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Despite this being a work in progress, I'll critique it as is if it helps you with the future refinements.I'll start off with overall aesthetic. This piece has an interesting use of grayscale and contrast. The silhouetted wings are an immense focal point to the piece due to the total contrast with the character, reflective ground, and background along with the line of power symbols guiding the eyes to the wings. The character who I am assuming is Penny from RWBY looks overall nice and the salar de uyuni/ reflective surface underneath her is a nice, atmospheric touch.This piece has some interesting atmosphere and ambiguity. I can most likely see this being a piece referring to death due to the often associations with grey and black along with the technological, angelic wings. Personally, the piece has a sense of melancholy from the greyscale and the characters pose to the blank, empty stare of her eyes.My suggestions if you want it: considering the start of the wings to the character is detailed, I can imply that the wings will also have those details extended into it. Personally, I would like to keep the contrast from the wings while still having some suggestive detail on the wings. The back components appear to be clamping down onto her arms instead of her latissimus dorsi. I don't know if that is intentional. Regarding the character's body, I would recommend some details to imply that her body is either artificial or manufactured like deeper use of shading and value to give the impression of segmented and conjoined body parts.This is a pretty interesting piece and I hope this to be finished. Anyway, hope this critique helped.