I will be honest with you here. I went through your gallery and this is probably your least impressive drawing out of all the latest art your submitted.There are multiple reasons for this, but the hair is probably this most significant - and by "hair" I mean both color and style of the hair. You see, when drawing stuff in sunset setting you need to remember that everything will be tinted by the red light, even to a point where the original color is completely lost. Here is a great example of this: a girl in this drawing normally has green hair in white light: i.imgur.com/BOGEiCe.jpg . This happens because during setting of the sun we almost get no light other than red, meaning that there is almost no green light to bounce of green surfaces. The same thing would happen to Chrysalis' blue hair, there is almost no blue light to bounce of it, meaning it should be almost exclusively reddish.As for the style of the hair, simply put, it doesn't match Chrysalis' body. The way you draw her hair is more akin of a realistic art-style, while her head is drawn more in a cell-shaded sort of style - putting these two things together results in a clash of styles. Personally I would just simplify the hair - use 3 colors (dark, mid, and highlight) and wide strokes.Besides the hair two more things could use some additional work: teeth and eyes.Eyes are not my strong suit, so I don't really have much to say about them, except for repeating my previous advice regarding the hair. Just like the color of the hair, so does the eyes would have their color almost completely lost in the red light. Unless their are supposed to be self-illuminated, in which case they should cast some light outside, onto the surrounding features of the face.Finally, the teeth. The problem here is that they seem to be coming out of her lips - this might be a deliberate choice, but I feel drawing actual gums and putting these teeth into them would simply look much better.Also one more thing, what are those green lines on Chrysalis' cheek? Are those some kind of markings or tattoos? Or maybe something organic that is part of her skin? Either way, they are too thin, too perfect, and don't like they belong there.