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Unfortunately, I'm not as much of a fan of this one. I miss the precise lines that you use in your other works.I do not care for the body style of this dancer, but that I think is just a matter of opinion and I don't take that into account. However, there is something strange about her foot and the angle of her other leg and position of her hips. Maybe it's a ballet thing that I don't know, but it looks uncomfortable.The background color looks messy to me. From your note it seems that you don't have much experience with this medium? If that's the case, wow, you learn quick! But you still have ways to go. A little more practice and I think you'll have it.One thing I thought was neat, was how her shoes and stockings seem to start to become clouds as they end at her thighs. It flows well into the rest of her cloud outfit.I hope this doesn't come across as too harsh, but I try to give honest opinions in my critiques. I do think you could sell prints of this at art fairs and Renaissance festivals. I think you could sell prints of many of your pieces. So keep at it!