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I knew you had some good comic talent in you, but there are still some things I would like to say about this comic. To begin with, once again you didn't have spectacular shading (I guess that wasn't your fault), BUT you never drew attention to it by having large detailed scenes. The difference in individual frame size was a nice variation, made he whole thing much more pleasant, the same goes for the shifts in calligraphy and such. One thing that I didn't like about this is that little twi was just in the middle of a field, and I know that this happens plenty of times in the actual show, but you had a choice of where you were going to put her and it was a place with no time reference or points of interest at all. It's not essential to the cartoon but it is what it is. I do like how you used other pre-made sprites and backgrounds, it does improve the quality of the work and a little collaboration never hurt anybody. I'm excited to see where you go with this one. Best of luck.-Michael