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AHAHAHAHAHA... RIP Ray... you will be missed e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="380" title="(Sad)"/>.Overall, I'm going to be looking at this mainly in terms of content and like a manga strip, not like your usual pieces, so let's have a looksy.Content wise: it's a great joke and hysterical, and fans of RWBY tend to be fans of RT, so it's highly improbable that one would not get it.Ironwood doesn't really... look like Ironwood. I mean I don't want to fault you for that since the comic is just as entertaining, but that is something that definitely catches my eye. Reminds me of the Crimson Chin for some reason lol. And in that case, one could easily replace Ironwood with another character and the impact of the comic would be the same. The only reason I figured out it was Ironwood was because I knew which scene you were talking about. Now, one could argue that any RWBY fan would know what scene this was, and so this argument is somewhat invalid, and that is true, but it's something that came to my mind. Ironwood doesn't look ugly, he just definitely looks different to me lol.That problem doesn't affect Ray's ghost because, well... Ray's dead. "I'M NOT DYING!!!" Still hear his voice in my head today.Overall, the picture is simple and nice. For this kind of content, short, sweet, simple, and direct is best so great work on the execution of it. The only real issue I may have had with it is that Ironwood doesn't resemble Ironwood enough for me. I especially love Ray's rose shirt xD