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I think you did fairly well on the shading. Because this is a fanart, I'll give you four stars, but you did a good job of making an interesting scene.The main problem I have with this is that the wonder bolt pony's head is cut off. I'm not sure if you drew it that way to make it seem like s/he was tall and impressive or just mysterious, but you could have drawn his/her head and still made the wonder bolt seem impressive (i.e., drawing him taller).Also, the wonder bolt pony's feet are flat and standing right on the horizon line. For a better sense of depth, you could have drawn the feet on the floor, lower down and not directly on the line.The shading is good, but I feel you could have made it smoother (paper stump or more finger smudging?).I don't know what vision means...I'll put a five.Impact is four because the pony's head is missing.Overall, I think this is very good, and Scootaloo looks so cute! Keep up the good work!