I really wanted to like this book but I just couldn't. first the characters are just in entrusting and blah. there is nothing that makes me like any of them.



SPOILERS BELOW!!!!!!!!







first there are a few main characters In a, squad all of which are in a relationship with one another. I can see maybe a few but all? and it adds nothing except extra to read and a sex scene. The characters also just do not seem to grow as you read and I also hated all of them. could care less about any of them. conver

I really wanted to like this book but I just couldn't. first the characters are just in entrusting and blah. there is nothing that makes me like any of them.



SPOILERS BELOW!!!!!!!!







first there are a few main characters In a, squad all of which are in a relationship with one another. I can see maybe a few but all? and it adds nothing except extra to read and a sex scene. The characters also just do not seem to grow as you read and I also hated all of them. could care less about any of them. conversations felt forced and unreal to me. The over all plot was OK but execution was lacking. story seems to happen the last 50 pages and everything leading up was fluff. I almost felt as if someone in a monotone voice was telling me the story. The parts that tried be good felt forced and unrealistic.



few other things bothered me, talking about hearing the engine come to life in an electric car, ever been in one? yeah they are don't have an engine and don't make noise. Sole cells to provide power hooked to a generator, yeah it doesn't work that way, one or the other not both. solar cells connect to transformer or battery's. the communication Satellites used but yet needs line of site and connects to roof. Satellites are in orbit and one in geosynchronous would solve all the problems. also highly trained group gets in vehicle they are not trained in, would never happen. and a group that is the best seems like a misfit group in general. A few times the general runs into Nick saying something along the lines of I was looking for you but just ask how's the weather. I could prob go on but you get the point if you read this far but



my biggest problem, there is NO ENDING!!!! nothing is wrapped up, we get no conclusion and have no idea what is going on, that alone is why I wrote this review. I can overlook alot of crappiness in a book but no conclusion is not one of them