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Artistically, it's great, if a little simple. I am particularly fond of the character styling here. It reminds me of a cross between Calvin and Hobbes and another comic, the name of which I can no longer recall.The ice cream stand could use a bit more detail. The block-style vector graphics don't mesh well overall in my opinion.I'm also thinking you're a bit low on the amount. It is a very good way to point this annoying little habit of theme parks. Hopefully they were 1-liter bottles at least?And now, some filler text to satisfy the 100 word minimum because deviantArt thinks that I am incapable of providing usable feedback in less than that.