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This is my 1st critique and my watchers suggested that I do it, so I'm sorry if I have a slip up or anything...Since critiques have to list the good and the bad things about a piece of art, I'm going to have to go through the bad stuff first just to get it out of the way.First off, Twilight and Derpy's wings look a bit off to me... I don't know what it is, but they seem a bit displaced slightly. Twilight should also have slightly bigger wings than Derpy considering she's an alicorn.Pegasi wing: jfplayer34.deviantart.com/art/… Alicorn wing: awsomejosh13.deviantart.com/ar… As you can see from these 2 vectors, you drew Twilight's wings closed, yet her wings as you drew closed are the size of pegasi wings and not alicorn wings. If you compare the 2, you'll see that you drew Twilight's wing size a bit off.Honestly, I can't really see anything else that looks off... Plus, I know having your own personal style at times is better than always making something look like it came right out of the show, so I'm going to say mostly good things about this piece. The only bad thing I really notice that would need fixing would be Twilight's wings, and probably Derpy's too since the way they're positioned looks a bit off to me.The lighting and shading in this piece look great. I can see how much work and effort you put into the background also, which is something artists like me can't always do. Artwork like this is something that can also really make someone's day. It's very adorable and strangely, I think ponies in socks or in clothes actually look pretty cute. ^_^Another thing I doubt anyone has mentioned is that it's actually nighttime when Derpy is doing this, because through that stained glass window, you can clearly see a moon shining through, indicating that it's obviously nighttime in Equestria and Derpy most likely snuck into Twilight's room in the middle of the night.Twilight's messy mane also indicates this.Something more artists should do (I do this) and I also noticed you do too is adding a signature to each piece. I love how you did this, because putting a signature and date above or below your artwork can prevent art theft which so commonly happens on DeviantArt. The reason it does happen is because people don't have anything good to do with their lives or they can't draw. (No offense...)Overall, I love your style and your artwork. You just gained yourself a watcher. All that really needs improving is how you draw their wings. The shading and lighting is good, your signature and date you have will avoid art theft, and you have plenty of detail in the background as well as the other objects in the picture. This is absolutely adorable and funny at the same time and it will surely make anyone who looks at it smile.