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Very Pinkie Pie. Very well done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Smile)"/> I particularly like how you handle facial expressions... the timing is a little different than that of the show, but I like how yours works out.Most of what I would change involves distraction. By that, I mean that the viewer's eye is led to one part of the screen and thus other action important to the story is missed. What I mean by this:When Twilight first appears with her book, people will be looking at the book to see if they can read the title (an Easter Egg hunt). Because of that, Pinkie's initial appearance to the left can be missed altogether, or only picked up afterward. Two suggestions: first, have Twilight pause for a second or so (eyes move to indicate reading), allowing the viewer to see the book title. Second, have Pinkie in the background show up at the end of the "allocated reading period", make some looking-side-to-side motions to attract the viewer's eye, then have her heft the portal gun up. Pause long enough to let the viewer identify what she has, then Pinkie fires the gun.Other notes:1. Missing sound effect when Pinkie discards the book she was going to drop on Twilight. There should be a "thump" when it goes offscreen.2. Missed opportunity for another Easter Egg. Pinkie's book title could be something like "Pranking with Gravity" or "Minor Skull Injuries" or "Wormholes for Foals"3. When Twilight leans in from the left while looking around for the source of the second portal-noise, I would suggest a shrug before she withdraws.4. Have the collision between Twilight and Pinkie knock the large book on the right off of the lectern. It's a visually prominent object; give it a role to play.5. After the clatter-sound ends but before the "Pinkie!" yell at the end, a little dust or smoke rising from the hole would make a nice bit of visual punctuation. If you want to be artsy, start the appearance of the smoke just before the fade-out, but leave the smoke at full brightness until the rest of the screen is black... then fade the smoke as well.6. The silence between the end of the clattering and the "Pinkie!" yell is too long. If there were credits or something else happening on-screen, the gap would be fine. As it is, the timing is a little off.Minor quibbles. I very much like what you're doing here!