I like the busy beat at the beginning. It might've been nice to compress that percussion even more, though. I wasn't sure I was overly fond of the bass sample you used, but I enjoyed when it started developing a little more at around the 1-minute mark. The melodies you had there were a little dissonant, which is fine, but it was just a little jarring to connect the bass line in the beginning and the part at 1:02. I would suggest you use some chords or harmonies to really tie those themes together. I think the main factor there is that the baseline, which has been ingrained in my mind as the established theme of the piece by then, stops at 1:02, and this melody that feels a little out-of-place starts. The part at 2:17 was probably my favorite, especially after you launch into the modulation at 2:31. There's just so much tension in that part, and it leads back into the main melody at 2:47 really well. The melody instrument is quirky and wet, which is good. I should also mention that I think your mixing is great here. There's a lot of space in the mix, and I can hear everything clearly. I wish you had done something more with that final refrain at 2:47, though, just to offer some melodic development. Otherwise, the last 2 minutes or so of the piece kinda drag on a bit too long. Overall, this is an enjoyable piece. Sorry I haven't really been around to send too many reviews your way recently, but hopefully that will change after I'm between semesters in 2 weeks. Keep up the good work, TeraVex! ;)