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I can see what you were going for in this drawing, and you pulled off ten fold! The line work is amazing, the shading is just right, and the characters look expressive enough to show the emotion of the piece, I would like to see a little bit more background though, but if that I see a weakness then I can understand,All in all this a great piece and you seem to have a amazing grasp on emotions and shading, but I would just like to say that Rarity's tail looks cut off when it touches the floor, but other than that, great work!