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alright let me start with telling you how beautiful this is ^^first, this is a good vector work, and you include the .svg file as well, (and that's awesome)i can't give a high score for the originality , since the sketch is not yours, but how you color it, is magnificent, you did great in representing the sketch into a vectori really don't know how to make this better, since this is already a great vector coming from a great sketch, but maybe, you could use gradients in the lines, with the right touch this can be much better, nevertheless , you have done well in this vector.