Some constructive criticism here, you do great on the general tone and most of the anatomy and the coloring is perfect with everything being blue until Emily comes in, but I think you could seriously work on the faces in here. I think it's a little too stylized the mouth is up where the nose should be on the last panel and their noses are nonexistent, it kind of changes the whole thing so that it goes right past cute and into sort of disturbing and weird. At least that's my opinion on it.