this makes me ashamed of liking cinnamon pie. this makes me want to kms, and dont say " do it then " as thats an overused comeback and gets older than world of warcraft did when overwatch came out. now, for a better critiuqe. this work needs mature content filters on it. not because im a pissy parent wanting everything to be kid friendly. yea, you can have your porn, and share it with other people who jerk to " milf mom " but, deviantart has a mature filter for a reason. fucking kids are seeing this shit and thinking its the norm, its not.

im not kinkshaming either, we all have our kinks whether its a fetish or the norm, but please put a mature filter on it, and most of your innapropriate or suggestive pictures and fanfics. now for the actual critiuqe.



First of all, no background. if you cant do one, crop the image and make it backgroundless. this makes it seem alot more finished. secondly, even if its an anthropromorphic goat, make the proportions atleast SOMEWHAT correct. the breasts and thighs are extremely big compared to the head and arms. second of all, the face. too plump of cheeks to match her body style. if you have a fatter character, she needs a fatter face. this character model would need an ideally weighted face. this one has the face of a uhm... 600 pound person. as well, are those horns or pieces of cardboard covered by fur? make a separation to the horns, and look at a real goat for inspiration.



Finally, the actual face, and emotions. why does toriel have 2 sets of fangs? she only has 1 pair in game. also, usually that kind of eye emotion is only used when someone is suspicious. the correct eye emotion would be wide eyes with pupils cover 1/2 of the actual " white space " for the personality matching the picture it absolutely doesnt. toriel is a rather shy and compassionate character who has that grandmother/mom feel to her. but she can hate, for example she doesnt like asgore one bit, even calling him a pathetic whelp. this character on the other hand, seems to be a sexually devious milf.



all in all, this gets -69 bleach pies out of 100