Brian T.





While this presentation is better than a great deal of other submissions, I'm not really sold on it. An okay premise, a young upstart Montreal detective/PI poorly working the beat (or maybe he'll be funny and good like Brooklyn Nine-Nine?) and meeting an evil match. Honestly, any suggestions I would have would probably drastically change the show in your eyes, like to make it more 'Noir' and maybe have an older lead as the detective so the ineptitude is funnier. Or perhaps the character simply needs a 'Cornfed' to his 'Duckman' in this firm, to allow for false sense of success and pride.



Keep working at it, and I'm sure you can do even better with the tools you have here and could do some serious competition in the further rounds.