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its really nice, i like this comic alot. keep up the good work. the lines are a bit flimsy, but lining things up isn't needed when the story line is this good!also i haven't seen a mlp story like this before. i might be a noob anyway, well! it really shows a lot of effort.you keep the endings of the page good, so that people will keep coming back, and checking upon it, as if you updated, really great.i still like even though its a but flimsy you keep the traditional art style of the show. and the pages just keep on getting better and better.Good Job! Keep Up!