feedback time.



I love this.

The colors

make my eyes....

-gasm-





(... orgasming eyes.... I should sketch that)



Okay, on with the nitty-picky things that I think could make this even more super than it already is:

Focal point. Right now I can't keep my eyes off those fishies the orange against the blue really makes them pop, which is both good and bad. Good, because popping is fun. Bad because my eyes keep darting from opposite sides of the canvass and there isn't much of a focal flow. I just kind just jump all around the place looking for a focal point.

To me it seems that the little growth there should receive more of my attention, but the fishies on either side are pulling my eyes away from it. keep the fish, I love them! I think you should just add some more detail to the seedling and more contrast, its looking flat compared to the rest of the image.



I really like how you have created a D.O.F by having areas of the painting really rough, I am a mega fan of that style <3



Idea! I think it would look cool with some sparkling magical shit. Buuuut you know me; I'm fanatic about random magic specs. You could maybe use a few (not many, no more than 6 or they'll get lost) to pull the eyes from those fish to the plant.



Also, the yellow stripes on the bulb bother me. Its shouting out "hello Wendy, I am the offspring of a blending mode!" I see that you have painted in some purple shades in the darkest areas, some more of that would be great in the shadows. But that just me getting picky.

You know this is awesome. Even if you asked for feedback on the sistine chapel I could probably get picky with it, despite it being my all time favorite piece of eye-gasm (omg! I want my weeding to be in there! ... but I'd probably stop dead in the hall and start getting all distracted by the pretties above my head and faint from a pure awesomeness overload.) xD



All round epic artwork, you just need to give it some more direction; Then it'll be peeeeerfect!