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Re: La Raza remarks

She got it!!!! Sent from my iPhone On Jul 13, 2015, at 12:42 PM, Dan Schwerin <dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com> wrote: Good fix On Jul 13, 2015, at 12:27 PM, Mandy Grunwald <gruncom@aol.com> wrote: Maybe the way to deal with Joel's concern about Basta -- is to say it in English first. "I have one word…enough! basta!" *Mandy Grunwald* *Grunwald Communications* *202 973-9400* ----- thanks, joel. that's very helpful. On Mon, Jul 13, 2015 at 9:58 AM, Joel Benenson <jbenenson@bsgco.com> wrote: > My one big concern is that we are tending to weaken the core argument of > her campaign: When she says “to make the economy work for everyone” --- > that sounds like something anyone could say and doesn’t feel like it taps > any values enough. > > ALT – Trying to get something a little more visceral/emotional in here in > what otherwise is still a pretty intellectual speech because we’re largely > using our econ speech. > > I’m running to revive the basic bargain of America: if you do you work > hard and do your part you should be able to get ahead and stay ahead. That > bargain and the ideals that you and I believe in are what always made us > great: that we are at our best when lift each other up and leave non one > behind; when we have each other’s back and don’t turn our backs on each > other; when we recognize that families are the backbone of our country and > when families are stronger, America is stronger.” > > *From:* Margolis, Jim [mailto:Jim.Margolis@gmmb.com] > *Sent:* Monday, July 13, 2015 9:43 AM > *To:* Dan Schwerin; Joel Benenson; Mandy Grunwald; John Podesta; Huma > Abedin; John Anzalone; David Binder; Jennifer Palmieri; Kristina Schake; > Robby Mook; Jake Sullivan; Maya Harris; Amanda Renteria; Marlon Marshall; > Brian Fallon > *Cc:* Lauren Peterson > *Subject:* Re: La Raza remarks > > Dan, I know time is tight. So just two quick notes. > 1. When she does the value of fixing the immigration system: ”Fixing > our broken immigration system would lower the likelihood of exploitation > and suppressed wages – and potentially create billions of dollars in > additional tax revenue. And the positive effects will ripple out across > our economy. " > > I would add for emphasis at the end:* And the positive effects will > ripple out across our economy, benefiting everyone in the nation.* > > 2. She better practice Basta or it’s gonna sound like… "I have one > word for you:* bastard*! " > > > *From: *Dan Schwerin <dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com> > *Date: *Monday, July 13, 2015 at 8:37 AM > *To: *Joel Benenson <jbenenson@bsgco.com>, Mandy Grunwald <gruncom@aol.com>, > GMMB GMMB <jim.margolis@gmmb.com>, John Podesta <john.podesta@gmail.com>, > Huma Abedin <ha16@hillaryclinton.com>, John Anzalone <john@algpolling.com>, > David Binder <David@db-research.com>, Jennifer Palmieri < > jpalmieri@hillaryclinton.com>, Kristina Schake <kschake@hillaryclinton.com>, > Robby Mook <re47@hillaryclinton.com>, Jake Sullivan < > jsullivan@hillaryclinton.com>, Maya Harris <mharris@hillaryclinton.com>, > Amanda Renteria <arenteria@hillaryclinton.com>, Marlon Marshall < > mmarshall@hillaryclinton.com>, Brian Fallon <bfallon@hillaryclinton.com> > *Cc: *Lauren Peterson <lpeterson@hillaryclinton.com> > *Subject: *La Raza remarks > > Afternoon remarks attached. Pls take a look at the Trump hit. > Thanks > Dan > > This email is intended only for the named addressee. It may contain > information that is confidential/private, legally privileged, or > copyright-protected, and you should handle it accordingly. If you are not > the intended recipient, you do not have legal rights to retain, copy, or > distribute this email or its contents, and should promptly delete the email > and all electronic copies in your system; do not retain copies in any > media. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender > promptly. Thank you. >