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RPC-XXXX is to be contained within a standard Anomalous Object Lockbox when not active.

So wheres this thing kept? I'm seeing a site!

…within a standard Anomalous Object Lockbox when not in use.

" when active" would imply it moves itself, which isn't implied buy anything post this sentence. If it dose consider adjusting your Containment Protocol to feature the meases prohibiting it from moving FIRST then actual containment SECOND

When active, RPC-XXXX is to be contained within a standard Humanoid Containment Chamber.

OK, SO! this locker and containment chamber need to be the same thing, elsewise this is taking up WAY to much space with little justification given it be contained in a locker when not active, consider the following below

RPC-XXX is to be contained in a standard object storage locker, the locker itself it to be kept inside and standard humanoid containment chamber for the purposes of keeping RPC-XXX contained when in use.

RPC-XXXX has requested in the past to be allowed to maintain a body and prevent further experiments. This request is currently denied, however, RPC-XXXX is to be informed that it is currently under consideration.

This DOES NOT belong in the containment protocols, you are describing aspects of the object and thusly this should found somewhere in the description.

Any excuses used must have been previously used or otherwise linked, to prevent issues with RPC-XXXX refusing to co-operate during experiments due to its unique effects.

This DOES belong in the containment protocols, so you should consider writing about RPC-Dildoes persuasive attempts WITHOUT describing them as you did above, and then make adjustments as needed!

This is also to prevent Authority data leakage should RPC-XXXX decide to attempt containment breach at any point in time.

What? What's it gonna do hack the place? How would it know to do that? Does it have some other ability that lets it do that? If so why is that no mentioned? kinda underwhelming to see the authority be scared of something "leaking" something. It kinda makes it look like the security is weak sauce tbqh!

During experiments, all Authority personnel partaking in the experiment are to remove any access cards or similar prior to entering RPC-XXXX's chamber.

THEY'RE USING PERSONNEL WITH THING? WHERE ARE CSD-BOIS??!!

For privacy's sake

NO! Literally, nothing that is classified as an RPC should ever be afforded the luxury of "Privacy"

Containment =/= Comfort

Do not record any coitus between a subject and RPC-XXXX unless unavoidable.

If the effects of this thing occur during coitus, that shits getting recorded and they'll be no arguing about it!

No complaint from here minus the Acquisition Interview Log

don't use AO it makes RPC look inconsistent as in lore they used AO back in the 1830s. Unless this takes place then, Change it accordingly!