When her heart was broken,

And things only worsened,

Darkness all around

With no stable ground.

A beam of hope,A ray of light

Fog cleared and new way came in sight

He walked in her life as a knight,

But who knew love was bound to ignite!

Years passed,it only got stronger

Trusting him wasn’t difficult any longer

Expectations raised for reasons that were lame,

Always and forever played it’s game!

For her it wasn’t easy,

Because it was knight who got busy,

Feelings emerged that were insecure

But he did nothing to make her sure!

One day it happened,

The castle of promises shattered,

Broken pieces and cutting edges

Trust again built up it’s wedges!

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