legs freakishly long and it looks like she stole talon's hoodie. even if it's in "rough concepting" stage or whatever i don't think its that difficult to draw a straight line for the shaft of the staff. no offense but you really haven't done anything with the design, just put on a skimpy bikini and added a (badly painted) instance of a cliche staff design. also why would she be standing like that over her victim? she's a mage, an assassin from a distance, not a warrior. It's out of character and jarring.