osu!maniera P:



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[Normal+]

00:58:638 - can't figure out why this LN ends early .u.

01:13:060 and 01:13:636 - maybe add notes for snares

01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap like on Insane

[Hard]

00:10:176 - I think it's a little unintuitive for this pattern to switch from the right hand to the left hand on an offbeat?

00:09:888 - also here, since there's an accented note too

00:58:638 - are you charting the percussion in the right hand? it doesn't seem to fit but maybe I'm not hearing something :c

01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap

[Insane]

00:32:099 - ooooooo i like this

00:40:176 - wo interesting pattern .o.

01:06:137 - not sure if these jacks fit in this section

01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - I think these might be 1/6 snap

01:17:386 - maybe spread this pattern out, it's kinda biased towards the right

01:17:675 and 01:17:867 - I suggest placing these two notes on the same lane to make the triplet more intuitive

01:41:616 - maybe look over this section? I found the jack patterns really awkward compared to the rest of the map

[Collab Another]

00:09:888 - can I suggest putting the three-note jacks on alternating hands (like 1-1-1-7-7-7-2-2-2-6-6-6) so that it doesn't feel so much harder than the rest of the triplet section?

01:17:771 - using jacks here is a cool idea but the space jacks feel really uncomfortable in the middle of the stream

01:31:233 - I think jacks would fit nicely here since it sounds like a climax!

[Masterpiece]

00:06:715 and 01:41:616 - in my opinion these jacks are already hard enough without being squished into three lanes by the LN

00:14:936 and 00:15:513 and 00:24:744 - in this part of the map, all three 1/4 snap three-note jacks are in the right hand x:

01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - again, might be 1/6 snap

01:18:252 - LMAO vibro while holding down spacebar



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