HRHSHSHSHHSG. Thats my first impression.

Position reallly good. I kinda get the feeling you love to draw from the wormseye perspective cuz it kinda makes the chars rly mighty.

Magic is really cool looking. By making it so small it kinda seems super powerful just like lil universe (intended ?).

Armor looks good all parts seem to be interconnected and it seems to be comfortable.

Hands look real good.

I feel like her hair is growing a lil tooo much on her forehead cuz it seems so small even tho her hair is combed back.

Now one question. Why does her collar fold over on one side but on the other on it doesn't that seems off.

Face rly gorgy and I like her strong jaw cuz shes a fighter. The skin just seems a tad too smooth to be real.

And now her legs. I kinda feel like you got a little lazy there . Im not exactly sure what makes me feel uncomfortable about her leg positon but I think that it suggests that she has no ass and her left leg seems super thin.

Now lighting you did the magic light thingy really well that it reflects on everything. But I think that the piece is kinda too lit up. I feel the parts in the dark should be darker because if not it suggest a pre strong light source somewhere else that strangely doesnt reflect on her clothes.

Highlights. Im not sure if you intended her outfit to look wet. The material looks super without the hightlights but with it kinda looks wet dunno ^^



Ok as always take it with a grain of salt I am not an expert and yeee amazig piece I love to see you improve