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Hello! I'd like to start off with the fact that I got here by the random chances of the "Critiqueable" tab on the DeviantART hotbar. I'm Jossalyn, and I really love doing my best to help others improve. It's very nice to meet you, and I really hope that my critique helps you out!The way that you drew the pony is very unique, and I've never really seen anything like this piece when it comes to My Little Pony styles. It's very interesting, and I'd love to see more. I really enjoy how the grass looks being pressed down by her body, it's a really nice touch. Without it, the piece wouldn't look so lively as it appears here.Sadly, I've seen many pieces like this, of a pony lying down and observing flowers. I think it'd be more interesting if you put a little bit more life into the picture surrounding what she's doing. Actions are important, and many MANY people like to take it easy when doing these types of pieces. To stand out, be unique with posing and don't be afraid to experiment!I really love the way that this piece is painted, however there is one huge flaw in it. The background. It looks messily thrown together with little thought or detail about her surroundings. This is my opinion, but I really think you should start practicing more on backgrounds and scenery when it comes to your type of art pieces. It can really add a whole new level of feeling. The water looks rushed (No pun intended) and it just seems very lazily done to me. The bench looks nice, however you should really make it less blurry and add more detail and put a little bit more love into your backgrounds. More detail wouldn't hurt. As for the flowers and rocks/bushes (I apologize, I cannot tell... which is also another reason to detail more) I think that they are a little too blurry and messy. Some parts of them are crystal clear, while other parts are blurry and confusing. ESPECIALLY the flowers in the background. As for the pony, her hair seems a bit too stiff and not as detailed as... let's say the grass. You need to make sure your painting style is consistent. If the grass has strands, so should her hair. If her body is well detailed, then so should her wings. Consistency is key when it comes to painting, make sure to do your best to follow it as well as you can!The impact of this piece left me stunned at first. I really loved the way you made the grass and the anatomy over all. Don't even get me started on the flower she's holding- You did a fantastic job on the foreground, except for there being a few flaws that you can easily notice upon further inspection. The background is lacking, and I feel as if you can easily improve by simply taking more time on your art. Don't be afraid to experiment when doing so either. It can end up looking fantastic!This piece gets a 7/10 from me. I feel like you could easily raise that number with the amount of skill that you have. I really hope my critique helped you out! Have a wonderful morning/afternoon/evening!