Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Critique by ALARIS-HYN 1 minute, 27s agoVision: What can I say, you don't only have tremendous vision but your execution is just phenomenal when materializing it. It is truly magnificent.5/5 - 10/10Originality: Everything, as character goes, seems quite original and the very transformation. How ever I would have had rather you've gotten yourself a sound artist to moderate and even generate original sounds like the constant power chirps and the DBZ sounds. The chirps eventually become jarring (using head phones) and can hurt a little, not much but some what it wont allow me to stay for long. I know it might be the point to be silly and give it a sense of tribute. How ever I try to see new things and uniqueness. The came across as distracting, which is a shame when you've put this much work into it.4/5 8/10Technique: I would have rather the final product would be the character more relaxed with his new form rather than have stayed stiff and charging his power up for the rest of the loop but now that I see it better it's a good pose none the less, I just feel like it could use an ending. Speaking of which, something I like is when the loop is not noticeable, some carelessly leave the loop end and beginning to different but in here it's a constant flow-y movement. the colors are impacting, well moderated, particle effects whimsical and moderate. Everything seems in order. I sorta enjoyed the fact that his voice changes and I cant understand what he said after it became super muffled but that adds to the intensity so I don't complain about it4/5 - 8/10Impact: the sequence was amazing and it gave me the eagerness and wish to see this guy succeed and move on to the next part of the battle and I don't even know who this is. that speaks a lot when you can just get a person super hyped up.4.5/5 - 9/10