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I think it looks quite well but i can see why people would not like it. But Anyway i still think you did a Pretty good job with it. Anyway From what i can Tell. You Seem to have Great Potential. So keep at it. Also Not Much More i can Say. Also This is my First time Doing a Critique. So hope it ain't bad. Anyway keep up the good work. And try not to let anyone else get ya Down. We all have to start Somewhere. Anyway i gonna try to Wrap this up. Take Care. And keep up the Good Work.