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My rating is more accurate on originality and technique.Let's see... I really love the idea of Twilight trying to work out old technology like video cassettes. The most common thing most people end up doing when trying to "fix" a tape is tearing it apart and messing up the tape. Oh, that brings back some old memories of when I was 8."Approximately 42 seconds later..." Dang! That is fast for such a mess! Is Twilight that bad at video tape fixing to end up wrapped like that in such a short amount of time? I'm also curious of what lessons does Luna meant. (Other subject...)One thing I like to point out are the book titles. Yeah... they sort of pop out on you. You know what I'd do? Delete them. Serves we can keep the enigma of "what DOES Twilight have in the library anyway?" type of deal. (or you could use that as a another comic idea maybe... selling her complete collection in an online catalog or something. Ponified eBay!)I do enjoy your series. Very funny in a sense that Twilight is into books and quill pens over emails. Wait, that calls for another idea I have in mind. The internet is known to have an information overload crisis of some sort. You should have Twilight sit there for a looonng time looking at the internet, namely YouTube. Then have her write to Celestia about her thoughts and whatnot. IDK... something in those terms.I gee... I ramble on too much. Well, I do praise your talent on this series and may we continue to see more. I love these comics because they have so much potential! There's A LOT of things to do with this.