Oh thank God. I'm that way with drawing, too. Sometimes it really seems like i'm the only one.



Though I gotta say, the final product is pretty amazing. That composition is really one of a kind.



Oh, and at that angle, her eye that is facing more away from the viewer should be showing that much, if at all. Because of how large her snout is, the rest of her face should be as frontal as regular ponies.



Also, I think the areas on the steps that are illuminated by the light coming in through the window should be way brighter. Sunlight is really intense, and brightening areas near Chrysalis would create a more eyecatching composition, and it would help bring more attention to Chrysalis.