Hi there, I'm from ProjectComment. WOW, WOW, WOW!!! Where do I begin? The colours, the swirls in the background, the highlights in the clouds. So well shaded and toned. But there are a couple things that seem a bit out of place. To me, the smooth texture of the background seems to contrast the sharper edges of the white character, while the girl seems like a mix of both. While this might be the goal (to highlight the different characters and set them apart from the background), it seems to be fairly jarring and therefore less smooth. Maybe just choose one technique to focus on and it might make the piece flow more. But I hope I’m not being too critical, there are also a lot of awesome aspects that make up for the little mistakes. For example, the detailing on the signpost is amazing, and the randomness of the directions seems to work well with the unpredictability of the background. I love this so much, even without knowing much of the backstory, or much about the characters. You have done well to make it viewable to people like me who haven’t seen the story before, and allow us to make our own interpretations of what is happening.

Very well done, you need to do more like this!