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Well I'm kinda new in this fandom(I mean MLP, Doctor Who I haven't watched), noto so long ago i would laugh of somebody who would tell that I'll get into it, but despite it I really get into. And I didn't regret it at all.The creativity of this fandom really doesn't stop to amaze me. Firstly "Si Deus Nobiscum", "Past Sins"(qith ii's sequels), "My Little Dashie"(in this case I watched movie based on fanfic), "Bride of Discord"(the same here) and story of Snowdrop... not mentioning music... and now this marvelous comic(and "Antrophology", which I'm still reading).So much for the prelude, now I'll go to the story itself(the whole story of course, because it should be rated this way). Doing crossovers isn't an easy job, really good crossover needs to keep the rule and spirits of both(at least in this case) mixed universe... I can't tell if You keep the spirit of Doctor Who but about MLP i can say You succeded. And the very base concept of this - connecting this two popular assumptions: Lyra love humans, and Doctor Hooves is The Doctor was brilliant, as i previously mentioned in one of my previous comments. Building Lyra's relation with Doctor, since they first meet and then put they both(with Derpy of course!) into this whole adventure with Cyberpony invasion was very clever. The same as the way You introduced this whole thread of Cyberponies. That was very dramatic, they get some nice companions(like Iron Will, which become really deep in Your comic), which disappeared one by one(not mentioning lose of Lyra's best friends BonBon... and about here I'm really very happy that You don't use this stupid, but for soem reason popular assumption that they're lesbians...) keep me in tension and was one of the many reasons why after read one page i always want to read the next one.And of course the relationship between Doctor and Derpy's family(by the way i was wondering what happened with Dinky's father) this also was one of very good thing which make the story so emotional... I remember how sorry I felt for Derpy when Doctor spend his time with Lyra and not her in anniversary of their meetings...And I really like this scientific speeches and self-confidence of the Doctor. The moment of his conversation with the Cyber Prince was just priceless!I also was afraid what will be with all this transformed ponies. They will stay this way forever or Doctor will find a way? I hoped so and my hope was fullfilled. In very inventive way I must say. The way You showed how Doctor figured that out was amazing. Maybe not as much as the conversation wth CyberPrince but still. And final scene with Doctor and Derpy - i really like like You builded their relationship, even if Lyra has more time with Doctor in the comic itself at it could seem that You will make them a couple instead of Doctor and Derpy, but they still stay just very close friends - splendid, it shows well how important they were to each other.And them Doctor turned out to regenerate into pony body, seem to die again but Tardis safe him(i don't get exactly how this happened, but i don't care)... but then...Well till this point i was very delighted and fascinated about all You done to Your history.but You've spoiled the ending very very much.This that Doctor change his apppearence wasn't so bad - afterall he regenerate and I'm not sure if he can't get the same shape again or if its just very unlikely, but nevertheless it's good explanation of this - when he come to the celebration and not immediately reveal himself to Derpy, and then run away from the party, and all the ponies started to forget it wasn't so bad... things still could go in good direction - he could go to his home again, perhaps have new adventures with Derpy and Lyra or just a normal stable life with his family, maybe even took Lyra to some human world with Tardis(not sure if this possible but still)... I think You know what I mean.BUT instead of this You made him leave Derpy and Dinky. Even if he changed he would be grat father for Dinky and great husband for Derpy(again i don't know if they were married but i think they would be). But instead he leaved them alone. Even if they would forget about Cyberponies invasion(but i think he could figured out some solution... or you could(like Tardis, Tardis key?)) they wouldn't forget him, and thay would know that he is telling them the truth, when he would tell about it all.But Lyra still was with him... that maybe wasn't so bad, but You seem to really started to replace Derpy by her since this point. Even that all wouldn't so bad if only... if only You wouldn't come with this horrible, fundamental logical error. The effect precedes the cause. That's simply logically impossible. This is the reason why I'm often very afraid when i see something with plot about time travelling(i seen only three productions in my entire life in which there was time traveling topis without logical errors... but in one that wasn't really timetravelling(in such sense like it's usually understand - I mean Return To The Past in "Code Lyoko"), one was very depatable("Time Jam"), and only the last was about real time-travel in traditional sense("SpellForce: The Order of Dawn")). It's very difficult to avoid logical errors when it comes to time travelling. It's not impossible, but in this area You failed.Lyra get interested by Doctor, because he mentioned humans which she was interested in... because she told about them Younger herself(and why she do this? Because she remember that she was told...) by travelling in time after meeting Doctor, which she get in contatct with because she was already interested in humans.If she wasn't interested in humans she didn't meet with Doctor and didn't travell in time to make herself interested in humans.That's time loop which couldn't be initiated without already existing.Time loops are(theoritically - if time travel would be possible) logically possible, but aech time loop need to be initiated. The initial iterations could be different than the next stable(and inifinitly repeating) iterations, but always events from the initial iterations remain possible(that mean could be deduced from the timeline in which already accur this stable iterations). In other words time loops could be initiated but not by oneself, there must be something different what cause them, some events from timeline in version before existance of time loop(events which after starting loop could disappeared but still are possible to deduce).Such time loop like You created is caused by itself what is just preposterous.It's such a pity that You ended Your story with the same mistake like hasbro in "It's about time" episode. This is the reason I substract You one and a half star for vision.And I really thought You do something better about Lyra's interest in humans. Like this what was used in "Anthropology"(whre she could just read legends about them and find out they're true) or use the fact of existance dimensional-traveling mirror in Canterlot(this from Equestria Girls). Or... maybe make Lyra a Time Lord. I really thought that You planned something like that - Lyra is another Time Lord, which in previous form was human, but then regenerate in newborn filly(maybe even loose second heart someway, or it was somehow magically hidden), was find by some ponies and adopted(or even regenerate in... newconceived filly) of course loosing memories, but partially get them back at some point - the beginning of her interest in humans. That would be really cool solution, and this way like You did it... well let's just say, that it would be better if it wasn't explain at all.But even with such bad, spoiled ending it still IS very good story.And drawn perfectly! They really looks like frames from episodes! In graphic for comic nothing is better than accurate fit the orginal style of the show.