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Firstly, I must say that You make a great improvement and You can at most definitely be proud of Yourself:]Secondly, since it is a "made again" art I'll allow myself to compare this to the original one during this restrained critique of mine.Your Moon lullaby does is a nice art and just by one look I can say how much effort and work You put in it. It is emotional and tell a story. It is cheerful and portray the happiness of Luna even more than on previous one.It's nice that You make her look more 3D, but then the legs, especially the right one, ruin the effect.The biggest improvement that can't be miss, is definitely Your technique. More slight and smooth lines. The color fill up with borders and is efface for far away objects. You even try hard to make a details like patterns on shoes to look realistic. Nice job.It's pretty hard to judge the originality of this art since it's "made again" art and perforce it was already seen. As for the concept of Luna at the balcony singing - well, it isn't anything unique. On the other hand I can appreciate creativity. You can simply make a dark sky and some light points as stars, but no! You go one step forward and show a piece of solar system while using the gentle mix and contrast of bright colors and shadows. That counts as a big plus for originality account.As for the less nice part: You can work a little more on the stars and clouds.It's not my first critique on Da and I have to say I didn't feel like those stars reflect the correct value of any art. I'm going to put my mark for You written in real numbers in here: 8/10:]There is still some things You can improve and work on, but You seem to be an ambitious person and You already are a great artist. The only left that I can say is: Keep it up! And You will go far!:]*It's just my opinion and I maintain an absolute entitlement to change it any time. Meow^^