..man oh man, if Palmer weren't there to keep things under control, they'd probably be wandering around forever and possibly die.



Well then..first off, I laughed my ass off in chapter 2 with "Loki" and Palmer, and then Gavin's appearance..wow.

That's one of the things I really think is well done, the fact that all the regions have a difference language, or at least a dialect that is widely different..





Well then, chapter 3 was...interesting to say the least. Damien's response to Tiffany was expected and surprising simultaneously, considering what he saw when he came in..



And then chapter 4..my god..people REALLY like hiding out in dark caves, do they? Especially murderous ones...



Although there's..something particular about chapter 4 that miffed me.



1. Why did Ambrosia say that "Pokemon shouldn't be used to solve human problems"? What else are pokemon battles for other than solving human problems?



2. I can barely stomach Aile's decision on letting Bianca live, and I certainly wouldn't hand her over to some friend of someone who I barely know (because, let's face it, the group barely knows eachother, even now).. I'd rather hand her over to the authorities(the cops, even though they seem hugely non-existant in the canon lore..there should be some sort of them, right?).



3. There's nothing in hospitals that she could kill people with? AHAHAHAH..I'm sorry :x that is so incredily naive that it's just disgustingly hilarious. No personal offense, it's just..is she really /that/ naive? Syringes with who-knows-what kind of fluids? scalpels, scissors (as mentioned). Not to mention blunt objects...hell even dinner trays can be used to bash people's heads in. Literally anything that isn't plasti..no wait you can strangle people with cords and plastic bags, so those work as well.



All's well enough, but a hospital is not a place where someone can't kill other people if they /really/ want to. Nor is any place, except an empty jail cel, where they can probably kill one person at least: Themselves. But I digress..



All in all, I'm really curious to see all the reasoning for some of the people's actions, as well as what Sari will do now that she decided to split up with her group. Will people be rotated around or will she simply join someone else?





All remains to be seen, and time will tell...



Also, one final thought: Cobalt talking about metaphysics to an Alakazam, expecting him to understand, and find out he's more of a flowergeek was pretty entertaining as well :3



Keep it up guise!! *excited wave*