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I like the joke (with the whole "FOR DUMMIES" book). I like the way Twilight came out however the color on her mane looks too dark and her coat looks too light. The lines on her left wing (her left not the one shown in the perspective) look less solid compared to her right and could be improved upon the next time (if there is a next time) Her snout (or nose?) looks a tad bit too large and it looks kind of sharp. I realize her eyes are meant to be big, but the pupils are too big (at least in my opinion). I know I’m sounding kind of harsh, but what I have mentioned are just minor issues.Overall I love it and I think you did a good job!