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Overall I really like this piece, and only have some minor critiques. The biggest one of these would be the depiction of Paul's eyes, which seem to still have a visible distinction between the cornea/iris and sclera. In the story it describes melange as causing a total staining of the eye to a deep blue, including the sclera. I think this would be a nice change (depends on how strictly you're trying to adhere to the work) and would contribute to a bit more of an other-worldly look. My only other gripe would be with the font, which is not the best fit in my mind. I'm not saying I could suggest a specific font that would improve the image, however the one you have picked seems a bit plain, meaning I think you could definitely find a font that is still similar in appearance but has more of an Arrakis feel/influence to it. Overall though this is an awesome piece and I would most definitely get it as a sticker or something of the like!