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Fantastic! I love how you developed the story frame by frame! The beginning strong and clear, then by each frame the strength that fluttershy had displayed is slowly fading away. I also really love how you show us that you can do more than one art, the simple pony, then ba bam! A fully detailed, three headed realistic lifelike dragon! Another thing I love about the story is the outcome of the situation, how the fire breathing dragon shoots flames of fury directed at fluttershy for telling him to back off her friends, this shows that maybe this dragon is telling flutters to back off instead, then finally in the last frame fluttershy is shown wearing a body cast due to the burning, this is displayed through her mane and tail which are showing black markings from the fire. In this same frame, spike knew that, that dragon was very dangerous but in fluttershy's defence she says "I thought it only had one head..." Leaving us (the audience) in a, well, LOL state! Overall I loved everything about this comic! The storyline the art! FIVE STARS!