As I've proclaimed in the title this is good.

Very good.

But it would be unlike me to not have nitpicks.

And even if this is a practice book without much thought, and the author has already read my opinions on the comment section I believe that having to go through pages upon pages of comments just to find the advice from nitpicky mc nitpick is extremely dull and boring.

So, here I am, with spoilers for the first chapters and too much free time on my hands.

As anyone who has ever read one of my reviews will tell you, spoilers are inbound followed by nitpicky douchiness.

Yes, even if I do recomend this book with all of my heart and gave it 4.5 five stars I still have things to complain about.

Nitpicks, yes, but things none the less.

But, really, this is going to be a short review in terms of actual reviewing.

Mainly because there is only one thing I have complained about.

And that is the portrayal of certain characters and the wasted opportunity to make a 3d character with relatable thoughts.

I'm clearly talking about the Mc's new father whose name I forgot, he is a mustache twirling, dismembered twice lived kicking villain with 'no feelings' or morals.

Yes, we, as the reader are meant to root against him and hate him but as a wise sage on the internet once said, the best villains are the ones you relate to, if the father had been acting like a good loving parent up until the big revelation part it would've made it ten times as hard on the hearts of the softies.

Imagine, one second he loves you and you love him back, almost like a second father, then when he works he changes completely and turns into a cold hearted monster that believes to be in the right when he slaughters little children for sins they didn't know they were commiting.

And then he returns to his child and explains that is how a demon looks like hoping to transmit the same conviction and beliefs to his son.

Now, THAT would be an emotional kick in the balls.

And that is the only thing I really would like to see changed.

Of course I love the everliving shit out of this novel and I have recomended it to a couple of friends already but I really get annoyed when I think about how much of a wasted opportunity that was.

Anyways, I wish the author good luck and hope to see more of the awesome stuff he will publish.

Thank you for reading this, whoever you are on the internet, and I hope that my here words would help not only this book's author but another author too.