I found this inI really like the composition and how you’ve broken up the face, added all the eyes and parts of the face and rearranged it. The colours are harmonising and makes the orange stand out so much it makes the piece striking paired with the black and white portrait. I like the added white lines they tie the piece together very well. The textured brush and lyrics are lovely details. Overall it’s a really powerful piece, I can imagine it as a large scale mural, an editorial paper, even as an album cover! because it is full of symbolism and be interpreted in lots of different ways.I think it would be nice to blend the shading on the face a little more so the face looks a little more finished because at the moment it looks a little messy (the shading on the nose is amazing btw). But it would look good as is if you painted it with a textured brush. In future you could experiment with ripped paper or paint strokes and textures scanned in and added it to the piece to make it look like a collage. The sentences are hard to see but subtle, it’s a nice touch, it would look interesting if you experimented with having letters were more of a statement in your art.I really like this piece as is and it would be nice to see it as a series!