that's the word i hate the most.. more like a melancholic hate though



the petals go just fine and the pinkish mood is great for this piece. just think it would be much better if the word was written by hand ..and not so bold maybe. because, you see, the feeling would be deeper. this way has less emotion than it could have



try out next time using an older paper too (not brown or yellow unless you take the colour to put it pink like the overall. more like a paper with marks of using and maybe some folds left on that big white space. but it all depends on the intention of the artist so don't pay as much attention to this tip as to the other)



it's still a great concept - don't feel any bad for it <3 i hope i'll help you with this in any way and you become even better on your art