Firstly, I cannot express how sorry I am that I wasn't able to make a proper comment on this after so long. Up until recently, I was completely inactive on this site due to certain issues that arose, which prevented me from both pursuing new art but participating on here. Though it hardly makes up for it, I hope you understand.



First thing I have to say is thank you for taking the time and effort to breath more life into one of my sketches once again. Though you may not be happy with the outcome, I still believe you did a lovely job. For some reason, perhaps because of the contrast in color, but I'm immediately drawn to the eyes ^^



The only thing that I would suggest for the future, and this is more so aimed toward the hair, is to perhaps add a little bit of shading to break it up a bit more and add more depth to it.



Again, that you so much again and I'm sorry again for my lack of attention on this until now. Take care and keep being awesome ^^