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In terms of composition, this would look better if you had moved her over to the right some. She cuts off in a strange part which the shifting of her would fix. There's also a lot of negative space on the right, which throws off the weight of the image. I'd say to move the bottom of the tail more into the lower right, which would also complement the movement of the mane. The eye is shaded nicely but I feel it, along with the majority of the image, should have more contrast. Her two front legs have different lengths, which you'd fix by selecting the shortened leg and moving it out some. On the topic of her mane and tail, fire, unless it has a stronger light source behind it, would not cast shadows and would havestronger lights and darker shadows on the areas it is closest to.In regards to color, shouldn't Daybreaker, seeing how saturated and bold her colors are, have a saturated palette also? The background is fine, but with her current colors the image as a whole looks muted. Which, once more, could be fixed by upping the saturation and making the mane and tail look more like fire.There's also gaps in the lineart, the coloring, and the shading. I doubt this is intentional, but these also make it look more like you did it in either a time crunch, or weren't interested.Comparing it to ardail.deviantart.com/art/Slee… and ardail.deviantart.com/art/Nort… , this isn't the best that you could do, and hopefully you take my words as helpful advice and not as me throwing stones.