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You have definitely improved the style since Princes Pony Perks. The shading adds a real depth to the image, though some people may prefer the flatter style, as in Bone to Picnic.One slight problem with the style which has only appeared now (Applebloom's fault), is that because of the size of a filly's eye, the lack of a pupil is very noticeable. I am not a very good artist myself, but I might suggest making the iris a bit smaller and moving the white spots slightly towards the middle.The 'set dressing' is great; I remember I said one of the previous pieces felt a bit cluttered in the background, but the background here is perfect. The pie and rolling pin describe the setting wonderfully, though I do wonder what Applejack and Granny were doing before Applebloom walked in. It seems as if they were simply staring expectantly at the pie.The story and speech is executed very well. The punchline made me chuckle, which I assure you, is a very rare thing indeed. It just goes to show that real life is sometimes funnier than fiction.