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I'm really enjoying how smooth your animation is. Although, I feel like her wings should've been flapping a bit more when she was getting more bubble fluid. The lack of movement in her wings when she was up above helps to highlight how hard she's breathing, but she kind of looks like she's just floating off the ground when she's next to the bubble fluid. Maybe putting in a few more wing flaps during that moment would make her look like she's using her wings to hover.There are so many small details that I noticed that make your animation very enjoyable for me to look through. Her wing movements, her expressions, her ribs poking out when she exhales, and how she sort of stirs the fluid with her bubble wand were a few I caught. The fact that it's a seamless loop helps with how smooth everything looks and feels. Just saying, I've lost track of how long I've been watching it. May explain how I was able to see those details, now that I think about it.