8D Harpies! Love her feet~ Yay bird feet lol. (yay monster girls in generalIf you would like my personal opinion of the levels/lightness of it... I think you could go darker. Also, you may enjoy how it would look if you turned down the saturation a little bit... Unless the sepia tone is deliberate. But if you're wanting it darker, I would say less saturated colour - otherwise it would just turn icky dark brown.K, so I hope you're okay that I poked around with it a bit, just to show you: sta.sh/077c8k8rhva All I did was turn the levels down a decent amount, then I reduced the saturation by about 75%, but not quite all the way so that it still had an earthy vibe.And I've always felt that if you're at all worried that your pencils aren't all that striking looking.... adding a slight fill just makes them pop. Especially since you already added lots of sweet shading to this character - With the slight fill on top I personally feel like it makes your lines pop a lotI hope I'm not like... crossing any lines or anything editing it without your call. I just wanted to show you how I think it can really pop, without really having to do much at all to it besides playing with settings.(Your lines are great btw. You have a really really cool lineart style)