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Lemme just say that this some really cool art that you've made which is pretty cool-looking and gives off a vibe of Ruby as a goddess of war. I really like the way you drew the light on the upper-right and the energy-blade on Ruby's weapon (?) along with the particle effects around the two light sources which is really cool and something that I'd like to try out, too.Though I do say that there are some issues with me, like what is that texture-bit on the bottom right? Is that supposed to be the ground? It looks weird and throws me off with how amazing everything else is. Also, due to how close the weapon on her left is with the weapon (?) on her right, it looks as if they are connected to each other, which also confused me a bit until I took a closer look. Its a small nitpick, but I'm over-privileged so, yeah.Her design, for me, is pretty bland on this angle, and I have seen your other art of your Future Ruby, like RWBY-Future: Battle, but it looks more like she's Raven Reincarnated which is pretty sad if you think about it.It's not the first time I've seen Grimm-reminiscent armor so that turns me off slightly. I don't see the use of her having two weapons as it'be just inhibit her ability to properly utilize her semblance. I went through your other drawings and found that the one with the beam-axe is actually a scythe reminiscent of Qrow's which is both fitting and cool. There's also the issue with that bit of cloth which looks out of place. I'm guessing its supposed to be a cape on her right arm, but it would've been more fitting if she still had her red cape. It would make her more Ruby and less Raven, which I don't think Ruby likes becoming.And this is the point that really stands for me. She doesn't feel like Ruby, not in an age thing but rather as a character. I'd imagine she'd be the one who stays the same no matter how old she gets. The dorky but optimistic red-head who could still smile even after so much has happened. This drawing, to me, is what would happen to Ruby in the worst possible route where she becomes broody, emotionless, and held back by her past and the only thing she can do now is just hunt away. Like a traumatized soldier after a war who becomes senile.But all-in-all, this is a really solid piece of art you made, and keep up the good work.