Wow

I found this to be pretty "INTENSE" you have some amazing ideas and you have presented them well here in this piece, the "GRAPHICS" are really nice, I would suggest throwing in some fancy effects onto this on those little impact visual points, You have Developed something interesting here, So with a flick like this I can see changes make this better but sofar you have all grounds covered and whatnot. you have Earned some credit with thsi reviewer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~

I would suggest throwing in some fancy effects onto this on those little impact visual point

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