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hi! I love this a lot, and in my opinion, I don't think there's too much I can critique! but here's what I think about your piece!1. this is what I noticed first when looking at your drawing - and this might make it look like I'm somewhat of a perv but I promise I'm not haha. the way you drew the top of her legs, or under her va-jay-jay looks quite weird, maybe I'm the weird one but try doing that in real life with your legs, there's no gap there.2. one leg is more pointed inward, and from how it looks the other one should have that inward point too, or maybe a bit more straight but it looks like a balloon. sorry, my wording in that was poor I didn't know how to correctly word it oops.3. the linework and even the colours in some spots are a bit messy. the linework is alright and not overly messy but you can still see it. the colouring is good, but I noticed that where the shorts are folded up the skin overlays the shorts a tiny bit, I'm assuming you just filled it in with the paint bucket tool, I suggest making sure that all of it is filled in by just using the pen tool and filling in the parts that are a bit messy.4. the way you highlighted everything looks really unnatural, for starters, you highlighted the hair two different ways, choose one and stick with it. the way you're highlighting everything on the body, clothes, and sword, is super unnatural, those kinds of highlights should only be used for hair highlights. the shading is good, however, in a way it is also unnatural as it doesn't make sense as it looks like the light is coming from the right and on the skin it looks like its coming from both up and down which isn't possible.5. to be simple with this, the fire looks bad. I suggest looking up a guide.6. the white outline takes away from the background, I suggest putting an overlay layer effect on it or something like that.7. Connie is straight up covering bill in the background, I don't know if you meant for it to be like that but it doesn't look too great, I'd suggest maybe putting a smaller version of him next to her to show him off more.8. the grey eyes look really weird, and almost not like eyes, I don't mean to be rude, but couldn't you have tried a little more with them?9. finally. the light around bill looks off and unrealistic, i'd suggest using add glow, glow dodge, or overlay and lowering the opacity to make it look somewhat more realistic!i hope my critique was helpful to you!