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Very, very nice. All of the facial expressions on Twilight show a great range of emotion. Starlight's face does a great job of giving an feeling of nonchalant. The story is very believable for them just because Starlight has shown a VERY high mastery of magic and willingness to go against the norm and break as many rules as possible.I have scoured the comic multiple times looking for errors or issues. I honestly don't see anything that could be changed without changing your style. It's well drawn and very well written. We hope to see amazing work like this as you continue on.Great job and good luck. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="392" title="(Smile)"/>