A story that doesn't flow (is either too fast/too slow/dialogue doesn't feel natural)

Characters that aren't believable and are 1-dimensional

The artwork/Image quality being low (low quality JPGs, bad art etc)

Typos

The artwork/sprites/etc not being similar/clean/close to Hussie's style (too detailed, or too simple)

Sburb being played wrong

It begins with "A young ______ stands in their _______"

Characters that look too similar to the HS cast (kids/trolls).