Erm wow is it possible you managed to make me speechless while reading this.My thoughts..............................FREAKING AMAZING!!!!!!Seriously perfect word for word, the way the transformation was done and how you made her sound more and more donkey-like as you continue reading. This has got to be the first story where I could picture something like this happening in a cheesy B movie or a tv series sort of thing.Great freaking job mate. You really have made my day with this, you certainly earned my utmost respect.It wasn't too dirty nor was it to clean it was the perfect blend of both and how you ended it wasn't cliche nor was it standard, it's sort of like he finds out what has happened and she's known the wiser which means he's left with figuring out the WTF part and what to do now parts. I love the fact that it ends like that as it leaves the reader thinking of multiple versions of what could happen to her, the relationship etc.Anyway review over sorry if it was a bit to long but hey feedback is feedback