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Impact Impact

I think the concept and color choice is overall very dynamic - I'm especially drawn to the contrast between the size of the gun and the person holding it.I do think the piece lacks a little bit of focus, my eyes move first to the gun, then to the face, then to the front of the gun then to the blue streaks in the background, I think this would have been more effective with dimming the background quite a bit to make the subject pop, and then even perhaps dimming the foreground to frame the subject as well, if the gun WAS intended to be your focal point that would definitely work wellI also think you're starting to do a good job with the reflected hues of the lighting along some of the parts of the weapon, but you will notice too some parts have reflections where reflections wouldn't be, for example, the back f the gun, no light would have bounced off of that area, and more light would have bounced on the bottomI think this a good piece that could use some tweaks like that to REALLY give an impact, good job!