Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

I can tell that you put a heck of a lot of effort into this, so firstly, props to you on that! Every little piece of detail including the cracks on the walls and the crosses on the calendar really add up to make this a lovely drawing that clearly has a lot of care put into it.The use of traditional mediums combined with the primary use of orange/red tones gives off a nice warm atmosphere which I think is really nice.I have given originality the lowest score because it is a traditional drawing of a licensed character reading a book in her home, it's not really something I've never seen before. That certainly doesn't make the artwork any less good, it's just nothing really 'groundbreaking' so I can't really give it a high score in this area.My main critique is that due to the amount of detail it feels a little bit too cluttered and it's difficult to tell what is the main focus of the scene at first, you could make the background a little bit duller than Moon Dancer, or you could outline the items in the background with a thinner pen, just to make that distinction a little clearer.Overall, lovely drawing! You definitely have a great amount of skill in using colour and traditional techniques.