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Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

You have improved in this one compared to the older prisoner Dash image! I love how she's sitting with her tail curled. She looks ashamed and she seems to be wishing for a visitor. Your description for this pic is also great, because I love hearing about how Dashie wakes up in her orange jumpsuit aha!!In my opinion, she looks a bit too young than she did before... I think it might be the thickness of her mane. It seems the mane (top and side) are a bit too thin for Dashie. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/> If it was thicker (more fluffy) then she would be cooler... but I had to take off from the impact for this little detail. (that is just my opinion, might be a style you are going for...Speaking of style, small details in your style that stand out to me are the eyes and also those chains on her wing restraints. Chains are hard to do and I think you're figuring out what looks the best for those wing restraints e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="(Big Grin)"/>The background seems to fall flat a little bit though, since the toilet should maybe have the same shadow as the bed. There should be something (maybe just some shading) that makes the toilet pop out of the wall. That's why I had to take off from vision and technique