At first glance, there is nothing wrong with the design. There is nothing wrong with the art, execution wise, which is done brilliantly. Indeed, you don't want there to be anything wrong with the design.



But you get past that gee wiz so-cool factor, you realize that having the nacelles the way they are makes so that if you want to use those torpedo tubes and the Picard maneuver at the same time, or at lease fire torpedoes at warp, you're outta luck!



Correct me if I'm wrong.



And then we have that forward bow section, that is empty. It looks so empty, so lonely. You could've added some pulse phasers, a phaser lance, some more torpedo tubes, or at least a secondary navigational deflector.



Instead, you added only one, lonely phaser array to the bow, and the rest is just, well, empty.



Still, I do enjoy the design otherwise very, very much. Love your attention to detail.