Think the pin-point stars are a waste anywhere except her mane and tail as the resolution defeats the purpose of having them blend in with the character or the scenery. Also, being able to tell what she is looking at would help, as well as the shading not over-shadowing her expression. Why am I stating all the negatives? Because this has the makings of a great artwork with a few tweaks on the afore-mentioned problems.

A.G.