First off, WOW. This is VERY visual, stunningly so. I'm impressed. It's nice to see someone writing about ACTA and how dangerous it is. The Internet truly has become a battleground in that sense, as you've painted so eloquently in your poem.



Second, the grammar nazi in me is twitching ever so slightly. Really, it's not much, just a couple things I'd like to point out. In the first line, for example, that comma really isn't needed. It breaks up the sentence rather unnecessarily. I'd just scrap it.



In the second line, you use the word 'red' twice. Of course, this isn't a hard and fast rule, but it's typically good to refrain from repeating a word so close to itself, unless you're trying to emphasize the word. Like in your third stanza, with the 'reminiscences' lines. Those are great. But 'red' isn't quite as strong a word as 'reminiscences.' Maybe an alternative word for one, like scarlet, or blood even, since it's a war.



Same thing in the second stanza with the word 'nightmare' and 'nightmarish.' Use something else to emphasize just how frightening it is and create more contrast.



Other than that, I think this poem ABSOLUTELY could win the poetry contest you're submitting it to. Best of luck to you!