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Haha, did I start a movement? We need a couple million other people to come behind us so we can get a season 3 of this show...I think the best part about this picture is all of the flowing motion. The skirt, chain, and the little wisps of hair especially hint towards the action of her twisting to strike the pose. It's really effective!The other great aspect is the lighting. The background shows a ton of light pouring in from the get go, then the circle on the floor adds even more interesting lighting. The particle effects are really great too! From a technical aspect, I agree that you could probably have had more shadow to contrast with all the lighting, especially on the forearm in front of the window. No doubt adding shadow would be tricky, and one could argue the windows in the back add enough ambient lighting that there wouldn't be much shadow.You did a really great job conveying the spirit of the character, and I think the lighting played a key part in that. All the soft lighting gives the picture a daydreamy quality which is perfect for fanart of this character!I'm also happy to see that you used the umbrella! I had thought about using that somehow as it's in a lot of her chuuni art, but I doubted I could pull it off. You did a really good job drawing it at a challenging angle! I'm also very jealous of your frills! Showing the belt and the chain also give her that mildly punk aesthetic!As far as technical aspects that I think you could improve upon, the main issue I see is line thickness. I find it helpful to do my lineart with a single thickness and then go back and adjust it later (Granted I think you have to have your lineart in a vector layer to use some of the tools in CSP). There are some lines like the rightmost strand of hair and the collar that have really thick lines, when things like the hand holding the umbrella could be thickened to show it coming closer to the viewer.On a final note about anatomy, her legs seem too close together, and the point where they would converge seems off. Rikka is a bit pear shaped and has reaaaally wide hips.Overall, I really like it! You really nailed it with the atmosphere!