There's also her ear that bugs me, the shape doesn't feel right...It shouldn't merge into one line with the side of her head. they usually start at the side of the eye and finish a bit before the top middle part, unless the head is looking up or down, then it gets a bit more complicated.

her eyes and face look more like a square than a circle, which wouldn't matter if it was properly executed under a style, but that's not quite the case here.

just look at other artists, see how you can apply what you like from their art to yours, because that's how you develop a style. that, and by exaggerating what YOU think looks good. (a good knowledge of anatomy is required. after all, you do have to learn the rules in order to break them)



I'm not quite good at explaining things, and I'm not quite used to doing constructive criticism, but I hope it helps, somehow. Last thing is that the eyebrows in MLP don't show unless they're covering up the eyes, but if you really want to show them... Eyebrows, whether it is on animals, humans or cartoon characters, always point towards the nose bridge, unless they're moved intentionally to show anger or surprise, etc.

for one, the front legs on ponies don't bend that way. think of it like your arm if you were in that position. the one difference is that instead of a hand, it's a hoof, and the forearm is a bit longer than the rest.