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Some things I like to report that are positive are the lighting, anatomy, and color of this piece. The wings are majestic, as well as her regal poise. The scenery around her seems calm yet suspenseful to me, and I extremely admire the detail you put into the cloud. However, I wasn't sure but were you considering putting an ocean under Celestia? I see speckles of the water's reflection under her that's represents the sun's ray on the waves, but I wasn't sure. Celestia's hair looks beautiful, especially with the sparkles, but if you don't mind, the sparkles would look more pristine if they shown brighter.And here comes the main critiques I felt I need to address in this picture. Unlike other critiques, I felt some things were obvious to me, but not to others. The background seems a bit too blurred in, and Celestia didn't look like ''she was part of the scenery'' unless your goal was to make Celestia be surrounded by clouds as a symbolic representation. Secondly, there was suppose to be a higher opacity on the shading. *Shading was too light, and the clouds that surround her had no obvious effect on her. Also, just like the last critique, her hair seem a bit too perfect, so try adding stray hairs.Lastly, please list some details on how the background works that might effect the way her hair flows to which direction. Like, is the wind calm or blowing in a direction that changes the clouds in this picture?Overall, the picture was beautiful and shown you had a lot of creativity, but wasn't very realistic in the matter.