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Okay so here goes a Critique e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Big Grin)"/>Okay so im gonna start of with the impact this picture has then i will go onto the drawings themselvesFirst i wanna say Aj and Ab are perfectly in character for example, Applebloom acts like a typical kid would; Thinking what she is upset about is stupid ectand applejack is being the typical loving sister trying to stay strong but eventually her own feelings take over which is what i feel would actually happen if this where a real situationOkay now the topic of the comic is a mature one that me and allot of people wish would actually happen- Mainly because it would make for a very mature lesson, also it would be better than her parents suddenly appearing in S3, so this is why fan-art is always a nice thing to see, Plus your comic is handling the situation in a great way almost like the show would.okay on to the drawing, first of i wanna say your drawing skills are amazing! some of the poses you have accomplished are really hard ones and you have done them perfectly, Also your shading is very accurate e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Big Grin)"/>Overall this is an amazing comic and i can't wait for more e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Big Grin)"/>