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there are only a few things wrong with this pickure.the hair is drawn mostly correct. the pnly thing wrong with the hair is the lines. try do do the lines in black and not a color similar to the hair. i know that in the colored pictures in the light novel and also in other drawings asuna hair has the lines a similar color, but black lines would look better because of the way you drew the hair. your linework is inconstistant throught the drawing. there are lines in the legs, fingers, and uper forearm but the lines are thin to non existent on the rest of the drawing. the face looks mostly fine although the nose looks a little high up. asuna's left arm seems a little off. for the most part, the rest of the anatomy is correct. the feet are slightly off, but feet are hard to draw. i like how you drew the breasts and curves. they look great. the lighting and shading are great. the lighting and shading on the breasts are great. the clothes are mostly correct, but in the middle of asuan's bikini, there seems to be sone type of issue. i looks like something is smeared or something. also on the left side of asuna's skirt, the line disapears and the red and white start to smear. this also happens where asunas skirt touches the purple part of the towel. there also seams to be some type of tear at the end of the towel that is getting hit by the sunlight. the rest of the drawing seems fine. overall this drawing looks great. i would reccommend practicing linework and studing anime anatomy