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You do the adorable SO WELL! If I ever have children, I hope they can be as cute as your drawing here, because that would just be too perfect.However... As adorable and e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="37" height="25" alt="" title=""/> worthy as this is, it is really out of character for Fluttershy. The disheveled mane, the awkward smile, the braces... Well, I guess I could see the braces, but Fluttershy has always given me the impression that she was raised by stiff-lipped, rich ponies. When she is awkward, she hides her face, and her mane is never out of order, even when she was a little foal. If I could change anything about the picture, however, it would not be to straighten up her mane and soften her smile, I would change the character depicted to AJ. You do such a beautiful job of the tangled mane that I couldn't bring myself to tell you to change it, just who you put it on. AJ would absolutely be in this sort of state when she was a teen filly. Hastily gathered and restrained hair, trying to smile naturally for the cute, popular colt that is standing just a few feet away, flashing those great oral metallics that Granny Smith saved up for 2 years to afford... That would absolutely make this picture perfect.