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(First of all sorry for all mistakes, English is not my mother language.)When I look at short-story drawings /3-6 frames/ always try to figure out the basic message, what does the artist want to tell me and how. Are there words that leads the artist?Imho this time it is 'contrast'. The scenery contains blood, fire, rumbling buildings, damaged vehicles and a a brutally destroyed (trampled?) tiny human. In contrast the main character wears full white and has the angel face on the first 2 frames. Not easy to get all the happenings only on 3 frames and tell the story exactly how the storyteller wanted so I'm going to divide my first thoughts about these into:"Good job/Love it":The facial expressions are spot on.Story title, its position and the told story are great together!The scenery works nicely for the white/black and good/evil concept.The blood on her skirt gives away something about her "true" nature making a loveable 'stain' on the perfect innocence image."Maybe you could...":If she was the one stepping on the victim maybe adding blood stains between her foot and the victim.A long white skirt would make her more innocent looking.On the last frame the moment she steps on him: she walks forward through him/not caring."Didn't like":Nope, its good overall.PostScript: Hard to be 100% detached but personal tastes always make it subjective for a certain extent. This way my tainted objectivity. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>