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Originality Originality

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Impact Impact

so, im thinking over all this is an amazing piece or art work, i love your take on the next generation. over all you did a great job capturing the story with the picture but if i didn't have the story in the description i wouldn't have a clue what was going on. based on originality, i stated before i love the take on the next generation, my only concern is where the mane colors for the youngest came from, im trying to piece that together, you also did wonderfully on the background. your technique, i dont really find that fair to judge, as every artist has there own style, i happen to really like yours. the impact i got from the picture was dramatic, and upsetting yet soothing, over all i found this an awesome piece of art, the only thing i could say is to try to make the ponies match the background a little, it looks slightly out of place with them being lined and nothing in the background being lined.