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This is my first critique so forgive me if it's not that great XD.Anywho, I thought this was a very well done comic. Everypony is doing exactly what they would most likely do in the show. Heh, they should have given the element of honesty to Rainbow Dash, amirite? XDThis is very interesting because the concept of death has (too my knowledge) never been covered. I'm not sure if they've seen SAID the word death before. I mean we know that ponies DO die, apparently alicorns live forever but how long to normal ponies live? Who knows!Let me stop ranting and actually critique the actual comic XDD. I think all the ponies seem very in character. Rainbow Dash isn't really thinking about if what she's saying, Applejack is being responsible and sensible and Fluttershy is being overly sensitive. The backgrounds are a little bland but backgrounds can be a bit of a struggle when the ponies aren't interacting with anything but other ponies, you don't really know what setting to put them in.But I think this is still a great comic, regardless of the no background! Although I noticed that RD's cutie mark wasn't there and although I'm not entirely sure, I believe Fluttershy's cutie mark is still partially visible when her wing is down.I think RD's movement is a bit more natural but Flutters seems a bit stiff. Like I feel like at times she might have her head titled or maybe be lifting a hoof while speaking.Welp, that's all I got XD. I didn't exactly know what stars to put for each thing so please forgive me they're unfair ;u;