The water is not acting like water but rather more like brushed/sprayed paint. It should look more misted where it is spraying everywhere. Your clouds have little form. That's good in some places, especially the distance. It works on the left where it appears more dispersed but not so much on the right. The structure pieces on the right look more slapped on rather than placed in the scene. They all appear practically on the same plane with little change in size, focus, and color to create the illusion of depth. The waves on the right all appear on the same plane and create no illusion of depth. There is very little variation in them. Your light sources appear to be all over the place. There is no light dispersion/saturation in your water. With how bright your sky is, the scene looks very dark. Less black is more. Get away from black and use dark colors from the scene. Watch your bounce light and use it more. You asked for critique in Crimson Daggers, so I hope these things help. I don't claim to have them all mastered myself and am growing as well, so I am sure there are others who could critique this even better.