I wrote this last summer for my dirty pen pal while i was horny and alone during a massive summer rainstorm. We had another big storm tonight, so I dug up the story and recorded the two parts. I think I only stumble in a few places, and I'm curious if I only noticed them because I knew what I meant to say. Also, this is my first submission where I am reading from a script, and I wonder if my voice is too monotonous. I can read more expressively, but I thought that maybe my deeper, more aroused voice might be more attractive. Finally, I didn't go over the top with the sex sound effects / moans because I didn't want to sound fake, but maybe I should add more next time? depending on the feedback I get, I might do a second take on this script and recording. Let me know what you think. :) Talk soon.