" Oh dear lord where do I begin.The concept would have been interesting if it wasn't for too many things :1- Your line art is very lazy: The line art looks very rushed, especially in the lower section of the body, get this: If the line art is bad then the whole thing will look bad.2- Your sense of body proportion is very poor...4- Very, very poor coloring, and your attempt at shading has made the colors look very dirty which is a sign of laziness.Overall: You need a lot of work, and practice before you submit, and keep in mind that art isn't magic and all the good artists out there made their work via patience, you must take your time with every single detail. "I mean you say it all so why not doing it ? The last sentence is exactly what I was thinking after seing your gallery ( well except the "every single detail thing " cuz with your actual skills bothering with details would be a huge waste of time, and I'm not saying that to be mean ,it's just that it wouldn't do any good to your drawings ).Ok , now to some specific advice that might actually help you :- first off try drawing from real life , with an actual pen , not on digital . Seriously go outside and draw the people, the streets ... ANything you can see ! Real life drawing is THE way to progress in drawing , so go ahead and get at it already ! ( maybe begin with some still life , it would be easier at first).- If you want to work on color and light/shadow (on digital ) try to firstly work with grey shades (and then eventually colors), it will help you grab the way light work in a composition ( seriously it helps a lot ) . You can also work with wash drawing with regular indian ink to work on light/shadow.- You can also try working from photography , it's not as effective as real life drawing , but it can give you more varied models without even living home ! Ain't that neat...-If you wanna keep doing this type of drawing on digital , don't overuse the "smooth brushes ", it look really flat and blurry when there's too much of it in a painting. Work with hard brushes , looks way better ( a little tip : if you wanna do a background, draw it at first with hard brushes and then apply a gaussian blur on the area you want blurred) . Also don't put to much detail in the background or the uninteresting part , cuz the eye will naturally go to the more detailed area of a drawing , keep it for the main focus .- Just stop drawing in an "anime style" , you'll learn nothing from it, try finding your own way of making a face , an eye ... ect ... Try developing your style by getting inspired by real life , not some already existing style ( especially if it's bad ).- And at last : draw for yourself and not for getting comments and appreciation on deviant art .well that's about it , but since I know you won't do anything of what I've written and you'll just keep on drawing terrible anime lady faces and stupid fan art I'll just go ahead and go fuck myself .