Wonderful! The idea is very clear and I'm amazed at how the water possesses so much of gold-like quality while at the same time being soothing (liquid gold would be a melted gold and that could very well feel alarming since its pouring onto the persons legs!). Few lines seem off at first when thinking of pouring water, but remembering it is in fact a metaphor for the light coming through the window, it seems very cleverly executed! Cheers