Look at it this way, Rei: you look AMAZING for your age. And you're going to keep that gorgeous look for a long time.



I think you did a great job in conveying the scene: I can easily imagine Rei with her face in the paper, engrossed in her work. Suddenly, the door clicks open and Nepgya comes in, calling out to Rei as she enters. Surprised, Rei lifts her head and sees... And all of that's compressed into two speed lines and the placement of a speech bubble.



Also, Rei's hair looks extra fluffy here. Along with the slightly baggy shirt and that precious facial expression, she looks so soft and huggable.