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This is a cartoon; a joke told with visuals. As a cartoon, it's a winner. As artwork, it's not the best you've ever done, but it conveys the joke successfully. The art appeal of the first panel is very weak, Tempest's lower body looks distorted and elongated, as if it was being pulled into a sci-fi dimensional portal and for her head, her ears are pinned back (which makes sense) but they look odd which I may be due to relative size to the rest of her head, I'm not 100% sure why it bothers me. The second panel is spot on as Tempest spirals off into the tempest. (...yes, I wrote that.)Overall, this piece looks like a quick, one-off sketch. It meets the minimum standards to convey the joke and does that well, but the art doesn't really do much for me. I honestly feel you could do the first panel better.BTW, the joke is freaking hilarious. You get full marks for that.