Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

A stunning piece of art that dragged me in instantly from browsing around! So let's begin!Vision and Technique (I usually do both together)Pros: The stage and curtains look a little distorted in a way that brings out Rarity and Twilight, which is just cool in general, and adds a bit of style to it. You have Twilight turned in a way that we can catch glimpses of just about everything. The picture overall is well planned when it comes to emphasis. It also catches the fact that Rarity LOVES to see her friends happy AND her dresses come out so incredibly well! They're both designed well in the scene... except for Twilight's face (Which I'll get to)Cons: I feel that the shadowing is a bit odd in areas. When I look at the shading and shadowing in a picture I imagine where the light is coming from, and that seems to be directly above them. (I'd assume, as it's a stage and all) but it also seems that there's multiple lights all along the stage horizontally, which would mean that the shading on the side of Rarity's head should be less emphasized. Maybe I'm not getting exactly where you were thinking the light was when you shaded, but to me it just looks a bit odd.Twilight's face says to me: 'Hey, Rarity, I'm going to slice you open'. It just looks a little bit menacing. The thing that really attributes to this is the eyes. They look a bit empty. I'm not an artist, so I don't know how you would fix that, but I can only tell you what I see in the picture.Originality:Dat dress. This is a commission, so I always max it out at 4 because of that, but everything else checks out perfectly. That dress really finished it though.Impact:You paint a scene here that people can take out as Twilight and Rarity are good friends, Rarity makes Twilight a dress, and she's really grateful for it. Simple, but combined with the way your portray the characters and DAT DRESS, I give it a 5.Hope you thought my words were fair.