Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

This is very lovely. I adore her hair!So you know the shadows on her hair caused by her body being in front of her hair? A little blurring in those shadows would give it more depth.The shadows on her left wing is kind of weird. Thinning out the shadows where the feathers are will make it look more like a wing.Like the shadows on the hair, blurring out the shadow her left leg is putting on her right would look good.That is all I have. I love the constellation patterns in her hair. Also her tired IDGAF face is killing me.