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As someone who doesn't read these comics very often, I must say this is pretty good! Granted, I recognized the basic scenario from the Winter Soldier, but it makes up for that with the resolution, which is both pretty funny, and kind of heartwarming.The panels also make some good use of perspective, and flow pretty well into each other, and the lack of detail in the background allows the comedic punchline to be delivered at just the right speed for the best possible impact.I'd say the only problem is that Alphys' arms look a bit too thin in the earlier panels, and in the very first, her shoulder looks too muscular, but these are very small issues, and it's probably just personal taste that's making me think that way.Great job on this one!