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Ok, so I went a little harder on you. The concept is OK, tho I will tell you what really needs improving.The shading, needs big time improvement. I've always liked pencil/charcoal type drawings, and I admit this is eye catching from the thumbnail. I think you need to learn to use one direction when shading, like take the background for instance. I could see you just stroking in random directions just to fill in the white spots, that's just what I see, you might have gone for something else. Do not shy away from smudging with an eraser to smooth out the dark strokes, that's why we have smudging erasers (or even thumbtack works okay).Also the anatomy needs a lot of work, I do admit that you drew Bowser pretty good considering he's one of the tougher characters to draw. Make sure all the lines are joined together when adding details to his shell as some of them are crooked. Also there is a big smudge, on the lower right leg that ran up to his shell, which needs to be cleaned up. Also the lines are just really light in some areas like the pony's arm which makes it clash into the background which isn't a good thing.I will tell you that you have potential, and like all artists there is room for improvement, so do not be discouraged, pick up from your mistakes and use them to develop. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p… " width="35" height="19" alt="" title="Pat pat"/>