Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

This is my first critique, so bear with me.This work is wonderfully done and the background is nicely done. I liked the idea of this picture it is very original, so I give you five stars on the originality scale. The shading is a fine quality for this type of cartoon drawing style so the technique is quite good, so five stars on that! I guess the vision on this art is humor? This piece gave me quite a laugh, because that's what I see it's intended for. The look on Twilight Sparkle's face is quite humorous she must be filled with power, not sure because I didn't draw this.Now for the impact, this piece is wonderfully done. I love it very much, the impact this piece brought to me was a good smile and a laugh, so I guess that's a five stars on the impact scale?Now if you wanted to fix something in this picture is the length on the pony's body and legs. Because if I were to put the ponies drawn in this picture on all four hooves they would look really short, but if that's you're style it's ok.Overall, I loved this picture. Keep drawing!