Posted January 18, 2019 at 5:56 am

EDIT: The delay until Wednesday is a combination of my having issues with my back over the weekend, and my not being satisfied with the scripts for upcoming comics.

Granted, it's possible I would've sorted out the scripts by now if I wasn't sleep deprived by the back pain keeping me up, but only some alternate universe version of me that didn't have back pain this weekend knows that for sure.

Original commentary:

- Grace looking for a magic mark on Tedd's head

- Sarah and Sam making plans (complete original)�

- Sarah and Sam making plans (Flashback at start of this storyline)

- Pandora checking in on Sarah

- Pandora hugs Sarah

- The start of Pandora's talk with Tedd

- That moment from her talk with Tedd

Fair warning, I'm the jerk who wrote those dang scenes with Pandora, and even I got a bit teary eyed looking back at them.



Wait, should the fact that I wrote it make me more or less vulnerable to feels? WHATEVER! Fairly warned be ye, says I.

Less vague than I realized

I was considering leaving it more up in the air when exactly Pandora gave Sam his magic mark, but then I realized just how telling the placement of Sam's magic mark was, and that Grace would realize that.

Granted, Grace has less information than we do, and she's making a bit of a conclusion jump in panel six given her more limited knowledge of where Pandora has placed magic marks on other people. That doesn't make her wrong, but still.

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- EGSNP