Hey, thanks man, I appreciate it. Yeah, I was trying to give her a particularly awkward stance to kind of show that she's nervous/shy/flustered, but it does still look wrong. I'm still so bad with the anatomy. XD

As for the rule of thirds, yeah, it's definitely something I've looked into but as for this particular drawing, I was really trying to throw her at the viewer. Like, boom here ya go, here's a horse. Haha, but for real, here I was trying to get at the idea that this is a big moment for one of the two parties involved and for that one moment, each has the other's complete attention, center of view, no distractions. However, I do know what you mean and will for sure be trying to do more with rule of thirds in the future.

Again, thank you so much for the feedback, bro! Always great to hear from ya!