To me it turned out quite right but i don't know what you had in mind off courseI like it a lot, the darks makes it more gloomy and scary. It makes me think of a genetic modification of the resurrection of the KrakenThere is a famous poem about the legend of the Kraken made by young Alfred Tennyson publiced in 1830 werd gepubliceerd.Below the thunders of the upper deep,Far far beneath in the abysmal sea,His ancient, dreamless, uninvaded sleepThe kraken sleepeth: faintest sunlights fleeAbout his shadowy sides; above him swellHuge sponges of millennial growth and height;And far away into the sickly light,From many a wondrous grot and secret cellUnnumber'd and enormous polypiWinnow with giant arms the slumbering green.There hath he lain for ages, and will lieBattening upon huge seaworms in his sleep,Until the latter fire shall heat the deep;Then once by man and angels to be seen,In roaring he shall rise and on the surface die.