I just typed a long piece of constructive criticism and deleted it on accident, so I'm going to make a smaller version.

Her hair looks like clouds and differs from the rest of the picture, I would add more lines defining where the curls stop and start.

The eyelashes pop alot, and look like a whole different style from what you're going for because of the black, and I would tone it down a bit with a brown and more lashes than just one wing.

I really like your stuff and like what you did with the skin and her gem. Keep drawing and making animatics, I really like them and they cheer me up.