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Overall this was a very entertaining comic. The panels were well done, but were all exactly the same size.The pictures within the panels were all very good. The trees look a little stubby but the ponies themselves were almost perfect.I thought the garden path structure was interesting, but people do it often in comics now (I dunno the everyday term for them, we call them Garden Path Stories in Linguistics because they take you down the garden path, and then cause you to realize that your preconceptions from the beginning of the story were 100% wrong like the movie Inception or Now You See Me, or the clip in American Dad where Roger tells everyone about when he was a race car driver and swerves to avoid a baby, and then says "I was that baby").Overall it was very good work.