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My 3rd critique of your hilarious pony portal animations.It was great how it had a proper introduction to the situation and how it showed what the problem was before it was trying to be solved with the actual theme you put in. I read the other critiques and <img class="avatar" src=" a.deviantart.net/avatars/x/x/x… " alt=" " title="xXStorefrontXx"/> made a good point where Applejack was a little fat but it was only in 2 little scenes where I noticed she was a little chubby, when Applejack walks to Applebloom after she enters the barn and when she pushes the picture of the jar away that Applebloom took out.But the strange thing is why did she need that jar anyway when all she needed was the portal gun? Unless I'm missing something here (I probably am) the jar was pointless. It was totally unexpected that she jumped into the portals, I thought she would put her hoof in and grab the lamp from there.The impact of the fall was unexpected also cause Applebloom shot another portal in the progress of that fast falling which caused Applejack to be launched away. The final things are how was Luna able to use the portal with only one portal used from the portal gun and how was she able to be inside the moon considering only one portal was shot.Regardless, it was funny and a proper intro was made and that's all that matters to me. <img class="avatar" src=" a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/l/c… " alt=" " title="clapplz"/>