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[2a00:1450:400c:c05::22a]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id lj8si21918223wjc.145.2015.06.10.21.17.16 for <john.podesta@gmail.com> (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Wed, 10 Jun 2015 21:17:16 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com designates 2a00:1450:400c:c05::22a as permitted sender) client-ip=2a00:1450:400c:c05::22a; Authentication-Results: mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com designates 2a00:1450:400c:c05::22a as permitted sender) smtp.mail=dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com; dkim=pass header.i=@hillaryclinton.com; dmarc=pass (p=NONE dis=NONE) header.from=hillaryclinton.com Received: by mail-wi0-x22a.google.com with SMTP id dq8so62957750wib.1 for <john.podesta@gmail.com>; Wed, 10 Jun 2015 21:17:16 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=hillaryclinton.com; s=google; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; bh=Szk28iejuBse3f8I8vQEax1gDxbSVwCZ1mygtTmTIIE=; b=Zs+MrdhDfpAgvE3DkFweRafxwc/FUUfShU1VaimQ4x1bGTF2Np1TKX0+893zl31i/k 5gPYlHNUogzXD1CftjW/g3Faubuuv4h32F49Gsu3AhM81jlU+fU1q8CanVkkSx3ZzUys q/x6Qk+i5vw2tjftyIgMrYlcJUYGJEZ5+0D6w= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20130820; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date :message-id:subject:from:to:cc:content-type; bh=Szk28iejuBse3f8I8vQEax1gDxbSVwCZ1mygtTmTIIE=; b=a3AhInF8Qb7qchKY2+IwHkHngIdw9yV3qlQ3UfcXcNjyTLg3CYLJ5wRH1X11G+Ui3Z 3ojWpzLY2QRO6eEhEPAE1B92BQaY0IyFY8Wiahqu/2/jCeYqVZ1WtEduS3iO6SI+NVEr KWNkG+9l0fTCxgVY2Fu6TotcZbCXLsaROZixLImVuFjIp/uSIZBZ12IUQ/ECASw/D8qL 96l9siZ1jFpdYuq/We1JnrDLbQ8GXMkgLqOi0mIG7W03mU5XHbqSagdb603NxpbvBXM5 rAbMhaXXuXHJ+17HibVXq+4kNFoV2KYnqPJOCTMeItbmhXLdKQjjzK3I2RK0gT66vffe DYeA== X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQmEHfz+41aRlAA29cWYoPZkdcytJlOqU6pOELioFzk+EM02n61OCTyE6n9BxfwkMDg4MpcT MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Received: by 10.180.91.17 with SMTP id ca17mr26253912wib.9.1433996235905; Wed, 10 Jun 2015 21:17:15 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.194.20.65 with HTTP; Wed, 10 Jun 2015 21:17:15 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <CAMhPeA9N9+Yg2koEma5HdDwkuJw-tyw63ok3T-+JsjL4sDkzqQ@mail.gmail.com> References: <CAAEwKfwxechv0O4NC+2xZ0=z_YUQ_y5-Yw8x90J4fd4vYBpcAg@mail.gmail.com> <CAMhPeA9N9+Yg2koEma5HdDwkuJw-tyw63ok3T-+JsjL4sDkzqQ@mail.gmail.com> Date: Thu, 11 Jun 2015 00:17:15 -0400 Message-ID: <CAAEwKfyZ=h9Qz3W-48c=TTkDyZhg+=fC3fS0znnw6Xy1sFOarA@mail.gmail.com> Subject: Re: Jeff Shesol From: Dan Schwerin <dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com> To: Robby Mook <re47@hillaryclinton.com> CC: Jennifer Palmieri <jpalmieri@hillaryclinton.com>, John Podesta <john.podesta@gmail.com>, Kristina Schake <kschake@hillaryclinton.com> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=f46d043c7e82402a5f05183644ee --f46d043c7e82402a5f05183644ee Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 I think she's not married to the word and its worth discussing. Anzo keeps making the case for fights because he says its a lot more memorable than the other options. But its clearly off-putting to plenty of readers. On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 12:12 AM, Robby Mook <re47@hillaryclinton.com> wrote: > She seemed to shy away from fights at our meeting. I'd much prefer > "tests", "challenges" or something else but feels late to litigate. Not > sure if she had different thinking today, though. > > On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 12:08 AM, Dan Schwerin < > dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com> wrote: > >> I asked Jeff Shesol at West Wing Writers, who I like and trust, to give >> the latest draft a read, plus the 6/8 version with the nurse. Here's his >> take on where we are: >> >> "This is terrific. Really terrific! A big step up from the last version. It >> shows she's got energy for the fight; she's got ideas; she's got a breadth >> of vision; and she's someone who really understands (and can speak for and >> speak to) the aspirations of everyday Americans. I think you're really >> close to a finished product here." >> >> His one big concern is that he thinks our four buckets should be >> called something other than fights. >> > > --f46d043c7e82402a5f05183644ee Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable <div dir=3D"ltr">I think she's not married to the word and its worth di= scussing.=C2=A0 Anzo keeps making the case for fights because he says its a= lot more memorable than the other options. But its clearly off-putting to = plenty of readers.</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_= quote">On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 12:12 AM, Robby Mook <span dir=3D"ltr"><<= a href=3D"mailto:re47@hillaryclinton.com" target=3D"_blank">re47@hillarycli= nton.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style= =3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir= =3D"ltr">She seemed to shy away from fights at our meeting.=C2=A0 I'd m= uch prefer "tests", "challenges" or something else but = feels late to litigate.=C2=A0 Not sure if she had different thinking today,= though.</div><div class=3D"HOEnZb"><div class=3D"h5"><div class=3D"gmail_e= xtra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 12:08 AM, Dan = Schwerin <span dir=3D"ltr"><<a href=3D"mailto:dschwerin@hillaryclinton.c= om" target=3D"_blank">dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com</a>></span> wrote:<br= ><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1= px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr">I asked Jeff Shesol at Wes= t Wing Writers, who I like and trust, to give the latest draft a read, plus= the 6/8 version with the nurse.=C2=A0 Here's his take on where we are:= <div><br></div><div><span style=3D"font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size= :13px">"This is terrific. Really terrific! A big step up from the last= version.</span><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Calibri,Arial,H= elvetica,sans-serif;font-size:13px">=C2=A0It shows she's got energy for= the fight; she's got ideas; she's got a breadth of vision; and she= 's someone who really understands (and can speak for and speak to) the = aspirations of everyday Americans. I think you're really close to a fin= ished product here."=C2=A0</span><br></div><div><span style=3D"color:r= gb(0,0,0);font-family:Calibri,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><b= r></span></div><div><font color=3D"#000000" face=3D"Calibri, Arial, Helveti= ca, sans-serif">His one big concern is that he thinks our four buckets shou= ld be called=C2=A0something other than fights.</font></div></div> </blockquote></div><br></div> </div></div></blockquote></div><br></div> --f46d043c7e82402a5f05183644ee--