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Re: Boss Rush Mega Pack (Submissions OPEN)~~



Rebellio [Antronach]

Night Witches [Storn]

Ride into Obsession [Storn]

Brand New (Kors K 170 Bootleg) [James May]

CANDYYYLAND Feat. LIZ (Pa's Lam System Remix)(bassmicrobe Remix) [James May]

El Hijo [James May]

Flip Flap (ABSRDST Flap) [sunn0glasses & James May]

gabe power [James May]

Revolution (loopcoda remix) [James May]

Soda Swing [James May]

Vyzee (foxsky's DISTORT UR LIFE Bootleg) [James May]

Crazy Sprinkle Friends (Yunomi Remix) [James May]

Dreamcast v2 [James May]

Puppy Parade (Mitomoro Remix) [James May]

WAVESTEP v2 [James May]

First Mythz [sunn0glasses]

loli fantasy [sunn0glasses]

Bassamenco [Antronach]

EXiSTENCE [DourGent]

Boss Rush [AZVW_2]

HELL SCAPER -Last Escace Remix- [AZVW_2]

ZED [AZVW_2]

Parallel [kraezyman]

Kuusou Mesorogiwi [Shadow_God]

Pre-Parade [Shadow_God]

Study x Study [Shadow_God]

Gas Gas Gas [Scintill]

The Discolored Wall [Scintill]

Phosphorescent Hysteria [XelNya]

The Final Battle [Shadow_God]

Kimi wo Mamoritai [Shadow_God]

Still, The Road Is Full of Dangers [TNSM]

stained orange [Antronach]

Shockwave [Alamanar]

Speed Challenge [TNSM]

Extratone in a Perfect World [TNSM]

Gravestoned v2 [Shadow_God]

Hyper Beam [Alamanar]

Judgement Day [Alamanar]

Lightning Sword [Alamanar]

Mad Machine v2 [Windoze]

Mentai Cosmic [Alamanar]

Midnight of Madness [Alamanar]

Morph Moth [Shadow_God]

Night Valley [Alamanar]

Pixelated [Alamanar]

Praise Cat Sensation [Alamanar]

Scream [DourGent]

Tower Of Heaven [Alamanar]

The Dream Alice Made That Day [Scintill]

Extratone In A Perfect World v2 [TNSM]

we came to gangbang [Windoze]

56k Dailup Modem [Windoze]

Geek's coup de'tat [TNSM]

Leopold [IcyWorld]

Bop to the Top [ShurykaN]

Bless Your Name [Shadow_God]

Lockene 2 [TNSM]

Skyline [DourGent]

A Reyvateil's Curse [rangta]

Crescent Moon [rangta]

End Time [rangta]

Fastest Crash [rangta]

Me,You And Everything Became Untrue [DMRIw]

Switched-on Lotus [Windoze]

Trance of Scar [rangta]





Judged:



Key~

Green = You've been accepted :clap emoji:

Orange = Close, but not enough. :<

Red = You fucked up something fundamental. D:



Rebellio [Antronach]

- Was off and had a shitty final measure, but now that's fixed.

Brand New (Kors K 170 Bootleg) [James May]

- I can understand why you varied up the steps here and there. Some of the jacks were a bit weird, but they're okay.

CANDYYYLAND Feat. LIZ (Pa's Lam System Remix)(bassmicrobe Remix) [James May]

- That was nice.

Crazy Sprinkle Friends (Yunomi Remix) [James May]

- Neat polyrhythms.

Dreamcast v2 [James May]

- While the slowdown was a bit of a surprise, it wasn't as bad as I thought it'd be. Good job.

El Hijo [James May]

- That dragged on more than I was expecting, but it works, oddly enough. :P

Flip Flap (ABSRDST Flap) [sunn0glasses & James May]

- :thumbs up: (both of them cause there's two charts)

gabe power [James May]

- doggies on jackhammers :V

Night Witches [Storn]

- It's a little lacking. Might I suggest stepping the vocals? One more thing, could you make the outro end earlier? It kinda drones on.

First Mythz [sunn0glasses]

- I can't really tell the difference between the charts, but either way they're pretty fun.

loli fantasy [sunn0glasses]

- Oooh, it's got the hallmarks of a good Sharpnel file. Good job!

Puppy Parade [James May]

- There were some issues I had, but they didn't detract from the file. Weird song tho. :S

Revolution (loopcoda remix) [James May]

- Another keeper. Nice usage of jacks.

Bassamenco [Antronach]

- Hope you like ghostjacks and koreajacks :]

EXiSTENCE [DourGent]

- This reminds me when I was young (and stupid) and I thought that if you said words slowly enough they really had like several dozen syllables or somehting shit like that. I was a weird kid.

