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I think my favorite aspect of this drawing is the idea. I love the concept of Pinkie Pie convincing Rainbow Dash to fly her over Ponyville with her party cannon so that she can blast the entire village with streamers and confetti. It's like she's going to drastic measures to spread laughter and happiness to all ponies of Equestria! The idea has me laughing so hard! Something else that I find to be very good about this illustration are the motion lines. It was a very smart idea to indicate how the ponies are moving up in the air. It makes the piece feel more alive. The technique is also done very nicely. You did a thorough job at drawing some of the features in this piece, especially when it came to the ripples in the mares' manes. I guess my only suggestion would be to have Rainbow Dash looked more concerned with carrying Pinkie, seeing how that would be extremely difficult even for a pegasus pony like her. But other than that, I think this piece is wonderfully created. It's funny, it's colorful, and it's totally what I'd expect to see on the show. Keep up the fantastic work, Alasou!