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From some of your previous work, this one is a slight let-down. I'm not trying to be mean, but I feel like something is missing. That one element to pull it together that it just seems to lack right now.I think my main gripe may be against the foreground mountain and how it interacts with the star-scape in the background. It seems incredibly rough and hard and then its based against the soft and nebulous sky. It feels forced like it has some sort of disconnect and I get a feel of tension between those elements. Maybe some background beyond the mountain, like mountains really washed out and fading away might give it the balance it needs.The sky seems a bit too flat, and I can't really imagine the broad sweeping bend that the sky should have in this image. The vector choices aren't bad, and that's probably one of the only Pinkie ones around that could fit the scene, but the Twilight books one seems a tad out of place, like how is it she has a stack of books and no saddlebags? Maybe a bit more entourage to build the scene is needed?I know wallpapers are supposed to be simple, but that's just how I feel about this piece right now, maybe a tadsimple.