i found that it says critic requested

first off ,really good job reimagining the characters ,personal fav is bunny girl with a top hat Velvet



sun

i don't know why or how but,sun looks a bit like a girl in this ,i think it's the torso making him look like he has breasts,i think .hope a fix would be either ,bigger(by which i mean broader,but bigger in general can work to based on rwby he has big muscles on he's... ) shoulders or alter how the white top he has on him looks (look like he's muscle is sticking out ,lot more than it should ) and he's face look very feminine in shape .(think it's all down to the angle of the view )



yang

yang looks brilliant ,no negatives ,if there is one thing it would be the blue marks on her face ,yes it matches the other parts of her clothing but it's a bit odd ,is it a continuation of the shoulder bits ,is it paint (like war paint )or armour ?



Velvet

hats off to you ,would love to take a picture of her like that ,where her camera and storage box? only draw back (can see handle of camera in hand )



Ruby

don't get me wrong a great outfit .the tied on cloth on her arm to make out she's in charge (leader) ,the goggles for her when she's at high speed ,the urban hoodie to show she's cool . but canon wise i just don't think it's the right look for her .no combat skirt ,no corset .she looks more like trying to copy yang ,combat shorts and a black top under a jacket of some type .no idea why she has a robot hand and not yang



hope this helps,

keep them coming i enjoy looking at them