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Impact Impact

I gave you 4.5 stars for everything except originality (because I have seen a few Chrysalis/Cadence transformation-themed artworks before), because I like it so so much that I would give it 5, but what then if you drew something even more epic and I couldn't show that love it more? You say you are not very good at sparkle and glow effects; well this proves you wrong. This is the perfect swirly glow for the transformation! I love the way the wings of Cadence blend into the wings of Chrysalis. I also like how the swirls of glowing "smoke" (that's what it makes me think of) curl around the parts of the body that are transforming. Her expression is very apt too. Some improvements I think would be the cleanness of the linework (the line of the front foreleg overlaps the wing) and that back foreleg looks slightly wonky to me. I really like it, and keep up the good work!