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Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

First off, this artwork is what caused me to read the story. Not many works do that.(My understanding/interpretation of) Vision:You have masterfully captured this scene in your art. The pain that Rainbow is suffering, the love these two share and the sympathy that Twilight has for Rainbow are all elements of this piece that connect with the reader and the story. The steam is well done without being in the way or funny looking. The tears that Rainbow is shedding are subtly captured, and the sorrow that Rainbow's pain gives Twilight is evident on her face.Originality: There are a few things to consider here.1. The idea (the scene) isn't yours. It's from the fic.2. The interpretation (visualization) and presentation (artwork) is original, and has shaped my interpretation of the scene in a way I was very happy with.3. The talent that this piece requires matches the talent that Ardesnfax himself so wonderfully demonstrated in his story.In summary, I give you a full rating for envisioning a believable situation/visual shot of this scene, and for clearly and skillfully making that idea a real thing.Technique: Since I don't have much experience in this area, I will keep it short. The more I look at this image, the more I notice. I see the shine on their manes, I notice the discreet fog from the humidity, I see the scrapes on Rainbow's body, but each thing I notice is another elaboration on an already fantastic piece.Impact:...You got me to read the fic. This story changed my life. It has become my all-time favorite story. Time for a short background story. I grew up reading, and I continued to read all through my childhood. I am now in college, and I still read in my free time. I find it more enjoyable than any TV show or movie, more involving than any game. Now you might understand how significant it is when I say that this is my number one favorite story of all time. I am reluctant to even refer to it as a 'fic' due to its quality.Thank you.