Ride into Obsession [Storn]

- This gave me those good Sharpnel vibes. Plus those minijacks were amazing lol.

Soda Swing [James May]

- Good mash file is good. Like the mine usage too.

Boss Rush [AZVW_2]

- WOW that was crazy. I love it.

HELL SCAPER _Last Excape Remix- [AZVW_2]

- While the overstepping in Boss Rush felt justified, here it just feels like you just threw in 16th notes when the song got intense. C'mon, this could be good boss material, but it's "brickwalled" in a sense.

Vyzee (foxsky's DISTORT UR LIFE Bootleg) [James May]

- I swear you step the weirdest shit. Either that or you just step a lot of Trap and that genre is weird. I don't know anymore. :S Oh, the file's pretty rad.

WAVESTEP [James May]

- Pretty interesting file. As for the solo chart, ir kinda leaned to the left, if that makes sense. Aside from that just clean up some of the brackets and you'll be good.

ZED [AZVW_2]

- See Hell Scaper. :V

Parallel [kraezyman]

- Some nice d'n'b. I like it. Good jack usage btw. 8)

Kuusou Mesorogiwi [Shadow_God]

- This was p. tite.

Pre-Parade [Shadow_God]

- A little odd, but it's fine. Probably one of those "you have t like the song to enjoy this" files.

Study x Study [Shadow_God]

- That BPM gimmick at the beginning is a no.

Gas Gas Gas [Scintill]

- It works. I'm not a fan of it, but I can see other people liking it.

Phosphorescent Hysteria [XelNya]

- Holy yes fuck that was cool.

The Discolored Wall [Scintill]

- Weird time signatures don't call for spikes in BPM. The 24th jumpstreams could be done better too; perhaps make them single notes and interlace the 16th notes in the background? Finally, it felt like there were some ghost notes at the end of each loop.

The Final Battle [Shadow_God]

- Well you weren't kidding. Only issue I had was the fadeout at the end. Other than that, nice Xi file. Speaking of, now I wanna step his remix of Time to Air in SDVX.

Kimi wo Mamoritai [Shadow_God]

- Nice, but 16.86 is cutting it real damn close.

Still, The Road Is Full of Dangers [TNSM]

- Simple and to the point. Good scoring file.

stained orange [Antronach]

- Needs a lot of fixes before it's accepted.

The Discolored Wall [Scintill] v2

- Better

Shockwave [Alamanar]

- I like it. It's a tad right hand dominant though, but that's it. Oh, the solo chart has too many brackets.

Speed Challenge [TNSM]

- wat

Extratone in a Perfect World [TNSM]

- The notes at the end of the holds were a bit dumb, and there was an annoying 64th jack right at the end. In the challenge chart, the 16th between measures 60 to 62 don't sounds like they go to anything.

Gravestoned v2 [Shadow_God]

- The first slowdown is fine. Every other xmod gimmick wasn't.

Hyper Beam [Alamanar]

- That was crzay.

Judgement Day [Alamanar]

- wel that was a dragonforce file, that's for sure. :v

Mad Machine v2 [Windoze]

- Not bad.

Mentai Cosmic [Alamanar]

- Kinda on the fence about this one, and yeah it's cause of the jacks. I'm gonna ask a few other people to look it over to see if it's okay, but for now it's in.

Morph Moth [Shadow_God]

- Some things irked me, but it's alright.

Night Valley [Alamanar]

- Not bad

Pixelated [Alamanar]

- nice

Praise Cat Sensation [Alamanar]

- ching chong ping pong means your file aint shit

Scream [DourGent]

- that dissolved into a mess that doesn't feel right. >_>;

The Dream Alice Made That Day [Scintill]

It's good, but the disney touhou experience isn't something I want to go through again. >

The Lightning Sword [Alamanar]

- Quite a few of the notes don't seem to be going to the right notes. Kinda makes the file feel funny.

Tower Of Heaven [Alamanar]

- nothing special, but it's nice

56k Dialup Modem [Windoze]

- okay then...

A Reyvateil's Curse [Mint April, or rangta, or whatever just pick one username and stick with it jesus chist]

- The layering feels boring. I guess "brickwalled" would be a good way to put it.

Bless Your Name [Anime_God]

- Read what I said about your other animu files and put that here, especially the part where the audio files are quieter than the vacuum of space.

Bop To The Top [ShurykaN]

- Andate a la cresta

Crescent Moon [mr. schizo up there that made that brickwalled simfile]

- Once again, the layering feels lazy, as if you just felt 16th streams = hard.

End Time [is this minty? i swear if it's fucking minty I'm breaking shit]

- Good.

