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Basically, the design is very impressive.It is certain I know more or less your stories, but enough to know that your characters cannot be configured size or so vary.The description you gave is better information, it is true that the attack Bahamut Mega Flare is just powerful to make strange when you see the pull on the earth in final fantasy, why the earth explodes not with all the dead people. « www.youtube.com/watch?v=kgCb06… in 7:50 for the exemple.»As I do not know enough stories, I would return not in literary criticism, but I would do the drawing.The scene was drawn is interesting, it gives a spirit of battle memoral.The effect of kinematics where the contour blurring is used to focus the center point or more apparent.In this case, we focused on the snake's head, down the snake's body and the bright point of the ray, but the third one could equally focus on the shoulder of the dragon Bahamut.The technique used is excellent, but it overlooks the scene of the drawing as if this time the mega flare as an important moment that only happens once or intense impact.Color issue, there is nothing to say, they are subtle, well arranged.Even those of the background is just well chosen.The question of texture, on to bite.The snake is supert, blur is just subtle and very well expressed, the scales are a stunning beauty, texture gives a look of tile or even varnished stone, a kind of scale we imagine resistant. Its design is very well done. The fluorescent lights such as the mouth, eyes and lower body gives a deadspace side with weaknesses monsters.Dust and mist gives subtle realistic side.It is visible with the lower body of a snake.If I speak of the dragon, it hurts to criticize .Already hair, they are stiff , it lacks effect , hair brush or hair brush hard you'd think.His horns are missing texture , the design is good, but could be confused for dressings.The texture of the body, then we have the right armor matte slightly reflective , more texture on top , you might think to bubble wrap , it goes for if it was for the skin of the wings, but not scales.Dragon accessories are well done, but unfortunately I not understand the reason for presence .If I look at the dragon close, I apologize , but it is not complemented by visible lines and beyond as the remaining sketches, little detail especially for those looking in small size .Its melted at the bottom where it is in the shade is acceptable.Her face is truly hide its technical Mega Flare , this is understandable, but the range seems to be shoot larger than the mouth.The ray is well made, light and more and more environments, environments spots makes beautiful impact, presence of power.The level of the mouth of the dragon, hide it, to the level of impact that passes through, it is, but the fact that there is a blur, cannot see how the ray reacted correctly on the body, the result is not seen if the ray to make a hole or just passed through it like a ghost.Nevertheless, for a drawing, small size, it is beautiful.