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I love this piece. All through the panels i was thinking "What exactly is going on here?".And then I saw the last and for just a second I thought "Oh, I get i-" And then i burst out laughing The last panel does not look quite as polished as the others, and that brings it just slightly down for me, but the rest was very, very well done. The look of concentration on Weiss' face is completely in character.I must point out something I see as a flaw, though. In the fourth panel, she is holding the brush quite close to the tip, but in the next panel her hand is nowhere in view.Vision-It's not quite clear until the end what's going on, but that may be part of the idea.Originality-You did admit you saw it on Facebook, but you put your own spin on it.It sure surprised meTechnique-It's quite clear you're good at this style, but as i said, the last panel...Impact-This is going to stay with me a long time. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title="(Wink)"/>