well looks like i'll be remaking this one sooner rather than later not because its bad but because you can put pretty much anything in place of celestia in the final panel and the comic would still work.the other thing with this comic was that i tried to draw it as fast as couldjust to see how long it would take. but it still took two days because i didn't expect to be so busy yesterday and today as i was.here's a link to version 2 and version 3