Please bear in mind that this is pure opinion.



It's beautiful, but looking at it, there are a few things. The hoof and hindleg are blending together like they've been fused. A grayer line, not black, along the division would deliniate these are two seperate limbs that just happen to be the same color. A slight darkening of the hind leg would also work. The second is the shape of said forehoof. It comes to a very pronounced point that's distracting. A more curved tip would blend in better.



Mmm... let me see... textures on the hair and scarf are lovely. The shading is a little flat. It's like she's in front of a light screen that's illuminating her front equally. Fine, given this is a blend of impressionist and realistic over realism. Wondering where her pipbuck is too. Under the stable suit? The saddle bag is odd too. It doesn't seem to be attached to anything. If you moved it up, it would cover her cutie mark. I'm not sure what it adds to the image. It's just there.



Ahah! Now I see something. The eyes. I don't like the heart pupils. While this is impressionistic, those pupils are abstract, so it conflicts. I agree that heart eyes are adorable, but it turns the picture from a depiction to an interpretation, and while I have no problem with abstract interpretation of characters, it's not interpretive enough with just the eyes!



Bear in mind that I still like the picture. Those are just a few little things that feel off for you to consider for your next picture.