Hi! I'm here from and I'll give you a critique on this drawing ^^So first of all, let's list what I think you did really well in this :3Her skin: I love the way you shaded it, it looks really natural. It's so pretty ^^The pose: It kind of gives the whole painting a badass-vibe and if this also suits the character (i don't know her, sorry) then it's even better! ^^The hair: Again, the same as whith the skin; I love how natural and silky-smooth it looks :3Your watermark: I know, this may sound pretty dumb but let me explain. I thought it was part of the drawing until I realized that it's actually your watermark. This is pretty smart because art-thieves will probably not see it xDNow, let me come up with a few things where I think improvement/change would be nice:Her clothes: Not the clothes in general; I likethe colors, they fit to Hayley really well. But what I think should be changed is the shading: Her skin and her hair is so nicely shaded and her clothes kind of look a little bit off to me, since they are more or less only flat-colored. I think if you'd shade them the way you shaded the rest too, then it would generally improve your painting. ^^The chinese signs on her shirt: They look prettyblurry which seems a little bit wrong to me because it doesn't really fit to the rest of her outfit? it's kind of hard to explain, but if you did this on purpose, leave it that way ^^The outline: I know, this may be just personal preference but since the shading of the skin and her hair looks so natural, the outlines look a little bit too harsh. I think if you'd leave them out and go for a realistic paintery style, it would look beter (again, if this is your style, just do it that way; I just though I could say this so that you could consider it ^^)Aol in all, this is just sooo prettyKeep up the great work!