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you're a true artist i love your work it is incredible! i know you've already finished this "comic book" but Keep up the good work also i need to congratulate you for this, this is a good story, it is original, the art its outstanding but could be better, but, so far the best stories i've ever seen. i am not meaning just this scene of course, i mean all the great chapters, the dailog, taking in account the actual show (personalities, looks, etc.), and all of my words said above are summarized in just one single word: one of the most amazing stories i've ever seen