We aren't going say that someone dropped the ball in the following scenes, but, well, yeah -- someone dropped the ball in the following scenes. The characters in the following instances were lobbed up a hefty meatball and, instead of creaming it out of the park, they just kind of let it splat on their feet.

Which is precisely why we asked our readers to rewrite these scenes into what they should've been.


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