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One aspect that I like about this piece is how it greatly reflects Rainbow Dash's personality. It presents her as brash, daring, and unwilling to back down from a challenge! You can just tell by the look on her face, and the way her mane blows in the wind. It almost makes me want to compete in a race myself! I also like the shape of the background circular. There's not much to it, but it still gives you a sense of what the setting is. In addition, I admire your decision to make the outline bulky. It adds a unique style to the illustration. Now there are a few criticisms I would like to make. Firstly, I would enlarge RD's head a bit. The current size it's at is a little disproportionate to her body. Second, I would add a cloud or two behind her hooves, and perhaps change the shape of the one above her head. Right now, it looks more like a wavelength. Lastly, I would place the tail above the hindquarters rather than in them. I don't mean to have a dirty mind, but right now, it kind of looks like her tail is something else! But other than that, I think this is a fairly drawn piece. It has good lighting, features some decent atmosphere, and does a thorough job at showcasing who Rainbow Dash is. Personally, I think you should make more illustrations of the Mane Six posing in front of limited backgrounds that show who they are. Maybe you can put Twilight in front of a book store, or Applejack in front of an apple farm. You get the idea. The point is I think this would make for a great series! Think about it, and I hope that you keep up the tremendous work, CSOX!