Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Well,I'll try to give a balanced critique as much as I can. I'm not much of an artist myself.Firstly, Vision. You have a vision for this artwork (I'm not finished) that is way bigger than just a simple family photo. I don't know what it is exactly or how to put it, but I can feel that this is just the beginning of the story on the relationship between Daring and Derpy. I can see that you are already thinking way ahead,therefore 4.5 stars in this section.Secondly, Originality. I don't see a lot of Darin Do+Derpy shippers out there and it is, indeed, one of the least talked about ships in this fandom. The fact that you've thought of something like this is really impressive, given how little info you have at hand to work with. I have yet to see another artwork thinking along the same lines or situations like this. Therefore,I give you 4.5 stars in this section.Thirdly, I like your art style, though I've seen similar styles elsewhere, you've made your style distinctive from others. It's well drawn and I can safely say that you've had lots of practice on drawing. However, comparing it to other better (read: professional) works I've seen, I give you a 4 star rating for Technique.Lastly, the easiest point to talk about,Impact.The photo and its frame says one thing, but the tear drop on the glass says another. This makes the viewer happy yet sad at the same time, thus creating a powerful emotional impact on the viewer and implies that there's a hidden story behind the photo that made the pony holding on to the photo shed a tear. Is it a tear of joy or is it a tear of sadness? You even left that for the viewer to guess. The art style comes back and leaves the viewers with really conflicting emotions (D'aww,Yay and Awww). Therefore, full stars here.I hope I've given a fair critique based what this artwork gave me, visually and emotionally.