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This looks very good! The air is incredible, the only thing that pops out and disturbs me a little is the background, which seems improvised and not thoroughly studied like the figure. The blur effect is fine, it just look a bit random and unrealistic in terms of compo and light. Would you say you have paid more attention to the figure than the background? The skin shading is also particularly good,especially smooth and nice on the shoulder, but less so on the face and the neck (where stuff gets messy in terms of transitions I know! ) ANyway hope it helps, My 2 cents!