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HAH, the popularity of the last panel is exploding. If there's anything that the comic got best is how plenty of people can relate with Lyra not liking humans anymore as I'm sure many of us are old enough to meet and see people we just don't like. A lot of people are taking pics of stuff they hate (like Hitler) and adding that last panel under that picture. The world can be a bit cruel sometimes.Art-wise, the first thing I notice is the wonky perspective that I just can't unsee. The hill and its gradient, and the house in the background suggests that Lyra is sitting on a sloped hill. Lyra's legs suggests that she's sitting on a level surface. It will be something that I won't be able to unsee as it's gonna be a panel that I'm gonna be seeing very often as long as people keep this meme alive, but I'm sure a lot of people won't notice... hopefully.I'm also wondering if we could have a few items inside the fire, or at least have a large wagon behind Lyra full of human stuff so Lyra has more stuff to burn. That would emphasize her love of humans much more, so I see much more than just a foam finger and mug. First time I saw this, I was wondering "is that ALL she has to burn"?I would also think it would be funnier if we can somehow make Twilight was sit at the table like a horse would sit, but Lyra was sitting on a stool like a human.Then, another idea I could toss is composition. Maybe we could have panels not be cropped to place the tip of their heads at the very top. The panels end up feeling cramped, but I don't really know if this would make more people like this comic, but it probably shouldn't hurt to be aware of that effect of making panels feel so cramped, at least to me. Maybe we could have our heads 2/3rds of a panel from the bottom, so we see part of the table and have more room on top of hour heads. Just a thought.