Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Right So Take TWO on a critique of this work, this time i have looked at this in detail for anything you can improve on and I have noticed a couple things weird with itFirst a couple compliments, I love how the colors of the store and the stockings compliment each other, very smooth. and the astounding resolution, still very high quality.However, a couple things, Fluttershy's face seems a bit more pointy than it should be, might be a thing with how it's angled, it's most likely the nose, which is either too long or angled too low, also the ear shape is a bit funky.Also this is just personal taste for me probably but i feel there's a bit of a weird disconnect with the use of a prior drawing in the background. It saves time but it produces an unusual focal point because everything else is in a minimalistic smoothed out style while the chryssi in the background has a bit more of a detailed linework.In addition, I'm not sure, this is probably just me, but the front hooves on Fleur Des Lis have a weird angle to them, although that might just be an illusion produced by the presence of that little wavy bit of mane below her elbow.Proportions are really good on the ponies, save for the princesses, which seem a bit funky (instead of making their proportions accurate to the other ponies relative to their height you instead made the legs longer and compensated by removing a bit of neck so as to make them similar in height.), however this can fall into willing suspension of disbelief as artistic license.Detailwork is superb, I can tell you spend quite a bit of time on the walls and background elements, however i personally feel that the ponies in socks thing is just a tad overused, which is why i removed a star for originality.Using mathematics combined with the scores i gave you, This piece is overall, a 4.125/5.In other words, this is a well crafted piece that could use a teeny tiny bit more work but is overall, pretty good.