I came across this story on Taylor Kole's website and decided to give it a shot. I was beyond pleasantly surprised to find a fast paced story that grabbed a hold of me and kept me reading until it was finished. I even came immediately over to Amazon to purchase it and leave this review. Kole's ability to draw out the uniqueness in, not only the main character, but all the side characters as well, in a very short amount of pages is wonderful. Normally it's a challenge for a writer to really give depth to a short story, let alone in roughly 14-15 pages, but Kole does it. Not that Randy Johnson, the main character, is the deepest person on Earth, but there's so much packed in that you feel like you know this guy and can feel his world. If you're wondering if Mr. Taylor Cole can write, grab this short story and give it a spin. I believe you'll agree he's got the gift for storytelling! It's well worth the entry fee and I am genuinely excited to see what he brings to the table next.