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Impact Impact

I think the most powerful thing about this piece is the emotion it carries, which is not to say that anything else is lacking, by no means, I personally just felt a wave of bittersweet contentment when I first saw this. I love how you did the tears, but still managed to make Jaune look like a strong character, which from what I have seen in other works is not very easy to do. You also got the new armor and sash down really well. If there is one critique I have it is the sword. it looks exactly like his old one even though he got it with a fancier pommel, hilt, guard (whatever it is actually called, I don't really know the parts of a sword too well beyond handle and blade) but this is more of a nitpick on my part. Overall though, this is extremely well done, and I cannot applaud you enough for your talent!