You sorta C&C'd yourself in your definition - but thought I'd give it a go anyway. You chose a particularly challenging angle to work with though, so some perspective issues should be expected from that.You're viewing from a slight angle below but this perspective seems to end at Zilyana's waist. If you rotate the picture so she's standing up. Hope you don't mind me re-hosting it on temporarily, I threw some extra watermarks onto it just in case: vgy.me/CKOYkN.png Where her hips meet her waist the perspective seems to change and she gets "thrown back". The elbow isn't very prevalent on her left arm, making it look strange. Breasts start by the armpit - her left boob is pinched too closely to the center. For her nose, it looks like you attempted to put some shadow behind it - or she just has a really large nostril. The shadow wouldn't be visible from the angle her head is turned, maybe just a sliver of it. The mouth is also jutted out a little bit and the back of her neck is too long, especially for this slightly-below perspective. Her neck would be foreshortened just slightly at this angle.You did a great job with the eyes and I really like the idea behind a bloodied Zilyana.Giving the rest of your gallery a quick glance - not only is this one of your most challenging perspectives, I'd say it's one of your better works when it comes to paying attention to shadows/lighting and easily your best set of eyes. You made some **HUGE** improvements on this Zilyana compared to your last one.