If what I said about this comic was true, then Celestia and Twilight’s wings must be the finished production models.









Also not to criticize you FrenkieArt but on the 2nd paragraph the colt should say “Did you lose your wings” and on the 3rd paragraph Celestia should have the “s” of her “seems” removed.





Other than those mistakes your grammar is a lot better then a lot of other writers i’ve encountered. Their grammar made me want to hurl because it was so terrible.