Okay this is my first review ever so im just gonna go ahead and point out my likes an dislikes about this story. Btw anything in () is just me talking towards the author and interruping the flow of my review >~> dont judge

likes: the story has an interesting begining that makes me want to continue reading. I also enjoy your attitude towards people correcting grammar or pointing out things that don't make sense... (Celestial stop sneaking in there lmao.) Fast updates! Gives me plenty to read in my free time that a pluss no matter what! (Though it would be best to take a break every now and then and be sure you have a planned out plot and filler chapter ideas for buying time. Though i say filler but you can (as in would be nice but not needed) throw in some character development or foreshadowing) next i do enjoy the personality of the mc though he is still mostly mysterious to me so it feels like watch a cool guy do cool stuff more than feeling like im in his place struggling with him. (that is not a bad thing unless you didn't want to give that vibe.) okay i'll stop here cause i dont want to discuss plot. (Me no like spoilers in reviews :P)

Dislikes: I dislike how the family views the mc as if there is only two options love or hate (btw hate isnt an opposite of love you can care for a person you dislike.) some of the relationships could be more.. Complex. I hate time skips where nothing interesting happens cause it is hard for me to believe nothing interesting happened especially in these kinds of stories (personal opinion take with grain of salt) before and after time skip personalities havent changed much at all annoying people kept being annoying. People with little back story stayed with little backstory For a while i still know nothing about most characters besides things like they like flashy spells or they are perverted, smart yet naive, and basic descriptions one or two character roles feel forced (you dont notice unless you take the time to think about why that person would even have developed in that way though you do give rough clues pointing to reasons for it.. But still its rough and kind of glazed over.) besides that lack of eyebrows raised at mc opness i can't think of anything else maybe its just my bais of loving this story keeping me from being more critical..

Well hope this helps you improve your writing. Sorry if it doesnt. Btw the reason you dont get 5stars is cause well i dont give 5 stars to anything cause perfection is a lie lol.