I think that you did a fantastic job with DoD and i know you're gonna finish it in your style... I'm not worried about that. I'm little sad because the end of the story with Dana is near but it's the right time to finish it. As for your new project i think that you don't need to make some drastic changes, renders i would leave the same as DoD. What would I love to see in your new project is similarly forbidden love story but this time between mom and son, but from your perspective and with your writing and I know you wouldn't include some voodoo shit, rape, blackmailing, etc.... I already see that it would be a epic visual novel.