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COOOOKIESSSS!I enjoy how you drew her expression, as it seems like she's horrified at what's happening to her. I also like how how you drew the cookies sticking to her, like it's some kind of goo. Remids me of R.L. Stine's Monster blood. However, I will have to agree with your other critiquer; the window does distract from Pinkie Pie. I would put some more light in he room, perhaps making a bright crescent moon outside that shines moonlight onto her form. It's a bit too dark inside to see much detail. Other than that, I see you're taking my advice about using that style for action scenes. Thank you. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>Not as good as some of your other pics, but still has that eerie feel to it, and overall, I'm happy to have taken time to examine it.