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Everything is great. I love it! Perhaps smooth some of the color out not the value or tone. The light source from her arm doesn't really look sense since the candle is right in front of her like the leg is alright unless there's another light up above her it's OK. It's just that there's no sign of a ceiling light. Perhaps have the light hit at the center of her arm. This is just me but maybe put a little white for a refined highlight to make shiny object kind of pop out (?) like her eyes could use white highlights.