Hello I'm from I am going to try my best to give a fair critique! First of all Weiss looks quite badass still even with the short hair so good job on that, she looks so intimidating much so in this form. XDNow I would like to first point out about her body it does not looks bad actually but it seems the other commentators has also pointed out, the legs. Now the hips and up are quite fine looking and are anatomically correct but the legs are too long, if you would try to stand still and put your hands to the sides it would have lay near the hips. But in this case I would have imagine that the hands would lay near the knee. Since it seems you are having a hard time on that part maybe this can help you in that part: Female Body Types Tutorial . I pick the female one considering, the male anatomy is also quite different.Now next on the dress, I have seen the dress before, the only thing that's kinda wrong is the folds and the frills on her skirt. It seems your also having a hard time on that part I would suggest on searching on different kinds of folding tutorials considering with each different kinds of clothing, they have different kinds of fold to it. [I really don't know what kind of cloth weiss dress is so just try to browse through google or even here!) And with the frills you can also search here in Deviantart there are quite many Frills Tutorials, but you can click the link I'm going to give to give you an idea on how to draw frills much easily: [TUTORIAL] How to draw frills or something. ( Hope it helps you! ^^)Now next on to the sword, it's really not the sword itself, it looks quite wonderful and an exact replica to her sword. But it's the way it is held, if you have tried to imagine the pose or try to replicate the pose yourself, it would have been impossible considering the sword is made out of metal and would not bend if you try to do that pose. And additionally your arms couldn't bend that far back and your fingers would strain itself and that's no good for a sword wielding warrior but if have to change the pose then you should have tried to lay the sword in her shoulder it would have been quite great! The way the sword that's being held is the only thing I had a problem with in that area, but the pose in a whole is quite good actually!I have no qualms with the shading it looks quite great and your cell shading is very good too considering I'm bad at cell shading and I'm not exactly a digital artist. XDSo you have no worries on that regard and even with your slight condition with your eyes, your shading is so good. TWTNow I don't anything to say on the face and hair considering they're also good but the thing that is lacking is the scar and considering I have no skills on drawing on scars maybe this can help you.: Tutorial for Scars [triggering content] Also forgot to add, that you should add some more shading and a little bit of highlight to the hair to make to more luscious.And lastly the background ok actually quite simple and gives a sense of calm before the storm.And I think that's all I really want to point out.Hope this is has been helpful to you in some way, have a good day and bye! ^^