Hmm. Your style shows promise. I'd say that with some more sharpness and more definition it could be even better, but as is, you show good understanding of how to shape the characters and make a good, beautiful pose. Do keep on practicing, but I'd say you're on the right track.

Also, Sunset, what are you doing to me? I started out dismissive of you and now I'm quietly falling for you. And not even because of the bikini thing, not at all. There's something about her in the new arc that makes her nigh-irresistible to me. Might be because I fell for a girl who was remarkably similar to her before. But in any case, welcome to the crush club, Sunset. You'll enjoy your stay.