No offense but HDR is the new lens flare. Use no Overuse.The location is great, only the composition could be a bit better. The holiday Inn sign is blocked by her head, the garbage bin is nicked by her sleeve. These are really small things but still crucial in a great composition. It's hard to pay attention to every little detail. The difference between an amateur and a pro is the quantity of stuff they can check between every shot.The head photographer at my intern job always said: "Become the master of the moment". And the understudy immediately adds: "and of the modelThe rest is excellent. Best picture so far.