



The crossover is funny and I dig the humor here with the puppies!

There have been some comments on proportions and color, so I will focus on your lines and lighting.



First, I think the most successful thing about this is the cloak. I think your draping folds on the cloak are really great, and the light / shadows on it are pretty convincing. On areas like the pants, I think less is more when it comes to folds- it's confusing here, especially on his crossed leg. Next time, try to think of which direction the fabric is being pulled towards.



As for shading, you could do two things to improve this:



1) Push the direction. Where is the light coming from in this? From above? Then why is there shading above his right-handed glove? Why don't the undersides of his pants have a darker area? Little things like that can distract your viewer.



2) Soft shading vs Hard shading. I can see you did a little hard-edge shading on the arms and cloak, but the rest seems to be gently-blurred soft shading. Soft shading works great for large uniform areas, but it gets confusing where it meets a lot of edges- like the chair for example. There's too much soft edge shadow in between the panes of the chair. Most of it could be in shadow with a couple hard edges for where the light curves over the top and the arms.



One more thing you could play around with is the color of the lines. If you have that in a separate layer and lock it, you can experiment with changing the colors of the body edges, for example, so that they stand out more from the chair.



Anyway, I know that's a lot, but scene itself is still really good! You have a knack for interesting your audience with these situations and please maintain that.

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