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*I'm writing this to waste minimum words, don't worry about it, move along, scroll to bottom, blah blah blah.*Okay, the actual critique.Shading - Your shading is really good, the placement of light is right too, but i think the placement of shadow is a bit wrong on the mecha leg part.Highlight - Try giving a highlight on their bodies and mecha body. The coloring of a mecha and bodysuit requires highlight so it doesn't looks like it's dry. *sry for my bad english*Female body proportion and pose - I think it's above average, you're doing good. Also try to draw more dynamical poses. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>Details of armor and mecha - just like i said, try giving highlight e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/>Coloring - all in all it's comfortable to see, the colors match each other.Drawing hair - try to not draw the hair too stiff, especially the bangs.Well here's my critiques, I apologize if there's something wrong with my words e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="(Smile)"/> Have a nice day!