I was actually planning to wait on publishing this one until a certain other user on dA had created a particular group for me to join centred around bursting one's boobs, but seeing as I apparently haven't done anything of note lately here I felt like I may as well upload it to pass the time. I can work out the group mechanics stuff later!



So... here I am with my first bursting story. It's probably the darkest thing I've ever written, to be frank, and that's even after leaving the fate of the two characters in it ambiguous to make it a little easier to stomach. Still, there's just something sublime about seeing an inflatee at the utmost pinnacle of her size, just unable to take any more of what she's being filled with... and still being filled with it. Unfortunately, bursting as a fetish doesn't lend itself well to consensual situations, so I might have to get creative if I want to avoid the whole 'feeling bad for your creations' thing. Future problems and all that.



Ilyana was a bitch to write, and I don't think I did her characterization particularly well in spite of intending her to be a very generic sociopath in the first place. At the same time, she gets her just comeuppance in the end, so she may never have to ruin another person's life ever again.



The unnamed girl in the story? I felt bad for her. Maybe that's why I never gave her a name in the end. If my story were a short movie I'd imagine I'd have a post-credits scene where a patch of snow collapses into an opening shaft on a mountainside and a bleeding and milk-drenched little figure crawls out of it, weak but alive, but I felt like that wouldn't carry over particularly well to a text-based setting. Sounded like a cop-out, to be honest. Take it as canon if you wish!



For now, I hope you enjoy the protracted buildup to the climax. This actually took a while to write as I dreamt up new ways to express the growth. Gotta work on that vocabulary a bit, I think.

Published : Jul 1, 2015 | Mature © 2015 - 2020 Gahsu