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Okay this is fine i like the lineart and the shading.it doesn't really look like, but eh eh. i just wrote this review to requtify the other review thanks. The technique is fine i have no problem i don't understand the originality thing. keep in mind i am a writer not an artist so take my words with a grain of salt. and as i am not an artist my thing is does it look fine and if so i don't care about the other stuff. Good job i suppose. Im not that big a fan of RWBY smut so keep that in mind too