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Ok. This is my first critique, so I will just jump right in. First, what I love. Your glow effects. The horn, chest plate, even the silvery lining on the underside of her wings is done incredibly well. Her mane was done tastefully, not overly extravagant as I have seen some do, so it doesn't overwhelm the picture. Going back to the wings, I have to say they are quite possibly in the top 2 in drawn pegasus wings I have seen anywhere, not just on dA. Her expression befits her as well, and the level of detail that you put into the background is proportionate (for lack of a better word at the moment) to the detail you gave Luna(the subject) The reflection is very well done, and the ripples were a very nice touch. I cant say I really disliked anything in this image, however, there are a couple things I thought just didn't quite match up, or was a little lost on. I am not 100% sure where they fit in here, but the paper airplanes while they dont detract for the picture, the seem a little more hastily done than the rest of the picture, a bit rougher than the crispness found elsewhere in the picture. I have to make the same note about her tail. Im not sure how it could be rectified, not being an artist myself, and I also know that the properties of her mane and tail make it difficult to draw in the first place, It just seems like her mane was done to rate a 9 or even a 10, where her tail might rate 7 or 8.Overall, I would have to say this is one of the most amazing pictures I have seen in my year (yes, I am rather new to the fandom) of looking at pony art, and without even creating a list, I know it would easily make my top ten. and just one small note to end positively. I LOVE how you did her slippers! which leaves me torn as to my favorite part of this picture. Her wings, her slippers or her face/head (to include the front part of her mane)!