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Ignore my star ratings really. The originality of this piece isn't what matters. From a technical standpoint, I honestly don't see much wrong with the animation, I honestly love it. The only thing that doesn't quite sit right is the lack of weight shown on the landing, It's more of a personal taste thing but maybe the body could squash more on the landing before moving right back up. The rest is about as good as it gets and flows smoothly, this is some quite impressive stuff. I only 'critique' this piece because it was 'asked for' I don't feel like I have much authority over this sort of thing.