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Here I am again e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>Ok so here's what I notice right off the bat, something is wrong with her boobs. I'm sorry I'm a boob man. Now what's wrong is that the abdomen is too shadowed to proportion correctly. The front looks like an A-cup with a lack of inside hanging of flesh to support its theory but the abdomen is so far back that it suggests that the boobs are a B+ if not C size pair. In order to correct it the boobs actually don't hang for an A cup and we would be able to see a full face of the nipples from the way her her chest is positioned, or there would need to less of a gap in between the boobs for bigger sizes than an A cup.Once again the legs don't match as the right leg has a very thin thigh with a thin calv and top leg surface to support it. However, the left leg is too wide to support that same proportion as the right leg thigh and it is supposed to be thinner to the point it matches the other leg. If you could take in the fact that the vaginal pelvic region was pushing in which would make it wider at the top, we would see less flesh on the view from that side of the arm and not equal amounts on both.The left ear has a conflict-ion of light. There is a very blatant view of the light going in the opposite direction of the ear while the tip of that ear is still illuminated. As for the right hand, the shadow underneath that hand is not well defined enough for the blaring light that is reflecting off of it. The light on the hair is also in conflict-ion with the mirror of light from the hair which is going horizontal from a light that is going slightly diagonal from vertical.The pillar closest to us has a base that is not artistically correct and is approximately 2-3 degrees crooked when lined up with the other bases. The pillars on the other side are also not vertically correct. The shadow should be thinner and farther back, not wider and closer. It is not horizontally parallel when you compared it to the pillar on the opposite side with the floor horizon. They are also not mirroring the places of the other pillars which is architecturally incorrect for building as it would make a cathedral ceiling lopsided.On an odd note, her pinky finger is placed too far on the hand and is almost the same size as the ring finger. Also her neck is straight but her left shoulder is too long especially at the angle the arms are drawn, we would see even less of that shoulder. Also at that rate, we would also see less of her inner left ear as it would be drawn back too.Great fan of your artwork! Very eye appealing.(I marked low on originality as it was fan art which would make it someone else's original idea.)