Hey, I am here from ProjectCommentThis piece immediately stood out to me from the other submissions because of the great use of colors^^ You said that you wanted some constructive feedback in the comments and i thought I'd try to give you some, even though I probably don't know much more about art either^^ Also i want to say that I really like the two of them together, even though he rejected her so bluntly, but i ship them anyway and I want the two of them to be a happy coupleSo here we go with the critique. The thing that stands out to me about this picture in particular is the sunset and the ribbon in Rem's hair. Whilst i can see the ribbon as an eye catcher I think the sun is slightly distracting from the shadowed couple. As you say in your description you say you lack a little bit of talent for the hands, but don't you worry my friend that is all in the essence of practicing^^ I can't draw those things for the life of me so maybe I am the wrong person to give advice on this but the hands do indeed look quite unpolished. They look weirdly uneven. Whilst the two hands on the right side of the picture look fairly alright (even though for my taste a bit more detail would not have hurt them (maybe a bit more shading?), but that is probably just your art style and had nothing to do with those details actually missing), the two hands on the left side of the picture are very small in comparison. They should be on about the same level in depth of the picture so Subaru's hand should be about the same size as his other one^^Other than that i think your piece is very well drawn and i can only agree that you did capture the essence of the couplekeep it up^^