The skillset and the backstory of this character was interesting and well developed. However, I think that some things need to be changed to make it more viable in the Overwatch universe:



Tanto: maybe give it a 0.7 hit time with 60-65 damage per hit. If it strikes an enemy, she gets to slash again immediately, but this time dealing less damage instead.

Mist Dash: Allow her to be able to "dash" forward at high speeds for maybe 1-1.5 seconds. Not as fast as Genji's swift strike, but something close to it, although she has more control over her movement. Give it a 5-second cooldown, unless she gets a strike with her Tanto. This could make for great hit and run tactics.

Poison dart: Allows her to finish off weak characters at range, or to weaken them before going in for the kill, so she fires 3 darts at once that causes damage over time (5 / second for each dart?)

Toxic Cloud: basically the same as above, although the vision shouldn't be affected too much, maybe a haze around the opponents vision? The devs did mention Overwatch is about creating a fun game, so to wipe out the opponent's vision would really suck for them. This is also another way for her to escape. The poison should not be too strong tho, or she would be too OP.

Passives: Instead of the reaping, an addition to the wall-climb ability would be good, since Reaper doesn't seem to have gotten his abilities from Talon. Instead, she could be able to jump to another wall while wall climbing? like how Lucio does it, except he can't wall climb of course. However, this should only be able to be done once.





Backstory



Perhaps she should not be completely related to the Shimada brothers? like a half-sister, or a cousin. It would be interesting if she was half Japanese. Overwatch tries to have their heroes come from different parts of the world, and adding another Japanese doesn't seem likely to happen. Also, her the bringing her back to life doesn't seem realistic in my opinion. I know Overwatch is set in 2070+ but still... She could have went into a deep coma or something after being poisoned badly, or was near death, and Talon scientists were able to 'revive' her, but with many side effects?



