Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Even as a old watcher of yours, I am rather impressed with what you've done here.You've managed to capture a very intense scene, literally violence in motion. Your attempt at a forced perspective, whilst lacking a sense of "fierce-ness" that I would have personally liked, it still works really well with the blurring effect. The contrast in color between the eye and the rest of the "dirty" palette creates an interesting off-center focal point. The environment correlates well even when it contains mostly browns; the illusion of disturbed dust.In every portion of the frame, there is something worth looking at, so a great use of the Rule of Thirds. Even without your description, your storytelling is simple and clear, the use of the "tubes" definitely helps set the stage for the "Science Experiment Gone Horribly Wrong" trope.