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I saw the SootHouse video on Miitomo a week ago and I had such a visceral reaction to the fucking post at the top that I had to do a response featuring my own fan characters, Curio (Lucario) and Shine (Luxray).Seeing how this is my first comic, it would be nice to hear a critique on it, mostly on the set up and punchline. The art is a bit loose (mostly because of my own laziness and being out of practice) so the characters look a bit wonky this time around, if they weren't before.