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Astounding. I know I've said "amazing" before, I've said it way too many times about too many things. I'm trying to be a little more original with my thoughts on my critiques. So, for starters, let's get the negative out of the way.I think you may have gone just a bit far with the amount of orange that you used, but that's my only real complaint. I mean, looking at this, I know Celestia's coat is white. And what I mean by that is that it would be like trying to tell someone something that they know in their hearts isn't true, and failing at it. It would be like saying that Celestia's coat isn't white would be like trying to convince people that the sky isn't blue, if that makes any sense at all. Okay, enough about that. Now, onto the positive.I like ("love" is a bit too strong in this instance) the way Sunset's eyes are lit up when she's looking up at the sky, as well as Celestia's smile. It's a great "what if" scenario of what might have been before the events of the show. It's fresh, it's new, and it's great.