Nice, I like the pose! I'm trying to improve my anatomy right now, so maybe I'm a bit too focused on that thoughI think the image could use a bit of general toning though, the colors in themselves make sense, but they don't really connect well. Do you know what I mean? Like how in certain movies they run most scenes through color filters, which washes out the individual "real" colors a bit, but creates a more whole impression? Think of the Matrix, where all the scenes inside the Matrix were tinted green, and everything outside was tinted blue.Of course, nothing so severe is neccessary, but maybe try adding an overlay layer on top and experiment with tinting a bit? Try to think about what general mood you want, and pick a color to go with it as the overall tone, maybe. I can't help but feel that the colors in this piece are somewhat disconnected.Also: any inspiration from Dresden files? ^^