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Hi! I'm really happy to be writing a critique for your art work. Your art work was good, with just a few minor flaws that are mainly just based off of preference. I don't know what the original OC looks like, but, I'm not here to critique the OC. I'm here to critique your art work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Big Grin)"/> So, to start off, it's pretty cute. The first flaw that I noticed, again this could be just a matter of preference, but I think the eyes should have been the same gray-ish color that you used to outline the pony. It makes the eyes stand out a little too much and, in my opinion, takes a little bit away from the actual art work. The main focus shouldn't be the eyes, but the other parts that are more complicated and detailed. The only other flaw that I noticed is the wing. It seems like the feathers aren't detailed enough. It looks like there aren't any individual feathers, but it's just one big feather with lines in it. I would've singled them out more and make each feather more defined. Now for some good parts --- your tail and main were beautiful. You mixed the colors perfectly and got the "shading" of it just right. The other thing I really liked was the little music notes on the pony's hip. It's hard to draw something that small digitally and still be able to tell what it is. Thank you so much for posting, and hope you like my critique!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Big Grin)"/>