I believe you would do a much better job now. Having had more time and practice at your craft. Though do not so easily feel that it falls apart if you look at to long. That the viewer will start to see any and all faults instead of the images entirety. While yes, I may find her nose looks a bit off. Not greatly, just a bit. I still find myself staring at her face. Joyfully staring. I do enjoy the image in it's entirety. I love every curve which have a soft and warm feel to them.Oh no, I am not touching my screen to try an feel them. Just that the color, shading and lines all flow together to make her so soft and warm. It is not simply a teasing shot of a naked body. There are so many out there that can draw naked and seductive girls. What sets a simple provocative picture apart from others is if it has life. That soft warm inviting body hidden so well. That derpilisous smile that says, "I hope they like this but I don't know if I am doing it right." Then those soul stealing eyes. Like I said before. This image is 'just a joy to look at'.So I hope that if you ever decided to remake this image. Like other artist in the past do to images they feel they can do better at. I hope you don't only focus on what you feel you did wrong, but remember all the wonderful things. You did right.Now if you'll excuse me. I wish to look into those eyes a little longer before going back to my random image adventure.