For no more than you seem to have to work with here, not bad work. I wonder if you chose not to have more graphics and audio quality to work with, or if it's just a "beginner/noob'" situation. It's a bit of interesting and alright either way, frankly. I think you should seriously consider revisiting this in the future somewhere. That's a clever little way to see where you've grown as an artist along the way. I know, there's a lot of work in animation, and believe me, I understand completely, however, redoing an old project is a really good way to notice for yourself how far you've come over time (AND I'm not going to indicate whether pun was intended or not... just the kind of smart-ass I am:P)

Hope you do more, but do understand, there's only five stars available for the most incredible video/audio/artistic experience I ever experienced on the web. I'm a bit cautious about over-awarding. Don't take that personal... So basically, anything over two is probably good out of me. You've achieved something to get a four or five, though I also consider extenuating factors like what you are working with (software and pixellation...etc).

So... for suggestions... (And of course, first, learn to read 'tween the lines' and drop the haters. They live to troll and hate, and they're good for no more. Second, understand, some of us critique seriously, trying to help you grow as an artist, so you can succeed, even when the critique might be hard to swallow at first. Third, sometimes, those who seem like our worst enemies can teach us more about ourselves than our so-called "friends" would ever dare.

Now for this clip (heh... see what I did just there?) You don't necessarily need any greater detail graphically, I think with a little more "love" put to the script and sound work, you could have something imminently publishable. Admittedly, I've been wrong before, so I'm not a superstar or billionaire. I'd be on my latest of about a dozen billion by now if I was perfect. I think you could get buy, if not quite well, developing low-res, quality work with just lots of "crap" you can do with it. For inspiration, I might suggest you check out Mittsies (basically anything that shows up in that search)... and almost anything under "Fekfek"... Most specifically, check into the "adult" allowance and check out "Rack". These tips should give you an idea of what you are competing with in this market. It still depends on the demographic (yes, I really do know how to spell that...lol) And from there, you can always shoot me a PM in case you wonder what kind of "generic" storyline should start those creative juices flowing... You might even find out I can be agreeable... at least some of the time.

BTW... Just to lift your spirits (and know that I don't pretend to understand your choice in music) check out and REALLY LISTEN to "Creative Types" (also in the "movies" section here) And you can possibly understand that I do give a shit. I might be a little old-school, and my critics are face to face with me, so I can't hide behind a silver screen and decide which critiques pass or fail to me. I wipe the saliva off my face and solemnly "...Appreciate the feedback..." as stalwartly as I can manage. But you don't have to bear my cross, you can go forth. Just know I want you to grow and become what you can become. I hold great hope for you.