Well, the placement of the word balloons in the second panel is a bit confusing. From the dialogue it looks like the order goes Yona-Pinkie-Smolder, but the way they're placed makes it look like it goes Yona-Smolder-Pinkie, with Pinkie's balloon leading to the next panel.



You see, typically word balloons should be placed in a way that reads left-to-right going down, just like how you read a page in a book. It makes it easier to see who's talking and when, and to help lead the viewer's eyes from one panel to the next. Plus, when a speech bubble overlaps a comic panel more than halfway like that, it's typically either the first or last thing spoken within that panel, to guide the reader from one panel to the next, like a doorway between rooms.



So if you wanted to change it, I'd suggest putting Yona's word bubble in the top left corner, then pinkie's in the middle right, and finally Smolder's at the bottom center, crossing over the panel border. Pinkie's dialogue might be hard to fit in the middle, so maybe shortening it to just "thank you!" or something like will work.



Hope that helps!