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I really like how you have the lighting on the shoulders, skin, and hair in contrast to the sold colors on the character itself. It really makes her pop out of the white background and it looks like you made this using ink wash art style, which I really am a fan of.Another thing that really gets me is how you used the smoke effect. I personally like how it blends well into the white background and how it just barley sticks out in contrast to the skin. I also really like the way the character is positioned with the gun and everything. Like she actually looks like a prime example of someone in the mafia.But I do have a few issues with the picture.For one thing, I don't like how you used the lighting on the gun. Personally I would have made the weapon more shiny/flashy. Like have it draw your attention to it more than other parts of the art piece. Not saying its bad, but that's something to consider.Other things I don't honestly like are the hair and the eyes. I don't like how bland the hair is. It looks one dimensional and flat. Not really popping with the rest of the picture. And the eyes look rather lifeless to me. I'd understand if you were going for a cold glare. But adding that little shin that you see in other anime type drawings can make a big difference.Over all, I really do like the picture. In fact, its great. Just has one or two flaws for me.I'm giving it a 9/10.