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Shoutout to my little pony fans!I'll skip plot elucidation, because I have no idea what kind of scene you wanted to portray here. If you wanted to add some sad element to the artwork, I can't really feel it because I don't see what happened there.Queen Chrysalis - she is supposed to be the closest object to viewer's sight, but no, she just blends onto background almost completely.But you distinguished the center of the composition very well with the help of chiaroscuro and darkening corners of the canvas, attracting viewer's attention exactly to where it needed.Chrysalis is facing left, and canvas is extended to the left as well, this is good. But maybe you could move her to the centre just a bit, because right side of the artwork might be too crowded with this dark, spooky tree.Main vinous colour is appealing, but it's everywhere. If sun's lighting meant to be red as well, I understand, but you could use more cool tones in the shadows and add more hues to red to make your work more interesing.Background is structured pretty good, but it need more blue tones as well to show that the castle is really far away.And I also think that sky maybe need couple of changelings flying around.Good luck with improving your skills!