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Good Evening (At least for me anyway), I was looking through my Deviation feed, and noticed you had a critique requested on your work!First off, This is quite an improvement from the picture you chose to redraw. Good job on your part. I think the colors are very vivid and clean, as well as her expression. The conveying of her sadness is well done, and it is indeed apparent.I only have two things to say as a critique on this piece:The first would be some of your lines. There are some spots where the lines aren't as smooth as the rest of your piece.The second would be the minor shading of her stomach. With the way the pony anatomy works; her whole stomach would be shadowed by the rest of her body.Aside from these small nit-picky things, I don't see anything else I could mention in your piece.Great work!