Hmm, the edit does make it look better...if that's what you updated? xD I dunno, the weirdness looks less noticeable now. I can't really pinpoint what the problem is specifically? If you're okay with this, I quickly drew up what you have and what my suggestion is, just so I can maybe show you what I mean?I'm not pretending to be a better artist than you, but artist to artist... The black lines are from your drawing, and the red lines are my suggestions. You don't have to take it seriously, because the image you have is really cool as it is, but maybe this will help, somewhat?