Very nice for a first time. Outline is generally even but there are some issues around anchor points, check the tail or chin. Same on the tip of her right ear. Also her nose is quite messy. However those errors should sort themselves out when you get more practice. You mentioned OrangeL so I suppose you use PS. What I like to do is to zoom to 100% (with resolution like ~4/4k px) and check for any small errors, for example her eyes. Oh and opacity on her hair is brokenThis may seem like a long list of errors but don't worry, its still a very good vector