Your linework is FANTASTIC. Perhaps the best I've seen of any Brony artist I've seen yet. Your figures, too, are much better proportioned then most. It could definitely benefit from clean-up, though it might be arbitrary to your style. The way the hooves sit is also a bit funky, and the glasses bother me (possibly because they wouldn't fit). Also, the earring on the right ear seems angled poorly, though it could just be the perspective. In total, though, it is great, and I adore it.