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This piece struck me very strongly. The depth and complexity are very striking.While I do not understand the context of the (water? or air?) drops/bubbles, they are very often hard to get to look quite right, and I think you did a very excellent job of them, while I don't understand them in this context, they do seem a very natural addition and compliment the piece quite well.The color balance and composition also seem to be just about right for the work, I see no faults in that. The unique take you have on the body composition and melding of real and magical and mythical and cartoony strike a nice balance. The look and the balance of the feathers seems spot on, very natural feeling, well natural for a mythological Pegacorn (Alicorn).There are a few things that I do feel are off, that could be watched for in future work.While I can see you were trying to keep to the show cannon look and feel to the face, it still does seem slightly on the small side in proportion to her neck and body size. Maybe 10% larger head overall and add to that a slightly longer muzzle, would allow you to still maintain the feel of the show look but would fit in with the more natural real style you put to the body.There are several points about her right front leg that are slightly off. When equines tuck their legs in when rearing or jumping, the elbow (the bend as it exits their torso) tend to move forward the more they tuck their legs, not move back as it is shown.Also, I feel that you tried to put too much perspective into the visual of her right front leg, it clearly (to me) comes across as her cannon bone (between the knee and fetlock) is shorter. And even with it being partially behind her left front, it appears to have a lot less feathers (long hair on the lower leg) then her left does.Onto her wings. Her right wing is nearly spot on, if anything I think the end of the fleshy part after the last joint could be ever so slightly longer to be more anatomically correct. Her left wing however, even with taking the perspective into consideration, it really looks like the final bone (that is nearly missing from her right wing) is as long as the middle bone is. Maybe if you had flared the wing up at the end like the other side it might make it more clear, but I am not sure exactly how to really fix it. It just feels like the left wing is a 1/3 longer then the right given the perspectives.My final nit-pic would be her tail orientation. From the trail behind her I get that you were going for having her swooping up and to the right, meaning that her tail would be off to the right of her body line. But it appear if it is not actually bent over for the turn, but is actually attached to her right hip. IF the top lines of her tail were rotated clockwise say at least 5 degrees, it would look spot on like the tail is attached correctly and is bent over for the turn.Ok, I'm done being a nit-pic jerk.I really do love this piece and can NOT wait to see the next piece you come out with, with this level of work and detail you have a very bright art future ahead of you, keep up the excellent work!