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Springs: CheckUpskirt- Shot... of course *facepalm*Nice expressions on their faces, and very simple.Cons: maybe try sketching in a background? That's not a big deal though. Ruby's hand's aren't accurate, but if we're going into anatomy, there's a lot more we could talk about.Ruby looks like a cat with the hair sticking out like that... though I don't know if that's really a problem.Your sketch lines on Weiss seem rather zig-zaggy. I wonder if maybe doing retake strokes would help fill in the white spaces when you color things in? Meaning stroke in one direction, and then reset for the next stroke in the same position. (Penstroke, lift pen in air to reposition for next stroke, and then penstroke again). That's just something that came to mind, and I found that that way is easier to shade white space with.