1. I love the artstyle and the detail that you put into this!

2. I really like that you made a swimsuit scene without all the girls wearing bikinis. While it definitely isn't the worst thing, it can get annoying, especially when artists make the bikinis really small and showing cleavage, so it's good to see some one-pieces for once (which I personally think look better)!



My only main critique would be that Nora's arms seem a bit stubby and her neck looks too short, but besides that, really great job!