It's fine your getting a lot better as I have said beforeYeah I completely understand, it makes you feel saddened or angered because you felt like you were being used. Maybe some are just busy, I just hope you don't assume that they have left because of bad reasons automatically. I promise to never ever leave you as long as your still on DA. Oh I see, thanks for telling me.Your comment is so long, I didn't expect that lol. Anyway.( Sentence check: ) (I just realized that I accidentally put a smiley face there)1. Doesn't not don't.2. Add the word doing before "more request" also no need for quotations.3. Sentence rewrite, you should say that there were a few people who left after they got their request.4. Started questioning instead of start question.5. Yet decided instead of decide, also add "to" after whether.Other than that fanstastic job! By the way, the errors are in order from the beginning to the end.