Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Wow. I mean wow.A COMIC? FOR ME? <img class="avatar" src=" a.deviantart.net/avatars/h/a/h… " alt=" " title="happytwilightplz" />Let's start with the vision. I absolutely love this comic with every piece of my body. The unique vision you were able to describe with both age gap between siblings and the thrill of your first pet both again are very heartwarming.Let's move on to the next category: Originality. I dont think Winona's ever been given an origin story, so +A for that. I also think that AJ and Big Mac's relationship is covered very much in the show. Showing them in adolescence was a really brilliant idea.Next, technique. Very fitting of your style. Thick outlines and detailed coloring. Nice work.Finally, Impact. I have yet to see it on the frontpage of Reddit or on EqD (Sending and posting now XP).Again, great piece. Even when you're famous, you still find a way to push your art and your style and make great art.Keep it up e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Wink)"/>~Turbo