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Vision Vision

Originality Originality

Technique Technique

Impact Impact

I really like this style. Everything is well drawn, colored and shaded which make your artwork really come to life. You put a lot of details into it however let's get to the part you can improve on! ^^Her left hand (viewer right) seems a bit too small to me. Since everything is very detailed but the bread or the plate are not, it feels like they do not really belong into this piece.The next think which is bothering me is the guy in the back. Here it is pretty much the same as with the bread and the plate. I may be a bit oversensitive but he is distracting me since i get the feeling of him not belonging there. I see you want the focus in the front and not in the background were the guy is standing. So if you don't want or can fix it with putting more detail into him, you could make him just a bit more blurry or shade him a bit more.To the originality: Well... it's basically someone eating. But you did a good job with this piece. I especially enjoy the rotation which make it energetic.The Impact: I think all in all this is an amazing piece but there are not many emotions besides that and being a bit funny and silly with the look at here face of her eating her bread. However you got one and a half star more since you created with your knowledge of colors, shadows and light a warm and comfortable atmosphere.Good job :3I hope this was helpful to you! ^^