You have improved considerably, I would say! The poses are far more dynamic, just for a start. Not that needless moving around is good for its own sake, but it's nice to see SOME change in the pose/posture. The feet in the third and forth panel look odd to me, in the directions they are pointing. But that could just be my perspective being off-kilter. I also really dig her figure in the last panel. It isn't over-blown or oversexed...both of which I like very much, mind you...but it's a well-executed break from the usual.



In short, I love the piece, think you did an excellent job, and hope you continue to improve!