I just saying - I got impressed byit and have a feeling i wanna do some water scape as well e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>