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What I appreciate mostly about this drawing is the background, because it properly displays Derpy's feelings towards the muffin. I also like how you enlarged the pupils. It sort of indicates that she's become infatuated with the muffin. However, there are some criticisms I'd like to make. Firstly, you should probably draw Derpy's mane in the style that she has it on the show. When I first saw this piece, I was barely able to tell that it was her. Secondly, the line work is inconsistent, like how the ends of her hair on her left side are bulgy but then it remains thin throughout. Lastly, if she is going to be drooling, then make sure that the drool is more visible for us to see. Of course, this drawing isn't horrendous. It has a nice set up and some of the technical aspects are fine. Just make sure that Derpy looks more like her usual self and that the line work is reconstructed. Still, I advise you to keep up the great work, Soronaan!