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Well, first of all, I'd like to comment on the visual style of this comic. Your attention to detail on the original aesthetic of the series is creepily accurate but that naturally helps deliver the 'parody' aspect to this. Unfortunately there isn't much else to say on the style as, in all honesty, I've been seeing an increasing number of other members on this site who seem to capture it just as well, if not better. While it may seem to people who enjoyed this a little harsh of me to give you a '3-star- rating for 'Originalty', it's because the style has already been proven to be just as well replicated by may others, also this isn't the first 'shipping' comic you've made for this series. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Wink/Razz"/>In ways, I very much like this one compared to the others for how you show the featurd events to actually be Twilight's perverse fantasies, and one that Rairty and Applejack are present enough to become aware. This brings a refreshing dimension to the humour (in my opinion). Even though, youa similar fantasy scenario in 'Sonic Shyboom', I felt Rairty's and Applejack's reaction made it stand out more and even perhaps parody the notion of pairing any MLP: FiM character. This sort of joke might even be (for loss of a better word) 'tolerable' for certain bronies. In fact, I'd suggest this could, to an extent, entertain bronies who have perhaps grown tired of the shipping this show has gone through.You applied some previously used ideas from your other comics and managed something unique enough to stand out a little more from the previous two. However, I feel you can only make so many more before the premise quickly grows done and tried.The '4-star' for 'Impact' owes itself to my personal reaction to the last panel. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Smile)"/>