Very good story, I am glad my idea was the winning one and it seems there are a lot of people interested in this topic. I think you did an amazing job in covering the realistic idea, and I hope it was not too difficult, because I know it is.

The "growing" part was a bit short, but in this setting this is extremly difficult, especially in a short story like this. It was amazing nevertheless, the characters were very believable and it was very immersive.

The end of the story, with Dave and Millie doing her breast expansion role play felt a little bit forced to bring in the idea of breast expansion in some way, but it was new and fresh and they were a nice couple.



My favorite part of the story was this one:



“That's the girl I was talking about…” Someone said quietly. I looked up and saw two guys walking past slowly, their lines of sight obvious. “Holy cow…” The other replied, “Literally.” He decided to add, and they both shared a hearty laugh at my expense, disappearing into the crowd. I pulled my tank top up as much as I could, but it didn't help.



That was amazingly well done. Millie doesn´t know what they said to each other, but this is a perfect indicator on how people are talking behind her back about her, and that people telling their friends about her and watching her like an animal in a zoo, because they can´t believe it. The social interactions were very well described with lovely details. Thank you for writing this story.