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[2607:f8b0:4003:c06::233]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id f132si4488845oig.72.2015.10.30.07.13.43 for <speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com> (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Fri, 30 Oct 2015 07:13:43 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of ldrane@hillaryclinton.com designates 2607:f8b0:4003:c06::233 as permitted sender) client-ip=2607:f8b0:4003:c06::233; Received: by oifu63 with SMTP id u63so60350285oif.2 for <speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com>; Fri, 30 Oct 2015 07:13:43 -0700 (PDT) X-Received: by 10.202.83.73 with SMTP id h70mr5577667oib.119.1446214423218; Fri, 30 Oct 2015 07:13:43 -0700 (PDT) From: LaDavia Drane <ldrane@hillaryclinton.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 (1.0) References: <CAAEwKfxQj2FCjJ6NBjoAP-Whk=TUkhjzdNDO08aHGgftwp=Ukw@mail.gmail.com> <D81ACBD8-1C5E-4A3B-A775-E2F3D08E020B@aol.com> <-5334388651138651255@unknownmsgid> <1A484C9C32B526468802B7C2E6FD1BCEB49B3361@mbx031-w2-co-2.exch031.domain.local> <1694879647109714287@unknownmsgid> In-Reply-To: <1694879647109714287@unknownmsgid> Date: Fri, 30 Oct 2015 10:13:41 -0400 Message-ID: <-3226896051472036108@unknownmsgid> Subject: Re: DRAFT: Atlanta Rally - revised To: Dan Schwerin <dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com> CC: Joel Benenson <jbenenson@bsgco.com>, Mandy Grunwald <gruncom@aol.com>, Speech Drafts <speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com>, Richard McDaniel <rmcdaniel@hillaryclinton.com>, Corey Ciorciari <cciorciari@hillaryclinton.com>, Brynne Craig <bcraig@hillaryclinton.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Original-Sender: ldrane@hillaryclinton.com X-Original-Authentication-Results: mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of ldrane@hillaryclinton.com designates 2607:f8b0:4003:c06::233 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=ldrane@hillaryclinton.com; dkim=pass header.i=@hillaryclinton.com; dmarc=pass (p=NONE dis=NONE) header.from=hillaryclinton.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com; contact speechdrafts+owners@hillaryclinton.com List-ID: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com> X-Spam-Checked-In-Group: speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com X-Google-Group-Id: 112021531214 List-Post: <http://groups.google.com/a/hillaryclinton.com/group/speechdrafts/post>, <mailto:speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com> List-Help: <http://support.google.com/a/hillaryclinton.com/bin/topic.py?topic=25838>, <mailto:speechdrafts+help@hillaryclinton.com> List-Archive: <http://groups.google.com/a/hillaryclinton.com/group/speechdrafts/> List-Unsubscribe: <mailto:googlegroups-manage+112021531214+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com>, <http://groups.google.com/a/hillaryclinton.com/group/speechdrafts/subscribe> Awesome speech. Proud to be a part of this campaign! African American Outreach Director Hillary for America LDrane@hillaryclinton.com > On Oct 30, 2015, at 10:06 AM, Dan Schwerin <dschwerin@hillaryclinton.com>= wrote: > > Mandy and Joel are right that it's always an applause line. > > > >> On Oct 30, 2015, at 9:56 AM, Joel Benenson <jbenenson@bsgco.com> wrote: >> >> This speech is awesome and is going to get a lot of attention. >> >> To Mandy's point, I think if we can work it in as a belief statement as = she usual does --- Yes, black lives matter --- it's simple, powerful and wi= ll get applause. >> >> >> One very small thing -- but I wouldn't push this if it disrupts the spee= ch --- but the NYT story on traffic stops/searches etc --- shows a real pat= tern of disparity in something more everyday than the crime and violence st= ates. Plugging one of those stats about: " in many places, if you're bla= ck you're more likely to get pulled over for traffic violations and more li= kely to have your car searched when that happens. " >> >> One line but it's the less obvious and less talked about issue about ins= titutional racism. >> >> Joel >> >> -----Original Message----- >> From: speechdrafts@hillaryclinton.com [mailto:speechdrafts@hillaryclinto= n.com] On Behalf Of Dan Schwerin >> Sent: Friday, October 30, 2015 9:51 AM >> To: Mandy Grunwald >> Cc: Speech Drafts; LaDavia Drane; Richard McDaniel; Corey Ciorciari; Bry= nne Craig >> Subject: Re: DRAFT: Atlanta Rally - revised >> >> It says she met with young people involved with "black lives matter." >> Do folks think we need a more direct statement on that? >> >> >> >>> On Oct 30, 2015, at 9:47 AM, Mandy Grunwald <gruncom@aol.com> wrote: >>> >>> Did you take out "black lives matter"? >>> >>> Mandy Grunwald >>> Grunwald Communications >>> 202 973-9400 >>> >>> >>>> On Oct 30, 2015, at 9:21 AM, Dan Schwerin <dschwerin@hillaryclinton.co= m> wrote: >>>> >>>> The Secretary wanted to rework this speech so here's a new draft. If p= ossible, would love comments in next hour pls. >>>> MAYA/JAKE/COREY, pls take a close look at ban the box and rest of poli= cy section. >>>> <2015-10-30 Atlanta rally - 9am.docx>