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OMG! This is amazing! I love this piece, and it's not like many others you see of the DDLC girls. The use of perspective and background space is great, showing the fireworks as well as a good view of the girls as if you were standing there. There are only a couple problems or inconsistencies I noticed with this picture. One was that Natsuki has a defined white outline around her, but none of the other girls do. Similarly, Monika is the only one with a heart pattern on her hair. I don't know if the pattern was part of the costume or something, bu tit doesn't quite fit. The other problem I noticed with the girls themselves is that the noses and their highlights seem just slightly to far left on Monika and Natsuki, and right on Yuri and Sayori. The main flaws of the piece are in the background, while it is very bright, pretty, and fitting, it distracts a bit from the figures and draws most of the viewer's attention to the background. The last thing I wanted to point out was the tree, I can't tell if there is light shining through it, firecrackers in front of it, or what, but one part is very bright and blurry where I can't think of a reason for it to be that way. Aside from what I just said, this is a great piece and I love it to bits. Sorry if this seemed harsh, I just tend to point out flaws more than already acquired skill because I think it helps people improve. Hope this helps!