Hiii! Let’s see~

Starting off, your lines look great! The only thing I’d recommend is to plot start/end points for the non-diagonal lines of your planes. Also, be careful not to do any sort of corrections, unless you’re using a red pen for them. That is, redoing a line, or, as in this case, extending a line that stops short.

Moving on to the ellipse section, the ellipses in the table of ellipses exercise look quite good, but you don’t always respect the bounds of your frame (it’s important to!) I also notice that you don’t always rotate around your ellipses 2 full times, so be sure to. To tighten them up a little more, I’ll recommend upping your ghosting time. Finally, to get rid of that flick at the end of the 2 rotations, I’ll recommend lifting your pen off the page, rather than flicking it off. The ellipses in the ellipses in planes exercise improve nicely by page 2, but just the same, I’ll mention that our goal is always for them to be smooth first, and accurate second. Nice job on the funnels exercise, but be a tiny bit more mindful of your ellipses’ degrees. They should, as you know, increase as they move towards the edges of the funnel.

Finally, for the box section, I’d like to start off by once again reminding you of the ‘no automatic reinforcing’ rule. Really, all fixing a mistake does is make it stand out. In the rough perspective exercise, it looks like you extended your lines towards the VP- this is incorrect. The lines extend towards the horizon, showing you how off you were, rather than how your line would’ve looked had it been correct. The boxes themselves look alright, but I think you’d have benefitted from ghosting a little more- there’s some easily avoidable mistakes in there. Congratulations on competing the rotated boxes exercise. Though a lot of the boxes don’t quite rotate, and they’re not as snug as we’d like, the goal of the exercise is to see it through to the end, which you’ve done. Finally, save for the one problem I’ve already mentioned twice, and some divergences, the organic perspective exercise looks good, too. No worries on the divergences- your next step will take care of those.

Congrats on completing this lesson. I’m happy to mark it as complete.