Holy crap, did it really take me over a month to find time to compose a review for this fantastic story? My apologies.

I was so pleased to see another masterpiece of booty growth from you, TrebleCleffy. You are seriously one of the greatest AE writers I’ve ever seen.

I think my absolute favorite quality of your stories is the rich and varied language. Words like “bubbled”, “moosh”, “quivered”, “waggling”, “blossomed”, “smooshing”, “bobbling”, and “wobbling” provide such a visceral sense of the movements and changes of Amelia’s body. Likewise, I love how many different synonyms and euphemisms you use to refer to her butt: “rump”, “tush”, “bottom”, “cheeks”, “buttocks”, “real estate”. More different words means not only a richer narrative, but less repetition, allowing for a higher density of juicily detailed descriptions of your characters’ bodies and their progressing transformations for us expansion fans to enjoy.



Truth be told, I didn’t enjoy this story nearly as much as “Bottoms Up”. (Just personal preference, really: Natasha and Neve’s contrasting reactions to their growth and the way it escalates through their competitive chemistry enables the story to appeal to every aspect of my appreciation for ass expansion, making it quite possibly my favorite AE story of all time.) But it is still unquestionably one of the most well-written and exemplary ass expansion stories I have ever read. I can definitely see the influence of “The Balloon Behind Her” (also one of my first and favorite AE stories), especially in the final expansion scene.

I must respectfully disagree with the contention that ass expansion is inherently more difficult than breast expansion. I see no reason why that should be so. Why should any of the potential storylines and plot devices that apply to breast, belly, hourglass, and full-body expansion not be applicable to ass expansion? I don't have the grasp of characterization necessary to write my own expansion stories, but I've had many ideas, which I'd be more than happy to share with any interested AE writers. You, tusdine, and others are welcome to PM me.