That is looking much more complete. Nice updates. Just some small stuff now. The guy's arrow seems bent towards the tip, kind of like it is curving to the right.



I am not sure how much it bothers me that the guy, holding the kid's hand, has is right arm vanish. Maybe even if you just carried the shoulder into the old guy's outstretched palm, you wouldn't have to draw the arm continuing, my mind would ignore. but since I can see his shoulder just end into nothing, it sticks out.



The girl on the left, in the dark shirt. Have you tried removing any of the three lines around her nose? It looks a little scrunchy. Maybe if you removed the line in the middle of her nose it would lessen the impact. I think the big smile is evident without the laugh creases.



Anyways, good stuff and good luck!