Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

(pirate talk) Argh! That be a good idea! Commonly, t' masthead o' a ship would be a a mermaid, but this ship *is* t' mermaid! I love her facial expression (I usually always love t' facial expression). You always make t' characters come alive, and that's what you did here. I can see t' excitement in Becky's eaye, t' fear in t' jumpin' jack tar's face, t' boldness o' t' pirate crew. I like t' parrot."For vision, I give you five stars. It's genius how you thought of making the ship fit around her like a harness or saddle. At first I thought that Becky must always stay close to surface or she will drown her crew, but since she is strapped to it, it would be easy for her to leave the ship at port and have some free time in the deep sea.Originality is also a 5 because I have never seen an idea like this before, nor have I ever thought of it myself. Good job!Technique is a 5 because the style and angle/perspective is amazing, as usual. The only thing I would think to tell you is that with ships and people so detailed, the clouds could have been worked on to look a little more "cloud-like."And as far as Impact goes, I also think it merits a 5, because this piece had purpose (even though it was a day late for the purpose) and it succeeded in telling the story you wanted to convey. There is a story in this piece.