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sooooooooooooooooooooo, there's a hundred word minimum... huh. Okay. well, my only complaint is the gun at the beginning. i mean, aside from not being into vagina creatures in years, in fact i had completely forgotten i'm following you, still, that gun. the spinning and locking sounds are nice, though im sure you didnt record them yourself. it sounds like it's suppressed, which revolvers can't be. also they only carry six rounds I suppose the use of more than one could be the case but im pretty sure you meant for only one to be in use. They only have six chambers, albeit with the exception of some very specific models. Now, im not exactly what one calls a 'gun nut', so this doesnt bother me really, i just felt like i should say something about it. aallllthough, i probably could'ave just made a simple comment, but fuck it, ive already gotten this far, so whatever. that's all. i really didnt even notice anything about the actual animation, that intro just wouldn't let me go would it. i guess... too much butt jiggle for so little movement? maybe if she moved faster? if i had anything to say about AJ herself.. She seems a bit skinny for a farm worker, especially one doing as much labor as she puts out to working with an orchard. as a guy who works with trees it gets to be quite a workout. oh damn thats a lot of words, guess i got carried away... oh well.