ForHey there!This drawing is deceptively simple. Your use of flat colors and black lines, versus shading and faded lines create a strange balance that emphasizes its qualities. While your title is straightforward and explicit, the friendly look of the girl and the bus in the background keeps me guessing. Of course, the bus is a clever way to avoid having to draw a detailed scene, but it gives the impression that in its simple presentation, there is more behind the narrative of the artwork than this single moment. (Ignoring that I see you based if off a photo. Also, I can't quite figure out what the text in the window says, but it might help me interpret it better.)However, her neck is very long, as is her right arm. Exaggeration, especially in the human figure, is popular, but as the style suggests more realism than distortion, I categorize that as a flaw. Her left arm, as well, Looks perhaps bigger in width than it should be, or would benefit from shading. The sidewalk looks more like kitchen linoleum and ends rather abruptly where the road begins. Creating more depth in the ridges of the concrete panels would make it look more like slabs than tiles.Despite this, the artwork is able to make significant impact on the viewer and maintain a style that compliments itself. These flaws are trivial and you have at large achieved greatly. Nice work!