Fastest Crash [I don't know if this is minty. This is like confusing kil and kilga]

- You did it again, to Camellia of all things. :<

geeks' coup d'etat [TNSM]

- Good work

Gravestoned v2 [Shadow_God]

- not bad, but the x-mod gimmicks are bla

Leopold [Icyworld]

- and for a second there I thought you sent me easy shit. :P

Lockene 2 [TNSM]

- what

Me,You And Everything Became Untrue [DMRIw]

- Wow, I've never seen so many jacks before to a song that wasn't Jackhammer Madness, and it wasn't blatant either.

Midnight Madness [Alamanar]

- okay so it's a Dragonforce song.

Skyline [DourGent]

- After listening to the sample music, I should've expected this. >_>;

Switched-on Lotus [Windoze]

- you know you can step whole songs, right? :v

Trance of Scar [Mint April]

- holy crap that was great. Why can't you do this more often.

we came to gangbang [Windoze]

- not bad, not bad



Key~= You've been accepted :clap emoji:= Close, but not enough. :<= You fucked up something fundamental. D:- Was off and had a shitty final measure, but now that's fixed.- I can understand why you varied up the steps here and there. Some of the jacks were a bit weird, but they're okay.- That was nice.- Neat polyrhythms.- While the slowdown was a bit of a surprise, it wasn't as bad as I thought it'd be. Good job.- That dragged on more than I was expecting, but it works, oddly enough. :P- :thumbs up: (both of them cause there's two charts)- It's a little lacking. Might I suggest stepping the vocals? One more thing, could you make the outro end earlier? It kinda drones on.- I can't really tell the difference between the charts, but either way they're pretty fun.- Oooh, it's got the hallmarks of a good Sharpnel file. Good job!- There were some issues I had, but they didn't detract from the file. Weird song tho. :S- Another keeper. Nice usage of jacks.- Hope you like ghostjacks and koreajacks :]- This gave me those good Sharpnel vibes. Plus those minijacks were amazing lol.- Good mash file is good. Like the mine usage too.- WOW that was crazy. I love it.- While the overstepping in Boss Rush felt justified, here it just feels like you just threw in 16th notes when the song got intense. C'mon, this could be good boss material, but it's "brickwalled" in a sense.- I swear you step the weirdest shit. Either that or you just step a lot of Trap and that genre is weird. I don't know anymore. :S Oh, the file's pretty rad.- Pretty interesting file. As for the solo chart, ir kinda leaned to the left, if that makes sense. Aside from that just clean up some of the brackets and you'll be good.- See Hell Scaper. :V- Some nice d'n'b. I like it. Good jack usage btw. 8)- This was p. tite.- A little odd, but it's fine. Probably one of those "you have t like the song to enjoy this" files.- That BPM gimmick at the beginning is a no.- It works. I'm not a fan of it, but I can see other people liking it.- Holy yes fuck that was cool.- Weird time signatures don't call for spikes in BPM. The 24th jumpstreams could be done better too; perhaps make them single notes and interlace the 16th notes in the background? Finally, it felt like there were some ghost notes at the end of each loop.- Well you weren't kidding. Only issue I had was the fadeout at the end. Other than that, nice Xi file. Speaking of, now I wanna step his remix of Time to Air in SDVX.- Nice, but 16.86 is cutting it real damn close.- Simple and to the point. Good scoring file.- Needs a lot of fixes before it's accepted.- Better- I like it. It's a tad right hand dominant though, but that's it. Oh, the solo chart has too many brackets.- The notes at the end of the holds were a bit dumb, and there was an annoying 64th jack right at the end. In the challenge chart, the 16th between measures 60 to 62 don't sounds like they go to anything.- The first slowdown is fine. Every other xmod gimmick wasn't.- That was crzay.- wel that was a dragonforce file, that's for sure. :v- Not bad.- Kinda on the fence about this one, and yeah it's cause of the jacks. I'm gonna ask a few other people to look it over to see if it's okay, but for now it's in.- Some things irked me, but it's alright.- Not bad- nicePraise Cat Sensation [Alamanar]- ching chong ping pong means your file aint shit- that dissolved into a mess that doesn't feel right. >_>;It's good, but the disney touhou experience isn't something I want to go through again. >- Quite a few of the notes don't seem to be going to the right notes. Kinda makes the file feel funny.- nothing special, but it's nice- The layering feels boring. I guess "brickwalled" would be a good way to put it.- Read what I said about your other animu files and put that here, especially the part where the audio files are quieter than the vacuum of space.- Once again, the layering feels lazy, as if you just felt 16th streams = hard.- Good.- You did it again, to Camellia of all things. : Submitted:Judged:



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