Came here from your video from a year ago. I thought I'd give a synopsical critique, one to help you get better.



What likely ruined the video for a lot of people wasn't the costumes or anything silly like-so, as everything seemed on-point for costumes.

What broke the video for people who saw and saw hope in the thumbnail, was the looks, thinking their fellow fans had done more than dressed up and acted silly.

For the most part, you and your friends had a good portion of the dancing down, and all you need now? Is PRACTICE in acting. If HASBRO ever goes for live-action MLP EG, I'd think they'd sift around to find you and your friends for many of the roles in how you have obviously worked tirelessly to make the costumes and fit them.

How to fix things? Try to be more confident with your friends, your fellow actors. You were putting on a performance, not for them, but for everybody when the video was posted. What my fellow viewers saw was... something that was mediocre, hardly praise-worthy beyond the costumes... I saw... potential. Practice shadow-singing, mouth the words, and practice looking confident, even if you do not. If you can put up that guise of confidence, you will eventually make it real, and you will be able to go up on to a stage, or up onto a scene, and be able to dominate! Lift those bright eyes up, and open that mouth wide with a grin, however sinister, and WORK. THAT. ROLE!