I'll be honest, while good in every technical sense, I found this artwork a little bland for my normal tastes, but that's mostly a combination of content and personal preference in art styles. I still liked it enough to add it my evergrowing desktop rotation, and perhaps more importantly, this artwork managed to motivate me to read the fanfic that inspired it, a fairly impressive feat for any single piece of artwork.



Anyway, having just finished said fic, I'll join in with those who have commented that the eye thing is no problem. They only turn grey for one particular use of 'stand firm', where she applied it to truly epic extremes, and this clearly isn't a picture of that scene. That said, I do wish you had at least drawn her in her Gildedale armor. There's not nearly enough artwork of that, but since you were only working from text fragments I can hardly blame you for that.



P.S. -- I also just checked out your gallery and found that this isn't the first artwork of yours to hit my desktop rotation. I really love your Pinke/Surprise prank war stuff.