The face is great, and the background is pretty cool, but this time the anatomy is completely broken: the spine makes no sense, one of the legs seems to lack half its volume, and I'm not sure how is her left shoulder working. It's a pity, really, there are a lot of awesome ideas here and the character herself looks pretty interesting, but it's so broken it doesn't even work for the fanservice (at least not to me). You are an amazing artist, I know this isn't even close to what you can make.