Hi Everyone

So since you guys seemed to like the last story I wrote.Here’s one I started just a couple of days ago and finished today.It’s called “If Only She Knew” Enjoy!

It was fall time.The leaves were changing,temperatures were dropping,and Thanksgiving was just around the corner. Not everyone seemed to enjoy the fall season due to the temperature change,but I loved it.New York City was the perfect place for the fall time. I was walking around and looking at all of the shops.As I was looking,I could see what my eyes didn’t want to see:Ariel Davis and a man,talking. Ariel was my best friend that I had known since I was 12 years old. I was walking in the halls of the worst middle school known to mankind:Brown Middle School.This school was full of nothing but bullies who treated me like crap for absolutely no reason. Two boys walked up to me.

“Wow look at Peter.He’s a complete freak”,one said

“Yeah if it looks like a freak,talks like a freak,acts like a freak,it most likely is a freak”,the other one added.

I tried to walk past them to get to my class,but they wouldn’t let me.

“Please just leave me alone and let me go to my class!”,I said

“We’re not done talking to you so no!”,the one boy responded

“Well,i could give less of a crap what you have to say.So,please,let me get to my class!”,I replied

“No!”,both the boys said

Then,I hear a voice behind me.A girl voice.

“Leave him alone!”,she yelled

I turned around a saw a beautiful girl with long,red hair and big,brown eyes.

“What?”,the boys said

“He’s telling you to leave him alone.Therefore,you should leave him alone”,She responded

The boys then walked away,speechless.

“Thank you”,I said to her

“No Problem.Hey,you’re new here,right?”,she asked

“Yeah my family and I just moved here”,I replied

“Well,my name is Ariel Davis and you are?”,she asked

“Peter.Peter Mcgallen”,I answered

We shook hands and that’s how we became best friend. I was the shy kid and Ariel was that fire that I needed. The older we got the stronger our friendship became. Ariel was my rock and I was hers. But,also,as I got older,my feelings for her turned into more than just a friendship.However,I had never had the courage to tell her because I didn’t want our friendship to be torn to pieces. I would just let her keep dating other guys and I would date other girls without actually having real feelings for them.I used them to try and erase her from my brain,but she wouldn’t go away. This man that she was with was named David Hammell. David was the most egotistical man I had ever met in my life.And I wasn’t only saying that because I had feelings for her,but because it was true. He was completely arrogant and I couldn’t understand for the life of me why Ariel picked to be around someone like him where the only reason people liked him was because he was a billionaire. Therefore,arrogance was very present in him.I would see him with a bunch of other girls that weren’t Ariel doing things that he should’ve done to Ariel and not those girls.Behind Ariel’s back.I would tell Ariel all of the wrong he had done to her,but she never did believe me.

However,I noticed that this conversation between Ariel and David wasn’t their typical lovey-dovey conversation. It was more like an argument. Then,she turned and walked away from him and saw me. She walked up to me with a slight frown on her face.

“Peter,you were right about David.He’s a complete jerk.He cheated on me with another blonde girl”,she said

“I’m Sorry”,I responded

“It’s ok.I kind of knew that it was true”,Ariel stated

We paused for a minute.

“Hey did you want to do something tonight?maybe go to a movie?We haven’t hung out in a while and you need to get your mind off of him”,I asked

“Sure”,she said with a smile.

Later on, we went out to the movies and it was incredible. Our hearts were full of laughter. As we were walking out of the theater,

“Now you should tell her your feelings”,I thought to myself

So,I turned around and I said, “Ariel,I have something to tell you”

“Ok what is it?”,she asked

“Ariel I-”

It was at that very moment that a little bullet that sounded like fireworks hit me in the head and I fell over. Little did I know that the night that the night that I was supposed to confess my feelings would also be the night that I would go to Heaven.