TBH I did not read all of that. I will say, however, that getting published takes more than just good writing; it takes patience, the right connections and a good bit of luck and timing. First, have a good story (here's the good writing part). Have characters that the readers will like and care about. Next, have situations that (paradoxically) the readers will find new but not so new that they can't relate. Then, have realistic dialogue that the readers will follow without confusion. Use good grammar and mechanics. Once you have a COMPLETED manuscript, approach an agent (this is the right connections part). Agents won't even talk to you unless the book is DONE! It's almost as hard to find an agent as a publisher (here's the patience part), but once you get one he or she will know which publishers are more likely to be interested in your story. Here's the luck and timing part: Publishers and the reading public are notoriously fickle. Twilight would have bombed if it had come out five years before or five years after it did. Same with Harry Potter, Traveling Pants, or any other popular book; other great books never make it for these same reasons. There is no accounting for what becomes popular. Best of luck! Getting a book published is one of the most rewarding experiences a writer can have.