Posted December 1, 2014 at 1:36 am

It somehow took me right up until a last minute rewrite to realize that Nanase was in a unique position at the moment to assess Susan's thinness. Like she says, the form's a bit bulkier than normal Susan, but still, how did I miss that? I'm glad that occurred to me in time, because panel three was originally a second panel and that's really a note to end a comic on, darn it.

I'm sorta tempted to make Susan's hair always look like Nanase's hair does in panel three. I think it would be too busy most of the time, and I in fact know that to be true given previous times I've done highlights like that, but the temptation is still there.

Tedd's doing something on her phone in panel three primarily because I didn't want her to just be standing there. Obviously, it's not important to the story what she's doing with her phone if that's the only reason, but I'm going to claim she's texting Grace because I find that explanation to be the most adorables.

Patreon Sidenote: Still finishing up sketchbooks for November (I'm late and i'm horrible, I know, and I sincerely apologize), but commentaries were done a while ago! Twenty-five new classic commentaries start here.