This is pretty amazing, and you did it so fast. I'm not really good with handing out critics, but I'll try because someone told me to practice and it really help fellow artist too. Still I don't know if I'm qualified to give one. Meh, I can because why not. *Ahem* Here, First thing, Twilight's foreleg shouldn't bend/go like that when she hug a pillow. You could always add more curve to it though, and make the creases pull from that side of the pillow.Second, this shouldn't be a problem much since it's your style after all, but wings. Her wings shouldn't go in straight line since feathers didn't go like that, but like I said it's your style you can just skip this.Now that out of the way, and it was a really bad critics. you really did good with wrinkles/creases/folds on clothes. I still have lots to study on. And you changed how you drew mane style! It's a good one!Also, to Twilight, why would you want that signed? Thank you for streaming and showed me some tips! I'm glad I joined in the fun! Keep up the good work, man! I'll see you in next piece.