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Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Now this was just a beautiful piece, if not surreal. Namely because you predicted this and it is essentially what happened. Anyway, let's roll.First off, I loved the shading and the raw emotion from this piece. Ruby's tear streaked face. Qrow's relieved and accepting look at his incoming fate, and then Tyrian's look of pure rage. This is what popped out to me the most.You did a fantastic job of capturing the atmosphere in this scene. That feeling of shock, anger and sadness all combined into one. Much like all those reactions that youtubers have posted, I get that foreboding silence when I see this. Everything stops. Music, talking, any sounds of pain or the world around them. Just a silent frozen shot of a climactic and pivotal moment in the episode that is created to immerse someone.The middle panel is probably the one that really is my favorite part. Qrow fighting through the agonizing pain just to comfort his niece and smile as if everything is going to be all right. He looks like a man that's accepting his fate and is dying with no regrets. However, to add to that, I know that he is her uncle and I'm sure Myles vehemently denied this theory, but during that entire fight and the looks he gave Ruby, it seems more fatherly than anything. I will forever hold my head canon saying that Qrow is her biological father. Then that lone hand resting on her head just sealing that moment was great.In all honesty, the only thing that kept me from giving the technique and vision a five star rating was the sequence of the shots. I would say that Tyrian's panel should be first and Ruby's last, but that' just me. It's still great despite what I noted, but I think it would have been more impactful if this were to be posted in an actual manga.Fantastic piece and I am really eager to see what you make next. Although I'll have to start looking at these with caution since you seem to be the Nostradamus of predicting Ruby with having two pieces up that were dead accurate.