Hey dude there's a problem here this drawing that I think kinda still persists in your art

It's very intricately detailed, theres a lot going on, all these small architecture things, dirt and everything. It must have taken a fuckton of effort





But when you view it from a good distance all that stuff gets lost and what's left looks kinda bland, objects and characters mix and its hard to tell what is where.





It's especially visible where two walls overlap (on the lower-right from where the chjaracter's legs are): those two walls are considerably far apart, but the're almost the same in tone! It makes it look weird to a human eye on a subconcious level.





You should consider the thing that I think is called air perspective. The further the object is from us, the lest contrast it has, it's almost like you put some fog, or air (as Leonardo da Vinci put it) between you and the object. Its very easy to do digitally and it focuses the eye on the right things.





You need to up your contrasts in your more complex pics. Contrast is what attracts vievers attention; important focal points of a picture should have more contrast and detail while unimportant background stuff should have less. Well-trained professionals can get away with just using a stroke or two on say, feet. By the way, you simplier drawings with single characters rarely have this propblem.







There's a bunch of kinds of contrast beside the obvious tonal one, I strongly recommend that you look up some good info on composition.





I didn't mean to talk down to you in any way, I hope this all is really helpful, your drawings are cool and you obviously put a lot of effort in them, but they could use some fundamental technical improvements. That's all inobvious stuff that most people need to be taught by others. It took some great artistic minds to figure this stuff after centures after all.

