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This is a very cute drawing. The shading is very interesting. However, in the show, fillies have rounder eyes and 3 white circles in their eyes, not two. Everything looks great! Even the muffin e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title="(Lick)"/>. However, it would be better if you had used something else to make Derpy. Using GeneralZoi's Pony Creator is alright, but people have been using it a little *too* much, and not making their own artwork. Also, in the show, filly Derpy has the same mane and tail as Dinky Doo. Plus, fillies have smaller wings with 3 feathers, not four. Other than the small mistakes, this was very nice. Next time, I recommend making your own art instead of using the Pony Creator.