I'm betting that this art piece will be really popular at Bronycon. I think you chose the best point of view for a summer at the beach picture. It kind of has this wet-mane Rarity aspect to it. Not exactly, but it still sort of has that feeling to it which makes it nice and fitting for this picture in terms of the stylization of her mane. The inner-tube slightly bothers me given its transparency and its position given you'd see the top line dip down through the transparency and there'd be an inverted overlap of that pattern for the second half going around Fluttershy which would be visible due to it's transparent nature, but for such a small detail it would be kind of a mess to add it here. I really do love the backdrop and the slight coloration to the clouds and water which really helps make them feel realistic. Nice work!