sounding interesting dude! a bit out of tune in some instruments, though I can see how that might just be the style.

I'd try to make this sound a bit more melodic by applying some reverb to some of the more dry elements. also, some of the existing reverb is flushing out the rest of the mix. a good trick is to put a high pass filter on the verb., also lower its wet/volume level.

nice one!

-TC-