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Before I talk about this, I will say that since I am a traditional artist and do more origami than drawing I have no idea what to rate the Technique.I really enjoy your show-accurate art style and you are very talented at giving these ponies great expressions.As I was reading my thought was that AppleJack and Rainbow Dash were going to seriously regret what they were saying to Luna. As I kept reading, their reactions and Luna's reaction toward their teasing made this thought become even stronger. The cherry on top was that last line. I can only imagine the rest of the mane six coming in to prevent Luna from killing Rainbow and AppleJack.If I had to point something out (and this is mostly a nit-pick) is that it isn't very obvious that Rainbow and AJ are being blown back. If that is what you were trying to portray, than I think that you would've benefited from adding more detail on the last five panels such as wind.All in all, this is a VERY entertaining comic and I can't wait to see more from you.