I like it, but there are some things about it that seem too sharp and detailed...like the lamps and curtains. Not sure If I'm articulating what I'm feeling and seeing very well though. Actually I think that is the problem, looking at it again; it's too sharp and in focus and the focal point is a bit unclear. Unlike your sketches which have very strong focal composition points and have a mix of sharp and soft focusGood luck with the next one