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So I'm trying to be super critical and really try and look at things in a technical manner. The whole piece is super badass so I'll start that right off the bat! I do notice the horn on the wing closest to us seems to have a tangent with shoulder plate crease that runs into the neck. This makes that huge appendage jutting out flatten up against his arm and body. I want to feel the power in this side as I do on the other side. Also when I squint my eyes all the horns and mouth glow are all the same. Maybe too 'matchy-matchy' with the colors? Since its so very monochromatic, perhaps an orange mouth glow or yellow to match his eyes? (I haven't seen Pacific Rim, so apologies if this bad boy is in the movie and this is a replica painting). The glow from the horns on his shoulders and mouth falls to a solid aqua making the colors look 'hot' on my monitor. The forward horns are cool because they have enough detail in the glow not to feel washed out. Maybe I'm just expecting to see that kind of detail in those areas too.His right arm and that wing type appendage feel the same as their directional flow mirroring into this kind of twin cylinders effect. Overall the ambient lighting doesn't leave a lot of dark shadows. Especially with those bright spot lights. His face is pretty well evenly lit and I think basing the overall lighting on the spots and internal glows might make more of a dramatic impact. Again, awesome work. Hopefully this helps you. (Also don't pay much mind to my star ratings, I'm still trying to figure out what they mean).