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I really like this comic. It's really funny how Celestia got her just deserts.Vision- I think it was captured as intended: to show Celestia in a perilous situation in a comedic way. Happy that the whole Nightmare Moon situation was resolved and Luna was imprisoned on the moon, Celestia decides to celebrate with a well-deserved vacation at the beach. The only problem with that was that she forgot that the moon was responsible for the tide patterns. That's when hilarity ensues. Also, that last panel was what tied it altogether. I think overall that department was covered well.Originality- Honestly, I haven't really seen any comic quite like this, or with this idea. I also like how you decided to tie in real world facts within the comic. Very well done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>Technique- In general, the art is pretty good. However, Celestia's jaw line in the third panel was a little wonky to me. Not too shabby, though.Impact: It was meant to give a good laugh, and to me, the impact was exactly that.Overall, I think this is an excellent comic starring Princess Celestia herself (Luna's face in the last panel was especially hilarious XD). Keep up the good work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title="(Wink)"/>