Now unlike your Fluttershy work, which you did LATER than this one, you got the shaping and shading of the inside of her back-legs done better here. That confuses me, but nice job here. There's that line on her chest again (like in the Pinkie Pie one). Obviously I don't have a good feel for real pony anatomy. Screw it, I'm going to Google...



Ohhh, there IS a crease there between two muscles in the chest! Great job for realistic accuracy; I had NO IDEA that was there! Now about that line on her neck going up to her jaw. Those lines on either side look like veins or something, but they feel a bit too deep and pronounced. It makes the front of her neck look a TAD caved in. Maybe it's the thickness of the line, or maybe it's because the shadow looks like it starts more strictly along that line on her neck. Either way, you now have me comparing your MLP art to real horses from Google, and their necks, while showing some shape, are still relatively round. Maybe change the shape of the edge of the shadow? I'm no artist, so Idk if that would "fix" it.



Your head shaping is still fantastic, which is hard to find. You don't have much hair detail, but your minimalist color shading is effective enough and consistent.