Hi there!

You have some pretty nice shapes going on here! I can tell there is a sense of volume to your studies. There is also a nice rhythm to the middle drawing. However, the pose could be pushed a little more to give it a stronger line of action. I think bending the torso forward would then make a nice curve with the bent legs. This will help the pose feel less stiff then ^^ For the first image, I feel a sense of volume, but the pose seems stiff. There are a lot of straight lines and not much curves in and out, this makes it appear stiff. Looking at animation studies could be useful to check out, such as from Preston Blair in regards to line of action ^^ I would say much like the others that working on the line of action will help lead the eye through the pose. As for anatomy it has a very good sense of the body, especially so in the legs. For the torso, the musculature could be drawn a bit more like you have with the 2nd and third drawing. For the third drawing, I find this one the most appealing, it has a nice curve and differences in lines such as not parallel shapes. There's curves and straight lines, which makes this visually the strongest.



Overall I would say to work on breaking those shapes up with straights and curves to make the shapes stronger and to push the line of action. Hope this has helped ^^









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