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I really like what you tried to do here and because of the depth of this project I am going to critique it, I feel you deserve a good solid review of your artistry I will say that I am no artist myself and I apologize in advance if that discredits anything I am about to say.I personally love how much detail you poured into this work, everything from poor "I drink to forget you" berry punch to all the canon and fanon pairings evident in the piece. This is an amazingly detailed image that reveals something new every time one looks at it. From the setting sun to the tears in Lyra's eyes this is one of the deepest pieces of art I've seen.Technically speaking it is exceptionally well done, however there are many places you could improve your craft the most prominent being lighting. I love the twilight sky but there are highlights in areas that there really shouldn't be and shadows that are missing from certain locations. As an example, and primarily because they are the most obvious couple, Derpy and the Doctor have some odd highlights, the scarf should not be lit as keenly in the foreground since Derpy and the Doctor both would cast shadows on it. Derpy herself is also lit along the edges of her fore and hind legs, considering she is in front of the bridge she should be in it's shadow and the scarf and her own body should be shading her foreleg. I understand that much of this is done to avoid the normal black outlines you see in art, something I very much appreciate, it draws attention to this instead of aiding in the effect. The same thing can be seen on Lyra and Bon Bon, however I would say that Bon Bon's hind legs are the best example of light used correctly in any of the art pieces I've seen, unfortunately the effect is broken by the shading on her front legs.Overall toning back on the higlights in key areas will make for a greater overall impact from the lighting in the places that it needs to be.All of the ponies seem to be proportioned correctly and I adore the amount of personality you've managed to pour into each of them, Berry punch being the best example.Lyra's magical hand is squee worthy and Twilight in Trixie's cape is as adorable as spike with a manly mustache. The only pony that confuses me is Fluttershy who seems to be having a moment of dramatic introspection on the balcony of town hall.Speaking of, you managed to add much of the town to this image without crowding it making for a brilliantly composed piece, personally I would have Carousel Boutique in (though it's possible that I just don't see it at the moment) and some apple trees in the distance to bring some more of the local flavor into the image. Considering how many of the popular ponies there are floating around though this may be over compensation.I really like how you drew the clouds and Canterlot, both are exceptionally difficult to pull off and you did a good job of it. The heart above Canterlot especially feels right in place in the MLP: FiM universe.I love what you attempted here, and the scale of the piece is epic, you have put so much into this that saying anything is wrong with it is almost painful, there is so much detail in this, from 80's Cheerilee to Dash's shades to Vinyl and Octavia and yes even the extra Doctor and Derpy that shows you've put hours and hours of work and, though it sounds cliche, love into this image that I wish I could give you a higher score but with the odd lighting and occasional duplicate pony (Two Pinkies and two Derpy/Doctor's) I can not justify doing so.I love your art, I love your tumbler, I love the pairings and the scope of this art. Please never stop drawing because it is something you excel at. Your talent always makes me smile.