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here the second part of the comic about Lucius , so it s again a long one-shot , it was a bit easier than last time because for both character i had already a references and i simplified the whole conversation true just chibis , so it was a bit faster to make.The first try was really cluttered in fact i cut out like almost 10 more sentences because there was too much stuff going on.Hope that now its much more readable.Once again this is a fan-comic of For Honor , some characters are classes from for honor transformed in named characters while Lucius is just an OC of mine , trying to survive in that world.Sir Gabriel ="Lawbringer"Lucius = "Self Entitled Knigt"