Goodbye A Poem by

Saying goodbye, to her and to my normal rhyming. Let's try this whole free verse style shall we. © 2017 Joshua McNay

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Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5 Advertise Here Author's Note Trying something different. I normally rhyme so much it hurts me, so I tried my hand at a free verse poem. Let me know what you think! I would love your thoughts and opinions on my first sort of attempt. As always thank you for reading!

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Reviews emipoemi so sad....yet so good. Well done!!



Posted 3 Years Ago

Rating /100 heartspeaks Another fabulous work of yours.... Wonderful.... Its a story in its own. Touched



Posted 3 Years Ago

Rating /100 Tony Jordan This is that which is needed when we are needing to read such as this. Bravo



Posted 3 Years Ago

Rating /100 Najam Us Saher Reading something when you are going through that time is something very heart touching. And this is that. I loved each and every word of it. Thank you for writing this.



Posted 3 Years Ago

Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive. 3 Years Ago Thank you. I am glad to hear that you liked it so much. Means a lot to me. Thank you again! 3 Years Ago You're most welcome ☺ Surya No words except to say I loved it...

I loved the way you conveyed..:)



Posted 3 Years Ago

Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive. 3 Years Ago I will say I enjoy the words you chose! Thank you for the review and I am happy you liked it. Anjali wow..... its so beautiful.

i really liked the idea and the theme of the poem. such an amazing way to say goodbye.

'because we were right just at the wrong time'

these are my favourite lines! keep it up!



Posted 3 Years Ago

Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive. 3 Years Ago Thank you I am glad you liked it. not going to lie I enjoyed those lines too! Thanks again!

A Poem by Joshua McNay