Hey, um... oh gosh, so my friend on the internet saw this and wanted to give some constructive criticism. He doesn't have a DA account, but he asked me to give you this [link] I think he could have been more polite about it, but here you go.I think he hits all the problem spots, but on a more positive note I myself am jealous of your shading and coloring work and overall it looks really good. [/wordyindirectapologyandredeemingtruthfulcompliments]