Pretty good, but I'd suggest putting the highlights in the eyes over top of the pupil too. It helps give a cuter look, while also reducing the 'serial killer eyes' effect.Ooh I'd also shade the top part of the iris a bit darker to reduce the how much the pupil stands out.Edit: Kinda like this: i.imgur.com/xRk30HM.png Edit 2: Added a bit of shading to eyes: imgur.com/11S5zXX