I think you just did a good job, with the linart, and color, and pose,

and you didn't make it "Gaudy" or "tacky"..

You combined a bunch of different elements in a well

thought out manner.

I guess I think its a cool character because of the little

touches you added here and there.



The only really obvious thing I can say you screwed up on, is the BallPeen hammer that you drew..

It would more than likely be a 5lb sledge hammer..