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although this is slightly original, and to be fair the look is nice I just can't enjoy this! And the fact that i's stupid, and not even so stupid that its funny, its just stupid enough to be... STUPID! And i'd just stop here, but thanks to deviantart's 100 word maximum, i can complain even more! There is also the fact that i'm pretty sure they were still using chariots, so why do they have a truck! Another thing why does Twighlight care, for starters i'm pretty sure Twighlight knows the bank gives away pens (or in this case quills) away, so why does that matter! And another thing, what are twighlights standards! They kill King Sombera, shes like "thats fine" but stealing a quill from a bank that literally dishes them out for free is going to far?! Yes i am a brony, but this is just AWFUL! And my rating is unfair because for some DUMB reason my laptop won't display 0 stars!