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Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

First of all I am surprised to see that the snake and the little girl appear to have different lighting sources. I realise you were probably trying to show the snake is a snake but the shadows below the girl are too on top of the snake, making it look like it is lit from the left where as the shading on the little girl suggests top lighting. I think that this should be addressed to help all aspects of this picture work together. It would make them look more connected.Secondly, the snake is very rough and to me the head is the wrong side, I realise snakes come in all shapes and sizes but to me the head looks far too small for the body.The whole picture has great movement and colours, I love how you portrayed the scales without drawing each. As the other critique suggests, I agree that they need a little glisten on them to look more snake like. I love the detail on the girl, and the hat is just gorgeous, it make her look quite Australian, which I like. You have paid a lot of attention to detail with the girl, I think that is why the lack of details on the snake, is so obvious. All in all its a great piece with great potential, with a few improvements it could really shine.