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To emphasize how amazing this comic is, I'd like to say that this made me make a "dawww" folder just so I could put this in it.Anyway, Critique. Yes, that thing:The idea of "fixing" Derpy (especially her eyes) isn't anything really new. BUT, the way you presented it is certainly something I haven't seen done before, not as a censor, but as a compassion meant in good will. As far as art goes, it's pretty basic, but it fits really well. Derpy looks adorably derpy, Twilight looks fine, even if looks a bit wonky in some of the details. The change of the background color is clever, and the use of comic effects (Movement lines and laughter) are really nice, and make it fell a bit more interesting where the scenes would look a bit empty.In all, I really like it. In terms of how professionall it looks, I'd only give it a 3.5. The take on the concept is pretty original, so I'll give that a 4. The design you used is really fitting, and adds on to the impression. It could've been a little more cleaned up in spots, but it's really good. Almost a five, I'll give it. Impact: Like I said before, so many dawwwwwws, and it's really nice how portrayed the situation. Since this is now a pretty old concept, the message feels a little stale, I'll be completely honest. But they way you projected it in this fashion makes it really touching, with Derpy being accepting of herself and showing others that there's nothing wrong with who she is. 4.5. Almost 5.