



Very nice redraw. I can't want to see how far you come in the near future!

You've come a long way. The anatomy is much more solid and consistent in its proportions. I also like how you've steered away from bright, garish colors for your redraw and gave it an overall tertiary feel. Your variance in the pose has excelled--you aren't afraid to draw things that are difficult to draw, like the hands on the hips. Again, an excellent job on the subtleties and nuances in the shading/coloring. Looking at these girls side by side, they are so distinct but still maintain their own energy and identity.