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I love the concept of this artwork as it really does a good job portraying that morning feeling that I get in college as well as I think many other people get, so it gives the viewer a good relation to that feeling while being super cute and Ponies.Just a couple things I would say would improve it, there seems to me to be a bit too much contrast between the light and dark sides of the picture, and it hides a lot of the ponies and their expressions. In these small dorm rooms and spaces, the lighting tends to reflect off the walls a lot if there is even a small opening for light to come in threw. This tends to create a diffuse weak reflected light that is similar to the color of the walls, as well as the main light source.I think having some diffuse lighting would also help a lot with the second part I see as kind of awkward in this piece, and that is the sharp gradient from the light beams coming in the window and the dark room. It looks almost correct but I find it somehow not quite accurate to looking at light coming threw a window, perhaps if you could look at a window and set this scene up physically and draw it to get a feel for the way things happen would help.The last tip is a simple one, the curtain could use some texturing, it looks kind of like a slime to me right now because it's so slick and smooth in texture, and it looks funny next to the wall with it's very nice wall paint texture. Just increasing that a small amount to look like a fabric I think would help that not be distracting from the main focus of the piece.I would like to repeat again I really appreciate the emotion this artwork portrays and how effectively that was presented in the setup of the design. What I've mentioned here are just things I think would help elements to not distract from that expression of emotion. It is a very beautiful piece though and I like it very much.