I hope you don't mind if I give you some advice:1) The expression doesn't seem to fit. It's quite hard to determine the expression. I'd recommend either having a completely neutral expression or a more psychotic one to fit the character more.2) You have drawn Ayano with a single breast. From this angle, you would be able to see both, though the right one (from the perspective of the viewer) would have a smaller curve.Overall, it's a pretty good drawing and I'm looking forward to how you improve!