Not to open a can of worms, but I can’t help but notice the Nightmare Hospital part of the drawing has a whitewashed Connie in it. It’s the only one in the piece and I can’t help but laugh. The rest of the drawing is delightful, but I do have to wonder if you just got so tired finishing up that particular part and decided to save time and energy by using the same skin color, starting with Steven. The composition is also appealing, not drawing too much attention, but swirling through events chronologically. I just hope you won’t cut corners with coloring in future pieces.

Edit: I realize that this piece is old and you’ve gotten tips for shading skin already. Watching your thankful reaction to the critic gives me deep respect for you.