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just letting you know i'm not good at giving a good Critique but here is what i have to say.I really like this drawing of Sunset Shimmer but..... What I would do is make her nose smaller and more like a mare and not like a stallion. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/> I would also try to make the lines more smooth and smoother shading on her face. maybe the roughness is the style you were going for but that is my Critique on this drawing so I hope you find this helpful for you upcoming drawings e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/> I know its not much of a Critique but its all I have. and I hope the best on you newer drawing in the future e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>