Alright, here's my two pence.

DYNAMICS

Right off the bat, I notice that you've done something that many of us have done starting out. This is especially evident in the piano and synths: there are no individual note velocities. All the notes are the same loudness, and that makes the piece sound mechanical, unnatural. This also explains why the intro is of the sound loudness as the rest of the piece, when some soft-loud could be sorely used.

MUSICALITY

The song itself gives an indietronica vibe, which I quite enjoy. The main chord progression is well done. The basses have a really nice growl to them, and these are the driving force behind this piece.

4:02 onwards is my favourite part -- you've not only switched the chords up, but you've used A LOT of syncopation, which a lot of established EDM composers don't even do. Simply beautiful!

I've enjoyed listening to this piece very much, and really, the only technicality here is mixing/dynamics. Now I'm not the best at mixing myself and I am still learning -- but if all the instruments are centre-panned, try shifting some left or right. (Not the basses and drums though; these need to be at the centre.) Also, individual note volumes. Volume envelopes, and perhaps even tempo envelopes.

If you are considering remaking this piece after learning all these, I very much look forward to it.

4/5.