Well I for one don't true this mysterious blue flame. Wisps tend to lead you astray (although they don't normally talk).



(In panel 2, "What are you?" would be more natural than "What is this?" In panel 7, "lack of prestige" is incorrect; it should be "lack prestige" or less commonly "lack in prestige." In panel 10, it looks like you're using two apostrophes ('') in place of each quotation mark ("); most people won't notice the difference, but it isn't strictly correct, and the way the opening quotation mark is on the wrong line does slightly call attention to it. In panel 14, it should be "think," not "thought"; since there's a helper verb to conjugate, the main verb doesn't conjugate.)