Monday night saw the induction of the four newest members of the Hockey Hall of Fame. The night was a celebration of excellence, and featured a universally positive vibe — or at least it did right up until NHL commissioner Gary Bettman decided to show up.

Yes, even though the NHL is two months into the third crippling lockout of Bettman’s tenure, and against the advice of just about everyone in the hockey world, the commissioner insisted on dropping by the ceremony to say a few words. The result was a painfully awkward two minutes, in which an uncomfortable Bettman plodded through a series of clichéd platitudes while trying his best to ignore the glares from an audience that desperately wanted him to leave.





Could it have been any worse? Yes, actually. It turns out that the speech Bettman originally wrote for the event was edited at the last minute by a league PR staffer. I’ve obtained that version. Here’s what Bettman really wanted to say that night:

Hi, Gary I had a chance to look over your prepared remarks for tonight’s Hall of Fame ceremony. Awesome work as always, boss. I hope you don’t mind, but I made a few teeny tiny edits. Hope that’s cool! Deletions are in red, additions are in bold.

[Walk onstage to Darth Vader theme generic music.]

Thank you, James, and good evening, peons everyone.

Tonight the all-time roster of that sport with the pucks and the ice and no slams dunks the Hockey Hall of Fame is further enriched by my presence four remarkable performers. Four legendary scorers. Four outstanding leaders. Who let’s be honest, have not aged well hail from four different parts of the hockey world.

Those four dudes over there that everyone seems to think I should recognize but I totally don’t Pavel Bure, Adam Oates, Joe Sakic, and Mats Sundin elevated our sport and inspired any number of future consumers young players to want to do the same thing.

With their creativity, their determination, their character and their skill, these players earned an unreasonable amount of money the reverence of their teammates and the respect of their opponents, even the defensemen they tormented and the goaltenders they humbled.

[ Pause for laughter ] [Pause for icy silence.]

The balance stat sheets remind us that each of tonight’s honorees averaged at least a touchdown point per game. What the stat sheets can’t measure are the millions of soon-to-be-former fans these players thrilled or the number of memories these men created that were later wiped out by concussions . Memories made permanent tonight in this timeless hall. We applaud their accomplishments and thank them for making a great game even more profitable better.

[ Pause for applause. ] [Pause to see whether Mats Sundin charges the stage and physically assaults you.]

Congratulations are also in order for the media honorees. Why don’t you and all your ink-stained friends take your shiny little tape recorders and jam them straight up your [You know what, maybe just awkwardly ad lib this whole section instead?]

Being here in this great hall, the sanctuary of our game, celebrates everything that used to be is good and right about hockey, at least until I showed up! [ Pause to twirl mustache evilly .] [Reminder: You decided not to grow the mustache when you realized this was the month people did that for charity.]

Even in these super-awesome difficult times, we find ourselves reassured to be here to recognize ultimate achievement on that crazy-slippery field the ice. All of us — suckers fans, insufferable rich people teams, and cattle players — look forward to the time the game returns if and when applicable there.

Congratulations again to the inductees, and please Kiss Jeremy Jacobs’ wrinkled white ass enjoy the rest of the evening.

[Drops mic] [Finish speaking, leave stage, never show face in public again until there’s a deal to announce.]

Sean McIndoe’s hockey humor can be found at his blog, Down Goes Brown, and in print twice a week in Canada in the National Post. His first book, The Best of Down Goes Brown, was released in September.