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I don't know if I have a lot to say by way of critique, but I like it. I like the style. The painterly "blurriness" adds to the mythological feel to me. It makes the characters look mysterious; we don't really know what they are (although to be honest, I still don't really feel like I know what a Toa is, even after all of these years, but it isn't like I really follow Bionicle either, I just like the way the sets look, haha). Each of the character's individual pictures each look nice as well.My only thought is that I'm not sure about the position of the text "unity, duty, destiny." Its okay, but I feel a little like it is breaking the horizontal flow from left to right as my eye goes along looking at the different Toa. I feel like I want to look from the guy on the left (Onua, right?) to (is it Gali?) on the right without being interrupted. I feel like the text is making a division, but I'm not sure that there is enough of a division between the characters to need a vertical text division to emphasize it.I would be curious to see how to text looks if it were arranged horizontally. This composition is so linear already (which is fine here) I think it would be worth at least seeing how it looks. Maybe "unity" could go on the line in between Lewa and Patu (that's his name, right?), while "duty" could stay where it is and "destiny" can be between the fire and ice guys (I've quite forgotten their names). However, if you do that, it might be better to come up with two more words to fill up the last two slots. This is all just a thought I have. Fiddle around with it if you wish and if you decide that it looks best where you currently have it, then I won't argue or complain. The image as a whole already looks very nice. It would make a great poster.