Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

1st thought about critique request - Are you trying to be different from your usual art style? - looking at ALL your art I can say YES this does look different from the norm - This picture seems to be the 2.0 of Future Ruby, unlike her you didn't need a secondary picture to close up on her face but rather draw Yang at medium negating the use of that technique I've seen you use before.*Note - I went into your gallery to try and piece together what this picture represented to your work as a whole. Because I enjoy your work very much.That being said, I wish that you would write in your description what exactly you were trying to accomplish with these pictures, for me as an engineer I enjoy parameters and knowing what you are trying to create, this would help very much in these critiques.So onto the picture.Vision - Your theme of future is very prevalent here, she looks older, more defined, and much more powerful, maybe not to the extent of Ruby from her picture but the Bike is a good touch. You took traits and qualities that made Yang and expanded them - the bike, hair, gauntlets, etc. Your vision is spot on for what I believe you've established for this theme. In a sense this is future ruby 2.0 because you can tell you've done it before. It presents the theme well.Originality - It presents well, but is the theme good - short answer yes. Now I have noticed in your gallery that you stick with themes and do them multiple times for the characters - this technically is against originality but honestly who cares right? So I will address the theme. I enjoy the theme very much it shows off your ability to expand upon a character and blow everything up - however I have noticed that future always means bigger and better so this is not something new, but no one has done it to the same extreme you have, so to sum up originality - not new concept but you do the concept much better than most.Technique - Now your art has never been confusing to look at but concerning those arms I had a hard time understanding what was happening there. After zooming in when I got home on my computer I could see what was happening but I squinted pretty hard. That is something I don't think any artist can ever avoid because peoples' perceptions are different. But in these portraits I am always left wanting a little more. Seeing your art such as RWBY festival and then seeing this always make me say "man he always makes such good backgrounds I wish he did it on all of his art." I know that is more personal than anything else so I would take that with a grain of salt.Impact - Compared to your other portraits this one sticks out, much like Kancolle x RWBY its big, its great, its overall better than the others. Now compared to your other art such as RWBY Und Panzer it doesn't stick out, but the ladder I view as one of your best. I don't have too much to say on this category mainly because it did its job right, and did it very simple (though the art is complex)Overall - I think the score will come out to 4/5 which sets it comfortably as one of your better artworks (4/5 compared to your other artwork not the majority of Deviantart). It is not your best, but compared to the difference between Ruby and Yang future I am very excited for the next one. I hope this helps, and I hope you continue!*Note I am an Engineer and by no means an artist, so this is average Joe looking at your stuff - I would seek someone who REALLY knows what they are talking about when you ask for a critique.