Hello! Thank you, first of all, for the critique- they all mean a lot to me, as it's nice to hear back from those viewing my work to see what I could work on and such. ^^Hehe oddly enough, I'm wearing my '20% Cooler' t-shirt right now.I'll see what I can do about the sketchiness- I can't say that I definitely will stop using the appearance, as it's just something I'm drawn to, but it's by habit that I shade things in where they need to be darker and I really need to stop doing that as it messes up a lot of spots on my work. XDThank you for the comments on the piece! I appreciate your input!