I posted a bunch of wild praise for this project on the fanfiction page--just as much is due here to you as the artist (and to the storyboarders/shaders) for building such a wonderful noir-ish world. The art truly brings it to life as a uniquely high-quality and in-depth piece of Zootopia work. The way characters like Jack/Yurei and especially the Administrator behave make them feel like they were just always there, which is a giant compliment when we're talking about inserting characters into any established universe, even if it is sort of a funhouse mirror version like this. The reveals of all these characters too, as they emerge and fit into this universe, have always been clever and creative. I love that it's an author and artist working together too--I think it really leverages both of your strengths and its part of the reason this product is so refined.



I will say--especially after the last chapter, I'm not huge on the recent Nick/Judy romance focus. Their tension in previous chapters has been -fantastic-, driven by great art and razor-sharp dialogue. Recently though, it's wading into territory of losing the dark edge that Sunderance has been about (in my eyes) since the start. The ice cream thing was fun as a quip earlier, but it feels like a startling and out-of-place element if they're -actually- going to get ice cream. In a story that's been so good because it's been dark and bloody and -mysterious-, the recent sharp focus on their inevitable romantic involvement feels mundane and tired compared to all the other cool stuff going on.



Everything except this Nick/Judy dynamic, for the most part, is Sunderance's exclusive property: a unique story set a beautifully rendered, unique Zootopia world. But Nick and Judy now spending almost two full chapters being handsy with each other and coyly (or not-so-coyly) bantering about their hot-and-heavy feelings... those bits are a dime-a-dozen everywhere you turn in the fandom.



Lengthy post aside, my opinion obviously doesn't have to mean anything to you all as the creators. You can and should do whatever you want, and it's a killer comic any way you look at it. Just my two cents.