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As I can see this comic has a very good story from the start until now.I have not seen other stories that are similar to this. The technique of your drawing is very quite unique and the story gives suspense to the viewers because of its nice storyline. As I can say in overall your comic has a great storyline, a great technique of drawing, and you have very much originality.This is my First time as a Critique. I hope what I say is fair enough for this ,again, great comic. My advice is to make more of this comic of yours and you may excel.