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You have been visited by a Critmas Fairy! We fairies are trying to show the world we can give critique to others without being downright criticising, as per the spirit of CRITmas ( fav.me/daqfq97 ). Mind if I just hop on to business, then?First things first: what a sight! This picture reminds me a lot of the Chinese concept artists I follow here on dA and whose style and quality of light I absolutely adore!I just saw your colour variation pic of this character, and I think the blue is a good choice - it makes for such beautiful delicate shadows, and that pale gold kerchief goes so well with it.I DO spot a couple of anatomy errors, though, which is a crying shame for a picture already taken all the way to the last stage.Firstly, the area around her ribs and waist seems guessed rather than researched, and looking at that I noticed her hips were impossibly wide, also, compared with her shoulders (in typical women, they are about he same width). Her frontal lower leg is too long, and both her feet are extremely small.I think researching bodily proportions (google: artist anatomy proportions) and how to double-check those when laying down a character sketch will help you immensely in your projects yet to come.Best of luck with it, and let me wrap up by wishing you a very prolific 2017 with much much more of these character concepts!Love,BATTLEFAIRIES(PS: I am a bit dissatisfied with dA's star rating system, so please ignore the stars: I'm just giving everyone 3.5's anyway. Thank you for understanding)