When I saw the gorgeous prompt from Kisungura in red lingerie this week for Masturbation Monday I had to add my last Smut Marathon entry to the meme – Barefoot and Bitless.

The original inspiration for this round of the competition being the provocative header photo of a red slip by Molly Moore.

Barefoot and Bitless ~ Smut Marathon Round Seven

Audio ~ 28/11/19 Post Update

I have now given new life to this story as an audio production. It has been updated slightly too, as now I don’t have a word limit, and a few changes were made for audio-ease. Have a listen and a read.

You can find the original written story on the smut marathon site.

And So – the marathon

We were only allowed 800 words. Mine started out with loads more – going into detail regarding her character. There was a linking horse theme all the way through.

Much to my amazement four out of the five judges voted for me plus loads of the public so I came through the round in second place. Violet Fawkes was top of this round.

As we are in the knockout stage we all start with a clean slate in the next round.

I used a very jarring style of writing – short sharp sentences – as I really wanted the reader to feel uncomfortable as they read about this domestic abuse. Not a lifestyle choice anyone should stick with and my character left, albeit barefoot 😉

The main criticism I received was indeed the uncomfortable nature of this story.

I voted for Cara and Marsha and there were loads of fabulous stories. The standard was amazing.

My other smut marathon posts are here.

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