



A couple suggestions I have are to perhaps make her forearm a bit wider/thicker, especially where the folded area forms a point and makes the arm look really skinny. My second suggestion, which is more of a preference than anything else, is to possibly change the color of the line work in certain areas. The dark brown of the hair really masks the nice lines you have.





Aside from those two things, it looks great! The composition, while very simple, seems nice and balanced, and the lifework is quite nice! Good job!

Not bad at all!! I really like her pose and the simple shading you used.