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Impact Impact

Just saw this episode. This piece captured all the emotions I felt as I watched. From Pyrrha's self-doubt and confusion to Ruby's sense of despair and hopelessness, you captured it all, put it in a bottle, and sold it right back to me. The shading is excellent as well as the color scheme. Incredibly well drawn, especially the mechanical components of Penny's remains. I noticed that you messed with how torn up she was, but I like the impact the dangling wrist and spine create. I only have two complaints. 1. Ruby's hair. While I do like it, it makes her look like a completely different character and that kind of ruins the scene. 2. The color shift. While I know this is a very dark moment in the series, and the colors fit extremely well, they kind of ruined the character scheme. for example, the red on Ruby looks brown and and Penny's bow is the same as her hair. I took points off originality because many had already predicted this scene and I expect a great many more for it. Overall, I was thrilled by this piece, will easily put it in my favorites after this critique, and wouldn't be surprised if it ended up as the end credit scene for that episode. Well done, and I look forward to more of your work.