pft who needs photography,

but my only critique if I must....



Is that the emotive capacity in this seems crippled,

by the awkward gaze of the subject, as if going 'oh don't take my photo'

maybe i'm saying that perspective as an observer of this piece could be tweaked,

but who am I to say what a defect is? as perspective is just that.



so~bottom left bird is puffy but shiny so looks too big, if it is a puffed up sparrow it could be softer

and as mentioned, the subjects eyes are looking away from central gaze too much,

avoiding it like an actor would the camera as it can't help catch the gleam of a lens in sight,

if to look too close. To transmit sense of longing or just even just distance...



unless you think of this indeed as a photography... then the amazement of the bird,

is encapsulated by the views amazement of motion being captured so still with clarity or abstract.