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The concept I really do like, having a character that is essentially a hybrid of Pyrrha and Penny is rather plausible in the source material. The name of the piece itself is a nice little nod to mythology. Especially if viewed in a mythological context it makes me think the giant mech in the fore and background is Hades. nice touch.With your technique you do some really impressive work with lighting and particles. The blueish tone you have throughout the piece gives it a rather somber under-worldly appearance going back to the mythological parallel.The only things I can nitpick in terms of technique is the lighting on the face and chest, it makes it seem that there is a light source above her or something that we don't see. It's not bad it's just a personal nitpick. Also the character left hand, it doesn't have any way to distinguish the different fingers so it looks like she is wearing a mitten or has a nub for a hand. Hands are by far some of the most difficult things to draw by far so it would do well for you to practice more on them for your next work.All in all I really liked the piece. It's not the first mixing of two character designs I've seen but the way you did it works. You've got some really great skill with lighting and composition. Just remember to practice that hand work and you'll be set.