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I do quite like what you have done here and the previous fellow summed things up pretty well. I like what you have done with the sky and a clouds and the expression on her face.There are a few things that bother me a bit:The moon while it does add to the piece as a whole it is extremely bright. It makes it harder to focus on Twilight and keeps pulling my attention away.The piece looks a bit divided. The background and foreground (including the floor) are very different and look almost like two separate images that were brought together. This could probably be helped with a slightly more consistent style or some sort of midground. The end of the floor is a very sharp and straight line but there is no indication as to why it is like that. It creates a hard transition that looks odd.Twilight looks like she is floating rather than sitting (though given that style it would be rather difficult to make it appear she is sitting. It also looks like her right hoof is not part of the picture with the chair but again a picture stuck on another picture stuck on another. I see you put lines on robe to indicate a bend however there is no indication on the fluff on the side of any sort of change in direction. It also appears the cape is supposed to bend again though there is no indication.Also, while her color is true to what it should be in daylight the entire piece being so dark and the theme being dark you may have wanted to use a slightly darker shade of purple.The shadow of the chair does not seem to fit very much. It looks more like a generic this thing is supposed to be floating shadow (which maybe it is but it looks like it should be on the ground). I think you would have been better off detailing the shadow more to create a closer shadow of the chair or just leaving it out.It is difficult to tell where the light it supposed to be coming from. There are quite a lot of gradients in this piece and while it works well in the neck-piece the rest of it feels off (not counting the horn). The gradients on the armor seem to indicate a source of light; however, the different gradients make it confusing about where the light is coming from.There is some inconsistency in the lines. While the lines on Twilight are largely thicker the lines on the armor and her mane are quite a bit thinner so they don't feel like they belong.Very nicely done,Inciatus