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Impact Impact

Hahaha, this is so funny.I haven't seen that before e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>Although the idea isn't that far of - I mean, at least Pokemon would have a better and more consistent backstory.But maybe a little more detail with the background would make it even better. The impact of a punchline is determined by the way of how it's delivered. Maybe a little sidegag in the background or something to underline what is exactly happening. Or just change the speech bubble (something like "Gotta catch them all!")Well,but after all it is pretty awesome and I think you shouldn't change it - you are the artist and master of your own creation!