Overall

Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

Really impressive! ★★★★★ for impact! I really enjoy this scenery, and feel something even more satisfying from me and AJ are admired the scenery simultaneously, at the same time.Nice contrast for light and dark. I think have found the reference, this is Albert Bierstadt's "A Storm in the Rocky Mountains" www.google.com/search?q=Albert… Critique: artwork it is blurry. Thick and straight brush blurry strokes are somewhat annoying my eye - can't hold glance on something (except apple). Maybe it is possible to focus on only some part, to save efforts and time, and keep other parts out of focus, so blurriness can be accepted like "depth of field". Also to keep "depth of field" effect, blurriness should be consistent, without unexpected small details or hard edges popped on mostly blurred sketchily surface.Water does not look like shiny reflection surface, it looks more like diffuse matte lighted surface.It is hard to judge - are AJ and Winona on the edge of the cliff or not. Tree size says that this is cliff, but I can't feel edge of cliff and depth after edge.Not sure about proportions. Left hand palm looks a bit larger (like Hulk's hand palm), and arm as whole - little shorter. imgur.com/5NtMss1 Personally I very like how AJ looks here, like normal human, not like fashion beauty supermodel or fantasy thief-elf-woman warrior, great combination for both beauty and real world proportions.This is my first critique, I have tried to keep it compact, I have tried to write it like I seek critique for my own artwork, to know my faults in my drawing.