(review of free book)

Interesting read, but in need of a punctuation check among other editing. Things are a little fuzzy, too. I want to know more about this story and more about the characters, and am left a little confused. I felt unfulfilled at the end and wished for clarification. I don't read much flash fiction, I admit, but I just don't know enough about the characters to care about what happens to them. Still a good story though.