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The colors in this piece are very good, and the effect is better than anything else I have seen. I think the only thing that needs changing is the ponies themselves. The gems next to rarity are obscuring her face so you cant really see her. Applejack is great, the only thing I would fix is her back leg, it looks too small. Because she is so good looking, I think you should move her to the center and make her larger, and make Twilight smaller and move Twilight to the right a little. The only other thing is to move the lightning from the faces of Pinkie Pie and Rainbow, it makes them look a little strange. But definitely keep the lighting and the green vortex, that looks great!