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This comic is drawn very well from start to finish. The art work has retained the style from the show itself but I admire your own little tweaks here and there. This comic so far is very detailed and it look like you put a lot of though, work and effort into the comic. I really enjoyed seeing all the loose ends tie up here with Derpy seeing Dinky and Lyra seeing Bon Bon. Both really tear jerking moments along with the sacrifice of the Doctor himself. That alone impacts the audience because you characterized him so we it's like we knew him on a personal level and with his sacrifice; it feels like we lost a close friend.I do like how the comic ended on a slight humorous note.Truly this was a very great comic. Keep it up!