Yes, it is really good! You can definitely be proud of yourself because of that. You really managed to show the mess in Chloe's roomAnd atmosphere here in the air is exactly the same as in the beginning of the third, I think, episode, when there's so much Pricefield going onBut Max crying is so sadYou did really good job here. Colors are consistent, details are detailed and working, fabric is drawn very well. The only thing I think you could improve is composition/lightening, because now focus goes to the sad emptiness of the middle of the bed, where is nothing interesting going on. Max and Chloe's faces are in shadow, every detail is in shadow, so the viewer have no idea what to look at. I think maybe even decreasing strongness of the light (soft edges and less bright (or brighter everything else)) could help.Of course I know how hard is implementing theory to realityMaybe you could note me if you do more paintings from LiS?Regards,Tia.