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Skipping over the 'you did this well' stuff, I'm going to get down to it and tell you what's wrong.Fluttershy!!!Her hair doesn't have the same detail and flow as Luna's, and her position is awfully awkward! I looks like there is a lump under her or something, to support her, but then ugghhh it just looks very bad there. Her mane is also defying gravity.The lake and mountains also look like they are tiny. I would assume that this is on a hill, correct? If so, the lake is fine, but the mountains look absolutely minuscule! I would try to scale them up a bit, and narrow down the waterfalls.Otherwise, looks great. <3