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Bon-Bon.The comic made me giggle, and that's a good sign, for a comedy comic, but there wasn't a joke that specifically made the proverbial "LOL" for me. Then again I am quite jaded! ^^ Ignore the pretty stars to the right, they are meaningless for comics.One of the things I like the most about this is the over the top expressions of the characters. With these cartoon styles exaggerated expressions are underused, and loose value for it. But I think you hit the nail right on the head, mostly with Lyra. Like when she hides behind the edge of the comic, or when she starts screaming. A lot of comic creators like to rip off one style where it looks like they are always yelling. So props for not falling into that hole.I see you really focused on the facial expressions, since for the most part the ponies are draw from the neck up. And while Lyra went from Happy to scared to embarrassed, this bat-pony was bemused or annoyed through the whole thing, and you managed to give her several expressions to express the same emotion over all.So, overall, good job.