-Good composition, great use of colors and figures to direct eyeflow

Well said.



-Some of the anatomy and posing could use some improvement;



True I struggled a lot iwth it, I think my rendeirng skills are much better than my sketchin skills.

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the guardsmen in particular are a touch to skinny-looking with all that armor



Imperial navy couldn't get enough supllyies in, so people starve.

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Also, the grey cloudy background is a lot of empty negative space that could use a bit more filling; more low-contrast things like the cool archway with the statue or the doves to make it less barren.



Well I intentionally tried to avoid making the picture too cramped, I was going for a things in the focus are fading in kind of things, but yeah what you said is completley true. Some of the spaces on the canvas feel far too empty.



I also I really appriciate when people write comments like this which are not 2 words, so thanks.