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My vision of this is like discord became a zombie, as well as I haven't heard that joke, and that is funny! Hey, whats going on with Discord's eye?? ..I don't understand. Your drawing technique is really good, and I think the technique of the thing itself, and the signature is really great. But things like, I think this could be improved, in many ways that are too hard to explain, Therefore whats put in-front of me can't be explained in any way to me. Though, I do not see how discord could change his own natural color, and his teeth color. I wish I could say more, but I don't think there is any need, but if so, I will do up to 300-250 words max. Please don't take any of this as a insult.Is there any explanation for Twi's hat disappearing? And, maybe next time you could try to shade? Could use some explanations for a few non-logical things such as why Twi's hat fell off? As I am reaching my "minimum" of words for this critique, Why didn't twilight just use magic to stop discord from moving? This is confusing as well non-logical. I'm sorry if this sounds like a insult, but it is not supposed to be at all. This only my opinion, and it is fine if you don't show it and hate me for this. Sorry.. Only my opinion again. It is fine to see this late, as I can wait. I hope you see this soon! Goodbye!