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I'm just going to write this critique to cover a few thoughts I had that weren't mentioned in other critiques.This could be just personal preference, but her snout looks pretty flat somehow. I can see the arch of color at the bottom of her blush, but the nose seems flat and the mouth looks like it's not even part of a snout. If you were going for a more human face, ignore me. Someone already mentioned her hoof, and I agree it looks a bit odd. I'm having trouble suggesting what I'd do different since I'm no artist, but this is what I'm seeing.You did GREAT with the rest of her. I've seen different takes on the horn and yours not only uses the show's style, but you got the size and shape right even after adding detail. You also did a fantastic job on the eyes. You gave her large eyes like she normally has, but you actually made them look like they belong outside of a cartoon. I'm not sure how you did it. You even did well with the "glazed" look of having one too many, and iris is great as well. Also the detail on the background is a very nice touch.If I say much more, I'd be repeating others. Well done.