The colorway is OK, but there is such a disconnect between the Blue and the light colors. Try use blue as font color over the yellow and green because neither the white over light green or the black over light yellow is working at all. Your artisan is not resolved at all there needs to be more exploration about what makes THIS the speaks bamboo rain forest. Maybe take a look at Hana DSA for some inspiration. Also take away the bamboo background and you can really see how much of this color is working. I understand you are trying to put this concept in the best light/setting but this background isnt helping you because there needs a lot more work and help you focus more on the color usage and other things if you take it away until you feel like it's ready. Don't skip the steps this is close to alpha stage. Keep at it as this concept definitely needs more depth for people to relate.



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