I will never write a story where the victim is simply an outlet for the dom to unleash their torture on

Allie isn't perfect

That's incredibly high praise, thank you very much! I hope that I can continue to impress you with my stories, I love talking about them so reading these comments is very fun.I enjoy Mikey's character a lot and had a lot of fun writing him, I'm glad you liked him! I find in a story like this, if the victim has noor ability to fight back I lose all interest. Mikey'sand actual motivation and personality make it all the more entertaining during events like the tickling scene, where Mikey's efforts are clearly recognized and he comes close to reaching his goal (of unseating his sister), but falls short due to lack of foresight (lifting her improperly) or misfortune (Allie's accidental fart)., it'd bore me to tears.I always strive to think of Allie in the context of anso I'm glad her playfulness seems to come across well; but it's equally important to me that she can never be. If Allie just forced herself on Mikey and her physical strength was enough to overpower him, I feel the story would be boring. Showing moments where Mikey is able to lift her off of him, extricate himself from her derriere, and interrupt her sentences, shows that. If she handled a situation poorly, she'll fail. I tried to illustrate this in the opening scene where Allie tries to play with David the same way she would her brother, but she isn't strong enough to have any serious effect on him so he brushes her off.Your final sentence is a bit hard to interpret. If you're saying youwant a crueler sequel then I have good news for you! As I have established with Allie's character, she isn't evil and she does love her brother. She'd never actually harm him. She recognizes the authority her mother holds and knows that Mikey isn't beyond ratting her out to their mom. However, this is not to say she'd never disobey her mother'swarning. But that's a story for another time. Anyways, thanks for reading the ramblings of a DeviantArt pervert!