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Before I say anything else; I have to say I like this, the moment is just precious.Praise:The line work is very nicely done; with the hair of Asgore using finerThe shading and white overlay is what makes this picture; and the transparent overlay of white around the shape of the whole image just softens the image and makes it all the more a tender moment. The shading compliments the line-work really well; I especially like how the garments shading is done. The image also shows the moment well; and the loving feelings between the two are well represented by their expressions.Nitpick:I noticed some flaws in the picture though; the most obvious though was Toriel's left hand looking a bit flat and slightly mishapen; if I had to reccomend a fix it would be a little more shading and maybe trying to add more of the hand. Toriel's horns also kinda look like they're just stuck on; a fix to this would just be erasing the rounded bottoms and adding some fur lining (Like how Asgore's horns show, just shorter and softer).Minor Nitpicks:Looking at Toriel's neck, I noticed the inside of the neck piece of her robes were white instead of purple. Asgore's shoulders and the necklace around his neck seem like they should have highlights since (I assume) they're metal, and it kinda seems like it just melds in with the embroidered collar of his robes. Asgore's hand on Toriel's arm is pretty good, but something just seems unnatural about the index finger around where it meets with Toriel's arm, it might just be missing a knuckle. The pie seems flat and short, the base of the pie is barely visible and I almost mistook it for a pizza. Now when I mean flat, I don't mean like the rounded top, because that's done well; it could just be that the crust is blocking a good chunk of the base.Overall, this picture is awesome; the feelings are clear, the image is aesthetically pleasing, the shading is well done.But just because I like it, doesn't mean I shouldn't rank it;I give it an 'Asriel/10' He's cute, precious, he has his flaws; but he's lovable all in all. And that's what this picture has too.(Sorry for the length; wanted to try and be thorough e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>)