Not quite sure where to post this because it's apparent throughout this fun comic of yours: You make Twilight Sparkle out to be not near as intelligent as she is in the show. She's so read up that she'da known what he was talking about and had a good assumption on the matter at hand already. Not to mention she'd have not been so clueless on how to handle the situation. Feels like your dumbing down a character to cater to your own story :/