Overall, nice image! The narrative intrigues me. I like the color variation in the grass and the rocky textures you created. You used color nicely to establish your fore, mid, and background rocky bits. A few points to consider, though. The human is just barely off the dead center of the image, which causes my eye, at least, to keep getting stuck in the middle bottom of your image. I wonder how the overall composition would work if she were nudged a bit more to the right, closer to the 2/3 area. The far titan, closer titan, and girl arrangement also pulls my eye to that lower left area instead of keeping my attention flowing over the whole image with occasional rests. Adding some blue to the distant hot air balloon pushes it back nicely, but I feel like it's missing a bit of light and shadow contrast. The closer balloon, I think, sits too close in the foreground because that red is just as saturated (if not more so?) as the girl's scarf. It almost appears to be a small toy floating several feet above and behind her head, rather than something full size up in the sky. Knocking down the saturation and/or introducing some blues might help push that back to it's intended place in the sky. I'd personally like to see a tad more tone or color variation in the sky, there's not a whole lot of change from the horizon to the upper limits (if you were to remove the clouds), which kind of flattens things and detracts from the sense of scale. Speaking of which, that little flock of birds is beautiful, but messes with my understanding of scale when compared to the titan, the balloons, and those distant flying craft. Perhaps just shifting them lower in the sky, and either shrinking them up a tad or adding some atmospheric perspective could easily solve that. Finally, I assume the further titan is just a cut and paste/clone of the foreground one? Totally fine way to handle things, I do it myself, but I would suggest doing it earlier on in your painting so that you can light them both the same (so clone at the preliminary stage, once you've worked out the silhouette, then paint the lighting on both separately). There's also a bit too much contrast on that back titan when compared to the further balloon, which has very little. The further away, the less contrast (light and dark both appear closer to the center of the grey scale the further away something is).



I hope that was constructive, if not nit-picking. It really is a great piece, I won't claim that my own skills are on par with it, but those were my observations. Hope they help!