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First off, let me apologize upfront if my critique sounds a bit inexperienced. I don't do this often, aside from class, so I hope I don't come off as ignorant or anything.I rather like the color scheme of the picture. The slow transition from blue to pink is nice, and the way that you managed to keep a warm color like pink seem cool by using different shades of purple help unify the two different colors. Personally, I would have made the background a few shades darker of green to make aforementioned blues and pinks stand out more. I also enjoy the details on the colors of all the little things in the background. The highlights and lowlights of things such as the papers, stuffed animals and Marceline's axe came out especially very well.The details in this piece, particularly that of Bubblegum and Marceline, are amazing. I love that you added stains on their shirts and faces. The small spearmint candy on Bubblegum's underwear is a nice touch too. I am a little confused on some though. For example, the thing between Marceline's wrist and the piece of rainbow cake, what is that? A braid in Bubblegum's hair? A candle? While all these details in the picture are nice, there are some such as this that seem a bit confusing and therefore distracts the viewer from the overall brilliance of this picture.The only real problem I seem to have with this piece is that it seems that there's too much going on in it. There's stuff everywhere and it kind of distracts away from what I assume the subject of the piece; Marceline and Princess Bubblegum. Now, perhaps you intended it to look that way, in order to show what a wild night the two had before, but it gets to be a bit distracting. Maybe a little less things in the background next time, in order to keep our focus on the subject and not the surrounding area?Overall, I must say that I enjoy this picture. The colors are nice, the details are great, and the picture really gives us an impression of what these two might have been up to the night before. There are some things that could be improved upon, such as a contrast in colors in the foreground and background and less details in said background to make the subject matter stand out. But aside from that, I can honestly say that I enjoyed this piece and look forward to any other pieces you may draw in the future with as much brilliance and overall "cuteness" as this one.