1 nitpick I'd give is, be careful with the lines, especially when coloring, the way we see things and especially when there's colors it's easy for people in general to notice inconsistencies, here in that case would be the lines (outlining I think it's called ? I don't know \ -_- / ).

Otherwise nothing else to point out, I like the perspective you're trying to pull off with the hair or the arms, with one being behind and the other in the front, even though it's overall basic (says the guy who can't draw for shit >_>) I find it enjoyable to watch.



It'll take time but with practice you'll certainly get better, well as long as your own personal stuff doesn't step over your own passion and you keep up the effort.