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This is quite the eye-catching picture! I'm a big fan of it.I need to emphasize how well you did with the colors here. The clouds and buildings in particular are lit very convincingly by the lights down below and the moon. I'd say this is your best background yet. Great perspective. Maybe a redder hue on Starlight would work better since the moon's behind her though.On Starlight herself, there's all sorts of nice details that came out pretty nice. In particular, I like her outfit, mane, and face. Maybe there's a bit of a sidemouth there, but it fits alright with the picture. The biggest pointer I can give is that with that curved firework rocket (not sure if that's for cartoon effect, fishlens, or some other reason), Starlight's pose seems a bit ambiguous. From how I see it, it seems like her body is longer than it probably should be.In general, stunning work Vanilla! Starlight here would be doomed if she didn't know how to teleport though e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="394" title="(Lick)"/>