Very nice, practically perfect, but there are a couple small mistakes. Colour seems a bit dark on his lion parts, I tend to think of lions as more yellowish, think Simba. Also his name is Gavin, though he is modeled after J Jonah Jameson.





For those wondering about him, he's my proofreading and editing namesake, and unlike Jameson, he doesn't smoke, instead he chews on meat sticks. Also there's jokes in his name and his species choices (lion & hawk).

