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An absolutely charming work of art, with great energy and movement! At first glance, the thing that stuck out to me the most was the angle of her pants, when compared with her hips. The abdomen is a rounded form (even when you've got a six pack) yet you didn't convey that "round" feeling when drawing on her pants. Instead, they are drawn at a flat diagonal. Furthermore, her crotch should line up with her belly button, as of now it is too far to the right.I love the color scheme you used to depict her. So playful. I think that you could have harmonized the entire image if you had used a purple tinted grey for her little flying friend. And because his sword is the same color as his body, you might have made it lighter or darker in value so that the sword and the wings don't blend in. I know you outlined it in white, and that does help to separate the sword, but this is just a little trick to push it further. Anyways, lovely job! I apologize if my critique was hard to understand, just send me a message if you'd like me to do a draw-over instead!