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Right off the bat, what I admire most about this piece is the technique. Every single paint stroke makes the hair look as if it is real, like you can just stroke your hand through it. I also love how realistic the coat looks. Many drawings forget that coats have hair, too. I must commend you for remembering that. The same goes for the… ear hair (or at least that's what I think it is). Lastly, I don't know why, but I really like how she is sticking her tongue out towards the viewer. It's almost like she's taking a wacky selfie! As for criticisms, i would say that Twilight could be given a little more head room, which would allow the horn to be extended a little, for I must admit that it does appear to be too short. In addition, I would spread out the sparkles more on her mane, rather than keeping them in a straight line. Lastly, if you're going to blend the background, you should probably do it more towards the middle instead of three fourths to the right. Aside from that, however, I think this is a really nice portrait of Twilight. I enjoy how saturated the colors are, and I especially admire how silly Twilight appears to be. Just a few touch ups here and there and it'll be good as gold. But still, this is a very strong illustration. Keep up the amazing work, xbi!