Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

E: I will also note that I marked originality down as this is a popular scene to do but that doesn't reflect your skill in what you did doing this scene yourself. Anyway on to all the amazing things you did for this drawing. First seeing this just makes me feel a bit sad as I know what is going on story wise with just a glance so it's good you can get that across. The lighting being the way it is allows for a somber feeling but you made it so it also literally highlights the what should be the main focus of the drawing as well which is really a neat thing to see. Most of the picture being blurred as it's in the background also what allows the focus to be on Asriel and Chara but also making sense as the rest of the drawing is mostly far away. Which also brings me to how fantastic you make the sense of depth in your pictures! The color palette is also really good I think as the two most notable colors are blue and yellow which go together well. Between my eye being drawn to Asriel and then due to the mountains being framed as they are against the blue sky and finally to the pillars my eye is also drawn around the picture.