Tips and critique is welcome and wanted!! (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞ ☜(ﾟヮﾟ☜)

Don't use this picture without credit, thanks!

Doomfist: Maximilien, you are scaring our new partner. This is an important deal.Maximilen: Have I? Pardonnez-moi... *glare*Soo... I like the rich omnic man.... and the Doomfist.... Yea... *Need some help*I hope you like this drawing :3