Much better. Turned some characters from a story I started years ago into furries because it actually makes more sense to me now. I’ll have to do a lot of editing to the story now but hey, worth it.

The young deer’s muscles locked, trembling from the desire to flee. He could only watch as his fear turned his own body into a cage of flesh. Warm light spilled over the other being that reached out a clawed paw to ensnare him.

A beastly wolf bared his fangs, “You can’t escape from a guard like me.”

