Primarily, i'm rather anoyed that the use of mana seems to be rather brute force rather then interesting leverage; the MC is stated to be a primarily Blue user, but that is very rarely shown; the aspect of Blue in conteol of "space/context between places/entities" isn't shown very well, and it /could/ be shown rather well simply by taking advantage of exactly that to manipulate things like friction, or cleaning (by putting somethings, like air/water/space/force, between it and what's on it), or obstruction of vision, and the removal of such, and the removal of incompatibilities between formats of things. His use of White was rather bothersome, since it seems to be rather based off of the concept of communal/group efforts rather then the reality of them, and of the local example of them in particular; the structural regulation ability seems like it was somewhat underused, as well as the isolation aspect. The Green use, on the other hand, was extremely misused in my oppinion; Green seems to be the color of individual strength through contextual strength; having it personally strengthen his tissue seems like a massive underuse of it, particularly when it could be used to addapt him to his tasks and enviroment, while addapting his enviroment to himself. Particularly, giving a servant the ability to evolve to be a perfect servant for you would be rather interesting to think about (i think that the blue alien girls were a slave race for so long that they are basically domesticated at this point?). Red, while used well, seems somewhat basic in the application of its use; the thing it has of "overflowing from/breaking of banks/limits/convention/paths/structures" is on point, but what exactly is overflowing, and what is being overflowed from, is rather...Limited, when there could be so much more. Black, which was said to be his least aligned aspect, seems to be the one he should be aligning with the most; he's very able to simply take apart a context and replace it with one, made from the parts of the last one, that benifits him so much more; the only thing i don't like is that he's basically neglecting to do that with his spellcraft. Finally Colorless hasn't shown up whatsoever. Enchantment is also being shown to be somewhat OP; drawing from a living creatures soul shouldn't be simple.





Secondarily, there don't seem to be very many actual entities other then the MC; changing that would be good. Possibly creating a city using massive resources, and possibly even Mana "via proxy" using a artifact (a actual artifact that would be capible of it) and going semi-full Simon Voltaire, complete with replacement ruler (ruling group?), would be a good way to do that i feel. The process of a place turning into a Land, rather then just a massive enchanted creature ship, would be a interesting study in Land forming; maybe take it apart for mobile Lands, in the form of ships, for extra resources.





Tertiarily, i feel like leaving behind places is rather a waste of what could be done with them; there are proxy systems already in place; doing that with some humanoid bodies would be a good way to have some interaction with people; good omaka/side story material right there. Basically if you can't feel invested in making writing lewdness about them then they aren't emotionally invested in enough for a normal story. Going back to roots on this one seems like it would be rather healthy for the story. Not to mention that having some groups of force sensitive individuals loyal only to you would be rather nice to see interacted with; if you can't have it, then ruling those that do, and working with them to understand it, would be a good way of groking a ability.





Quaternarily; if you're going to show off some power, then /don't half ass it/; tear apart some planets; make some planets out of random space rocks in a area; make a ecosystem that can survive in hard vacume (there's already space worms, so it shouldn't be overly hard to figure out how to make a entire complex ecosystem based off of that); forge a star into a golem, or a weapon, or a art instalation, or something the size of the head of a pin; Make a moon composed entirely of cheese, or diamons, or compose a solar system composed entirely of moons; make a self propagating enchantment that immunizes people from precognition just to fuck with the force; make a enchanted city based on a star orbiting satalite, powered by a enchanted reactor, fueled by a star mine, and constructed by a spell forge the likes of which could alow a sufficient amount of sufficiently skilled people to rival your own abilities, and then alow yourself to be overthrown, just to see what they do with it.



Quinarily; boiling spells down into more simple functions, and then just alowing others to figure out how they were tesilated to alow for any given shenanigans to take place, feels like it would alow for a much better situation to take place.





Senarily; getting shit to work between Planes, while possible to do with brute force mana, seems like it would be rather OOC to have be the only way, what with him going out of his way to be redundant about having non-magical versions of everything.



I think that that's all, but i could be wrong.