Critiques welcome!

I am so proud of this like omgSomething for cause he had a rough night last night <3This actually came into my head while listening to Hooked on a Feeling lmaoThis was meant to be a long term thing but i actually finished it in about 8-9 hours?? With a few breaks here and there so maybe 6No blur: sta.sh/0d4s75i7ioz