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Hello I am from <img class="avatar" src=" a.deviantart.net/avatars/b/e/b… " alt=" " title="beaute-lamour" /> and I am here to provide you with the critique you requested. Now I hope that any suggestions I have to offer will aid you in the future and that I will be 100% honest and respectful, please remember all critiques are subjective and I hope that this helps e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Smile)"/>Okay first off this piece looks incredible! I love the blast of prime colors and the contrast looks incredible between the powerful blues and the bold reds I also love the white clouds it soothes the eyes as the viewer looks at the piece so it is not an eye sore. I love the yellows they just pop out, so great use of warm and cool colors the warm colors serve to create amazing emphasis on the piece, I was immediately drawn to the face and head area because of them.This piece also very surreal, the clouds help aid that otherworldly feel. The clouds look amazing the detail you put into them is incredible especially the red clouds, for many artist especially with traditional medium clouds are tricky but it seems like you have mastered them nicely, The red clouds I cannot stress how powerful they look, the way the light strikes them they their form is amazing, very very naturalistic. I like how bold you are in your color scheme and lines and the concept is very powerful and execution very original.My suggestions I love the pose and the implied movement good job for no reference used. I think the bust looks fine overall the anatomy is okay but the head looks to be the main thing that is not anatomically correct, toward the top of the head I think it should be more smoother. I also think around the ribcage is a little wide on the far left side it may help to bring it in a little bit.The ink was a lovely idea it helps bring out the piece. I also would have like to see a little more balance incorporated into the subject,I understand that the piece is asymmetrical balance and I like that a lot it works well for the piece but I feel that the right arm should have something to complement it, because it has these gold lines but they do not exist on other areas of the piece which can be distracting to the composition. I think what may help with this is adding the same swirls you used in the arm and incorporating them into the side of her torso like the left side so the piece is more balanced and the arm doesn't look so abrupt. You can also incorporate the pattern onto the side of her face into the white oval because the space by the head feels a little empty.This piece is very powerful, surreal, creative and original I love the concept and the execution is lovely. My main suggestion for next time, is to add some more balance by incorporating pattens you may use in your piece in other parts, looking at the piece in the mirror may help you spot areas that you can add patterns to, because you are looking at it from reverse view. Also if you wonder if something is not necessary in the piece just try blocking it out with your hand or a paper to see if your composition looks the same, better or worse without it and that will help to determine if some pieces are necessary or not so nothing comes across as to abrupt.This piece is fabulous and I am not surprised it sold it looks lovely and it is very bold, keep up the good art and I hope this helped, if we did help feel free to recommend us to other artist who would like constrictive feedback. Have a great day and stay beautiful e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="(Wink)"/>from <img class="avatar" src=" a.deviantart.net/avatars/b/e/b… " alt=" " title="beaute-lamour" />