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As most have said, the style, color and so forth are excellent. I won't rehash what they've said, instead I'll pick out the few things I think you could have done to improve this work.The Camera angles on the first two panels are great. The shallow worm's eye shot helps hit home ObiWan's sense of betrayal and the intense medium shot in the second shows Anakin's descent very well.However, the last two are very flat angles and the poses you use rob it of a lot of the dynamics that you could have used. To your credit, they are somewhat realistic but in this medium, you can add a lot of punch to a scene with a more dynamic pose and camera angle.Particularly the last panel. The painting of the lava is great but the camera is dead flat. There's no real depth to the platform they're on and I noticed I couldn't really tell how far they were from the fire. The poses are kind of static. One of the tricks that they use in the film is to widen the blade to give it a sense of motion. In your work, the blades are always depicted as a straight line but if you rewatch the actual scene ( [link] ) you'll notice that whenever the blades are in motion, they widen considerably with the motion. It adds a lot of power to movements of the lightsaber.That being said, the impact in your character's facial expressions makes up for it. I don't think it's coincidental that they last panel has the least emotional punch and the least focus on the character's faces and that the panels with the most emotional impact focus the most on the character's faces. Certainly the strength of this piece.