Heyyo~ I watched the time lapse and its so gorgeous! There are more ways to improve1) The style of hair does not suit the rest of the drawing because you make too detailed. If you'd just stop adding to the hair at 15:08 and add a little bit of shine it'll be fine. (Go look at 2) That streak of light on the left wing seems a little too intense and there should be a shadow where it is covered by Luna's face.3) Please draw your stars with solid dots... I can notice the little lines on some stars4) Have the moon spots bend with the way you put your lighting, they seem a little flat5) Blend the eyelashes6) Psst. Whats with the black hole in the middle? Left by the streak of light of the wing, you forgot to draw the sky!7) Clean up the clouds a little more to make it more blended8) Nostrils are a little flat like the moon spots and so is the cutie mark moon9) Confused about that shine on the tail, why there and not lower?10) Make your watermark stronger! Someone's gonna steal your pretty wittle woona. I can just blend that out easy as pie.Everything is just minor problems (I only noticed because after I obsessively re-watched your time lapse then downloaded and zoomed in the photo) I can be an asshole judge who can't even draw properly herself, but i'm pretty observant and picky.If you have any objections against my objections please do say so, otherwise just keep in mind my comment and improve!