Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

The visualization of this scene is very well done, in that it keeps the same style of Gravity Falls and the attention to detail on how the story describes/implies the scenario the Pine twins are in.The originality of the drawing is impressive to say the least. The gorge's layout and design, the clothing (Mabel's cute sweater to be exact), and I suppose the creatures that lurk in the background (though more on the how you still lay a reminder on the threatening presence).Technique is just extraordinarily amazing. You manage to keep the simplicity that makes Gravity Falls have its unique cartoon style. The added fog/dust, shadowing, and foreboding presence of the lurking creatures gives the wanted atmosphere of panic, distress, sadness, and all negative emotions that can be arisen in a scene like this. Nearly everything is done flawlessly (that disney channel though).It's quite incredible how you managed to leave such an impression on me with just a simple picture as this. I feel actual concern and compassion for them here even though it's not from a real episode and not even real danger. But you've put together such a brilliantly done piece with it's atmosphere, tone, color palette, style and e criteria, that just squeezes at the heart of the GF fans. From what I see, your work always has some sort of impact, whether funny or serious, it never disappoints.There is a but though, and it's just very minor details that can be shaken off. The lines, done amazingly of course, is different from how the actually style is. There are certain places the lines actually change slightly in thickness, usually around curves that give it that certain "drawn" cartoon feel. Again, this is only a very slight difference, but a nice one in that it adds to originality. Another would be Mabel's bangs being on the wrong side, again this is only a slight flaw. But one I that catches my attention the most is Dipper's legs. Though there is fog/dust and rocks all around, the way his legs disappear behind the cloud is rather blunt. Given, in a thick enough cloud things can "disappear", but it generally the more an object protrudes from a cloud, the more it looks to fade into " disappearing". But this is just an observation.All in all, it is an amazingly, lovely piece.