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Okay, first thing first, I need to make sure that the Luna fanboy in me does not impact the neutrality of this critique.Well to start off I have to give you points for having a rather unique idea of a puppy version of Luna. Having the ponies as other animals (especially bunnies) is a recurring theme in your artwork, but I don't think I've seen you do a puppy before. Because of this rather interesting take on Luna, I have to give you points in both vision and originality.I have to agree with BinaryHedgehog in regards to the technique, there are not outstanding flaws with the work. You always do an amazing job with the eyes, and in my opinion, is one of the highlights of this work. You can see the reflection of stars in her eyes, fitting very much with both Luna and puppies looking up at the stars, something that I can envision with ease. The little teeth clasping onto the teeth are absolutely adorables, and you really manage to find a good size for the head, as opposed to some other artists with a chibi look in their artwork, making the heads gigantic.I do have a few nitpicks with the picture though. Like I mentioned previously, there are no outstanding flaws with this work, but small little issues that I find a bit bothersome. There are really only two things that give me just the littlest bit of bother, and that is with regards to the eyelashes and hind feet. While the eyelashes are integral in presenting beautiful eyes, I feel that the eyelashes are just a wee bit long/overdone. I looked over the picture and one thing I noticed right away were the eyelashes; it kept drawing me away from the eyes. A bit of consolidation would help accentuate the eyes and keep the eyelashes from sticking out a bit too much.The other small issue I have is with the hind-paws. There is no huge flaws with them in general, but I feel like the pads are just a bit too small. The rigid triangular shape and its size really doesn't give a "dog-like" feeling to the pads. Rather than going for an rigid, equilateral triangle, drawing with small curves on both sides of the foot paw would make it resemble a dog paw more.All in all, this is yet another outstanding work of yours that can really capture an emotion of endearment in your viewers. The technique is refined and its flaws are minimal, and it presents a new take on how to make the best princess even more adorable than she already is! You never cease to amaze me with your works Alasou, I look forward to your next work!