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I think that you truly captured the heart and spirit of this episode in this piece.The “worst nightmare” sequence has always been a classic scenario to me. One that, thankfully, has not been done to the point that it gets boring after a while. Everyone tries to put their own little spin on it, and this one truly stands out.As for technique, you did a wonderful job shading. I know it’s in mostly black and white, but even among all the faded grays, Apple Bloom seems to just pop, as does the title. Excellent job on that.However, I felt that her shadow was pushed a little too far into the background. Watching the episode, I felt that her shadow played a very prominent role, as it embodied her fears of rejection and abandonment. But, then again, it is just her shadow, so it would make sense for it to be hanging out in the background, “with the rest of the shadows.” That being said, I still like how you portrayed it. Subtle enough not to be the central point of the picture but bold enough for us to know that it’s there.All in all, you continue to amaze me, sir. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more title cards in the future.