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Originality Originality

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Impact Impact

OK, both ponies look really nice, yet Celestia looks a bit small, also, her pose feels awkward, since she supposed to sit on her "rump" and using her rear legs as support, instead of only the legs (something like this [link] ). And well, this is more personal, but her final expression doesn't seem to fit with the overall style of the show.The background looks nice, although I wish you used more shapes on the trees behind the fence. Also, those things on the far back, are they carrots? If so, the look like they are floating, instead of growing.The color are gorgeous, looking like something out of a screenshot.Overall, a good comic that needs some some details worked here and there to be great.