Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

There isn't much I can say that hasn't already been said. I love the picture, the art is great, but (I can't say too much, as I have nowhere near this artistic ability) I think the limited color doesn't quite match the scene, nor does pyrrha's face. In relevance to the color, I think the amount of gray, white, and black in the picture is perfect, but the contrast between colors is too small. I feel like if the colors for Penny and her weapons was slightly brighter, but fading, it would have much more impact, as she is a robot and it would almost be the systems shutting down (the lights fading from the power symbols on the swords, from her eyes, etc.). And in relevance to Pyrrha's expression, I think it looks too sad and tired. Now, this is likely what you were going for, but I feel that if her look showed strong hints of horror and shock, it would impact the rest of the scene significantly.For vision, I give a 4/5 for the reasons stated above, as besides that the picture is perfect.For originality, I give another 4/5, because this was not only made as a fan art, but as a sort of reaction or re-drawing of a scene that has actually happened. I am not taking points off for it being a fan art, merely stating that I acknowledge the fact that it is one. The retelling of a specific scene is what I take points out of originality for.For technique, I give a 4.5/5, not because I think anything is wrong, but because I can't give it a 5/5 if I want my critique of your future pictures (the one with all 4) to mean nearly as much.For Impact, I give a 4.5/5, due to the ability to (in my opinion), further enhance the impact and the mood by tweaking some colors and expressions. I don't take points off for not being amazing, but for not making the most of what you could've had (again, this is just my opinion here, and the impact will likely vary by person)