Attack on Titan: Luna edition.



It's a pretty nice interpretation of the scene in the episode. Taking a literal view of how Luna's presence was in the scene and musical number, pretty much. It actually works well how it is, the background being dark and with just these two in the scene, because that's more or less the idea of the scene in the show, too. And that's a really nice job with the foggy breath/traces in the air, and with the beautiful flowing manes and tail (that volume in Starlight's is pretty). The expressions are pretty well done, too - with limited detail just like in the show, but perfectly enough to convey a nice range/mix of emotions. Good job with the light sources in Luna's cloak pin and eyes, too - they help shift the focus of the scene to where it matters most.

If I were to offer criticism, that'd be the length of Starlight's neck and the slight lack of perspective for her rear legs - I understand the pose they're supposed to be in, but there seems to be visually too little ground between them. However, this latter is minor - even the proportions of her body are pretty okay. If only the rear of her leg did not have that very sharp angle, and instead had a bit more of a "bone" showing... but that's also a very minor detail. I do have to praise the pretty excellent head shaping on both of them, in return. As well as that detail on the cloak, properly big but still varied rather than all flat, a bit different from what the show had but perhaps even cooler for it. All in all, well done!