First, Thanks for the critique. As heads up I made a bunch of changes and it looks like you marked up an older version of the file. A lot of the things you pointed out have been fixed and I'm slightly embarrassed as most of them were fairly obvious. Secondly I'm going to disagree with you on the rounded points versus tapered points. In my opinion the rounded points feel more show accurate but like you said it sounds like we just have a difference of opinion here. Thanks Again.