As much as you changed his primary it is still a great drawing. Congrats on it. Though drawings aren't as perfect as we want (which is life. It's not perfect) I overall say it deserves a 8 out of 10. My drawings might not be as good as yours, actually it isn't as good because I only draw one character at a time for now and haven't gotten into the background just yet. But as Fluttershy said in episode filli vanilli "Baby steps, everypony. Baby step." But again Congrats AgentAppleBlanket.