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My absolute favorite aspects of this piece are the whooshing effects. You can clearly tell the motion of each object, how fast it’s moving, and what direction it’s travelling in. I also love how you put the calm Snails in front of the Sun, because it gives off the implication that he’s some sort of Buckball God. It’s a hilarious idea! But what I especially enjoy is how I feel like I can hear each sound the characters make. I can I can hear Pinkie slamming her hoof on the ground as she’s bucking the ball, or Fluttershy spinning them with her tail. If I had one criticism, it’s that I would color some parts authentically. For instance, some of the grass blades are too purplish, and the shine on Fluttershy’s mane is too bluish. I understand that you were trying to go for a more psychedelic vibe, which is not a horrible decision, but I would color them how they would look in the real world. Other than that, I like this drawing a lot! It has energy, it has comedy, and it makes me want to get off my butt and play outside for once instead of typing reviews all day! Keep up the amazing work, Jowybean!