I am very happy to see that you gave this little Art Improvement a try and were so successful with it <3 I like Luna a lot and the way how you have presented her here fits wonderfully to the way she is really shown in the beginning of her appearance in this versionFirst of all you improved on the little bg elements as well, I like how the stars have different size and strength now, there are stars that are more eye-catching now then others C: The clouds are more realistic too and since the position of them changed a little, it seemes like Luna is flying right through it x) On the character itself, you did an especially good job on the plasticity of her details and her pose <3 It seems like the light influence is really soft moonlight and especially her hair has gotten its magic in your very own style, reminding me of an incoming night, just like it should be x3 Next to this I also think the addition of a second visible wing was a great choiceAll in all the colouring is much smoother and powerful in this improved version and it also has gotten more charismatic, due the fact that you can really get a feeling of Luna's deep thoughts by looking at her face, it has worries and memories, yet her presentation has something strong <3 You did a great job on this and I know there will be many more great works of yours to follow!I would be excited to see more Art Improvements like these, if you have some time, mood and inspiration for another one in the future, keep it up!