You did a really good job, however I do want to point some things out, if you don't mind. While you did the face really well (like I am still struggling with the lips, adding red tones, and overall shading the face) I feel like the face is not placed on the head correctly, likes it's off to the left (I can't tell whether the face is facing us forward or it is in an angle). Also the anatomy is a little wonky ( like the hips and legs are too small, the arms are too short, and I think the torso can be longer), but it could just be the pose. Talking about the pose, did you use a reference? Because I don't think it is possible for the human body to curve like that (I tried to do it in front of my mirror a couple of times). However I will do anything to be able to put that much detail and shade clothing like you did. At the end you still did really well and I love RWBY so much. Hopefully it is not too harsh and I make any sense. Correct me if I am wrong because I don't post critiques a lot. Also no hard feelings, just a fellow artist giving advice to another artist.