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Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

I like how you did the night sky with its different colors blurred together and the little stars all scattered ontop. The dark grass is a good effect too.You got Star and Marco's outfits down A-Okay, and I like the glow effect on their cheek symbols. But for the top of Star's boots, and her stocking stripes, you should've gone for more of a slight curve rather than straight lines. You've got a few tiny bits of shading on their bodies that's well done, but you ought to have it in more areas, like the sides of their arms or legs, or knees or elbows. There should definitely some shading and highlights on their hair.Lastly, the red moon looks much too flat as is. Its edges should be shaded slightly darker than its center.So those issues aside, it still looks like a pretty good piece overall.