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All the prepositions look good, and the shadows are all on the right places. I also like that you created some movement in the piece by adding the flowing cape! This is really well done! I love the pose and the lighting!All the prepositions look good, and the shadows are all on the right places. I also like that you created some movement in the piece by adding the flowing cape!





To the things you could improve. I already mentioned the shadows - they are all in the right places, but I would darken them up a bit. Don't be afraid to go dark! It will just add more contrast to the piece and make it more interesting to look at.





Also, add more detail. Yes, it will take longer time that way, but the result will look even more realistic. This especially counts for her face - give her cheeks and draw some more shadows on her nose bridge! Yes, she is originally an anime character, but that doesn't mean she was born with a totally flat face!



