(review of free book)

This is a very fast-moving short story with lots of action and unexpected changes, some written from the point of view of different characters. That's a clever idea. The jump in scene between the first and second chapters arouses the reader's curiosity, a good device.I enjoyed the story but would have liked it to be longer. There is a lot of action compressed into a short space, which is good but you do need to understand a bit more about the characters. At times it was a bit too fast moving for my preference! Also it would be good to know a bit more about a character before jumping to their point of view.Overall a great story which is too compressed I think into the short-story format, but still very enjoyable. Really hoping for more from this writer, especially if they do a full-length novel.