Nice

So visiting the portal is like going to a big casino there are somany slot machines and tables, somany shiny and interesting sounds, And so when I find something like this in the portal it puts a smile on my face because its like I am back in the casino once again. This was entertaining the "VOICE" work was pretty good, I wouldnt mind some subtitles and maybe make this one a bit longer.

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I wouldnt mind some subtitles and maybe make this one a bit longer

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