Crimson Rebellion

might be on your side cuz I don't have an extra audio.mp3 o,o?

I actually don't really hear it, maybe its the audience noise in the background or it might be too soft? the spinner lasts for almost a measure which is quite balance already.

zz lol if its by pixels its excusable...

these jumps are actually just supposed to be growing in spacing if you look at it wholly. although, nice alternative but I'll keep mines ;P

it's supposed to structure itself as a square with 00:59:154 (3,6) - and the previous slider-end overlap.

unintended stack

the NC would break the measure in half when every other measure is kept consistent : o

I don't think I actually understand what youre trying to say here, but the overlap plays rather fine and moving it down would be too overspaced.

spacing is fine lol everthing around here is spaced moderately apart.

mm, i'll see if I can work with these triangles a bit

I mean, if youre looking to separate the vocals from each other, or compile a set of vocals into one pattern, both ideas work I just chose the latter.

no need~

(then dont be too nazi >>)

the spacing is actually almost equal to 01:35:885 (4,1) - but instead of coming off of a slider its a circle.

doesnt feel bad to me D:

mines is organized for e m p h a s i s ye

the first slider curves to complete the circle, there's no circle in the one you pointed out and curving it leads nowhere really since the stream is equal on both top and bottom. linear acts as a stump so it wouldn't be lopsided curved in one way or the other.

its just the flipped circle of 02:04:568 (1) -

triple isn't bad :<

no need~

wait what is this supposed to mean?? ;;;;;

I guess it could be one stream, but the way I have it sort of leads into a build up without overdoing the streaming. yknow, adding some distance to give a finishing combo.

a e s t h e t i c

not needed, anything basic works with this tbh.

I just made the visual spacing look more even~

haha its interesting your idea but I think visually mines is okay and fits well to the strumming of the guitar ^.^

holy shit lmao

okayyy okayyyy I'll fix this! >>>>>;;;;;

but it's a hexagrid :<

I mean, there are bound to be slight overlaps like this with large spacing circles. I tried my best okay ;;

ended it a measure or two later

just editor glitches

Let's begiiiinI'll focus in aesthetics mostly• Idk if you noticed but, you have 2 audios on your folder... delete audio.mp3seems good• 00:53:739 - I feel like the spinner starts here (i also tried hearing that part at 25% playback rate and you can see that there is where it starts)• 00:55:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - Right now, this seems like this , but i think that , just for aesthetics :v), you should move this like this ... and yes, its like moved a bit only... but if you can see, now it does a perfect blanket with 00:55:934 (10) - and 00:56:081 (11) - so it looks a bit better. this is a bit nazi i know xD• 00:59:593 (6) - isn't this TOO far away from 00:59:446 (5,7) - ? i might consider moving it a bit to the left, at least to make the spacing a bit more comfortable to playor you can also do an overlap on 00:59:739 (7) - like this (maybe this is the best option , because you will also make the spacing between 00:59:739 (7,1) - lower than before, the current one is overspaced imo)• 01:00:178 (2) - what about moving this to x:352 y:356, it looks better also if you see the follow point pass exactly over 00:59:593 (6) -• 00:59:446 (5,8) - Is this stack wrong or it's just me?• 01:01:788 (4) - what about putting NC here? seems like you broke the flow• 01:07:642 (6) - you might consider moving this a bit down to fit with the stream from before, at least it will looks better• 01:07:934 (8,8) - hmm maybe an overlap (with less spacing) would play better, like, right now its kinda overspaced imo xD• 01:14:520 (2) - what about moving this to x:364 y:196 so it will be exactly (or almost exactly) between 01:14:081 (2,3) - ... it would look cleaner tho• 01:14:666 (3) - same here, x:88 y:288 , it will be exactly between 01:14:373 (1,2) -• 01:14:812 (1) - same here x3 (or maybe HELLO THERE ... ok , no) x:304 y:76 so it will be exactly between 01:14:373 (1,2) -• 01:16:861 (3) - Since this sounds really different than 01:16:715 (2) - , i think that you should make a different pattern for this notes 01:16:861 (3,4,5,6) - (since it says "higashi no" ... or "hi ga shi no" and it says nothin where the circle 2 is)• 01:24:178 (13) - Add NC?• 01:26:373 (4,3) - same stack thing lol, like, it seems good but if you move its like it re-stacks (yes this is a lot nazi)• 01:37:203 (6,1) - idk , i think that this shouldn't be THAAAAAAAAT spaced• 01:47:007 (2,4) - Ctrl + G, trust me, it really feels bad playing that D:• 01:52:568 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think that you may move this a bit up, like 5 pixels or something like that, and moving 01:53:446 (1) - as part of the stream stair, if my explanation is bad, there's a pic with what im talking about: Pattern also, i stacked the whole stream stair with 01:52:568 (1,2) - so it will works for aesthetics too :p• 02:00:471 (7) - why not make this slider curvy like 01:59:300 (13) - ?• 02:05:154 (1) - and what about moving this to x:448 y:40? it will be exactly between 02:04:203 (4,1) - so it works as an aesthetic too• 02:08:227 (3,4,5) - wat why did u brokw the consistency and added a triple?• 02:18:910 (9) - NC?• 02:40:568 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OH WHAT THE FUCK KROYTZ REALLY?♦ 02:50:520 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this sounds as only one stream tho, or well... it would be better if you change the pattern and you add a circle here 02:50:739 - imo• 02:56:081 (3) - plz dont make our lifes bad than they're rn and do ctrl + G on this :'(• 03:01:055 (4) - i think that breaking the flow here would play REALLY good, just hear at the guitar• 03:05:446 (1,2) - maybe it would be better if you move this circle to the left, or rotate the pattern to the left, or making it like this (the circle 3 is doing a blanket with the last curve of 03:03:983 (1) - , maybe you should stack the circle 3 with the sliderend of 03:02:812 (1) - )also you can make 03:05:592 (2) - blanket with 03:06:324 (1) -• 03:14:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i was there when you made this pattern in stream and i know how many time it took to you to decide what pattern to use here, but hey, doesn't it looks like (combo) 4-4?, maybe you should consider making a different pattern, maybe something similar than Panda Eyes - Highscore hope you understand the picture • 03:57:837 (1) - this is the most nazi thing that ill say today, but you should move this a pixel to the right so it will be exactly between 03:57:178 (4,5) -• 04:19:276 (6,7,8,9,10) - A CIRCLE MADE WITH ONLY PURE HATE LOL WHY• 04:20:227 (3,1) - i think that this should be overlapped.• 04:25:788 (6) - move this to x:296 y:256 so it will be exactly between 04:24:764 (1,3) -or you can stack the 6 with the sliderend of 04:27:105 (1) -• 04:45:470 (6,6) - this overlap looks really weird lol• 04:49:349 - i think that the kiai should ends here• 04:51:983 (2,1) - fix stack i think