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Interesting... It's nice to see some other characters that aren't main ones getting one love, especially since Melanie and Miltia were created because some of Monty's friends had asked for a set of twins to cosplayThat triumphant aura of willing to charge into power is nailed spot on. Actually, the sad thing is she reminds me of Joan of Arc more than Jaune does xDGreat detail with the feathers in her arms, the embers everywhere, and the rips in her skirt from battle are nice. I honestly really like the futuristic armor. I like the emblem design: who came up with that?Maybe I have the wrong idea with lighting, but if the fire is beneath her, shouldn't the shadows be on top of her body then? So if anything, her underarm and the likes should be lit up, and everything on top should be shadowed. If I'm wrong about that, let me know.I feel like her legs are ridiculously long for some reason. Her thigh is way too long I think, but that could just be me.Overall, well done: really the legs are the only thing that bother me.