Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

I personally liked how you captured the CMC's at their worst/best at being indecisive fillies. This comic clearly relates to MLP. Drawing Trixie back to her original stage brings us all back to an earlier season and remembrance of her holier-than-thou attitude. As vision I see no others trying this. Originality has to go along. As a writer and not an artist I wanted to see more of the stage and perhaps an audience view? (Is that unrealistic?) Simply wanted more than the two dimensional characters but perhaps that may take away from the punch. The impact though was brought forth well and even the CMC's were captured well. The ending invoked all our love and desire for ice cream that brings me, and I hope others, back to their childhood love and remembrances of their first bite. I laughed and smiled. Well done and never quit please. Tyg