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Alright, lets start with Fluttershy. First off, right off the bat, I would say the shapes and sizes of all of her legs look very off an inconsistent over all. And the posing isn't exactly dynamic or very interesting at all. Her wings also look disproportionally small compared to the rest of her. The coloring is not bad, with all the negative space and only a patch of purple watercolored on there, going on in the background the light source isn't really present? Just seems like an all over source. (On the rabbit, who I assume is angel, there's definitely a stronger sense of the light source.) I would also say that there's not a lot of personality in the picture. Fluttershy I think is one of the easier characters to portray in art because of that personality, but I don't really see any of that character brought here in her face or body language. I personally think the fluffy ears look out of place with the rest of her being smooth, and the overly long eyelashes, lack of nostril(s) unappealing, but that's a stylistic choice so that's more excusable.My only complaints with Angel is that his legs look a little fake, and the fluff in his ears looks awkward. Otherwise, besides your style making him look different, the light source is there, and the personality is there.I would look into applying some textures to make your fabrics and stuff stand out a bit more so they look more like, well, fabric.Your line work is very nice and clean, and you used a nice color pallet. Plus I love the hat. Hats are hard to draw, and it looks awesome. Keep practicing, you have a lot of potential here, there's always room for improvement.