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I'm gonna point out the not so good stuff first.- Ruby's head seems kinda long- Nora's arm is too blurred near her sleeve and not blurred enough near the camera.- Nora's ear could be more detailedNow that that stuff is out of the way:- the lighting is beautiful- the textures give it a really nice tone- the lettering must've been either hard as hell or has been copy-pasted. Either way it looks really well done.- Realistic paper and photograph- nice pen- awesome and fitting character expressions- the "the end" at the bottom gives it a nice tone. You don't see it immediately, which is good.- you included details like Ruby's teardrops blurring the paper, and of course, her striking through the last sentence.- flower power for the win- nice lense flareOverall, a beautiful drawing and one of my favourites so far. I also like the idea of them just rushing through her door trying to cheer her up and her being all flustered about it all. Your artstyle is also working really well with all of this.