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I'm kind of underwhelmed.I can see from the various elements and the title what you were trying to accomplish. Penny, the mechanical angel, born from cold, hard technology. Utterly alone, held down by the wires (strings?) keeping her alive. At least, this is what I think you were trying to accomplish... I really don't think that this rendition is a good one.First, colors. As with the vast majority of your work, the colors are extremely muted. While this is great at pulling off a dark, foreboding, or nostalgic feeling, here it makes everything lose contrast with itself. There are so many pieces to the wings, so MUCH of everything, and it's all the same color. Faded black is still black. Gray is just a lighter black. Your lighting barely does anything to counter the issue.Second, composition. Penny is shunted off to the side, right into the frame's blind spot. This has the unfortunate issue of making her be absolutely unimportant inside the frame itself. The machine itself is enormous and ridiculously detailed, and it attracts a lot of attention. Penny's hair has the same muted issue that serves to make her blend in rather than contrast.I think what would've been better is if you had either put her in the center, with the wings appearing to hang off of her like a great weight she was holding, or if you had divided your page into thirds and put her right on one of those thirds. As opposed to 1/5-to-1/6 of a page to the left. What's in a third right now is a glowing green "eye" thing, and that takes up too much attention.(I get that she's a robot and we're trying to show a more mechanical side of her, but that doesn't work by completely dehumanizing her. The great part about your apparent theme is the contrast between human and inhuman.)The flat angle that we're looking at things at was not a good idea. It's easier to draw, certainly, but it makes the scene lose a lot. The cords on the semi-reflective ground would pop out a little more if we backed up and raised the "camera" a little bit. The machine and Penny would have more depth. Everything would pop a little bit more and have more weight to it, if only because at this flat angle, everything is weirdly weightless.(I know they're wings and they're supposed to fly, but I believe the intended effect is to have this very heavy machinery sort of surreally floating, fitting Penny's kind of surreal nature.)The wings look like a skull with feathers sticking out. This is likely by design. Others may be more impressed by its appearance... I'm not one of them. I'm not certain what you could've done to improve it other than just having wings, but this design is just sort of silly, once you figure out that that's supposed to be a skull. That said, I believe this is more of a personal preference issue.I think you should've made the title, your patreon, and your e-mail flush with the floor. Where those are now are very distracting. My eyes go to the letters when I'm trying to pay attention to other things, because human eyes are programmed to go to letters. I think that if it was just a bit lower they wouldn't be so distracting.There are a few things I like. Penny's kneeling position is great. She's all tied up, but the way she's holding herself is as if she's accepted something she doesn't like. She knows it's necessary, but she still feels like a prisoner in many respects.I wasn't entirely certain about the background, but I think I like it. It's very clinical, with the reflective floor making this seem like some sort of laboratory room. It's also a really good contrast for the dark colors and making them stand out.And of course, the detail. While it's all very much the same due to the colors and the fact that there's so much going on (detail exhaustion takes hold), I can still appreciate the eye and effort it takes to make realistic metal like that. There's lots of little dents and scrapes. All the pieces fit together well, with lots of unique joints that, when looking closely, fit into perspective perfectly. If I was just looking at this as a detail study to look at for hours, you'd get 10/10.