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Well, I don't know about what you were aiming, but holy crap, is this pice very well done.Maybe it wasn't what you were aiming for, but the color is excellent. Considering this is an angel, having red tones add to the charming vibe it's supposed to give, as a follower of God.The design is pretty original too. Odd, but in a good way.I really don't know what left you unsatisfied about this drawing. It's both surreal and elegant enough to create a convincing angel design.It certainly doesn't match the origin jewish description of 1 million mouths and such, but as if that mattered as this is an adaptation.I really have no complaints or negative observations on how this could improve that are not entirely about taste, so I have to say good work. I may not be the better draftsman out there, but I know when something's done right and when not.