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Originality Originality

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Impact Impact

Well, I'm going to be honest and say that this is one of my first critiques, however I love your work so I hope I can start here e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Smile)"/>Vision: Honestly, I personally didn't think it was that bad of an idea. If you didn't have a 5 star drive for it yourself, then it's hard to give you a 5 star from mine :/ . As well, I think you perfectly portrayed the random, cute, and somewhat meaningless, yet worthwhile comic you were looking for.Originality: I can personally say that I have never seen anything with Dink and Gummy in the same comic/fanfiction/short/flash/anything else. I think that the only thing that is even close to un-original is that dinky and derpy have been used quite a few times, however this makes the comic what it is so, its hard to say something about it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Smile)"/>Technique: From the first panel to the last, the reader can see scenes from my little pony that never existed, yet look like they belong in the show. Only one question rises: How do you do it? Your technique matches that of the shows almost perfectly. Well done, 5/5Impact: The impact of this comic was....well it made me smile e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Smile)"/> . I wouldn't, however, say that you were intending for a major impact comic here. All that aside, even the "random" comics you draw are full of originality and amazing backdrops, which impacts me quite largely. The story (ummmm....story?) was I guess a little...lacking, but that made the comic for me.Final: A well drawn comic always deserves appreciation, whether it's for fun, vent-work, or something you spent a lot of time on. If I had to improve, I might do something about that.....bucket on gummy's head for it seems to dissapear in the last panel. I presumed the duck went over it, however my logic says it would simply push it. However, what does my logic count when there is a unicorn in a bathtub with an alligator?