From what I've been reading for the first 20 chapters, the story is great. The author is also very receptive, so if there's any small plot holes or problems in the story, he fixes them immediately. The levels are simple and there's also not too many complicated systems going on for the MC to get stronger; making the story easier to follow. The author also has been improving tremendously in terms of his ability to describe events and also in explaining how other side characters are feeling. Also the pace of the story is good and he's not getting too strong too fast, but he's also not getting no abilities at all. Over time he's getting skills bit by bit. The MC also isn't some beta who relies on morals or ideals to make decisions so I like that.

Some small things to be fixed (which can be fixed over time): the style can be a bit better, but for me at least I don't mind it. Some people do, but the author said that he'll fix it in due time. Otherwise, the grammar is actually quite good and the character explanations are getting better.

For this reason I'm giving a 5 for everything; in hopes that the author continues improving and writing a very engaging story with a relatable MC (how we all want to mercilessly have everything).