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OK, I try it again this time.Overall, it is an inspiring work again. It immediately made my head spin with stories. So, yes, impactwise it is a full 5 stars for me e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>Also technically it is awesome (at least for someone like me who doesn't know a bit about photomanip). I especially like the attention you give to small details like the twigs, the butterflies and the sea gulls. It is also nice how the tilting of the asteroid rings breaks the symmetry of the pyramids and the angels. Clever. The moons orbiting on different planes again enhance this even more. The tilting of the whole picture unbalances the viewer even more (next thing the sea will start pouring out of the lower right corner of the picture ... e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>).But I feel something is wrong about the outer asteroid ring; I guess it might be because the difference in size between the ones at the front and the ones at the back is too small to match the supposed angle and size of the circle. The inner circle looks just fine for me, it is only the outer one that looks somehow wrong, especially around the left and right bend (at the right bend, the asteroids even leave the circle).I also am not sure if your pyramids are really triangle-based as someone wrote, or square-based. Looking at the angles between the edges of the square-looking base block and the wall planes of the lower pyramid, one might guess it's triangle-shaped, but I have the feeling the angle between the walls is still too large. With the upper pyramid I have the definite impression that it has a square base. So, which is it? And might it be there's something wrong about the angles? (Actually I didn't even think about this before I read the other critiques e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>)All in all: Keep up your wonderfully creative work.