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it is great e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>, I really like the body language and the colors and facial expressionsbut of course the drawing can be better with a few modificationsfirst of all the resolution of your drawing, a higher resolution can be betterand more if you put darker shades (I am talking about the shading) in contrast with the highlights the drawing will pop out, in my opinionand the Cartoon-ish outlines are too sketchy, maybe you can do something about it to make it look better, this is again a resolution problem, I don't knowand the black lines are not everywhere, they are too thick on her legs, and she don't even have them on her feets, maybe it would be better if you play with the thickness of the line, but d'ont erase it completelyI hope that my critic was useful, and I wish you good luck for the future deviations ^^