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Report Anonymous Sun 17 Mar 2019 05:39:47 No.185909018 Report

it just builds up then fizzles to a whatever resolution. vineyard priestess' story arc culminates with the father of the water town wine making a contract with the army of chaos and paying the price for it. he was obsessed with success by any means to the point he over expanded his wine business and went so far as to spread those rumors to hurt the competition. his son then tries to get help to no avail eventually meets with sword maiden who recommended goblinator. pisstress not sure how to react while bottling up hate and anger for the son looked like it might go somewhere but she just swallows it and helps him because that's what she was taught to do. the battle against goblins in their water town wine mansion and surrounding vineyard and river was so by the numbers. it felt like auto pilot then the big twist to extend the chapter was a oh noes wait from the river here comes a goblin "fleet" of 3 ships. from the west this goofy war machine appears which just felt cheap. the big moment to defeat it was jump on it and cause it to go off a cliff and land on the "fleet".



even the side story that follows felt rushed with the temple of the earth mother being defended by not guts' party, spearcuck and witch, rat patrol with rabbit hunter, an axe wielding emerald adventurer, and other adventurers at the request of the archbishop. started with potential but it turns to mostly female knight taking out the head demon spider lady to show off because one of the other parties were famous demon hunters with a paladin. after that is the hero mopping up evil sect who appeared at the burial mound from earlier and somehow were involved with the army of chaos.