It's hard for me to really enjoy this story. Way too many layers of "This should not have happened." While I can let slide Judy being enough of a sadist to keep her friend enslaved and Anja being enough of a pushover to let herself be bullied into wearing the collar, everything about the way the tech works breaks my suspension of disbelief.





Maybe it's because I'm a programmer, but the way it all just accepts the unexpected and rolls with it is the exact opposite of real programming, where actual software will stop whatever it's doing and pass the issue off to something or someone higher up that knows what its doing. In a case like this where human lives and safety are involved, it's almost always "someone".







It starts with the apartment just "taking the reigns" of Anja's collar. No way would it be able to do that without some kind of pairing process, otherwise some unsavory person steal/kidnap any maidbot whose collar has lost connection to their remote.

Any piece of tech like that which isn't made by a supervillain would upon losing connection to its only trusted controller just shut down and return control to the wearer.







Next is the apartment control system. Upon scanning Anja, finding out she is human and not registered to the apartment building, and failing to contact the owner, it would have either contacted someone else, put her off to the side until it could contact the owner, or released her rather than assume ownership.





Lastly, the building itself. Assuming management had known of and enforced those flaws in the system, no amount of contracts and legalese would override the fact that the system, as it's set up, is a massive human rights violation, even if we allow for a setting in which consent-based slavery is legal.





Thank you for reading my essay on why this porn story is unrealistic.

